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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Its beautifulll, it made me watch the old videos of Sahil, why did i fall in love with them🥺 Each line goes straight to your heart, Superlative!!!!


I would come down,

Braving the splinters - For You.

Alas! You found your bliss...

Elsewhere... 😭



God, the Agony!😭

😳 Thank U


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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

:'((

Goodness Soup! You just made me cry with this! This is so so beautiful! So utterly painful. Painstakingly beautiful..Beautifully painstaking :')

Heart rendering. Heart wrenching.

Damn! Some lines would be my favorite forever:

"Needles don't prick,
When you're on fire.."
:'((

"I am not a vain cloud,

But the storm raging...

That will rain down,

To freeze you near to death..."

My ARI


And my absolute favorite ones!

"Damned death! If it could touch,
A scar so deep...

A fire so scorching...

Condemned to live- doomed by love..."

:'))



Thank you Soup for this heavenly take! ❤️💔



I am glad U cried, Prags.
I can't stop!😭

🤗 Thank U...ARI was even more painful to write. Actually I am not sure what is more painful-

To suffer the death of love silently or to avenge it?🥺 One surrenders, the other fights back...In a way, ARI is keeping the relationship alive by reacting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

The Summit. :'(

Condemned to live- doomed by love.



Thank you Soup! All these feels.




And yes. Aahil in second half. And precap!



Sexayh beast. Agony.




BRINGITON!


Farz,

😭 When will they laugh again?😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
sumi 🤗
you write just sooo beautifully ..loved it ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: chicksoup


Main paagal ho jaati!😭 Can't take this sorrow.

U would have relished the BEAUTY in pain too. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
And then came the super catwoman
dressed in her attire of deception
She played her part of the game
leaving no stone unturned to kill all that was left of trust and affection
cunningly she plotted, twisted, and turned
all the facts that had the long-awaited solace
leaving the Poor puppet in a Frenzy
As its stomach grumbled and churned
with the shock of betrayal That left it bewildered
and sent its soul some place far away to exile
where thorns adorn the desert dunes
with prevailing dryness That leaves a traveller thirsty and deprives him of comfort
such Is the state of the puppet as It stumbles across the Bed of thorns
That were once upon a time its everlasting abode
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

sumi 🤗
you write just sooo beautifully ..loved it ❤️


🤗

Sona,

🤗

How in the world?😳

🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

U would have relished the BEAUTY in pain too. 😃

Relished or reeled in?😳

Yeah, relished by reeling...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: rabees011

And then came the super catwoman

dressed in her attire of deception
She played her part of the game
leaving no stone unturned to kill all that was left of trust and affection
cunningly she plotted, twisted, and turned
all the facts that had the long-awaited solace
leaving the Poor puppet in a Frenzy
As its stomach grumbled and churned
with the shock of betrayal That left it bewildered
and sent its soul some place far away to exile
where thorns adorn the desert dunes
with prevailing dryness That leaves a traveller thirsty and deprives him of comfort
such Is the state of the puppet as It stumbles across the Bed of thorns
That were once upon a time its everlasting abode


👏 Wow!


🤢 catwoman

😆
Edited by chicksoup - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: chicksoup

The Roses Are Thorns.


💔 Saahil...



Alone, atop the hill.

You left my hand midway.

I dragged myself up...

Is this the Summit of Love?

The clouds gather above.

The valley dark and dreary...

I look back at the path we treaded...

Now, the roses are thorns.

I would come down,

Braving the splinters - For You.

Alas! You found your bliss...

Elsewhere...

This is my fate,

I stand here stranded...

For a life time,

Of nothing, but numbness...

Orchids, Violets...

Breaking through the gloom...

I have found...

Who can measure my loss?

...

Lost among the thorns...

You crushed down the roses.

Needles don't prick,

When you are on fire.

There you stand,

Atop the world.

Dreaming ahead...

Nothing can touch you?

The pristine statue,

In the garden of colours...

You don't see?

The clouds gathering above...

I am not a vain cloud,

But the storm raging...

That will rain down,

To freeze you near to death.

Damned death!- If it could touch,

A scar so deep...

A fire so scorching...

Condemned to live- doomed by love.


Saahil...



...


PS: The twist was shocking...unbelievable...😲


Couldn't resist this...😳😉


God alone knows what is brewing in QH...I think even F32 is kept away!😲😆

FANTABULOUS

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