New SS And then he came...teaser, pg 39, 2/12 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
teaser
who the hell is that creep?
cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ar_art

thank you yaar😳😳😳 iske tho bohot parts honge but i'll not drag it more than 20 parts hopefully😆.i'm trying to include Maan's POv also as lots of readers are asking.. lets se.
thank you for the comment... me tho really shy shy..😳😆😃

aise hi osm strys dete rehna ,,shy feel krate rehenge,,,,😉😆
yaar sanam bekhabar ka bhi beech mein updtt karo itna wait nehi kar skte,,,,,
Edited by LILY111144 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

aise hi osm strys dete rehna ,,shy feel krate rehenge,,,,😉😆
yaar sanam bekhabar ka bhi beech mein updtt karo itna wait nehi kar skte,,,,,

😆😆me try karoongi.. but cant promise anything... is sab updates dene me hi mera bohot time lagta hai.. i have joined my job again issliye.. jobhi miltha hai i'm trying.
Sanam story is more emotional issliye time lagega.. will try to type one update if possible yaar...

abhi keliye yeh wala pado..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Next Part:

Geet got up and winced as she felt sore in specific areas. But she dint mind. She smiled as she her eyes fell on a sleeping Maan. His hair fell carelessly on his face that made him look so carefree. She bent down to kiss his forehead when she heard him mumble something. Startled she quickly moved away only to see that he was still asleep. It seems he was mumbling in his sleep. He was slightly shivering and was taking short breath. Geet got worried by this. His eyes were moving behind his lids. Geet understood that he was dreaming. Maan.. she whispered to him softly not wanting to scare him more. She placed her hand on his forehead which was now getting sweaty.

Maan... aap teek ho.. she spoke softly as she wipe his forehead..

Me hun aapke sath. Maan.. sab teek hai.. she spoke again.

Slowly she felt him calm down. His breathing became regular and Geet felt the tension leave her. She smiled as she kissed the now cool skin of his forehead and got up. She quickly finished her morning routine and came out of the washroom dressed. She opened the cupboard to get her dupatta when her eyes fell on a light blue t-shirt. She touched it tenderly and frowned. Maan had never worn a t-shirt before. She liked to see him wear one thought. Moreover she wanted to see him dressed in her favourite colour. She knew that won't happen. With a sigh she took her duppata and left the room. She had chores to complete.

One hour later, Geet was behind the house, pinning her clothes to the rope for drying. She had used the area inside the house for Maan's and Manu's clothes as she dint want anyone to get suspicious. She hummed as she did her work. A hand held hers and she froze. She knew that it was not Maan's as he wouldn't come out at day time. She immediately pulled her hand and stepped back. She looked to see who it was. Manish. The present sarpanch's son who was a rogue. 3 years before he had tried to misbehave with her and her brothers had taught him a nice lesson and threw him out of the village. Now he was back and by the looks he was giving her he wanted revenge.

Geet stepped back as she saw a devious smile stretch on his face

Manish what are you doing here?? She asked her voice cracking.

Kya me apni dost se mil nahi sakta?? He asked innocently.

Geet shivered with fear. The look in his eyes were telling her his intentions were anything but noble.

What do you want Manish? She asked trying to look for a way to escape

You... He said with a smirk as he jumped to grab her.

Geet screamed but was silenced by his hand.

Shhh Geet.. Who is going to listen to you here... koi nahi hai. Everyone has gone to work. He mocked her

Geet struggled in his hands as Manish lifted her and took her to the shed.

He dumped her on the floor and Geet immediately started crying out.

Please Manish esa math karo.. Please leave me... she cried.

No way Geet. Cos of you I was humiliated by your brothers. I have got my chance. I have been following you for one week now. I know you have someone in this house. I have seen you last night. He smirked as Geet's eyes widened with realisation.

Please Manish... mujhe chod dho... She cried as she knew she was caught.

I'll leave you Geet.. But only after I finish with you. 3 years I have waited to have you and now is my opportunity.

No..no no... Geet rambled as she move away from him.

Dekho Geet I'll give you an offer. If you come to me willingly I will not tell anyone about your Yaar' inside the house. If you refuse me your family's respect honour all will be gone along with your virtue. He laughed at the way Geet's face went pale.

Either way I'll have you Geet. The one difference is that if you give in we can enjoy if not only I'll enjoy. He said as he pulled her on her feet trying to kiss her

Please Manish yeh galath hai saying Geet trying to push him off.

What the hell...? came a thunderous voice stopping both of them.

Get your hands off her. Maan bellowed as he marched towards them.

Oh Geet tumne bataya nahi you had someone waiting, me badh me ata na... Manish said with a smirk.

Geet shook her head helplessly. She knew Maan would not trust her. Babaji she prayed as she looked at the way Maan's eyes darken with rage at what Manish said.

Sorry brother. I'll come later. You can have her now. Saying Manish pushed her towards Maan.

Geet whimpered as she felt Maan hold her tightly. She remembered how he had reacted before when she had just spoken to a man. She wondered what he would do to her after this. Would he hit her? She wondered as she felt Maan's body shake in rage.

She felt Maan move away from her and the next thing she saw was Manish on the floor, out cold. Geet gasped when she felt Maan pull her out of the shed. She silently let him drag her into the house all the time she kept seeing the unconscious body of Manish, bloodied on the floor.

The thud sound of the door closing brought her out of her thoughts.

She looked up to see Maan look at her intensely.

Maan... she whimpered at the thought of what would happen to her now.

Mene kuch nahi kiya.. I was drying clothes when he came upon me. I have never had a lover before. I have never thought of anyone like that before. Trust me Maan. I swear... Geet rambled on in fear. She dint know but her body was shaking and her feet felt weak.

Geet... she heard Maan's voice but she dint register it. She kept on blabbering anything and everything trying to prove her innocent

GEET... Maan yelled and she froze on spot looking at him wide eyed.

Chup bilkul chup samjhe. He warned her.

Geet nodded her head in aggrement.

Did he hurt you?? He asked as he checked her.

Geet dint answer she just shook her head in refusal.

Maan's eyes softened as he gently cupped her face Did he... You know touch you inappropriately?

Again she refused. But the gentleness made tears fall from her eyes. The shock of today took over and she broke down in his arms...

Maan.. she cried.. I . dint... I would ... never... she cried not knowing what to say.

Shh.. I know... Cara mia I know... He whispered. Geet dint understand what he called her but somehow the endearment made her feel warm from within.

Come, I made breakfast Maan said as he gently lifted her up and placed her on the table. Geet looked up at him. Her teary eyes speaking to him the words she could never say.

Eat... he said as he gently fed her and Geet obediently took it.

Go change you dress he said after eating food. She nodded and left.

She dint know what happened to her. She felt like she was a robot unable to refuse him anything. The butterflies in her stomach dint cease their flight and she kept rubbing her stomach trying to ease them.

She stood in front of the mirror looking at herself. She felt strange. Not the usual Geet. This Geet looked so different. Her eyes were bright, her face slightly flushed but had a glow. Her hair felt more radiant than before. The girl in the mirror was Geet but she looked somehow better.

Geet did you finish? Maan asked barging in. She turned around shocked at his intuition. Maan had never come searching for her like this.

You dint change your dress?? Maan asked frowning.

I was going to.

Hmmm.. ok..i thought he said but stoped himself and was about to go when she stopped him.

Aapne blue pehne hai.. she said more of a statement than a question

Maan turned around and looked at her, amusement clear in his eyes.

Wo.. mera mathlab hai.. I have never seen you wear this dress before. She clarified but she couldn't stop the blush that rose on her cheek.

You like it? He asked her as he came closer.

Geet looked down shyly as she nodded her head.

Blue is your favourite colour?

Ji..

So you want me to wear your favourite colour? He asked her in a teasing way.

Geet blushed not knowing what to say. Maan had never spoken to her like this. This was new to her and she dint know what to say. She was not prepared to face this Maan but she would not trade him for anything. She thought blushing more.

Look at me Geet.. he said his husky voice making her tremble with excitement???

She shyly looked up to meet his intense stare. She gulped as she read the desire in them..

You are beautiful Cara mia. He whispered as he traced the blush with his finger.

I love it when you blush for me.

He gently lifted her face and bent down. They were about to kiss when a crying sound broke them.

Geet stepped back feeling extremely shy. She looked to see Mannan siting and crying.

Wait.. I'll get him. You go and change. Saying Maan lifted Mannan and left Geet...

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That is all for now...

Hope you liked this update.

What do you feel abt Maan now??? Do tell me...

Will try to give next part by this weekend yaar.. I'll be very busy for the next two days... lets see.

Do check out my other Maaneet stories.

One Night's Tale

My life's mistakes

Intezaar...

O Sanam Bekhabar

Forgive mistakes yaar

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Posted: 10 years ago
yeh maan itna kaise badal gaya hai😲patha nahi geet ke saath ab karega. par ek kaam tho acha kiya manish 😡ki band bajake😆
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Originally posted by: priya111111

yeh maan itna kaise badal gaya hai😲patha nahi geet ke saath ab karega. par ek kaam tho acha kiya manish 😡ki band bajake😆

🤣 that is correct.. you'll see lots of changes in him till the next one... after the maha update gaya bahis (buffalo) pani me only will happen😆😉😃
thank you for the comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar.. this update made me confuse now...😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update but maan ekdam itna kese badal gayea
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Posted: 10 years ago
what happened wth maan tht he suddenly changed...cara mia means my beloved tht means maan claims her as his lv...will manish tell evyone abt maan...
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part...wow changed maan and blusy geet...good...

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