Teri Ummeed Tera Intezaar Karte Hai (10), COMPLETED ***

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A/N:  Thanks for your support everyone.  We are on thread 10 of this story.   Hope you enjoy it.
 
 
New (to me) readers be aware:  I have 0 tolerance for silent readers.  Parts of this story will be on my blog and I will not give access to those who silently take from me without giving.
 
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THANKS TO ALL MY READERS FOR YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS THROUGHOUT THIS STORY

 
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🥳thread 10 wow !👏
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Congrats for the new thread
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hi avi 
congrats for naya naya thread ...




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Congraulations on 10th thread Avi😊
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TEASER

Pammi just cackled in laughter, "Teen khoon ki sazaa ho ya six khoon ki,  sazaa toh ek hi hai.  Par koi aissi police bani nahi jo Pammi ko pakkad sakay.  Tujhe tadpa tadpa ke maarne mein mujhe sab se zyaada mazaa aayega Geet".


"Bekasoor aur masoom logo ko beech mein laane ki zaroorat nahi hai.  Geet aur Annie ko jaane do Pammi", Maan insisted.

"Bachpan se tu ne mera sab kuch cheena hai Maan.  Tujh se tera sab cheen ne mein mujhe bohut mazaa aayega.  Teri jaan iss mein basti hai na.  Iss Geet mein.  Isse tho aissa tadpavugi ke tu apne mooh se uski maut mangega", Pammi declared with a cold menacing tone.


"Main aap ko chodd ke kahi nahi jaavoogi Maan", Geet jumped in, "Main aissi begairaat, bewafa chudail se nahi darti hu".


"Haan Maan bhaiyya.  Cruella ko punish karo.  Uss ne Tommy ko bhi mara tha.  I hate her", Annie piped in.

Pammi shouted loudly.

"Koi kahi nahi jaayega yaha se.  Jaayegi tum sab ki laash, samjhe!"

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"Shaadi toh humari ho gayi Pammi, ab bajegi teri band", Geet said from the enclosure of Maan's arms.







A/N:  So should I stretch it to two parts?  Ek part mein khatam karu toh chalega na?


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waiting for update avi ..