AnuRaj FF 'Its all about love' by Waida - Uptd pt 9, Mar 27,

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Hey all , this FF is by our dear TM Waida and i hope you all will read and support her efforts..

Charatcter sketch and prologue-
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Chapter 1 - page 2
Chapter 2 - page 4
Chapter 3 - page 8
Chapter 4 - page 12
Chapter 5 - page 14
Chapter 6 - page 17
Chapter 7 - page 21
Chapter 8 - page 25
Chapter 9 - page 31
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its for Waida and i hope she can update it here..

Waida, i will update teh title as u update the story..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shyama, thanks a lot dudešŸ¤— I will make my best to updates the characters first and pen down the prologue, I still don't know how many parts my ff will have, but will let the story unfold by itself...😃
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" It's all about love"

Characters Sketch:-

Shastri Family - Shastri Ji : 53 yrs old, the doting father
Alka. : 24 yrs old, fond of indian movies
Anushka. : 21 yrs old, selfless, can do anything to keep her family happy
Devyani. : 20 yrs old, think herself to be the most beautiful girl in the world
Peeya. : 16 yrs old, pampered and youngest of the Shastri Sisters

Sareen Family - Sareen : 52 yrs old, a loving husband and a modern and cool dad
Minty. : 48 yrs old, a possessive mother and a shopaholic
Rajat. : 25 yrs old, a rude and arrogant Indian Air Force Officer
Neil. : 20 yrs old, a mischievous and a Mummy pampered boy

Note: Will add other characters as the story unfold ā­ļø

Prologue:- Years passed, but some things never change, some feelings remain and love can return when you least expect it to😳

Rajat: Hello beautiful ladies...

Anu pov: I shuddered at the sound of that velvety voice, my body froze and I suddenly felt weak. He stared arrogantly down at me, a smirk plaster across his face. I sneered up at him with distaste, wanting to wrap my fingers around his neck and strangle that smirk off him. I just hate you Rajat Sareen for having made my childhood days a living hell😔

That's all for the time being guys. Hope you'll like it, will update the first chapter 2morrow. Shyama once again thanks a lot for making this thread, credit of my ff goes to you too šŸ‘šŸ¤—








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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Waida1234

Shyama, thanks a lot dudešŸ¤— I will make my best to updates the characters first and pen down the prologue, I still don't know how many parts my ff will have, but will let the story unfold by itself...😃



No worries dear...I shall not be able to update title for few days after 3rd as i will be travelling for a couple of days, ut as soon as i put my feet back on land, will do it first thing, Loved the prologue, i cant wait to see whats in store for us..Awesome job waida and good luck with writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Waida for this FF. Great start.
Can't wait for tomorrow.
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loved the start
waiting for more of it
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wow new FF 🄳
CONGRATZZ WAIDA N WAITING FOR D UPDATE 😃
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Chapter 1 - "It' all about love"

Present Time > Sareen house - Neil room
Neil is packing his bag.

Minty: Betu...listen to mama, don't go...I will feel so lonely without you. Rajat also is not here and now you are leaving too...😭

Neil: Mom! Please...stop your dramebaaz, I'm going away only for a couple of days..Bhai has been away from you for almost three years...you have been able to endure his absence, this also will pass by in a blink of an eye.

Minty: But Neil...Rajat is so strong and self-dependent! You are so fragile... you can't even make a cup of coffee by yourself...how will you take care of yourself in the jungle...

Neil: I'm not a baby anymore...and my whole class is going on this trip...I won't be alone. Anyway, I'm off! Take care and please...don't stress yourself on the arrival of the Shastri Sisters. Mom, how could you agree with Dad to rent the 1st floor of our house to the Shastri's? You very well know that I don't like them...and Bhai distaste them even more...

Minty: I know Betu...but, once your Dad take a decision, he stick to it...

Neil: As a kid, I couldn't tolerate them...grrr. Remember that Fatso Anushka😲 used to steal my lunch in school and Devianee was always ready to argue and fight with me for no reason...she was such an attention seeker🤣...I just hate them. Ok Mom...I'm leaving...will miss you...Muah...

Minty Pov: As kids the Shastri Sisters were firecrackers...now 12 years later, they surely are damakedaar bombs🤣🤣

Sareen's Living Room:-

Sareen: Neil...you good for nothing fellow...šŸ˜•where are you going with this bag and guitar...?

Minty: Sareen Sahab...why are you always behind him? He is going on a college trip for 2 days...I did inform you na...

Sareen: Oh ya! It totally slipped my mind...Well, instead of going in the forest to study the evolution of butterfliesšŸ˜†, he better do something more useful like his elder brother...Anyway, he should have been here to help the girls...

Minty:Why!!! Is he their butler to help them settle down..?😔Neil, you better go...don't pay heed to your Dad taunts...miss me Beta...

Minty Pov: Sareen Sahab, Neil college trip slipped your mind because nowadays you are so much excited for the arrival of the Shastri Sisters, as if they are your own daughters coming back home after 12 years of exile...Why do I have this weird feeling...that's once the girls will step in my house, my life and that of my family will take a 360 degree U-Turn...? Thank you Mata Rani...at least my Rajat is far away from these "chudails"😲

Sareen: Minty yaar...you always wished for a daughter...now, that you are getting four ready-made grown up daughters, you are complaining...Well, leave it..Shastri Ji is coming...

Shastri Ji: Namaste Sareen...Bhabhi Ji...

Sareen: Shastri Ji...when the girls are reaching Delhi...everything is ready to welcome them in their new house...?

Shastri Ji: In a couple of days. Tomorrow morning they are leaving Hyderabad..As it is a very long journey, they will stopover in Nagpur for the night, and the following morning, they will board the train for Delhi...I have booked a room for them in a hotel which is near the Railway Station itself...

Sareen: Nagpur...!!! Why you didn't inform me before...Rajat is posted in Nagpur itself...I will phone him and inform him of the arrival of the girls...he can help them in visiting the city...

Minty: No need to phone him...!!! Doesn't Rajat has more important matter to tackle...than playing tourist guide to the Shastri Sisters...?😔

Sareen: Minty...what are you saying...

Shastri Ji: Bhabhi Ji is right...Anyway, the girls will reach Nagpur at night and they will be too exhausted to go out...

Shastri Ji Pov: Bhabhi Ji...I know that you are not happy with this current situation of me and my daughters staying in your house...but what can I do...? I'm helpless because of Sareen...I know past incidents can't be forgotten so easily...but, so many years have passed by...😭😭
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Present Time: Shastri Home > Hyderabad (Also known as the City Of Pearls)

Four girls are also busy doing their packings. This is the last day that they are spending in this house, which they have called theirs for the past twelve years. Tomorrow morning they are leaving for Delhi, the city of their birthplace. After having completed all their packings and before going to bed, the four sisters holding each others hands visit every corner of the house, trying to reminiscence all the good old days memories to be cherished forever and ever...Tonight, sleep will not come easily...Apart from Peeya, who is sleeping soundly, the other three sisters are tossing and turning in their beds.

Alka Pov: Why I'm reluctant to leave Hyderabad...Is it because Rajiv(new character) confess his love for me recently...and also why at the same time I'm happy to go back to Delhi...Is it because I'm restless to meet Rohan Pandey(new character)...my first teenage crush

Devianee Pov: Shankar Ji...why this night seems so long...Please...Please...morning come soon...show your face quickly...because I'm impatient to reach Delhi and meet my first and only love...Rajat Sareen...😲

Anushka Pov: Please...Shankar Ji...May this night never end and may time stand still...I don't want to return to the city where my life was a nightmare. I don't want to face the people who made my childhood days so miserable and unpleasant...one person I particularly don't want to meet ever...Rajat Sareen...my first crush and my first heartbreak...😭

To be continued...

Precap: Anushka tries to get up, but a strong arm across her body makes it impossible for her...she slowly turns round...trying not to disturb Peeya...Her eyes puff off and she gets the biggest shock of her life...She was in bed with a bare-chested man...who is none other than Rajat Sareen😳 🤣

Note: Tune in to know...how Anuraj ā¤ļø land up in the same hotel room and in the same bed...lol🤣



Edited by Waida1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shyama dear...I have updated the first chapter of my ff on page 2...see what you can do...Thanks 😃

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