To My Pragalbha

Achanak hi achanak sab adaain beet jati hian
Muhabat beet jati hai ' Wafaain beet jati hain

Agarcha ankh se dil taak bohat barsaat rahti hai
magar ik din ye sab ki sab ghathaain beet jati hian

odasi ki lakiroon ke siwa kuch nahi rahta
Samandir chor jata hai ' howaain beet jati hian

Ajab dhoka sa ik kuch bhi samajh aney nahi deta
zamaney lot jatay hain ' sadaain beet jati hain

musibat ke dinoo main khaas ker main ne ye dekha hai
meray jesoo ke hisay ki duwain beet jati hian

Pragalbha i love this Gazal i hope u will like it too...

Muhabt lafaz tha mera

main us shehir kharabi main faqiroon ki taran dar dar phira barsoo
usay galioob main sardkoo par
gharoon ki sard diwaroon ke pechay dhonta'tanha
ke wo mil jaye tu TOUFA usay doon apni chahat ka!

Tamana meri bar aye ke ik din darwaza khula aur
main ne dekha wo shana sa chanad sa cherah

main ju shadabi main ghulshan tha!
main ik shaan-e-ghadayana leye us ki taraf lapka
tu us ne chasham-e-be perwa ke halke say asharay se mujay roka

aur apni zulf ko mathay pe lehratay howay pocha
"kaho aye ajnabi sayail
gadhaye be saro samaan
tumain kia chahiye hum se?"

main kehna chahta tha..... "omer guzeri jis ke chahat main wohi jab mil giya tu aur ab kia chahuiye mujh ko!"

magar taqreer ki quwaat na thi mujh main
faqat ik lafaz nikla meray laboon say kanpta, darta
jesay omid kam thi is ke dil main bar panay ki

"MUBAHAT" lafaz tha mera
mager us ne suna "ROTI!"

i will be very happy if u like this.. 😊

oh so sweet yar i also njoy pragalbhas topic

Hey fari,

Its really gud..... Thank u for putting such a wonderful ghazals here 👏 👏

Krishi

T_fari,

Kya bolun????????????????

Totally loved them!!!!!!!! Awesome!!!! Specially the ending of that ghazal!! Amazing!!!!!

And I soooooooooooo loved this line of the poem

musibat ke dinoo main khaas ker main ne ye dekha hai
meray jesoo ke hisay ki duwain beet jati hian

Too good!!! 👏 .

And thank you so much for posting it for me. Big 🤗

And cutegal_pari, thanks for liking my posts!!!!!

very nice........pragalbha Di i also enjoy reading ur posts okii...lolz... 😆

Originally posted by: pragalbha

T_fari,

Kya bolun????????????????

Totally loved them!!!!!!!! Awesome!!!! Specially the ending of that ghazal!! Amazing!!!!!

And I soooooooooooo loved this line of the poem

musibat ke dinoo main khaas ker main ne ye dekha hai
meray jesoo ke hisay ki duwain beet jati hian

Too good!!! 👏 .

And thank you so much for posting it for me. Big 🤗

And cutegal_pari, thanks for liking my posts!!!!!

thanks u liked it.. u made my day.. if u like i will write more.. coz i love Gazalsss... thanks everybody who likes my Gazals which posted for pragalbha..

Originally posted by: T_fari

thanks u liked it.. u made my day.. if u like i will write more.. coz i love Gazalsss... thanks everybody who likes my Gazals which posted for pragalbha..

Please do.............................!!!!!

But I have one request, maybe you should post it under the RK Poets thread, so all of them will be at one place and after say a few months we can still always go back and read it there, instead of having to search for your topic.