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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Missed being here Avi...


How lovingly did she claim her rights on him ..by showing her jealousy and how easily did he make her melt her in his arm and in the warmth of his love. Its so beautiful to watch how without knowing the full story on both sides they have yet again so easily accepted each other in their lives.

And realistically so, you have shown that Geet's anxiety in moving forward too quick is also right... when she has no clue of her past feelings for her Maan then a girl of her principles and values is bound to question her so acceptant feelings.


Maan on the other hand is so endearing to watch ... how much has yearned for these moments with his Geet and for how long he has been tortured under the misunderstandings created by others.


What I love about this new angle in the name of Sameera - Kabir - Megha of your story is that not all hard work is left for Maan for to do... even though in Maan's mind and heart that sense of doubt and the need to find out the truth was borne due to the negligence of Khurana foundation trust but the work of destiny has a greater impact than any.. When the truth is dug up and showcased for the world.. its going to be sight of wreckage of trust on one side and sight of victory of truth on another... because there is only so much one can cover their dirty tracks and lies!

There is this one line that you have mentioned in one of the latest chapters, which really got to me because it was so heart-warming and in some ways something I deeply relate to... I am paraphrasing (Geet's greh pravesh done by Nakul&co.). But it was along the lines of how strangers and outsiders taken on Maan to be one of their own, they acknowledge his place in their lives and fill the void of family in his life with their love and heart.

It's such a beautiful gesture that we humans can do for those who have no kin of their own to call... sometimes a warm smile, a little gesture of gratitude and small talks of support or guidance can take an individual a long way. This is a small touch of Avi's brilliance in writing and story-telling.


The Passion that Maan wishes to shower on his lady-love warms my cheeks. And lol abhi toh kisses hi hue hain.. but its coz you have so well described the years of his lost-love ..of how he has spent them burning in the fury of being wrongly rejected.

I can't wait to read more and I am holding back my fingers asking for another update especially when you have been updating so frequently even with deadlines sitting on your head.

Finally, waiting as patiently as I can my Dear Avi with lots of Mishti Love.



Missed you too Mishti 🤗 Hope your project went well.

This story was supposed to be an OS to manao Lakshmi for not writing anymore par dekho Avi and her Maaneet love.. 😆 Khatam hone ka naam hi nahi hai..

Hopefully SS se khatam ho 😃

Update coming up 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago




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Posted: 10 years ago
wow what an update.i am soo looking forward to see kabir and megha in action.i loved this jodi in "The Locket" and i am very sure u r going to make us fall for them in this story too.they are on a mission and i am sure they will be of great help to maneet, especially maan.very valid questions risen from a third person point of view,there is a lot of mistry to unfold.

hayyeee maneet are so cute,they are soo in love and oblivious to all the evil happenings around.
u potrayed geet's kashmakash very well.there are a lot of questions in her mind and she needs answers to them,it's very confusing for her and she needs answers to overcome her insecurities.beautifully written.

geet saying rosie's cooking reminding of her mothers was heart touching.
i am soo looking forward to see how maan's challenge is going to turn out.

thx for the update,pm and the pw dear,appreciate it.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Good Morningsss ! 😃

Thap Thap Thap ! 😆

Updating Yayyy 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
kabir n megha hmmm they r true journalist but kisi galat insan par sahk karna wrong hai
sab us chudail ki wajha say
paami well desve worse then this
maaaneet date continue love it
mumbai waly aur delhi wala who will win
waise geet ki condition achi hai no kiss n touch lol
maan babu kiya dimag laya hehehheeh
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Posted: 10 years ago
pammi ne bahut time kharab kiya😆
shukar hai last me maaneet aa gaye...loved them!!!!
keet it up!!!!!!!
thanks for updating dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww that was one awesome update
Kabir megha
Pammi is exposed
She vud b back with a bang
Hate her
Loved maneet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow. Fabulous part. Maaneet are just awesome. Pammi is back .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic. So loved how maan could convince geet to start the challenge the next day and that way he could keep her close to him. And of course geet too wants to be close yo him so she did. It deny him
Glad pammi is getting what's due yo her. How the reporters get more truth about pammi in the whole mess

Great going

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