The Roses Are Thorns.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The Roses Are Thorns.


💔 Saahil...



Alone, atop the hill.

You left my hand midway.

I dragged myself up...

Is this the Summit of Love?

The clouds gather above.

The valley dark and dreary...

I look back at the path we treaded...

Now, the roses are thorns.

I would come down,

Braving the splinters - For You.

Alas! You found your bliss...

Elsewhere...

This is my fate,

I stand here stranded...

For a life time,

Of nothing, but numbness...

Orchids, Violets...

Breaking through the gloom...

I have found...

Who can measure my loss?

...

Lost among the thorns...

You crushed down the roses.

Needles don't prick,

When you are on fire.

There you stand,

Atop the world.

Dreaming ahead...

Nothing can touch you?

The pristine statue,

In the garden of colours...

You don't see?

The clouds gathering above...

I am not a vain cloud,

But the storm raging...

That will rain down,

To freeze you near to death.

Damned death!- If it could touch,

A scar so deep...

A fire so scorching...

Condemned to live- doomed by love.


Saahil...



...


PS: The twist was shocking...unbelievable...😲


Couldn't resist this...😳😉


God alone knows what is brewing in QH...I think even F32 is kept away!😲😆

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GitaIyer thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Soup. Was missing your posts.

I think more than Saahil, this ode holds true for Sanam.


The Twist - I have a few lines for it too:😆

Have cried, Have lamented,

Have moaned, have sobbed,

Now that the twist has happened,

Waiting for union impatiently

while longing for the angst avidly..


Bring it on CVs, this track looks promising..


Damned death!- If it could touch,

A scar so deep...

A fire so scorching...

Condemned to live- doomed by love.

Loved all, but loved these line a lil more.👏



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Lovely Soup. Was missing your posts.

I think more than Saahil, this ode holds true for Sanam.


The Twist - I have a few lines for it too:😆

Have cried, Have lamented,

Have moaned, have sobbed,

Now that the twist has happened,

Waiting for union impatiently

while longing for the angst avidly..


Bring it on CVs, this track looks promising..


Damned death!- If it could touch,

A scar so deep...

A fire so scorching...

Condemned to live- doomed by love.

Loved all, but loved these line a lil more.👏





😳 Gita,
Thanx.
Finally something shook me...into writing...

...JUst when I think I am done with everything...😳

Love...
Heals...consumes...encompasses everything...

Aahil in the second part...give me...

🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Stranded.. True
Panic attack is gone, now sadness, everywhere
micshy thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
awesome brilliant piece of writing...

and it has increased the sadness...

after so many fizzled out twists this twist was indeed a big twist which we dint expect finally
WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mommy Y DID U NOT TAKE UP LITERATURE Y Y Y
sahil333 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
FA BU LOUS !!!

Alone, atop the hill.

You left my hand midway.

I dragged myself up...

Is this the Summit of Love?

Feelings of sadness 😭😭
The trust that Sanam had in him has been CRUSHED in a million pieces. I need to cry now, Alone!!!
TQ Soup
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Nice Post ... Missing ur beautiful posts chicksoup.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Lovely poem Soup...

We are all feeling for Sanam...

"Hearts can break. Yes, hearts can break. Sometimes I think it would be better if we died when they did, but we don't."
Stephen King, Hearts in Atlantis
Lovenarbhi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Its beautifulll, it made me watch the old videos of Sahil, why did i fall in love with them🥺 Each line goes straight to your heart, Superlative!!!!

I would come down,

Braving the splinters - For You.

Alas! You found your bliss...

Elsewhere... 😭


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