Daya Sir Poem Contest Rating Thread (Closed)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Themes:
Theme 1 - Dayanand Shetty: From CID to Singham Returns
We have seen Daya sir since the 90s. His versatile work includes CID, Johnny Gaddar, Gutur Gu, Singham Returns, and some classic ads that are part of our golden collection. Kindly run through his work and express the way he helped a fan in you grow or you can also express the way he changed you. You can take your liberty to shape the poem the way you want provided it should not be derogatory, attacking, vulgar, or offensive.

Theme 2: Daya Sir: I wish you were real
Most of us (including me) fantasize about Inspector Daya, the character. I agree many of us wish Daya sir was real! Yes put on your thinking hat...and get set with your creative mind! What would you do if Inspector Daya was real! How would you emote your feelings to him? Get set and go! And again, you can take your liberty to shape the poem the way you want provided it should not be derogatory, attacking, vulgar, or offensive.

Theme 3: A Letter to Dayanand Shetty
If you were to write a letter to Dayanand Shetty expressing your feelings to him and wishing him a Happy Birthday! What would you write and how will you express your mind! You have all the liberty to think and write the way you want, provided it should not be derogatory, attacking, vulgar, or offensive.

Voting Rules:

Vote in the following format:
Theme x, entry x: marks out of 10
Theme y, entry y: marks out of 10
and so on...

Participants MUST vote.

Last date of voting is 9th December 2014 11:59 pm IST.




Note: I'm posting this on behalf of Sonali. If anyone's entry is missing please PM me asap.
Edited by KhotaSikaShreya - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Theme 1 Entry 1

CID is the Beginning Line of His Appearance On Scene

17 Years Journey of His Dedicated Work still going on Screen

He made Himself a Brand Ambassador DAYA as the Character

A Strong, Shy Cop always with a Sweet Smile and Soft Nature,

Chawanparash Ad showing His Muscular Body with Curly Rings

Castrol Advertisement showing the Skillful Talent He Brings

Secure gives Him the Moment to living it again with His Team

Apna Sony Humara Sony makes Him Pillar of the Channel Redeem,

Johny Ghaddar is the First Step of Him inside Bollywood Industry

He makes Shiva in Whole Movie which Shake Audience Fearly

Runaway is the Small Memory while Singham Returns, back Him in Jungle

it Roared so Loud with a Big Bang on Box Office makes Him Deary as Single,

Jhalak Dikhla Ja gives a Different Shade of this Shy Guy

His Cuteness Highlighted with Electrifying Performances Hi Five

Khatrun Kay Khilari is the Next Step to this Master in Separate Lane

where He came back in Tears but with a Promise of a New Plane,

Gutur Gu is a Big Leap He takes in His Acting Career

where His Comic Flicks and Getup makes Him Popular

Jassi Jaisi Koi Nahi is the Quick Guest Arrival

Appearance in Kkusum tell He is Famous among His Rival,

Gallantry Awards Hype Him as a Complete Performer

Veertha Awards giving Him opportunities as Reformer

Gold Awards showed the Inner Beauty of this Man

While Indian Telly and Aap jesa Koi Awards added His Fan,

Saregama Little Champs showed a Funky Dancing Avatar

Entertainment Ky Liye Kuch Bhi Kary Ga told Us His Magical Bar

Mover's and Shaker's is the First Glimpse of this Simple Gentleman

graded with Kahani Comedy Circus Ki where He Stole the Show with His Name,

KBC Season 8th coming up with a Pleasurable Boom

where CID Team invited there having Daya with Doom

His Smiles, Laughs, Claps and Cutie Call of Bhai

tell Us the Strong Bond He tied with Aditya added in Shy,

Jeena Isi Ka Naam Hy and X-Factor Exposes His Purity

Any Celebrations or Success unfinished without His Generosity

Promotions, Awareness, Honoring or Enjoying with Kids

Daya Shetty's Journey moving with Slow but with Steady Speed.



Theme 2 Entry 1

Yeh khayal zehan mein aata hai mere jaagte sote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..

Sr, Inspector Daya ka sach mein ek wazood hota

Aisa jaanbaaz officer hamaare beech maujood hota

Bus parde per hi aapke didaar na hote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..

Saare muzrim jinke naam se hi khauf khaate

Gunehgaaron ke hausle bhi past ho jaate

Har taraf yun faile jurm ke karobaar na hote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..

Auron ke dard ko bhi jo apna banal eta

Apni saadgi se sabka dil chura leta

Jinke rahte maasumon pe atyaachaar na hote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..

Aapki qaabiliyat ki sab misaal dete

Aapke kaarnaamon se kuchh toh sabak lete

Kaanoon ke rakshak bebas aur laachaar na hote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..

Daya -Abhijit ki dosti hum sach me dekh paate

Aap dono ke kisse log ghar-ghar me duhraate

Saari duniya me aap jaise yaar na hote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..

Apne andaaz se aap hamen deewana banaate ho

Lekin kyun haqiqat se itne door nazar aate ho

Yehi shikve hamen aapse baar-baar na hote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..

Aap se milne ki hasrat hum poori kar paate

Keh-sun lete hum apne dil ki saari baaten

Aap ke chaahne wale yun beqarar na hote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..

Kahte hain aise Hero sach me hon ye mumkin nahin

Lekin jaane kyun dil me hamaare hain ummeeden jagin

In ummeedon ke tootne ke aasaar na hote

Ae kaash ki aap sirf ek kirdaar na hote..



Theme 3 Entry 1

an A4 sized Simple, Straight Paper laid at My Feet

Requesting Me to write Golden Words on this Sheet;

the Pen tingling inside My Fingers telling to Do

pressed the Nib over Paper, allow the Words to Flow;

Mind started giving Bulk of Ideas and Thought

Heart Beating fast Resistant to Organize and Brought;

Sheet takes a Turn and Touched the Tip of Pen

Terms coming out Continuously without any Breaking Run;

Heart only Praising while Mind jotted it Down

Judging the Skills according the Roles He Found;

An Argument in minute between Pen and Paper Appearing

where Pen using More Space while Paper started Squeezing

Issue getting Hotter as Mind and Heart coming in Battle Ring

Both started the Clutter because Not agreeing with each one Hearing;

the Paper started Crumbling with Pain as the Pen making Sketches in Anger

Heart started Crying whereas Mind Grumbling so much as Buzzing Ringer;

This Fight going On till the Cell gives a Shaking Vibration

the Digital watch showed only Few minutes Left sending the Quotation;

At Last the Writing Pad coming to play the Role of Referee

it tried to Calm Down all and makes them all again Buddies;

the Paper now Stretching itself and turned to a Thinking Tab

while Pen dipping its Nib inside Inkpot to make it Smoothened Bib,

Mind and Heart after long Discussion comes to an End Point

Happy Birthday to Daya Sir is all their Final Comment;

An Envelope Sealing Letter placing itself inside with Ease

Pasting Appropriate Address and Closing it with Sticky Base;

After Exchanging so Many Hands in that Travelling Road

At last it Reached to the Man having the Happiest Mood;

Opening it Showering so many Blessings and Wishes Undoubtedly

It's the Ended Journey of the Letter sending to Dayaanand Shetty;!



Theme 3 Entry 2

Perhaps a day to make you smile,

About you, every day we think a while,
A day for a blast is today
For it is your Happy Happy Birthday!


Whatever you may wish for, may you receive,
Blessings in bounty and smiles in plenty everyday
A family connected with blood and heart is here,
To wish you a Happy Happy Birthday!


Me a fan, crazy yet full of respect
For the soul that is always humble in his way
To the golden heart, I've seen thus far
I wish a Happy Happy Birthday!


A grieving tear becomes a happy smile at your sight,
Like a happy fish playing to glory in every bay
The smile takes me away, to a far far land,
And here I wish you a Happy Happy Birthday!


May you learn to love every heart and soul,
Unconditionally each and every new day.
May your hands begin to effect change,
Right from today, on your Happy Happy Birthday!


Blessed may you be by Him, forever and ever,
May the ever livening smile fade, never ever away,
With heart full of joy, love and respect
I wish my Daya sir a Happy Happy Birthday!


Theme 3 Entry 3

Pigeon Post

A letter is dispatched to you by pigeon post

Making plain deep idolization to the utmost

Peppered with the heart and hurled via coast

Set foots in "Daya's Mansion" from rearmost

A letter is dispatched to you by pigeon post

The ball starts rolling with the word "Dote"

It glides with "Affection" akin to flyboat

Alluding to all of my emotions of inmost

A letter is dispatched to you by pigeon post

Whenever you grin like a Cheshire cat

A smack across my heart via cupids bat

As arrows were finished due to untold most

A letter is dispatched to you by pigeon post

Needless to say what i think about you

Verily its natch and only spares a few

In honor of ya' with beverage we toast

A letter is dispatched to you by pigeon post

One day i learned, "Never try this at home"

When i broke neck in doing your acrobatics alone

Revered by your endurance is even the ghost

A letter is dispatched to you by pigeon post

Toddler's hero, Teens Idol and World's Singham

CID's Daya, Girl's Athletic; Hard then Algum

Acp's door breaker, Abhi's dost

A letter is dispatched to you by pigeon post

Pigeon finally finds its Pirate

It sits on sir's shoulder, thanking fate

Opens his biog in IMDB, gives full rate

Letter is dispatched to Shetty's state

Wishing Our Hunky Cop a Happy Birthday

May this day be made a Public holiday

Edited by KhotaSikaShreya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Theme 1, Entry 1 : Very well written poem. Every show and movie in which Daya sir appeared and performed has been mentioned and coordinated beautifully with his personality traits. Good job 👏!!
8/10

Theme 2, Entry 1 : Mindblowing!! Beautifully written!! Loved each and every line. You penned down our thoughts actually and that too so precisely and accurately. Third para and the penultimate para were the highlight for me. Amazing work 👏!!
9/10

Theme 3, Entry 1 : Nice one but what you would have written to him in the letter is nowhere mentioned, which was to be mentioned a/c to the theme provided.
Nevertheless, liked the procedure you wrote about and the execution is really praiseworthy. Good attempt 👏.
7.5/10

Theme 3, Entry 2 : Short, sweet and straight. Very beautifully written with feelings conveyed smoothly. Fabulous attempt 👏.
9/10

Theme 3, Entry 3 : Amazing! I am in awe of it. 2nd, 3rd, 4th and 6th paras are the ones I liked the most. Good use of poetic devices. Well done 👏!!
9 / 10

Edited by ..Himani.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Theme 1 Entry 1 : 8/10
Theme 2 Entry 1 : 8.5/10
Theme 3 Entry 1 : 7.5/10
Theme 3 Entry 2 : 8/10
Theme 3 Entry 3 : 8.5/10
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Theme 1 Entry 1- 8/10 (good one 😃)

Theme 2 Entry 1 -9.5/10 (fantastic 👏
Theme 3 Entry 1 - 6/10 (well it is a nice poem but very less about Daya)
Theme 3 Entry 2 - 6/10 (same as above)
Theme 3 Entry 3 - 7.5/10 (does have a few lines about Daya)
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Theme 1-entry1# 8/10

Theme 2- entry 1#8.5/10

Theme 3- entry 1#7/10

Theme 3- entry 2#8.5/10

Theme3- entry 3#9/10

A big round of applause for all the fantastic poem writers here.👏👏..i loved all the poems...😛👏

Theme 1 entry 1- wow...lovely poem...👏 describes the whole journey of Daya sir..😛.very well written...👏

Theme 2 entry1- a heart touching poem ..loved each n every line of this...👏😊

Theme 3 entry1- liked ur way of describing,but Daya sir was not mentioned at all...anyway,the writer is indeed awesome...👏⭐️

Theme 3 entry 2- so..sweet... loved it so much...😊 very well written...👏⭐️

Theme 3 entry 3- very nice poem...😛😊👏 enjoyed reading it...😊😊
Edited by Abhi-Anamika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Theme 1 Entry 1 : 8.5/10
Theme 2 Entry 1 : 9/10
Theme 3 Entry 1 : 8/10
Theme 3 Entry 2 : 9/10
Theme 3 Entry 3 : 9/10
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Theme 1 : Entry 1 : (lovely.. Liked the way you have touched all the shows and movies except Runway) 8/10

Theme 2 : Entry 1 : (Superb as well as hearttouching...) 9.5/10

Theme 3 :
Entry 1 : 9/10
Entry 2 : 9/10
Entry 3 : 9/10
I find all three awesome and unique in their own way..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Theme 1 Entry 1 : 8/10
Theme 2 Entry 1 :9/10
Theme 3 Entry 1 : 9/10
Theme 3 Entry 2 :7.5/10
Theme 3 Entry 3 : 9/10
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Theme: ONE

Dayanand Shetty: From CID to Singham Returns

Poem: 9.5/10 👏👏👏

I really Enjoyed this😃😃... its really a Good Ride to go through any Actor Fruitful Journey who got Many Blessings and Wishing and will have too...😳👏👏
it's the Only Entry regarding this Theme but Awesome...👏👏
Thank You so much Poet... 😳😳



Theme: TWO

Daya Sir: I wish you were real

Poem: 9.5/10 👏👏👏

its another Mind blowing Entry ⭐️⭐️... I must Appreciate that how a Poet Full Fledged Imagination over Paper 😳😳... Its so much Awesome as I have No words to Describe ⭐️⭐️... Its really a Fantastic and Splendid Work...👏👏
Thank You so much Poet...😳😳

Sorry, as I cant Understand from which I Compare these TWO Entries of Two Different Themes as there is No Other Entry Came under these Themes...


Theme: THREE

A Letter to Dayanand Shetty

Poem 1: 7/10 👏👏👏

Nice Idea to Show the Figthing between Pen and Paper to Show How much they were Excited about this PRAISING LETTER 😉😳😳 where No Word of PRAISE (in actual meaning) used 😉😆😆... its Really Different Idea and I Appreciated it...👏
I found the Poem Little Lengthy but I Enjoyed it...😳👏
Thank You so much Poet... 😳😳


Poem 2: 9/10 👏👏👏

I found it Really Cute as its Sounding Like a Soothing, Happy Song 😳👏... Poem have Some Flicks of Praising gives Cute shade 😳... Blessings, Wishes and Respect send to Birthday Boy in a Really Classy Manner really showed in this Poem ⭐️⭐️... Again an Enjoyable Cute Tone...😳👏
Thank You so much Poet... 😳😳


Poem 3: 8/10 👏👏👏

Another aspect of Letter is Portraying in this Poem 😃👏... I loved the use of PIGEON POST which really gives a Feel 😳⭐️... I really Admired as Poet showed the Pigeon Journey as well Script Written inside Letter side by side giving a Lovely Aura 👏👏... So Pure and Enjoyable way to Daya's Mansion...😳👏
Thank You so much Poet... 😳😳


Its Surprised that THEME THREE having THREE POEMS (Entries 😉) mean People wanted to Try atleast Once to Write a Letter to Gentle Giant...😆😆


All the Best to All Participants 👍🏼... A Big Thank You to make these Awesome Entries...😳👏👏

Edited by gadhadada - 10 years ago

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