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Posted: 10 years ago
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veeba os-happy ending

veera was tensed.
"ae ki hai veeerakad?tu itni udaas kyon hai'ranvi asked.

"veerji mai abhi bhi confuse hu ki baldev mere waste
sahi hai ki nahi.simran se uska byah to tod diya par soch rahi hu
ki mandap me baithu ki nahi"veera rolled her eyesπŸ˜”.

"is confusion ko mitane ka ek hi tarika hai
tu rajveer se byaah kar le.acha lagega to puri zindagi bita lena
nahi to alag ho jana aur phir sochna.pehle istemaal kare phir viswaas kare"ranvi said.πŸ˜ƒ

"lekin veerji,rajveer me aisa kya hai jo baldev me nahi"😲

"wo police wala hai.tu to janti hi hai ki aye din mainu koi na koi
dhoka de jata hai,ya phir kabhi mujh per hamla hota hai to,
kabhi koi kidnap kar leta hai.koi to chahiye mainu
protect karne waste"ranvi painfully explained his position.

"lekin veerji,ye kaam to baldev bhi kar sakta hai.wo apka fulltime
bodyguard ban jayega."πŸ˜›

"are nahi veerakadi!tu to janti hi hai teri gunjan bhabi ka koi bharosa nahi.koi na koi kand karti phirti hai.ab ki baar phir kisi galat kaam me phas gayi to use kaun bachayega"πŸ˜•

"rajveer ek to police wala hain aur usne dher sare medals bhi
jeete hai"😳

"uff oh!medals ka ki karna veerji,mujhe to medal se nahi mard se
shadi karni hai"veera said.πŸ₯±

"wo mard hai,mainu maloom hai"ranvi proudly announced.

"heyyy..."veera eyes get widened.😲
"m..mera matlab hai ki har police wala mard hota hai"ranvi assured her.πŸ˜†

"lekin baldev bhi mard hai aur mainu maloom hai"veera proudly declared.

"par uske naam ke sath veer nahi hai.rajveer ke sath to hamesh tere veer ka naam jura rahega.tu jab bhi uska naam legi,mainu bhi yaad karegi."ranvi get emotional.😭

"ranvi kithe hai tu"gunjan screamed.😑

"ae ki hua gunjan.tu thik to hai"ranvi jumped over stairs to reach her.
she was crying .he took her to bedroom.

"tu thik to hai gunjan.thik nahi to mai abhi tera mood thik karta hu"ranvi hugged her & started unbuttoning his shirt.

"ae ki kar raha hai ranvi?"gunjan got surprised.😲

"tere mood thik kar raha hu"ranvi replied.😳

"are nahi!ae sab waste wakhat nahi hai.mainu tujhe badi jaroori gal batani hai"gunjan yelled.πŸ˜•

"ki hua gunjan.phir tune koi kand kar dala ki"ranvi asked.

"maine pehle jua khela ,karz liya,phir chori ki,pehle is ghar me phir biji ke ghar me.mainu bada dar lag raha hai ki biji mainu police me report na kar de."πŸ˜’

"ae ki kiya gunjan?ab mai ki kara?tu ita bada kand kar gayi aur mainu batana jaroori na samjha"ranvi burst in to tears.😭πŸ₯Ί

"na ranvi na ro mat.tune hi to kaha tha ki jo apni madad aap karta hai,rab unki madad zaroor karta hai.chori karte wakhat mainu ye baat yaad thi.uske baad maine gurudware jakar rab se mafi bhi mangi.mai chori,dacoiti sab kar sakti hu lekin tujhe sahukar ke gundonke hathon mar khate nahi dekh sakti.tere chehre pe chot lagti to tu phir stage par kaise gata"gunjan wiped his tears.πŸ˜”

"gunjan ,tu kitni achhi hai.sab ke bare me kitna sochti hai.ita sab kuch tu akele sahti rahi aur mai kuch kar nahi paya.chinta mat kar.agar tujhe jail bhi hui to mai rajveer ji se keh kar tere waste achhe bandobast kar doonga,taki tu aaram se waha reh sake"

they hug & oh rabba played in background.

veera was waiting for baldev in polyhouse.
"ab ki hai?kyon bulaya mujhe?mai akhiri baar tujhse milne aaya hu"
baldev said in anger.

"ye to tune kal bhi kaha tha."veera replied.😊

"ha bola tha!lekin ye akhiri baar wala akhiri hai"πŸ˜•

"accha chod ye sab gal.aur important baat sun.mainu veerji ko apni shadi ke liye manane waste idea aa gaya"veera chuckled.πŸ˜›

"achha!ki hai idea?jara das mainu"baldev asked with curiosity.😲

"tu apne naam ke sath veer jod le.yani baldev se balveer ban ja"veera replied.πŸ˜ƒ

"he...pagal samjha hai ki mainu.ab tera veer mera naamkaran sanskaar karna chahta hai.😳
mai tum dono ka khilona nahi hu.bahut ho gaya.is baar mai ja raha hu hamesha ke waste."😡

"to ja na!mai bhi us insaan ke sath nahi rahungi jo mere veerji ke khatir apna naaam nahi badal sakta."veera yelled at him.
baldev left polyhouse in anger.
veera shouted from back

"kal krishi vidayalaya me milte hai"

baldev entered house in anger.bansuri watched him.

"ab ki hua puttar?"bansuri ask.

"biji mainu shadi karni hai?kisi se bhi kara dalo."πŸ˜•
bansuri eyes got wide.😲
"abhi to tera byah tuta hai.ita bada siyapa hua.wo dono chor maa beti itne paiso ka nuksaan kar gaye."πŸ€”

"wo sab mai nahi janta.mainu bas byah karna hai"

"tere waste itni jalde ladki kaha se lau"bansuri asked.

"kisi se bhi byah kara de.ladki nani to ladke se hi kara de,bas
mera byah kara de"baldev shouted & left.

"hayo rabba,ae ki bol gaya.ae roj-roj shadi-shadi khelne to acha hai ki ek bari iska byah veera se ho jaye."bansuri thought.


ranvi went to rajveer house.
"rajveer ji mainu aapse jaroori bataein karni thi"ranvi asked.

" ha..ha kyon nahi?ek minute mai bahar se aata hu"rajveer went outside.

ranvi was alone so he roamed inside house .he reached bedroom.
he got surprised to see numerous posters of veera on wall.

"to apko sab pata chal hi gaya"ranvi heard rajveer voice from back.

"ae ki hai rajveer ji?aap meri veerakadi se prem karte ho"ranvi asked in excitement.πŸ˜ƒ

"teri nahi,ab meri..v..v..veera.sirf meri v..v..veera"rajveer replied.🀒

"aap hakla kyon rahe ho?"ranvi asked😲.
"oye chup!ab aaram se jaldi upar jane to taiyar ho ja.teri gurantee jald khatam hone wali hai"rajveer pushed him on floor & tied him.

"ae ki kar raho ho rajveer ji"😲

"jeejaji bol mainu.wo bhi bas kuch ghanto ke waste.phir v..v..veera se shadi karunga aur tujhe kanyadan karne ke bad maar ker rabji ko dan kar doonga.
taki meri shadishuda life me tu kabab me haddi na bane"😈

"veera mainu bacha le...gunjan mainu bacha le..biji mainu bacha le..rabba mainu bacha le.."ranvi cried.😭

"baldev.."veera entered his bedroom in hurry.
baldev was in shock.😳
"oye badi jaldi aa gayi.abhi to mainu byah waste kudi bhi na mili"baldev smirked.😈

"oye sun!wo rajveer to bada khatarnak nikla.usne veerji ko kidnap
kar liya aur mainu dhamki de raha hai ki agar maine us se shadi na ki 🀬to wo veerji ko maar dalega"veera told him.

"ki bakwas hai!chahe kuch bhi ho jaye,tera byah mere naal hi hoga"baldev shouted.

"to chal,veerji ko bachate hai."

"maine ki theka le rakha ranvi ko jindagi bhar bachane ka."baldev got annoyed

"to thik hai!jaa rahi hu mai rajveer se byah karne waste"veera left.

she went to place where rajveer had asked.

"v.v..v.veera aa gayi tu.dekh mandap bhi hai,mai bhi hu,
tera veer bhi hai.chal shadi karte hai"rajveer laughed.

"mai bhi hu.."suddenly he heard baldev voice from back.

he turned back & got kicked by baldev.

"tu yahan kya kar raha?"rajveer screamed.

"apne baap ka ashirwad nahi chahiye tainu?"baldev started beating him.😎

veera untied ranvi.
"tu aa gayi mainu bachane.mainu pata tha.lekin gunjan aur biji kithe hai?"

"wo dono abhi ghar pe aaram kar rahe hai aur aapka intezar kar rahe hai."

"tu sahi thi.baldev hi mera bodyguard ban sakta hai.ae shaitan rajveer ne mainu kitna peeta mai ,bata nahi sakta."ranvi cried.😭

"rehne do veerji jee.ye pehli ya akhiri baar to nahi hua.ab to aadat pad gayi hai aapko museebat me dekhne ki.ghar chalo aur iteminan se batana."veera consoled him.πŸ₯±

rajveer got arrested.finally ranvi understood baldev was elligible to become his jeeja.
bansuri too agreed for veera.veera & baldev marriage date got fixed.πŸ₯³
cant say they get married or not as it depend upon their mood.


happy ending













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SurAditAnjali thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
🀣 my god! Is relationshp,no is show me he doubt hai 🀣 baapre! Awesome! I was laughing al time!d.d.d.d.devil
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
he he its really hillarious.love it.please update your previous stories.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
OMG🀣🀣. How do you imagined the dialogπŸ˜ƒ. This is sooo funny. But honestly that's what they are portraying.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
it was damn hilarious 🀣 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣,u rocked devil 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
I can imagine this happening.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
it was so funny n interesting.each dialogue made me laugh
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
I thought I was gonna be reading some cute happy veeba story instead got this hilarious (almost true ) ranvi story.
🀣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Omg, i cant cntrl my laughter 🀣
That was very funny yet refreshing to think of such concept.πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
That was a hilarious os 🀣
Very well written πŸ˜ƒ

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