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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 7



Rehearsals advance and the day of the big show approaches and things remain as they are Devika and Asim live their lives between their family and their works

when they are in the theater they are always together inseparable they learn to know each other better they confide everything he tells her about his family his mother the most important woman for him but he does not speak ever about Charita he ignores that she is aware of her she tells him about her brothers and her love for them her mother's complicity . they say everything they talk about everything except their feelings and love but they let themselves understand he shows her that he love her he lets her feel this love by signs. the proposals that reach never their end. he lets her know he lets her the hope and then withdraws it

she was sitting with friends they discussed about their dance's move he returned after being out making a purchase he approaches her with an innocent smile and said

-: Can you come with me Devika I want to talk to you

he takes her into a corner leaving the eyes of others to wonder what there's. suspecting a complicity that they see it turn into a love. in his isolation with Devika Asim gives her a box saying happy

-: This is for you (always smile drawn on lips)

-: What is it (she says him happy she looks and it's a box of chocolate her favorite brand

-: Chocolate I know you love this brand I bought it for you (he responds proud of his actions and looking at her with a holy love )

Devika's eyes filled with tears it's a proof of love for her she thanks him with a strong emotion that he notices and tries to hide his gesture remains unexplained to him he said

-: Why you're like that Devika is only chocolate

it's not just chocolate for Devika it's more than that it is the love he has offered her she understood but unfortunately she has not heard it because he not want to say it he does not want to admit it he just wants to feel it and let it seem from time to time by indices this is the way he likes her the way he speaks of his desires without letting them see the day and that's how he solved his problem he believes that he has found his way. as Devika is near him so that he can see her all days see her smile that he draws with his attitude he wants nothing else and he does not want to think about anything else

but there is not only the feeling of envy which lodges in the heart of Asim another pain pierces him when Devika is with her friends happiness settles in her happy she rejoices of her days laugh with them she is close to all her friends and they love her all. that time helps her to forget help her to think of anything else. but all this displease to Asim his jealousy devours him seeing her with the other boys his rage arose he believes she should be up to him she belongs to him and all his moments she must pass with him he is afraid that all the signs he saw in her was nothing and meant nothing he is afraid that he is mistaken. his jealous temperament betrays him Nita a near friends of Devika has seen like any other. she's worried about her friend she wants to avoid her suffering

-: Tell me Devika (said Nita) did you forget to tell me something ?

-: What? I forgot what?

- :Asim, Devika you forgot to tell me about Asim

-: What do you mean (she responds to her by engaging in an occupation to hide her feeling) I understand nothing

Nita beckons to Devika turning back to her and said

-: I know that there's something between you and Asim I'm your friend you don't have to hide

-: There is nothing between us we are just friends

-: You can lie to you even but your eyes and your behavior can not it is clear that you have feelings towards each other

-: Can be me but I don't think for him (Devika responds with an air of sad)

Nita noticed this sadness and sees her friend sulfur in silence she feels guilty for not noticing instead decided to help her

-: Devika tell me what makes you sad I've never seen you like this you always were a girl who loves life smiling dynamic what happens to you ?

-: My problem is that I fell in love but impossible love. I love Asim but he does not love me he has a girlfriend he will even get engaged

-: May be it is true that he has a girlfriend may be true that he is going to get engaged but it's not true that he does not love you

Devika would like to believe Nita, she would like to believe that Asim love her and she remains hopeful

-: You're wrong Nita I told you he has a girlfriend if he loves me he would have said

-: Talk to him about her and tries to see if he is really attached to her maybe he love you and does not realize

-: No Nita I don't want to destroy this relationship I don't want to be the cause of another person's sadness maybe she loves him

Nita's proposal does not remain thoughtless to Devika who keeps her words carefully

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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part 8



while love is gently moved things forward slowly it lacking only the shock that will awaken Asim and will show him the way of his heart shake him and open his eyes to his true love help him away up his doubts and present his arms to happiness

a dance that they will dance together today will change the meaning of their lives their history they will live it, they will understand it and they will feel it. it will not be a dream it is real he see hers advance on the scene her held puts her body in value her bare belly the music declared the song starts and its words help Asim to understand his feelings to realize that life without Devika is nothing for him this song about a deep love real love! tough! a wrestler love gives courage to Asim who saw reality he discovered that Devika is everything to him she is his life the air he breathes giving him life and he is ready to leave everything drop everything for that she remains near him.

Asim pulls strong Devika towards him repeating her to stay with him to give her all the love she deserves and that she waited. words he did not hear in the song he composed it was in his depths Devika looked at him with surprised eyes do not understand what happens she expected for a secret feelings dissimilated behind the lyrics of the song but she found herself before the revelation. his eyes tell her that he is ready to share with her that love and all desires that he wants to offer her he strokes her cheek brings closer his head to hers and whispered her his desire to feel her in his body to become one his need to touch her soft skin that mesmerizes him and takes him into her world this song allows them to live the dream moment and make it real for the first time

the song ended and as usual Devika pull back and flees in her dressing room before the eyes of Asim who move to follow her and actually confess his feelings for her but stopped by his friend Adil he was unable to follow his love

her heart is beating so fast that she can't catch it Devika feels lost she does not know what to think and what to say the words that Asim has said was not in the song they are true it is his words to him

-: His words were sincere it was for me he confessed his love to me he loves me I don't understand anything I'm afraid to be wrong

Devika is happy the words of Asim was for her this time he decided to tell all and passed to the stage of revelation but she fears it's only a dream for her and that tomorrow he will resume his normal life to see her as a friend she's confused she does not understand she changes her clothes and goes home

Asim goes to the Devika's lodge knocks at the door no one answered he opened the door and Devika is gone too desperate returned home pleased with what he has experienced goes to his room and resumes the images of what is produced.

-: I love Devika tomorrow I'll tell her I can't keep lying to me she is my only love

Asim believes happy find his way forgetting a detail but his joy don't arrives its end when his mother knocks at his door and comes to remind him this detail

-: I see you happy my son (his mother told him) tells me

-: Nothing mom just that my presentation today was good

-: I am happy for you my son your father and I have decided to go this week asking for you Charita

suddenly the smile of Asim disappears he just remember this detail Charita his girlfriend whom he promised marriage what will he do now? that will he to decide? he said nothing to his mother and did not object to her request

Devika return home a joy is painted on her face found her mother in the living room she kisses her sits next to her takes a cup of tea and begins to taste.

-: You are happy today (said her mother looking her satisfied)

-: The day was beautiful today mom with a friends we did a lot of things

she begins to tell her beautiful day but don't tell her about her adventure with Asim

-: for a while you're with me remote Devika (taking uneasily) you don't tell me anything

-: What mom? what do you want me to tell you more than what I say

-: We were very close you told me all your feelings your joy and your troubles but for a while you come home and you locked in your room since ... (hesitated a moment and then continued) since you told me about Asim last time you were unhappy thinker I did not want to add on your sorrows but now I see you happy tells your mother what have made your smile of before

-: I'm afraid to be wrong mom I don't want to build my dreams which will be demolished I don't want to suffer again but today I am happy

-: I see that your story grew and became more serious

Devika started to tell her mother how Asim declared her his feeling today all the words he uttered were for that she understands

-: He usually repeats the words of the song with the rhythm of the dance but now the words were not in the song they address to me I felt its, but I ''m afraid that tomorrow I find the old Asim in front of me a friend just a friend

-: I think your story become very serious (her mother told her) you must not fall into this trap the trap of hesitation it's going to hurt you and prevent you from moving forward. I have more experience than you and I must tell you that if this love is impossible forgetting . made your life and be happy because a love like that you can lose as you can win but before that he will withdraw all your energy and you kill your time

Devika said nothing to her mother she know that she's right but she also know that she will never move on and forget Asim she will never love someone else only him and now that he has confessed

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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amazing...
both having feelings...
devika suppressing her feelings...
asim going to confess...
update soon,,,,,,,,,,,
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part 9



Tonight Asim can't sleep he thinks to what is happened during his dance with Devika and his love for her. he think to Charita and all his years that he spent with her and that believed to be in love he is disturbed he don't know what to do and his mother has decided to go ask Charita for marriage. what should he do? what should he tell ?

-: I have to decided I should not stay like this I need to know which I love the most when I'm too close to Devika I have a feeling that I have never knew. I know I'm in love with her but I need proof

The day after the declaration of Asim. Devika stays home she feels uncomfortable she will not go to the rehearsal she panics and she is afraid that what is spend with him is a nice dream and once at the theater she will found a neutral Asim who will left her suffer pending a word from him she prefers to escape the situation and hoped to keep this dream with her reliving those moments as if it just happened took the same sensation and the same cravings

Not seeing Devika arrived this morning, Asim is concerned and asks her friend Nita

-: Nita! have you seen Devika today? I go in her lodge and she is not there

-: I don't know! she usually comes in the morning (she takes her phone call but did not answer)

Devika in her room turned off the phone she wants to talk to anyone and mainly Nita who will ask her many questions, she prefers to be alone with her thoughts. worried Asim takes his phone and call her too, but he comes across voicemail

Devika stays in her room all day her mother goes to see her later in the day ask her to out of her isolation, but she refuses and she gives herself to her thoughts she sleeps and feeds little up to deteriorating to her health

during that time Asim in his side does not stop to think about the revelation that he made to Devika at their intimate moment during the dance it's the only time that he can confess everything to her it is the only occasion where he can live his love and passion. after being sure to have found his way there still falls once in a hesitation he wants if all this will real but the insistence of his mother and the images of Charita prevent and harasses and attract to the reality that he already lived

three days Devika is absent from the theater her friends worried .the dance teacher also wonders why this absence

-:it's been three days Devika did not come (said the teacher) anyone has news of her

-: her phone is put out we can't even join her (Nita said) I usually call her all night

Asim observed from a distance leaving seem an attitude worried he feels that it happened to her a misfortune he is not quiet he observes from afar and wonders what he can do

-: You know where she lives (the teacher asks Nita) someone must go and see her at home maybe she's sick

-: Yes sir (she responds) I'll go see

Asim emerged from his place to take this opportunity and offers to Nita to take her with his car

always in her room this morning Devika does not come out for breakfast her mother goes to see and finds her in critical condition burning of fever does not respond she call the doctor who tells her that she has exhausted herself this last times and she does not eat a lot for give strength after the departure of the doctor her mother began to care for her when she hears the doorbell ring she will open and finds opposite her Nita a friend of her daughter that she recognizes and a young man full of anxiety that is foreign for her

-: Hi aunt (Nita said) we are coming to take news of Devika we haven't seen her since three days! all is right?

-: come my daughter (the mother of Devika responds to Nita she looks Asim and resumes) come inside she accompanies them to the sitting room ask them to sit then continuous) Devika is sick the doctor just left

Asim rises abruptly from his seat and said unconsciously

-: Sick!! why she is sick! what she has?

Devika's mother was astonished at this behavior don't understand the attitude of Asim she looks quizzically of Nita which responds her a little embarrassed

-: heu !! he is Asim my aunt the dance partner of Devika he is very worried he came to ask her news

-: Ho it's you Asim then (she responds satisfied) pleased to meet you

her words signify too for Asim they leave understand that Devika spoke of him and he recalled when she told him that she was complicit with her mother

-: Listen my son Devika is very sick the doctor gave her an injection and he said she does not wakes up front tonight don't worried she will get better

-: What happened to her aunt? why she is sick? (request Asim )

-: She has too giving for the show she is very tired her body was not resisted she must rest

Asim look at the mother of Devika with imploring eyes and asks

-: I can see her ? please aunt I don't disturb her

Devika's mother discovers a man felled. Asim leaves a feeling of compassion knowing the love of her daughter to him and eyes to this young man to who reveals a strong and sincere love approaches put her hand on his shoulder and said

-: Come with me (she leads him to her room open a door and continuous) if you want you can stay for a minutes beside her

she takes this opportunity take Nita at the sitting room leaving Asim alone with his emotions

-: Nita told me what's there between this young man and my daughter Devika told me about him but I feel that this relationship makes her suffer I don't want her to be destroy

-: I don't know aunt she told me a little all that I know she loves him and she also said that he is not in love with her he's engaged aunt I too understand anything this story is complicated

-: It seems to me that he also has feelings for her (Devika's mother responds ) you have not noticed his behavior but I'm afraid that this relationship will be complicated further by his coming here

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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part 10



Asim in Devika's room sitting next to her looks with his tender eyes full of love he holds her hand gently stroked her cheek and said

-: excuse me Devika I know I make you suffer I love you and I can't live without you but my life is not easy my past will follow me to the end forgive me if I can't be a part of your life forgive me if I can't stay by your side and forgive me if I will make you suffer even more

He wipes a tear that wets his eye approach his head to Devika's cheek and kisses her a long secret kiss, the contact of his lips on her soft cheek gives him a strong thrill he has never felt before, a desire to devour this face and mark it with kisses he raised his head looked at her and thinks he has found evidence that he sought rests his lips on her second cheek and realize that this contact, he wants that does not end. his kiss have been longer if he had not heard footsteps advanced towards the room he picks himself up again looking at his princess and thinks he can't prevent to approach her. Nita returned and said

-: Asim we must leave now we should let her rest

Asim takes one last look on his beloved, and leaves with Nita after greeting the mother of Devika thanking to allow him to have a moment with her. in the car Nita took the opportunity and said

-: Asim!! I know you love Devika (he tries to deny it she did not let him speak and continuous) does not try to deny and listen to what I have to say (he looks at her and beckoned with head he is ready to listen to) your feelings for her are visible you can tell me she's your friend but I do not believe Devika is a fragile girl she never knew of boy she never loved but you she loves you she loves you very hard so don't let her suffer if you are not ready to admit your feelings let the quiet

Asim stopped the car looked at Nita with sparkling eyes and began

-: I don't want to leave her quiet I love her I'm in love with her my wish and my desire is to be with her and I want her to know but I have a pass that haunts me never leave me. before to meet her I was happy with a girl and for years I loved her but since I saw Devika I felt something my feeling for her its different when I'm near her my body shivers and I think only to stay longer at smell her scent these things I've never felt with Charita

-: it's the love what you feel for Devika you must make a decision don't make her suffer with you

-: I'm not trying to hurt her just love her and see her every day (he lowers his head and said) I can't make a choice my feelings for Charita I don't want to let them down after all I have lived with her all these years I had feelings for her

-: I understand what you feel what you had with Charita is not the love I think it's a strong friendship of all this years you are attached at her

-: Can be ( said Asim watching Nita with a smile for thanks her to enable him to express his feelings he starts the car and leaves)

at Devika's home and late night she wakes the fever came down she feels better she opens her eyes looks around see no one and suddenly a shine crosses her mind she sees herself in bed next to her Asim sat who kissed she puts her hand on her cheek thought she had done a beautiful dream she rejoices and goes out of the bed with a smile she comes down to the living room and finds her family

-: Why you left your bed my daughter (her mother told her) you're still weak

-: No mom (she responds happy) I feel better don't worry

-: return in your bed I will bring you food the doctor said that you should not stand up today and you have to feed you well

she executes orders of her mother and returned to bed she calls her two brothers to keep her company

-: You feeling better today didi (said her little brother Rahul) I missed you. you have not played with me

-: sorry my brother but I was sick I was unconscious I promise to play with you after (she responds to him keeping her innocent smile)

-: You were unconscious then this morning when the gentleman was in your room? (told her (Sajiv) her other brother

-: A gentleman (Devika asked removing her smile) who is it., ah maybe the doctor?

-: No it is not the doctor (resumes Sajiv) a gentleman who came this morning with Nita I have never seen I don't know who he is because I am gone to the school after

Devika's heart starts beating her mother returned with the tray of food. she sees her gets out of bed and asks

-: Who came to visit me this morning Mom?

her mother looks at her two son she realized they were talking about the visit to this morning waved them out puts the tray of food on the table asks Devika back to bed saying

-: Nita came to see you she came to take from your news

-: And the young man whom was talking Sajiv (she asks ) who is it?

-: Asim (her mother responds with a smile satisfied) he came to see you he was worried and I allowed him to stay with you a little lonely

-: Alone with me (Devika said. the pensive eyes putting her hand on her cheek)

Devika looks at her mother with shocked eyes her hand still on her cheek sees her dream when Asim kissed her and realizes she does not dreamed it was real Asim has really kissed her

-: This young man is really in love with you (her mother says she sits next to her plate in hand to feed her daughter and continuous) but this love scares me I see indecision in his eyes

-: Even if it's true I don't think he ever admit I think it will never make the decision to separate from his girlfriend that he has known for a long time I don't need to build a dream that will never resist I must continue to live as I always was I wait anything from him I must move on

-: It is a wise decision ( told her mother who put some food in her mouth) you reassures me

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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part 11



The kiss that gave Asim to Devika awakened in him a reality that was buried in his heart always fighting with himself can't make a decision. in the evening after the rehearsal he rides in his car listen to the song of the first dance he danced near Devika and think back to that first feeling he had when he had taken her in his arms when he caressed her belly. what he was discover that day following him all over obsessed him he stops his car in a deserted place out stands up against the door head up to the sky begging to help him find a way out

-: Whenever I see Devika my hand has only one desire is to land on her to wander in her soft body my lips trying to escape to paint on hers why this desire had never arises face up Charita maybe because I never got too close to her?

many questions torment him he can't find their answers and don't help him to find a track decided to stop thinking but take action. takes the wheel and returns home

Before starting the repetition of dance Asim spent every weekend with Charita he stopped doing for a while since his heart began to beat for Devika he found excuses to stay away with his thoughts. at a birthday party of a friend Asim arrives with Charita he agreed today to emerge from its isolation an it's opportunity for him to test his true feelings for her the party started and dance expresses the couple put one next to the other and the music starts Asim holds the hand of charita and dance with her he looks into her eyes and seeks what he saw in those of Devika empty he sees nothing just the same feelings of always a girl to whom he is attached a girl with whom he likes to be. but not a girl he wanted to kiss. very close to her but his body did not shudder. romantic music but don't want to give him a desire to repeat its words he closes his eyes for a moment to get deep down and face of Devika appears. bothered by what happens to him apologizes to her partner and out to the terrace he looks off into the wild and think hard in his soul (-: Devika !!!!)

he knew it was she he knew he was in love he wants this love it makes him happy but he believes that it has come too late if it had come some years ago he would have opened the arms to it and he would never let it go he don't know what to do he wants to say to Devika that he loves her. he wants to dive with her and with all his desire for her but he don't want to hurt Charita he don't want these years erases by his stupidity because his heart was not able to choose her

-: What have you Asim (Charita told him after following him seeing his sorrow ) you suddenly stopped dancing and you went out without saying anything

-: Nothing (he looks at her and said accompanied by a sad smile) don't worry

-: since a while I think you're not well you're sad we don't meet as before and you did not talk to me on the phone. is it because I did not give you the answers for marriage ?

-: No it's not that it's all the rehearsals that takes my time and tired me

-: You can ask your parents to come and talk to my father I am ready for marriage

this is not the moment for Asim he don't know yet if that's what he wants she surprises him with her statement he looks emotionally holds the head of Charita and gave her a brief kiss on the front did not oppose at her request but at the same time he is not willing for the wedding he made his decision he wants to live his love story with Devika and see how far it may range

at the theater the week begins with rehearsals the dancers comes after a relaxing weekend Asim supervises the arrival of Devika who was absent for three days eyes glued to the door waiting for it to open and his love goes . his wish is soon to be realized when Devika comes in small steps accompany of her usual smile she approached her friends among them Asim and things pick up where they were nothing changes the repetition the friend's complicity the looks and feel of Asim who don't declare themselves

-: Happy to see you Devika ( says dance teacher) how you feel you today

-: Very good sir (she says directing her eyes towards Asim who has not quitted her by eyes) I'm fine and the weekend allowed me to rest

leaving all her friends wish her welcome back. Asim prefer to be the last to speak to her always loving gaze and mouth that does not tell all

-: You're better Devika? you feel you well?

she looks at him and sees that kiss he put on her cheek but expects nothing she don't want to ruin this friendship and believes that it is for him to speak and declared what he had started she responds tenderly

-: I'm fine Asim thank you to take from my news my mother told me that you come with Nita

he smiles and says nothing think too of this first kiss that he offered her. his desire this time is to slide her under his arms and transmit his joy to see her healthy beside him for relive the moment that have always had together think he is ready to tell her everything he don't want to keep his secret love he wants to offer it to her. what is happened with Charita yesterday, or rather which is not passed gave him his answer

-: just resume the rehearsal (the teacher told them tearing them from their relaxing time) if you don't feel well (to Devika) you can get some rest

-: No (she replies with a haste to be in the arms of Asim) I feel good I want to repeat

she goes to her dressing room to change accompanied with her friend Nita (and the gaze to Asim follows her until she disappears he could not finish what he wanted to start) Devika take this moment alone with Nita and tells her

-: My mother told me that you came to see me at home when I was sick thank you

-: I was not alone (she responds with a smile ) Asim was with me

-: I know (she responds by lowering the head with a muffled voice) she told me

Nita puts her hand on the arm of her friend looks in her eyes and said

-: He loves you Devika? he told me

-: I know Nita but he said nothing he always hesitate you're aware for his fianc he will not choose I can't live like this I decided to forget this story and devote myself to dance

-: And him ?you want to forget him ?she asks

-: I don't want to forget Asim I will always love him he will remain in my heart I just want to forget this history that lead nowhere I am ready to love him and give him everything but he is not yet ready I will wait him

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part 12



Asim had followed Devika and Nita discreetly he waited patiently outside the door he heard everything he know Devika knows about Charita he will not let this love escape him waiting for Nita left the lodge he has revelations to make to Devika hoping Charita is not an obstacle for him and Nita finally decides to leave he did not have time presentation will start he knocks on the door and enters Devika is ready to live her dream again in the arms of her beloved not knowing what will happen at the moment and divert all her thoughts and hope

-: Are you ready (said Asim advancing towards her) we'll dance together again

Devika flushed down the head she finds Asim different. she makes him a positive sign looks into his eyes and waits for a gesture of him she does not wait long when he said in soft voice

-: Devika !! I want to talk to you

-: ttt talk with me (she responds hesitates) what you want to tell me?

-: to Us. you and me (always the loving gentle voice)

Devika's heart bounced prevents breathing which stops at times sees Asim lead his footsteps more to her with a face that declared his desire. she remains fixed in place and waits for more

-; why you say nothing (said Asim tenderness in his words) talk to me

-: What? heuuu who? me !!!!!!!!!! (she loses all her words don't know what to say turns to put away clothes) I have nothing to say (she said determined)

He grabs her by the arm gently. turn her for look at him. her face flushed he puts his hand on her cheek and tenderly kisses her on the other she looks at him with shocked eyes fell back and said

-: Asim !! what are you doing? (he did not have time to respond when Nita enters surprises them and tells that the teacher waits them

on stage a new dance with new music and new lyrics (Pehla Pehla pyaar hai) standing behind her opened his dance holding her hands in the air let them slip to caress her arms repeating her that she is his first love because this dance gives him the same feeling he always had with her pleased with what he feels continuous his dance stroking her cheek sending her his happiness to have her to him to have discovers her and choose her to live a passionate love to have manifest his emotions.. still his shivering body by her breathing that she lets out to prove her desire to repeat her consent to accept to fill her happiness they all said they leave all understand . finished their dance his hand in hers share a smile expressing the relief to have finally said everything

like every time their teacher congratulated them for this wonderful dance and said

-: You two shared a prodigious success you are made for each other your dances tell stories keep it up

Devika looks at Asim embarrassed withdrew her hand from his and leaves the stage taking with her the same smile that had drawn on her lips during that she confessed her dream living a reality with this song. he lets her go and think he win her heart and it remains that to spend a good time together to enjoy this love, a moment who begins immediately, he goes after her holds by the hand and led her in his dressing room and once there he resume with her where he was stopped before starting the repetition. he wants to start something with her

-: What is it there's Asim (said softly) why did you bring me here

-: If we go to your dressing room Nita come and I want to be alone with you

-: This is not what I meant (said removing his hand from hers concerned that someone gets in) what do you want?

-: You did not answer me (he responds by moving towards her taking with him)

-: What (she tells him backs away and hinting that she has nothing included)

he continues to move towards the wall while talking

-: to my proposal just now !! you have say nothing

she does not respond her heart beats she did not object to this situation leaves Asim speak for her he catch her to the wall puts his hand on her cheek and whispered her in soft voice

-: Devika !! tell me that you feel the same as me ( he approached his lips to her ear she closes her eyes and in her dark she hears whispers)

-: I love you (and leaves a kiss on her cheek is sticking stay as long as he wants to prove his love)

she opens her eyes looks at his face exudes a very big smile

the relationship of Devika and Asim starts he finally acknowledged happiness emerges days promise but they leaves nothing to know they prefer it to stay that between them yet and between Nita friend's Devika, and Adil his friend

after this beautiful moment of love shared with his beloved and love of his life Asim returned home at night his family welcome him with great joy they have good news for him

He returned and found an unusual movement his family is planning something

-: here are you my son (his mother told him) sit next to me

He approaches her looks amazed to asking what is happening and he said

-: What is all this mom you prepare a feast

-: Yes you can say. it's gifts tomorrow we will make the marriage proposal to parents of Charita

he rises from his seat he did not expect the situation he did not know how to handle and told her mother

-: Why so fast like that I don't know if her father agrees or not

-: We will know tomorrow whether he agrees or not why do you hesitate? you don't want to marry?

-: No it's not that you could tell me

-: It is you who chose this girl you recall?

- I know !! this is me (he says) excuse me now I'm tired

the happiness to have found a passion for love made him to forget his marriage application to Charita. he returned to his room closes the door and think to the situation, a big problem in front of him he has to solve he just relive he just to find happiness and he just revealed his feeling to Devika he can't give up what he shared with her he has to react he must make a decision

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing updates...
devika was sick...
asim realized his love...
nita such a lovely friend...
after so many things...
now asim confessed his love for devika...
but now marriage with chitra...?
asim need to stop his parents...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 13


the next day Asim gets up very early or rather he was unable to sleep well he thinks at this situation that has become more difficult than when he loved Devika in silence now he has to choose what it displeases him Charita was the girl with whom he wanted to spend his whole life he thought of make a family with her but Devika is the girl that he wants to spend the rest of his life and build a love with her. in the living room he found his mother prepares to go for her request of marriage he wants to talk to her he wants to tell about Devika he does not know if he has the courage to do it but he tries

-: Hello mom (and sits next to her)

-: Hello my son (she tells him happy caressing his cheek) it's a pleasure for me today to see the youngest of my son to marry

-: Mom !! (he hesitated a bit and then continuous) you can wait a bit and do not go today I ...

-: (She snatches the words of his mouth and said him worried ) why my son there is something happened don't tell me that you don't want to get married

-: no Not that mom but I ...

Again she stops him does not allow him to say what he has on the heart which is already difficult for him and continuous

-: I know what you think (he looks surprised) you think of her father but don't worry your father will try to convince him

the situation becomes harder for him he does not want to convince the father of Charita he did not say anything and remained silent watching her mother happy

Asim's parents go to Charita's home for the marriage and he goes to the theater to find his heart got there Devika finds him pensive and sad she approaches him sits on the couch with him and said

-: Asim tell me what you have your face is sad please talks about your pain

affected he holds her hands kisses its and said

-: I want out of this place I don't want to repeat today you come with me?

Devika feels that Asim meets a big problem now that he is her love she has to stay at his side and support him in his hard times she looks around to see if there is no one. responds with yes and accompanies him. they hold their hands and eclipse together without anyone notices them he takes her to his favorite place where he is going every time he grieves a deserted place on the cliff covered up by heaven above and a dry river down once there he hugs her very strong in his arms and said

-: Promise me Devika to never leave me promise to stay all your life with me

she looks weird puts her two hands on his cheeks and asked him

-: What is it there Asim you scared me something's wrong

the wet eyes he took her hands kisses emotionally saying

-: I love you Devika I can't live without you since I loved you I tried to convince myself that what I feel is not important but I realized that it is wrong all that I want in this world is to be with you promise me that whatever happens in my life you will never leave me and that you will support me and always stay with me

Devika starting to get really worried and insists to know what's going on with him

-: Tell me the truth Asim What's happen

with a very affectionate air and continual hesitation he tells his bad luck

-: Before you met I was with a girl I ask her to be my wife she refused at first time. after that I met you and I forgot this idea of marriage but today. ... (he does not finished and is silent for a moment)

-: What Asim!! (Devika said with a serious tone and worried she felt that her relationship with him will meet hard time) what is what happened today?

he looks into her eyes and tells her

-:my mother is going to make her a marriage proposal today

she remains a great time to look up to believe what he just said her eyes began to shine and tears began to flow. what she dreaded arrived that Asim can't choose between her and Chatita

she takes two steps back turned without saying anything Asim comes up behind her stroking her arm she moves to the car open the car door and said

-: I want to go home

always sad Asim puts his hand on her cheek asked to look at him and told her

-: Tell me something Devika does not leave me like this don't turn your back on me please

-: Brought me home please I don't want to stay here (said with drawing her hand)

Asim puts his hand once again on the cheek of Devika insisting that she looks at him and says

-: I'm sorry if I hurt you if I told you that it is not to announce you my marriage I will not get married and I don't want to marry someone other than you, you're my only wish now I've told you for support me and help me find a solution I'm going wrong I must face my mother now the woman to whom I never said no I never was against her will my father that I have always respected and now I have to do and for you I ask you to stay with me and support me in everything I do and that this problem should not separate us

Devika affected by the confession of Asim she agrees to support him but on condition

-: ok Asim I will always be with you but you must promise me one thing

happy he kisses her hand and said

-: Yes what you want

-: If you love me (she said stroking his cheek) really. it must admit all to your fiance I don't want to share you with another you have to make your choice

-: I don't feel anything for her she's a friend to me don't worry about it

she makes him a satisfied smile and a warm kiss on the cheek then rests her head on his shoulder

he approaches his lip to hers and gave her a kiss sensational puts her in his arms happy to have loved her

in return home Asim regains his family he will join avoids talking about their project to this morning but her mother began the discussion

-: You don't ask me what happened this morning with Charita's family?

Asim head down and said nothing and his father resumed

-: His father said he has to think and he wants to see you before giving his answer it is not even close to seeing his daughter with a dancer

Asim does not respond to his father returned to his room and stays with his thoughts to find a solution to his problem he just confessed to Devika that he feels nothing for Charita but he did not say any the truth he did not say he can not tell to Charita and his parents and he does not believe it will ready one day to do so while he is in this state his brother (Kashi) with whom he is very close and that he said everything came to see him

-: Don't be sad his father has not said its last word

-: I don't want him say his last word I want to let something like that

(Kashi) saw the anguish of his young brother who protected him and cared for him since childhood is seriously worried and ask

-: Asim tell me what you got I think this story torment you instead of making you happy

Asim tells his brother his love for Devika and how he suffered before he discovers she is his true love until he decides to confess to her he also told him that Charita account lot to him

-: I spent eight years of my life with her

-: you're in love with two women (ask Kashi frightened)?

-: I think I've was never in love with her I tested my feelings before making a decision no I'm not in love with two women

-: You must not play about their feelings Asim you're going to hurt two girls you don't have the right

-: Don't you worried I'm not like that I know who I love and with who I want to live but I can't face the years with charita and the Parents

(Kashi) break his hand in Asim's shoulder and said

-: Find a solution quickly or you'll regret (then he goes out and leaves him alone)

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is a nice story, but ur english is very different and difficult to understand...
try to make it more contemporary, as per how we normally speak

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