Manik Malhotra's weather forecast #1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I couldn't gaze away from her eyes..
You failed us, our love and our words;they accused..
I want you to suffer ;they cursed..
I am better off without you;they mocked..
This is hard,I want to go,hide;my brain said..
Don't go,you aren't alone anymore,she knows
and that counts;my heart said
What about me,Am I a toy?I heard her voice
To my ears her voice was of wind chimes
reminding me of all unsung symphonies we together were to create.
Not any more..
It sounded like a dirge..
we were in the graveyard of our poignant love...
It was raining tears..
Together we drenched..

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I thought i could run away..
Not anymore..
I waited..
I prayed..
You failed us, our love..
Her voice rang in my ears..
I closed them not to hear...
Her eyes accused me..
I shut my eyes not to see..
It was dark..
I was afraid..
Don't be..I am here to shine for you..she said
She was there..
Right inside my heart..
I didn't want to open my eyes
for that dream to end..
I am not a dream..she said..
I asked..Will you still shine for me..
Why..I cried..
Wind chimes spoke to me..
Because I said Hamesha..
Our words weren't failed..
I flung open my eyes..
There she was..
Hamesha..


P.S: the title is inspired from a k drama personal taste..




my index on manan:

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
unres after the episode😳
Edited by Sush94 - 10 years ago
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itne saare views aur ek bhi comment nahi..😭
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Beautiful ❤️
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You write so well . It was really heart warming to read your ode on a poignant love story ... Ode sung by a flawed lover to his wronged beloved . Thankyou for posting this here so we could read and satiate ourselves some more in this story of love ...😊
Edited by simplysappie - 10 years ago

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