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Posted: 10 years ago

Update is in progress babes... will try to update before 12.

Edit : Update is almost complete Sorry but power gone..can't update using mob... 😭 some issue in society... electricians are still working...If power returns soon thn I will update tonight else u will have to wait till tomorrow.. Extremely sorry but I too wonder that what is happening in my life... I can't complete even one task without trouble!!😆
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
No probs dear.
This is India,anything can happen at anytime.
But will definitely wait for some more tima with fingers crossed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
GOOD MORNING VISH DEAR.
Has the power been sorted out and the lappy working now?????.
Pls post the update now and not at night.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello my usual rant... Sorry for not replying to u guys but I was short of time and whatever time I got I was thinking about the updates... But now i have left the job and not studying either so I guess I will get some more time for updates from now onwards... Though I won't promise coz now I have to focus on some other things like my business and my own body... After coming to Delhi I am getting sick very often so I need to take extra care about it.

NOw the update is dedicated to Aru.. Aru, I know u r not comfortable with it but I have decided to dedicate my updates to one of the readers as it's my way of paying tribute to them. I was able to write this update coz of ur support and suggestions so dedicating it to u.. Thank u sweetheart.'

No proof-Reading so sorry for all the mistakes but I am too lazy to read it again. Sorry for chotu sa update but rest will come soon. I rewrote all what I have written yesterday night coz of dissatisfaction.

Raghav was sitting amid the cluttered room... All the book and clothes were lying on floor and he was frustrated for not being able to find Ria's medical file... He bands his fist on the nearby table in anger and yells... "Why does this always happens to me?? Why can't I find any file in this home... Where the hell Kalpi keeps all medical files... " The word Kalpi and medical files flashes a past moment in his memory.. He remembers the time when he was trying to find Kalpi's pregnancy file.

Flashback

Raghav was throwing all the papers and files from their steel shelf which was the only place to keep their imp documents that time... He was getting irritated on his own habit of not finding the things on required time... More than irritation it was his worry for Kalpi who was in drawing room. The constant vomits had made her week and hence she lied down on sofa only. The constant noise from bedroom disturbs her and she finally gets up to see the issue...

"What the hell Raghav?? What have u done to my room??" She yelled at him while holding her head.

"Why u got up??? I told u to rest... Do u think u r some superwoman who can get up and roam after puking so many times??" He was angry for her being so careless. Instead of getting angry, she smiles on seeing his care...

"What? What are u laughing at?? Did I crack some joke?? I am scolding u for being careless."

"And I am smiling on seeing ur love for me... U looks so hot in this angry expression... I wish u were chocolate... I would have eaten u..." Her mischievous smile and the wink made him smile finally...

"I won't mind taking a bath in chocolate... U can have me anytime... But right now let me focus on the file."

"That's in my bag... but why do u want it??" She said while pointing at her bag which was hanging behind the door.

"I think u have forgotten why I have come home in noon...I hope u remember that u were puking few minutes before..."

"Ohhh!! Now I got it... I thought u returned back to get some file for ur office work but u returned coz I sounded weak on the call and told u that I am back from our new office as I was sick... How sweet of u... I am really flattered my dear hubby... But do u know something?? I am pregnant and it's normal in this condition. The puking is cause of exertion and I will be fine after taking a small medicine..."

Rags rushes towards the drawer where all her medicines where kept... He takes out the medicine which was required and hits his head lightly on realizing that doctor told him which medicine to give in such condition and in stress he forgot it. He fetches a glass of water and gives medicine to Kalpi who was teary eyed on seeing his care for her... Due to his working hours he was unable to give her medicines with his own hands but never forgets to call her to remind her about her medicines... Kalpi was surprised to see he remembers all her medicines by name and time.. and she had nick named him as "Real life alarm." Raghav looks at emotional Kalpi and wipes her tear which just rolled down.. "U r not allowed to cry in this condition... I want my baby to come in this world with a pretty smile and for that u have to keep smiling..."

"But all babies cry after coming to this world... If they don't then doctor hits his bum like this..." She said while hitting Ragahv's bum and laughs loudly.

"I will kill that doctor.. Told him not to hit my baby... She will not cry."

"Ohh my possessive hubby!! Baby has to cry for their own good... Don't u know that??"

"Is it so?? Ok than let her cry for once but after that I will give her so much happiness that she won't cry ever."

"N I trust u on that."

She hugs Raghav lovingly when her eyes fall on the cluttered room and she frowns once again on realizing that she has to clean it...

"Don't worry.. I will clean it..." Raghav said on seeing her expressions... She smiles once again and thanks him... He makes her lie on the bed and gives her favorite book to read while he starts picking up things from the floor... While thinking something he asked... "Why did u kept report in ur purse when all files are being kept in the shelf??"

"Coz a patient should always have her brief history with her. In case of emergency doctors can refer to it and can start their treatment without delay.."

Flashback ends

"Patient should always have their brief history... Right!! That means Ria will have her brief history with her..." He says to himself and runs towards Ria's room... He calls out for Ria but she wasn't there... Wondering where she could be he enters the room... looks around and realizes that he hasn't entered the room from the long time and it's interior have been changed a lot from the time he has visited it.. He looks around the wall and finds it full of various sheets and sketches, he looks at the name of painter and gets surprised on seeing such fine art by Ria.

"When she learned painting??" He wondered. "I really missed a lot in my life... I am sorry baby. I promised ur mom that I will give u all the happiness but in search of materialistic happiness I forgot that u need ur father too."

He closes his eyes to stop the tears from flowing and opens her bag, takes out all the books and start going through it... A folded sheets falls from the bag... He opens it and finds a painting of my family made by Ria... Ria had created virtual sections in it by using different colors... One had her picture with her mom feeding her , other had her father sitting on a chair and emerged in file while the third section had Gauri and Ria playing with ball and Pakhi busy on her phone. Realization hits him again.. He realizes that for Ria her father is the one who is always busy in his office work and never pays attention to her. He keeps it back in the bag and promises himself... "From now own my all time will be urs..."

He takes out her school diary and goes through it.. On first page the name of doctor and phone number was written. He decides to call the doctor to find the detail but something written below doctor's number catches his attention.. "Initial stage of epilepsy". Diary drops from his hands in shock... His heart sank on reading the last word... "Epilepsy?? My daughter is suffering from epilepsy and I don't even know about it... MY wife is handling this pressure alone and I... What kind of man I am? Shame on me... Am I worthy enough to be called as Dad??"

He remembers all the fight he had with Kalpi before Ria's birthday and how she always tried to explain needs of Ria... how she always argued with him about being changed and how she pleaded him to not fight in front of Ria.. He hears everyone applauding him for success and calling him a successful businessman... He looks all around but notices Media people taking his byte.. few camera flashes.. Maya flaunting about her dress... Him making few deals and people congratulating him at his success... his head starts spinning and he closes his eyes and shuts his ears with both ends.. All voices stops immediately.. "Successful business man but I failed as father... I am a failure... I failed as husband... I failed as an human... " He cried.

"Dad" Ria's voice startles him... He wipes his tears immediately and keeps back her diary in his pocket..

"Yes sweetheart.." He managed to compose himself and faked a smile.

"What r u doing here??"

"Just came to meet u?? Don't u want ur dad to spend some time with u??"

"Yes I do... I just ask because u do not come to my room... Neways have u seen mom??"

"She must be in her college."

"Dad... today is Sunday and mom doesn't work on Sundays... only u do."

"From now onwards dad will spend every Sunday with u and ur mom... Not only Sunday, but Saturday too."

"Whoa... Really?? Mom will be so happy na.."

"And what about Ria??"

"I too want to spend time with u... After ur divorce, I won't be able meet u naa."

"Divorce?? Who told u about divorce??"

"One of my frn overheard her parents talking about u and mom that u r taking divorce... And it was written in newspaper... She told me that after divorce I will have to stay with one of u and won't be allowed to meet the other person... I will miss u a lot dad.. but I can't live without mamma... I do not want to choose but If I have to then I will stay with mamma..."

Raghav was too emotional to reply.. He pulls her towards him and hugs her tightly... He wants to tell that she is not going anywhere but words were not coming out of his mouth... Finally he gather courage and speaks.. "No baby.. u won't have to choose among ur parents... We both love u a lot and will always love u..."

"Yayy... I love u dad. Now please search mom naa... I want her now."

"Love u 2. M going and I will find ur mom." Raghav said and leaves after giving her a quick peck on cheek.. he decides to find Kalpi first and thn meet Ria's doctor to know about her in details.

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Will spend pms at the end of day as I am planning to give one or two updates more.

P.S. : Plz give ur honest feedback as m really giving more than 100% to this FF. Hit like and post comment as ur comments are my energy tonic.


Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So emotional rag definitely need t patch up as he really miss her daughter life so sweet talk of ria lovely update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hmmm so finally rags is realising his mistakes but may be its too late...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update. Past of ragna is so romantic. Pls update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update... So raghav realized his mistakes...
Waiting to see how he makes up for them...
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Posted: 10 years ago
so finally raghav realized his mistake n trying to correct dem 😳
loved raghav n riya convo 😳
waiting for next part 😃
update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss😉
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Can clearly see that you giving your more than 100% ... Really lovely update..
Its sad that so much changed between RagNa... Their past is as much beautiful as painful their present is..
Didn't i tell u .. You'll make Raghav lovable again.. With these awesome fbs and the slowly changing behavior of the guilt ridden Raghav lets see for how much time people resist him.. It will be even difficult for Kalpi to agree for divorce coz the reason for giving divorce will soon be something that never existed as her old Raghav will be back..
Fabulous update..😃
Edited by appyK - 10 years ago

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