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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Update the chapter asap
Impressive character sketch
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3 - Dreams do come true!


There was darkness everywhere...
I was running but couldn't see anything...
Suddenly I crashed into something hard yet so warm...
I closed my eyes in fear for the fall but nothing came
instead I felt two warm hands steadying me.
I could finally see something.
A pair of chocolate brown eyes were the first thing that came into my view.
Suddenly someone started to pull me away but I didn't
wanted to leave the pair of chocolate brown eyes yet.
I resisted but the pull became stronger and then I heard my best friend telling me to get up.
Wait!!!
How did she came here?
Ayat : Aloo! Aliya! Get up, sleepy head!
Aliya (murmuring) : Leave me Ayat. Let me sleep for five mins.
Ayat : Aloo, you have said this from past twenty minutes. Come on get up you lazy girl. Wake up now or else I'm gonna kick you off the bed. And don't tell me that I didn't warn you! I'm gonna count till ten, if you don't get up then see what I will do.
Aliya suddenly remembered the morning before yesterday incident when Ayat had kicked her and she had fallen so hard on the floor that her back still ache slightly,
remembering that horrifying incident made Aliya's sleep vanish instantly.
Ayat : 5... , 6... , 7...
Aliya (sitting up on the bed with a jerk) : Okay! Okay! I am up! Now get out of my room and let me get fresh. I will come down just give me half an hour.
Ayat went out of her room room but not before hearing Aliya murmur something which seemed like about how now a days even peaceful sleep is banished which made her giggle.
Aliya picked her spectacles (in the process making the book she read last night fall off the bedside drawer to the shinny marble floor) and wore them.
She went to her closet and chose a sky blue ankarli to wear, sighing she went into the bathroom.

Barkat Villa
Mumbai
Zain's bedroom

He was lost in the vast sunflower field, he saw the sun rising and then a figure of ... girl!?
The view was picturesque with the girl just under the rising sun. He wanted to capture this image forever in his mind. The girl started twirling spreading her arms in a gesture which seems like welcoming the new day. Then she stopped taking me out of my thoughts too. I frowned thinking what happened but the next moment all seem to fade away as she raised her head and all I could see was the pair most beautiful hazel eyes which were like thousands of twinkling stars shinning in the sky. Then she smiled...Ufff!!!
The dazzling smile of hers that could bright up the whole universe. A smil...

Rizwan : Bro! Bro! Get up!
Zain : What is it Rizwan? Can't you just let sleep peacefully (and dream too)he said under his breath.
Rizwan : Bro, I know what it feels to get disturbed when you're in your peaceful sleep but don't you remember, you're going to see a girl today.
Zain (getting up hastily and seeing the clock) : Oh shit! 8:45 a.m . Dadi is gonna kill me now!
Couldn't you wake me up early?
Rizwan was going to say something but Zain gestured him to stop and continued further by saying : Now, don't give me any excuses cause I m not ready to waste anytime to listen your silly reasons now.

Saying that he went up to his closet and picked out a white shirt with black jeans.
Leaving a flustered Rizwan behind who could still not comprehend about what had just happened. After sometimes he left his room shaking his head in disbelief.

Here's the hot pipping update served to you, so how did it taste?
I know I m late but can you believe my small sis blackmailed me into doing her project and I had to compromise my updating time period because of her stupid project.
Anyways next update is gonna be update only after this post get minimum 15 likes and 8 comments. I know I can be devil sometimes but haven't I told you I am very demanding(grinning).
P.S - do like and comment on the post
P.S.S - all kind of criticism are always welcome
P.S.S.S - do remember me in your prayers
See ya friends in next update inshallah!

Edited by ZFA_Flower - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
What an awesome update...
Was this was your first attempt...
Really loved it..
Our forum has got one more excellent writer...
Fabolous update..
Ayat kicked aliya... lol...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Nice update
pls do continue soon
looking frwrd 2 read it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

What an awesome update...
Was this was your first attempt...
Really loved it..
Our forum has got one more excellent writer...
Fabolous update..
Ayat kicked aliya... lol...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm..

Thanks for the appreciation
Ya, its my first time that I need all of your support friends
I will continue only when I get my demand fulfilled
😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower


Thanks for the appreciation
Ya, its my first time that I need all of your support friends
I will continue only when I get my demand fulfilled
😆

u r wlcum...
What is your demand?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

u r wlcum...
What is your demand?

Oh just some 15 likes and 8 comments😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower


Oh just some 15 likes and 8 comments😆😉

okey adhi wish mein fulfill kardeti hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Update...
See 8 comments completed now update it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update Flower.
Continue soon
Thanx for d pm

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