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"Ms Moorthy, When you are walking look straight and walk. Agar saara wakt upar dekhkar aiyappa se rant karthe rahoge to woh bhi bhagkar jayega..Human ho ya god tolerance ka ek hadh hota hai..It's an advice for you..I think bohut kam ayegi tumhare.."
"I don't give a damn about what you think..Mujhe tumhari advice ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..hote kaun ho tum mera..Keep your advice with you only.."

"You know,Its a waste of time to talk to you..Par tumne to vow lekhar rakha hai,Manik malhotra ki har subah apne chapad chapad se spoil kardogi..

"I spoiled?Spoil toh tumne kiya hai Monster Manik. Tume pata tha ki aaj meri audition hai. That"s why you spilled cola on me..Tumne jan boojkar mujhse takraya..."

"As if i don't have anything else to do.."

"Yes you don't"...

A day in Space academy never ended without a daily dose of fight between Nandini Moorthy and Manik Malhotra. And like always students who were witness to their verbal spat said..


"Phirse shuru hogaye yeh dono,I thought ki kabhi na kabhi jhagada karte karte yeh pyar kar beitega ek doosre se..But now I think,there is no hope for them...yeh toh wahi ke wahi adki hei ek saal se.."

"you are right yaar..yeh sabto sirf filmon mein hota hain..aur manik ke pas to alya hai..She so hot..Uske samne yeh pach foot ka golgappa kya hai.."


"yeha koi show ho raha hai kya..I will give you all a minute..just get out of my sight.."

No one messes with angry Manik Malhotra. After all everyone needs their front row teeth for a good smile. He turned to finish his unfinished business with Ms Moorthy only to find that she also left with everyone else.

"Damn this girl.She says,I always ends the call midway..But look at her leaving without letting me finish talking.This girl really test my patience.."

he muttered under his breath and walked towards practice room to meet his gang..

It was almost time for audition. Nandhini had no time to go back home and change her dress. She had kept the dress for this occasion only. Shivam, her childhood friend gifted it when he came to meet her during Musicana. He adored her like a little sister and always surprised her with gifts. That time was no different.

"But now its all spoiled.All because of that monster Manik. Aiyappa,what is the problem of that guy."

As usual she was complaining to God, when a strong pair of hands dragged her to an empty room in one swift motion.

She wanted to scream, but couldn't because her mouth was closed by the grip of his hands.All he could do was gaze in to those pair of brown eyes which sparked anger.

I told you Ms Moorthy. When you walk,look ahead and walk. Since you didn't follow my advice,you are here with me. Toh now tell me about that you talked in morning. Hote kaun ho mein tumhara?Answer me and you can go for audition, Other wise forget it.

He said snatching away her entry pass.

"mmhhh"

"what?"

How am I supposed to answer with my mouth closed..Her big eyes darted between wall clock and his smoldering eyes..They no longer had anger.It was something tender. She never understood this guy's mood swings.It was more unpredictable than god's particle theory.This was one of the rarest moments when she thought ,it was better to be a science student.

Manik Malhotra always won,except against her. Every time he had her trapped,he found himself helping her. Whenever he looked in to her big eyes his mind became a khichdi. This time was no different.

"I have another option for you,wear it and come out.I will give you your entry pass."

He said ever so casually tossing a shopping bag at her and walked out closing the door behind.

"Aiyappa,ab yeh kya hai..I hope Its not anything like miniskirt."

To her relief it was a beautiful kurta by zara.

"Ab poora din lagaogi kya."

"Aa rahi hoon"

There she was looking ethereal in his selection

"Lo meine pehen liya,ab do mujhe.."

Her voice broke his reverie.

"kya??"

his voice had a sexy tone which evoked butterflies in her stomach.Not to tell his eyes which were fixated on her lips..

"My entry pass.."

"Kyu doon,tumne toh bataya nahi whom I am to you?"

This guy sure liked to play games..

Well Nandini Moorthy is no less.Lets take it to the end..

"Woh tum.."

"Tum.."

"Tum jealous de na ,That's why you spilled cola on me.."

"What??"

Psychology says momentary distraction can derail train of thought, Nandhini knew it and in no time she snatched the entry pass back and ran towards the door..

"are Nandhini batake toh jao.."

"Kal bataoongi.."

"Aur kal kis bath pe ladoo yeh bhi batao.."

"aaj rat bataoongi,phone par.."

"toh woh bat bhi bataona aaj rath.."

"Nahi Nandhini ne ek bar keh diya toh keh diya.."

There she goes,His very own "five foot girlfriend"

secret girlfriend to be precise.After all his gang and harshad is not going to be mature any time soon..They have to bear this till the right time comes..

My girl really test my patience..


Hello friends, I am new to this forum..I quit watching Indian serials after the infamous debacle of IPK, a show i really liked..After that i watched only south east asian shows. I gave this drama a try after i got to know that it is based on Hana Dori Yango Manga..But i have to say its only a loose adaptation, and has elements from different shows and mangas..Nevertheless, I really like this drama and Manan Chemistry..This is the only Indian Jodi to touch my heart after arshi..I am not good in writing..But i hope you all like my Os on Manan








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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww that's really very sweet os... Thanks and welcome dear... Plz write some more stuff on Manan:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Aww that's really very sweet os... Thanks and welcome dear... Plz write some more stuff on Manan:)


thanks yaar..you were also on IPK forum right?..
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thanks yaar..you were also on IPK forum right?..

Yes I was also there... A big fan of that show...
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Yes I was also there... A big fan of that show...


Me too..I am scared now..I hate separation and angst..Now this show is also going same way..Only silverlining is that they confessed already
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its a very nice os. After such a anshu-full epi ur os makes me smile. Do write more and u cn conti this one also. Its really very good.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful...👏 Great job. Please continue to write more!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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kaun mera,mera kya tu lagey?kyon tu bandhe maan se maan ke dhagey?baas chale na kyon mera tere agey?

when i read the title of the fic these lines came in my mind!whenever i hear this song i think of manan!

anyway loved it,your fic,your writing i mean!

write more manan please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful OS!! Please write more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really loved it
please do continue
bye sumi

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