||Teri Meherbaani || VarYa OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai saaz tu, tera tarz main
Tu hai dava aur marz main
Dildaar tu.. khudgarz main
He was sitting in his cabin on a boring Sunday morning. He was looking outside the window, thinking about her. She looked simply beautiful. She always made him feel complete. He remembered all their personal moments, those hugs. Yeh... one wasn't personal though
Hai geet tu, tere lafz main
Tu hai duaa aur farz main
Aazad tu aur karz main
At the moment his first love left him, he thought his life was over. There was no reason for him to live. But he felt great full that he lived. Coz he got his reason for living in her. He had tears in his eyes.
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Hai shaam tu, taareef main
Tu chain hai, taqleef main
Tujhse mila to paa liya
Har cheez main
She complemented him in every aspect, except one. Both of them had a sad love life. He lost his true love. She never found one. She was innocent and naive from within but still acted as if she was a shrew.
Hai khwab tu taabeer main
Maana tujhe taqdeer mein
Tera hua is bheed main, is bheed main
She was good to none except him. She supported him in the most crucial times. May it be while confronting Kabir or while dealing with his own past. She was unknowingly his pillar of support
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Hai teri meherbani
Ke andheron se hum muqar gaye
Hai teri meherbani
Ke bin jaane hi hum sanwar gaye
(x2 Repeat)
Their fights. Their competitions. Their attitude. And their unknown care strengthened their bond. He was the a tormented soul and she a broken one.

Hai tu hi toh hai wafa
Tu baarish meri, savera mera
Main tera hum raasta
Hai kasti teri kinara mera (x2)
He knew their journey ahead would be difficult together. But he was ready to face all the difficulties if she was with him. She was like rain in a desert. She was the happiness of his life. He was ready to face the world for her. Only if she was with him. If he could call her his.

Hai Teri Meherbani
Ke andheron se hum muqar gaye
Hai teri meherbaani
Ke bin jaane hi hum sawar gaye
Getting her is a challenge. But he was, after all the Vardhan Suryavanshi. He loved challenges and so did she. He was determined and he knew that many things had changed between them. He was no more the same old, angry and brooding professor. In fact, now-a-days instead of giving lectures to the students, he was most of the time in his cabin, sitting on the chair and dreaming about her. He knew their bond had grown from rival's to something that they never imagined. But he loved this change. Coz he loved HER. The dean of FITE, Maya.


Sorry guys for disturbing you all with this crap. Was sitting idle and so I wrote this. Now if you have survived after reading this then do put down your reviews. See you. Tadaa...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bwahahahahahahaha🤣
u were 1 min late...šŸ˜†
I m the first chilu🤣
resss
Edited by roshinicool - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dixie!! Argghhh!!! How can you snatch away my first position! 😔
Pftt!!! Anyways, second place is not bad either... This would do for me.šŸ˜†
An awesome VarYa OS from an equally amazing writer... What more can I ask for?
I'm off to read this wonderful One Shot... Till then Saiyonana!

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This is one of those OSs that don't have a plot yet are capable of jostling even the inactive neurons of the brain. This is splendid and magnificent.
You have penned it down with sheer brilliance and it is really enthralling.
Vardhaan's emotions, his viceral feelings for Maya is so exquisitely portrayed that right now I am speechless.
Ah! How I wish we could have VarYa scenes like these in the show as well.
This is flawless sis..
Please write more of such one shots..
This one was a treat to read.
Moi eagerly waiting for the next VarYa fiction..

Regards
Keya
Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres
sorry for the late unres
Manu the song u chose it's very apt for the situation
I loved it
ab toh we can find this couple in os/ff only
thanks for d pm :)

Khushi
Edited by -whitepearl- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A beautiful os once again Manu
Your song choice is perfect
Do keep writing more
And dare you call it a crap
Thanks for PM
Stay happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome fab superb
very very nice and beautiful
love it. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
It's Emotional, Though Bright !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg manu mane I missed u so much
An os by u mi toh pm dkh k hi dance krna chalo kar dia


I so luved it
These days we all misses vd n varya lyk hell
Ur os was relief to all

Hope ki vd Sir jldi wapas aa jye


N how dare u call it crap
Rul mje apni ak47 nikalani h r tje shoot krna h

Next tym warning ni shooting hogi


Really it was short n amzng
Beautifully penned down

I so luved it


Luv u a lot
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
idiot it was not crap...it was simply nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is awsome...šŸ‘
It touched my heartšŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜› keep writing more


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