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PROLOGUE- PRECAPS :- 1.Baldev caught veera's hand,they've a eyelock. Baldev-karle us inspector se vyaah aur mahaan sabit karle khud ko...jaaa!!!! 2.Baldev busy in upcoming sarpanch elections.Rajveer-veera to meri hui he samjho,par agar baldev sath hota to aur ziada mazaa ajata,jaise pehle ata tha. 3. Veera in delhi,amrit and her friends gets surprised.Veera visits chanchali.Balwant pats baldev's back. 4. Simran and her mother amrit releases from jail and rajveer gives money to them and talks with them. 5. Gunjan sees the murder,she is pulled by someone. Police at SS house,ranvi and gunjan go together.Simran in delhi,but didn't had any face off with veera.Veera to a couple-galti to tumse he hui hai jasmeet. And her eyes get wet and walks away from their.Baldev ranvi face off. 6. Rajveer in delhi,meets with simran.Veera in mall sees rajveer. 7.Veera returns pp.In pp rajveer accepts ranvi's marriage proposal for veera.Veera bursts out crying on amrit. 8. Veera and amrit in delhi.Veera and the man in park.The man moved the knife,veera winced in pain.Veeba meet 9.In pp. Veera-bass veerji!!!!!!!!basss!bahut hogayi apki zid...beeji jab apko lage ki nihal chachu se shaadi karni chahiye;mainu bata dijiyega. All shocked. 10.Simran and veera face off. Veera breaks the mirror and her hand bleeds,"bol kaha hai baldev"she slaps simran so hard that she falls on the floor. 11.Veera and rajveer phone convo-"baldev aur tumhare veerji,mere kabze me hai.Maine kaha tha na veera,tumhe meri baat maanani he padegi.Ab bacha sakti ho to bacha lo apne pyaar ko...!"rajveer challenged. Veera,"agar baldev ko kuch hua na,to tu bhi marega..."rajveer laughs loud evilly.Veera in anger throws the phone,and breaks in pieces."rajveeer!" 12. Veera in baldev's lap,"b...baldev,b...ba..bahut thak gai h...hu..."baldev crying.Veera,"n..neend aa rah...i h...hai..."baldev,"veera so mat veera aankhein khol." veera,"mainu...maa...f kar...de...i i l...o...v...e u..."she closes her eyes slowly."veeraaa!"baldev shouts. 13. Nira marriage. My new ss on veeba,this time will be complete. This is the precap,hope u like it. Pls drop ur comments,what do u want so that i'l modify it further. Twists in this ss. Thank you!
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Interesting precaps👍🏼 looking forward to the story😃
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PART 1-After simran & amrit was exposed,bansuri herself call off baldev's marriage.Balwant was angry on her,and bansuri was embarrassed & feeling ashamed,that her choice was so disguisting;which made a fool of herself.After the guests left,baldev went towards veera to talk with her.Veera leaved his house hurriedly.Baldev shouted in her name,but she didn't listen,instead she paced up her steps.Baldev paced his steps & caught hold of her arm,& veera whirled getting in such position,that her one hand was on his chest & other on his shoulder.Veeba had a eyelock for few seconds.Veera broke it & turned to go.Baldev shouted,"behri bhi hogayi hai ki tu!"veera stopped,closed her eyes,turned towards him. Baldev-veera Veera,"ab ki kehne aya hai baldev?simran se shadi tut gai,toh mere pass chala aya...!ab meri yaad ayi hai teinu...!"he was startled by her words.He tried to speak up,but she didn't allow him."maafi mangne na...,ki mujhse galti hogai,aye faisla maine gusse me liya tha,vagera vagera vagera!?"she said in taunting tone.Baldev was confused.Veera folding her hands,"aye mat sochna baldev,ki main ab bhi tujhse pyaar karti hu.Aur is vastey aye shadi tudwayi.Bilkul nahi..."baldev stared at her.Veera looked straight in his eyes,"jo kiya insaniyat ke naate kiya.Isse ziada aur kuch mat sochna tu!"baldev now lost his patience,due to the last line she said,"jo kiya insaniyat ke naate kiya.Isse ziada aur kuch mat sochna tu!"&bursted out.Baldev,"bas veera!!!!!!!"he was shaking in anger,so veera was.Baldev,"insaniyat ke naate kiya tune aye sab,mainu pyaar nahi karti tu hai na!"he looked in her eyes,"iska matlab ki tu vyaah bhi kisi aur naal karegi,umm!"veera was in pain,it was clearly visible from her face.Baldev in smirk,"fir thik hai.To ab mera bhi tujhse koi vaasta nahi...khush!"veera was just staring at her.Baldev,"par tu vyaah kiske naal karengi!aan mainu pata hai wo ladka kaun hai..."she got confused.Baldev,"lekin isse pehle tu meri ik gal sun"he paused & continued,"baldev to reject hogaya.meri shadi bhi tut gai,bewakoof nikla main...par aye dua karunga ki tu bewakoof na nikale."veera again got confused.Baldev,"inspector rajveer!"veera got furious,"bal..."baldev,"kyu!ki hoya?"he noticed her expressions."itna hairaan kyu ho rahi hai...uss din to wadda uske sath bike par ghum rahi thi...,mumfalia khila rahi thi...,kyu!"he said taunting her.Veera got silent.Baldev,"aur jab main tujhse,changi tarah se gal karne aya tha,to yaad hai tune kya kaha tha..."FLASHBACK[Veera-main jo chahe karu,kisike bhi sath ghumu,firu,kisi de bhi naal vyaah karu...teinu ki farak padta hai...!]veera remembered this words.It didn't go unnoticed by him."karle us inspector se vyaah aur mahan sabit karle khud ko,jaaa...!!!!"he shouted in anger,and he give force on word 'jaa'.Veera's eyes got wet,she was hurt,but she didn't show it to baldev.He was looking at her waiting for her reply with a hopeful eyes.She closed her eyes,took a deep breathe,"thik hai...karungi main vyaah,wo bhi,rajveer de naal!"she said it.His face straighten."khush!"she said in cold tone,& leaved.Baldev was fuming in anger,& he hit his fist on the jeep."ah...!"he winced in pain,shaking his hand."kyu veera,kyu tu aisa karti hai mere naal.Maafi na mangi...na sahi,par kamas kam meri to gal sun kar jati...!"he murmured and looked at his injured palm."tu bhalehi meri samne dikhawa kar rahi hai,ki tu mujhse pyaar nahi karti,jo ki tu mujhse ab bhi karti hai...fir ki pareshani hai teinu,mere samne aye baat manane ki...?!"he again murmured.Veera cried a lot that day.She didn't talk with anybody.Next day,she got to her normal self,as if nothing had happen at all.The days passed.Baldev & veera had a face off daily,but they didn't talk with each other.This news spread in whole pind like a fire in forest.The love,friendship was transformed into foe again.But this time,the enemity was different,it was 'cold war',as i mentioned above.If both were at same place,then another will leave that place.Neither baldev was passing weird taunts/comments nor veera was giving back her weird answers.They didn't crossed their path,after the day when baldev's marriage broke off.Both veera & baldev wanted to talk,specially baldev,his eyes expressed that,but veera's ego was not letting them to do so.Jaggi billa's efforts to reunite them was also went in vain,so they lost any hope.The next sarpanch elections was approaching,baldev decided to prepare plans for this.This will keep him busy,as well as veera's memories will also get brushed off.Baldev got busy so veera & baldev seldom had a face off.All members were upset due to veeba breakup,except the two,right ranvi & rajveer.But rajveer was more happy,because he knew that ranvi is already in favour of him,& now baldev is also out of the game.So now it was very easy for rajveer to trap his next target,his next prey 'veera'.Still he was not that much happy,when he was in previous cases,he was in his house.
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PART 2-Rajveer was in his house."sahabji,jane dijiye na.Jo hogaya so hogaya,har insan ek jaise to nahi hota na!"the servant came up with cup of tea,& put it on the table.Rajveer got irritated,"kaka!aap apne kam se kam rakhiye na,meri fikar kyu kar rahe hai.Aur waise bhi main apko to ye sab karne ke liye nahi bol raha hu,jo apko itna darr hai!"rajveer paused,he took the cup and sipped."aur main ye pehli bar nahi kar raha hu,jo hamesha aap mujhe lecture dene chale ate hai"the servant was about to spoke up"par sa..." "kaka!",he signalled by his hand to leave."veera to meri he hui samjho,par agar baldev bhi sath hota to ek alag he maza ata,jaise pehle aaya karta tha..!"he stared at cup &murmured having an evil smile.The servant was looking at him from corner having pity expressions.Simran & her mother landed up in pp jail.The case was now gone under rajveer's observation.One week passed,slowly things were coming to their normal self.Gunjan was busy in thinking,how to get out of the gambling thing,& clear the sahukar's debts,while ranvi was busy in his career.Nihal used to visit SS house & meet ratan who was busy in sarpanch's work,as well as busy in polyhouse work,which was almost complete.Balwant always kept taunting bansuri now,& she had to keep it mum.She admitted that veera saved their lives,but still didn't think her as a n eligible bride for baldev.Veera tried a lot to get rid off from baldev's memories,by keeping herself busy in work,but it haunted her as ghosts,who at any cost didn't want to leave her.One fine day when veera was busy with her laptop in her room,she recieved a call.It was amrit's,she told her the gang of their friends came to delhi for 6 months,for the assignment given by uk univ..She asked veera to join them,as they missed her and fun a lot,they used to have.Veera was doubtful,but amrit cleared all things,so finally she agreed to join them.Veera thought this as a golden chance to erase baldev's memories & to get some relief from her pain.She talked with her family,who agreed easily.Balwant came to know about veera,he requested her to visit chanchali's house,to which she nodded.(bansuri still opposes balwant-chanchali's meet.)Veera leaved for delhi,but she didn't inform to her friends about,& her friends got surprised to see her.They were having fun,they asked her about baldev.The memories flashed infront of her eyes."humara breakup ho chuka hai,par kyu hua...is bare me koi bat nahi karega"veera warned them.All were confused with her behaviour,but has to agree.Amrit sensed some wierdness,& she succeeded to took out the truth from veera.That day veera cried heavily while amrit consoled her.Amrit decided not to open this topic again,as it will hurt her more intensely than before.Their friends were at different workplace,but they used to gather at evening.As veera & amrit was best buddies,they always remain together,anywhere.While campaigning for elections,baldev returned to pp,and came to know about veera,& also that balwant sent a message for chanchali alongwith her.Baldev got upset due to this & went to his papaji."aye ki hai papaji,hadd hoti hai"balwant was confused.he continued,"chanchali didi se baat karne mainu bhej dete,main kya gairzimmedar hu,jo apne us veera ko aye kam saup diya!"he was really upset.Balwant made him calm down,he explained that as he was busy in election campaign he didn't want to divert his mind.Baldev was amazed by his gesture.Balwant hugged him."galti sabse hoti hai puttar,par fir usko sudharne wala he bada hota hai."he kept his hand on head,"jaa aram kar,thak gaya hoga dinbhar se.Aagey aur bhi kaam karne hai tujhe."he patted his back & leaved.Baldev was feeling satisfied today,'aaj pehli bar papaji ne aashirwad diya hai,ab to aur mann lagakar kam karunga.'he thought & went to his room.Rajveer released simran & her mother.He took them alongwith him.They reached at open ground,where nobody came.He gave money & a card to them.Simran was surprised,she asked him the reason.The card was having the address.He asked them to stay their,its the safest place in delhi.He had stayed their when he was on duty last year.The mother daughter duo's doubt was cleared.He asked them not to worry about money & all,it is his responsibility."tumhe veera aur baldev se badla lena hai,aur mujhe veera chahiye."he turned,"kuch din me delhi aunga tum log se milne,tab tak koi gadbad mat karna,mere hathon se aaj tak ek bhi gaddar zinda nahi bacha hai!"he looked at them,"and i mean it!"simran nodded.Rajveer,"aaj he delhi nikal lo,aur ha!Mujhe contact karne ki koshish mat karna,maine kaha ki main aunga matlab aunga.thik hai!"he looked here and there,"ab nikal lo yaha se;koi ata toh nahi yaha,par agar galti se kisine dekh liya to problem hojayegi."saying this he sat in his jeep,looked at them once & drove away.Amrit suggested her to ran away with this money,but simran was determined.She was feeling ashamed that for the firs time a girl insulted her infront of ppl,which she can't take it
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PART 3-Simran clenched her fist in anger.Nobody has dared to do such thing with her.Simran,"sabkuch barbad karke rakh diya iss veera ne,daulat pyaar sab lut gaya mera!"amrit was witnessing her anger for the very first time.Simran looked at her determined,"kasam khati hu,veera ko iski keemat chukani he padegi!" & she walked forward.Amrit was having a weird feeling now & she moved her steps.In delhi,veera was enjoying(forcefully)the stay with her friends.Amrit always kept her cheering up by all means she can.She was missing the old veera.Amrit was thinking about whatever happened in veera's life.She was analyzing the situation,thinking of ranvi's behaviour,his non trusting thing on baldev,after becoming the successful rockstar.She wanted to talk about this with veera,but refrained for a while.Amrit was in a search of good chance.Their come sunday,which is not a funday at this time now.All friends were free & veera told them about chanchali.They decided to visit her,balwant has given her the address.Veera & her gang reached chanchali's house.At first when she saw them,she got confused,but when she saw veera among them;she got a surprise.She welcomed them wholeheartedly,all had a fun that day.Thankfully,chanchali was on a 2 day leave.Before leaving veera took out one box from her bag,and handed it to her.Chanchali looked at box & veera with questioning eyes."vekhiye to sahi!"veera exclaimed.She opened the box,it was a golden suit having a eye catching embroidary on it.Veera smiled."veera!iski kya zarurat thi...!"chanchali asked her hesitating."arey wah!kyu nahi thi...ek pita ko toh isse dene ki zarurat thi he..."veera said playfully.Chanchali looked at her.She was speechless,"a...ay...aye suit pa...papaji..ne...mere vastey..."she choked.She took out the suit & admired it.Her eyes were glittering with tears.It was unbelievable for her.She then controlled herself & asked the reason.Veera thought for a while,all went silent.She told her about baldev's marriage & all.And chanchali got the reason,why the clothes reached so late.But felt bad for veeba,as she was the one who first recognized their love getting bloom.Amrit looked at both.They went to door,chanchali stopped veera,she hugged her,"agli bar ayengi toh kisi ke sath aana"& she smiled.Veera confused.Chanchali kept her hand on veera's head,"sab changa hojana hai...khush reh!"now she got chanchali's point.Veera tried to smile.Amrit was noticing veera.In PP-gunjan was unable to repay the debts of sahukar.At one night,after 8 pm gunjan excused ratan & chaiji,& went to meet sahukar to have a talk about repaying the debts.She reached his office,but it was lock.Gunjan got upset & she turned to go back,when she heard some noises.She moved towards the direction of noise,& she saw the sahukar with some men."office me to tala laga hua hai,fir aye sahukar yaha ki kar raha hai"she thought.She hide behind the strong tree & watched the whole scene.The men were beating a man very badly & sahukar was shouting,"paise wapas nahi diye,to ab jaan de!"gunjan heard this & shivered in fear.It was chilling cold & then such words giving her the goosebumps.She got hell scared.After some beating,sahukar signalled one of the men.He took out a scarf,and rounded that man's neck with it.After some movements,the man got silent... .forever.Sahukar made that sure.Gunjan's eyes widened & mouth opened.Sahukar spoke up,"marr gaya sala!ab chalo yaha se"he turned & that moment only,gunjan's phone rang.Sahukar panicked & while searching he spotted gunjan hiding behind the tree.Gunjan also saw him & got scared.Her feets were glued to the ground,she was unable to move,she tried a lot,but all in vain.Suddenly the sahukar shouted,"pakdo isse jane na paye!"& the men ran towards her.Gunjan came back to her senses,"apni jaan bachake bhag le gunjan"she murmured & starts running.Sahukar was following her in fast pace,gunjan also paced her footsteps.She ran so fast,that the sahukar left back far away.You know we ran in most maximum speed,when we fear of ghosts!She finally reached near the purana kuwa,where ranjan was having their first meet at night.She was panting,she took the support of well,for sometime.She was about to relax,but suddenly she heard the voice of sahukar,some footsteps.She panicked in fear.She tried to ran,but somebody pulled her forcefully.Sahukar & his men reached purana kuwa.They found gunjan nowhere.Seeing this sahukar fumed in anger,"ek ladki bhi nahi pakad sakte tum log,hattt!"getting no clue of her,sahukar said to his men,"tum log nikalo yaha se,agar kal parso police ati bhi hai,to uss gunjan ka naam lena samjhe...!"the men nodded in approval.Sahukar & his men left the place.Next morning-ratan chaiji were not at home.They went to a nearby village for some celeberation organized by panchayat.Ranvi was reading newspaper.Gunjan came up with cup of tea for him,she put it on table.Suddenly police arrived,"gunjan ranvijay singh."they announced.Fear appeared.
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PART 4-Fear appeared on gunjan's face.Ranvi stood up & talked with inspector.He wasn't allowing inspector to took gunjan,he asked that he'l also accompany him.The inspector permitted him.Ranvi & gunjan went to police station.Here at delhi,simran & amrit reached delhi.Rajveer had made all arrangements for them.They settled their easily.Amrit was having fear of simran,but she didn't showed to her.Simran & veera were at same place now,but both were clueless.If veera was at east,then simran was at west.Veera's life was not so in peace,she expected before coming to delhi.2 weeks passed veera was staying in delhi.Amrit took along veera with her to the office,she introduced to all her collegues.One such day,veera accompanied amrit to her office.Amrit went to her work,veera started roaming,analysing the office.While roaming she reached the office park.Their she spotted one couple,maybe they were fighting.She tried to recognize the guy,so she approached near them,and she recognized,"aditya!"this name came out from her mouth.But she didn't recognize the girl.They were fighting.Veera decided to ask him.Meanwhile,amrit also reached the park in search of veera.She saw her near the couple,so she followed." sorry par may i know tum log jhagda kyu kar rahe ho?"she asked hesitantly.Aditya & the girl looked at her."arey veera tum!achha hua jo tum aa gai,dekho na jasmeet apni galti maan he nahi rahi hai!"jasmeet got angry and she shouted,"adi!meri kaha galti hai...!maine kaha na main apni family ke sath thi"and both started fighting again.Amrit also reached their,looked at veera.They were confused.Amrit,"arrey baba,tum log ek sath bologe toh problem ka pata kaise chalega!"aditya-jasmeet remained silent.Jasmeet signalled aditya to tell the story.Veera-amrit were looking at them.In PP-Ranvi-gunjan reached police station.Gunjan was accused for murdering the man,not repaying the debts of sahukar.Sahukar was also present their.Ranvi was continously looking here & there,to make sure that rajveer is not around.He didn't let inspector to put gunjan behind bars.He wanted to talk with inspector,so the constable took sahukar out.Ranvi confidently,"dekhiye inspector saab,aap to jante he hoge ki main ek rockstar hu.Kisika bhi kam chutkiyo mein kar sakta hu."inspector,"mujhe rishwat de raha hai."ranvi controlled himself,"main khud aapse keh raha hu,ye bat kisi aur ko pata nahi chalegi,isliye to apse ake..."he signalled.After some requesting,discussing,all went silent.Inspector asked ranvi to wait,he'l come back in few minutes.At delhi-aditya started narrating the story.Jasmeet was his girlfriend,their relation was 6 months old.They used to meet daily,but since aditya had started working it was not possible for them to meet daily,but aditya used to manage his time,and meet with jasmeet.Once jasmeet called aditya,that she has important thing to discuss with him.Next day aditya had to complete his work,so he hesitantly rejected,he tried to explain,but she didn't listen.So it was decided that they'l meet in cafetaria at 2 pm.Aditya made an excuse to office,and got the leave for that day.He reached cafetaria 1 hour before.At PP-inspector came back & freed gunjan.Ranvi paid Rs.10,000 amount for her bail.Sahukar was then put behind the bars.Police accused him of murdering a man,as well as of threatening a lady(gunjan)for her debts,which according to them was repaid by her,and he's not returning her ornaments.About the jewellary she stealed from bansuri's house,the dead man was accused of this,due to which he got murdured.So police cashed the whole situation & the case was shut.{remember gunjan didn't repaid her debts.Ranvi used his name.}Ranvi-gunjan reached the house.Both sat and relaxed,thanks to their luck,ratan-chaiji was not their.Gunjan said,"ranvi agar us din tu nahi hota to na jane mera kya hota."ranvi smiled at her,he stood up & hugged her.FLASHBACK[after sahukar left,behind the tree gunjan was in embrace,she was crying heavily.He caressing her head,"shhh!chup hoja chup ho ja gunjan.Wo log chale gaye hai,haan,ro mat."gunjan came out of his embrace,"mainu...maaf kar de ranvi!"she apologize.Ranvi cupped her,"gunjan!maine kaha na koi nai...kuch nahi hua hai..ab tu rona band kar,um!"she stopped crying.They reached house,luckily ratan-chaiji was not their.Both went straight to their room.After changing gunjan tried to sleep,ranvi helped her.He calmed her down.The night passed in thinking for ranvi.At very early morning,both wake up,gunjan told every truth to ranvi.Ranvi was shocked and got mad on her.After that he didn't talked to her.She was fearing that what'l ranvi do now?But he saved her,from all mess she created.She was really thankful to him.]ranvi,"achha hua ratan,chaiji yaha par nahi hai.!"gunjan came out,"mainu maaf karde ranvi,dobara aisi..."he put his finger on her."ab iss barein mein koi baat nahi hogi,kisike bhi samne nahi!"gunjan stared at him,"veera ke samne bhi nahi"ranvi warned her.Gunjan nodded,ranvi smiled.
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PART 5-Aditya kept waiting for jasmeet.It was 3:30 pm now.He had 8 cups of coffee till now.4:30 pm,still she didn't showed up.He called her,but didn't answer.5 pm,he checked his phone,no call,no message.He was so much tired now.His head was spinning.He asked waiter for bill,he paid that & left.Aditya,"main thak gaya tha,aur sab mujhe dekhe jaa rahe the,waiter bhi coffee lakar thak gaya,aur ye hai ki ayi nahi...!"jasmeet interrupted,"toh maine bataya na ki main apne family ke sath thi,urgent kam aa gaya tha." "toh tum mujhe cll kar sakti thi,ya fir ek message,lekin tum..."veera remembered the rain incident,when she asked baldev to meet her.And he waited for her in rain and caught fever.She was with her veerji,but she didn't accept baldev's call nor she messaged him.Amrit also knew that incident.Veera's eyes got wet,her vision blurred.She blinked her eyes,smiled & said,"galti toh tumhari he hai jasmeet"jasmeet-aditya got surprised.Veera put her hands on her shoulder,"i m sorry jasmeet,par tum is barein mein ek bar zarur sochna."she smiled at them & leaved.Jasmeet was going mad,but amrit told her about veera.Amrit was happy as veera is slowly getting back to herself,who properly judged the right & wrong,without dominating.Jasmeet looked at veera amazed,she was walking silently,amrit excused them,& shouted,"veera!ruk..."veera stopped & turned to look at her.Amrit went running to veera.She approached her & they both walked together.Jasmeet,"she's stuck inbetween the complicated relations"aditya looked at her & nodded.Jasmeet,"sorry adi!"he smiled,so jasmeet.In PP-Baldev was in chaupal,suddenly someone bumped to him unknowingly."maaf kiji..."ranvi said but stopped after looking at the man.It was baldev.Baldev got irritated due to him,"koi nai!chal!"he passed ranvi."arrey wah!baldev singh inna shant hogaya hai."baldev stopped.Ranvi continued,"ho bhi kyu na!bewakoof log jawab bhi kya denge"baldev's body was shaking.He closed his eyes,and opened it.He took a deep breathe,glared at ranvi,& leaved the place.Ranvi was surprised,that baldev didn't answer him.As veera was changing in delhi,baldev was also changing.He no more gets involved in fights,no timepass.He had become serious in his work.No fun,nothing.To erase her memories,baldev had kept busy himself but all in vain.He has to roam for campaigning elections.So he often came across the places,where her memories was stored.Like once he was driving his jeep from highway,but it broke down in middle.He got irritated & got down to see the problem.He opened the cover,the engine got heated up,it needed water.He looked around & his eyes got fixed on one spot.["baldev,ma...mere veerji mere veerji nahi,meri beeji meri beeji nahi hai,meri chaiji meri chaiji nahi hai!main anath hu baldev!"veera cried heavily hugging him.After knowing her birth true,she roamed on highway as dead.Baldev caught her sight while driving the jeep.A truck was about to hit her,but he saved at time.After consoling he asked her to come with him,so that he'l drop her safely.But veera didn't listen & sat on rock.After doing blabbering,irritating,threatening her she got ready to go with him.]baldev smiled,but it disappeared shortly.He snapped it & went to search for water in jungle.Another incident when he went to dhaba,he remembered how veera made that place in disco to cheer him up.The chaupal where they had their first failed date.One day he was going throu' the farm,talking on phone,after completing the talk,he looked forward & stopped.It was machaan.[baldev made a prank of his fake accident,so that veera will come running to meet him,she did.She was first angry,but then baldev took her photo.They feed each other.Veera left in hurry & baldev chased her.They were racing but at turning a truck hit her badly,& she landed up in critical condition.All hopes were lost for veera will be saved.When her condition worsen,he was out of control...and...]"veeraaa!!"he shouted forwarding his hand.He came to his senses,he was sweating,breathing heavily.The fear of losing her forever was clearly visible on his face.Tears automatically rolled down on his cheeks.He fell on his knees,& cried heavily."tu kyu manti veera kyu.Kyu tu mujhse keh nahi deti ki tu sirf aur sirf mujhse pyaar karti hai.Mujhe pane ke liye rajveer ke sath ghumi tu,mere vastey simran ka naqab utara tune.Kyu nahi manti tu veera,kyu...!"rajveer kept visiting SS house.He finally managed to make his special place in their heart,& proved baldev useless.He went to delhi & told all truth to simran,& so she was totally ready to follow the plan.Veera was in mall with her friends,when she saw a man,her eyes widened,"rajveer!,yeh yaha kaise...?!"she questioned to herself.She was about to move,but amrit shouted in her name.She turned and talked with her.She again looked for rajveer,but no 1 was their.Veera got confused.She remembered her last conversation with baldev.She shook her head,"main bhi na!"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 6-Veera thinks that its her imagination.In PP-SS family was sitting together.Ranvi asked them that he has some important to talk with them.He asked them to call veera back here.All agreed,as they were also missing her.Ranvi called veera,she agreed.Amrit thought this as a golden chance,so she asked her that she'l accompany her.Veera asked her if she really wants to.Amrit explained her,for a week she'l be in PP & then she'l become busy.Veera agreed.Before leaving they visited chanchali's house.Chanchali gave best wishes for her future life.Veera and amrit returns pp.All greets them.Rajveer meets veera,they have a general talk."ranvi sahi jaa rahe ho dost!"rajveer murmured.Amrit roamed with veera in whole pind.She was analyzing the situation,veera,ranvi hearing about baldev,how he got busy now,& seldom roamed here & there.Veera missed him,but didn't show this.But this doesn't go unnoticed by amrit,she can easily read her bestie.After all she was with her since childhood.Ranvi called rajveer & veera took amrit in polyhouse.At SS house-ranvi asked rajveer for veera's marriage.Rajveer got delighted,but he didn't showed it on his face.At first he hesitated,ranvi requested him a lot,praised him.At polyhouse,veera and amrit was in office,veera got busy in files,amrit looked at her.'yehi sahi mauka hai amrit,baat karle veera se,fir chance nahi milega.'she thought.She went towards her,"veera!" "hmm"was her reply.Amrit,"tujhse zaruri bat karni thi abhi!"veera replied,"bol sun rahi hu"& she turned with a file,started to walk.But amrit stopped her,veera gave confused look.Amrit startled,"dekh veera,main jo baat tujhse karne jaa rahi hu,wo tere liye bahut zaruri hai."veera asked her doubtedly,"aisi kya baat hai amrit!"amrit answered,"tere veerji ke barein me" "haaa!" now amrit started,"veera mujhe galat mat samajhna,par mujhe lagta hai tere veerji kaafi badal gaye hai,mumbai se lautne ke baad"veera,"matlab?"amrit continued,"tere veerji se main kai bar mil chuki hu.Jo wo pehle the,wo ab nahi rahe.Veerji ka ekdum se baldev ko reject kar dena,uspar se ekdum bharosa uth jana,apni beeji ki bhi baat na manana aur apne se badon ki beizzati karna,ye pehle wali veerji nahi kar sakte."veera thought.Amrit,"mainu bahut gadbad lag rahi hai veera,kehna to nahi chahti par mujhe lagta hai,shayad tere veerji,ab tujhse baatein bhi chupane lage hai..."veera gave a look at amrit.Amrit,"ab tu chahe mujhe galiyan de,maar le pit le ki maine tere veerji ke khilaf kuch bola hai.Par isse ye baat bilkul nahi badlegi,ki main teri bestie hu."veera was becoming cold.Amrit continued,"hamesha bachhe galat nahi hote veera!bade bhi galat ho sakte hai,aur unhe sahi rah dikhana humara farz hai."Amrit took veera's hand in hers,"bachpan se janti hu tujhe,har mushkil se mushkil time me agar koi mere sath khada tha...toh wo tu thi veera!"she paused.Continued,"aaj tu musibat mein hai,aur main tujhe musibat mein nahi dekh sakti,isliye maine yeh sab keh diya tujhe,aur main janti hu ki iska asar shayad humari dosti par pad sakta hai"veera was shaken,and her body automatically fell down,amrit startled & quickly supported her.She made her sit on chair,& herself knelt on floor.Veera cried heavily,amrit looked at her with pity eyes.Amrit stood up and took veera in her embrace.She consoled her.Rajveer spoke after a while,"agar veera taiyyar ho tabhi main koi baat aagey badha sakta hu...!"ranvi assured him that she'l never let down him.Ranvi was very happy,but ratan,chaiji and gunjan was not so happy.Gunjan has to show ranvi happy as he helped her out in gambling trap,& saved her from clutches of death.Ranvi asked them not to told this to veera,he himself will tell her.Here amrit was consoling her.Suddenly her phone rang,she answered the call.After answering the call.Amrit told veera,that the office had called her,so she had to leave tommorow.Veera got normal.Amrit asked her to accompany,veera looked at her.Amrit's eyes was requesting her.Veera agreed,they both smiled.They returned home,amrit asked them to leave for delhi.Ranvi wanted to give her the marriage news,but he postponed that,& agreed for veera.Amrit was now more happy for her bestie.They leaved for delhi early morning.Rajveer was unhappy,because of veera's distance from him.Baldev was aware of her visit,but he ignored that.Veera-amrit reached in delhi.At noon they were at bus stop,both were walking,suddenly a man came & snatched veera's bag,ran away.Veera shouted,"aye...!ruk!"she started chasing him.Amrit wanted to stop her,but veera gone very far.She decided to chase her.Veera behind the thief,amrit behind veera."ruk k******y!"veera shouted.They ran throu' roads,open grounds,crowds,narrow road,etc.They reached in the place,at park compound wall,both stopped.The thief looked at veera,& climbed the wall.Veera felt that her life slipped from her.She was shocked,but then she ran,ran,ran & caught the rim of wall with her hands.She raised her right leg on the wall,fixed it.Her eyes was shining.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 7-Her eyes was burning in anger.She pressed her right leg & jumped over the wall.She fell on ground.The thief was shocked.She looked at him,stood up & ran,the thief also ran.While running veera spotted a stick,she looked at mam,she went towards stick,picked up while running,& throwed towards the thief.Luckily,the stick hit inbetween his legs,& he fell down.Veera was satisfied & ran towards him.She picked her bag,turned to go but the man caught her bag with a jerk,veera fell on ground.The man stood up,he took out a sharp knife from his pocket.Veera got alert,he tried to stab her,but she was quick enough to roll down,quickly stood up.She ran towards the bag,picked it up,but again that man make the bag fell and moved his knife on her.Veera winced in pain,the man laughed at her.She glared at him,he picked the bag & was about to ran,but veera put her leg inbetween him.Both fell,the knife also.Veera got the stick,which was strong enough to beat the man.The thief's head was on veera's leg side.She caught the stick & hit on his head.He winced in pain.Veera's left hand was bleading,but that pain seems not to appear on her face.The anger,furiousness was their on her face.She got up started hitting on his head continously.She beat him 4 times,the man almost fainted,one more hit & veera will get registered as a murdurer.People were watching from far away,the durga shakti infront of their eyes.Veera raised her hand,but stopped by a hand.A pair of hands rounded her stomach & drag her away."hogaya...ve...veera bas kar!" "nai amrit...main ise zinda nahi chodungi!Chadd mainu..."veera was panicking.Police came forward & took away that thief."veera,shant...shant gaya wo...shant hoja,bag mil gaya hai..."amrit was still holding her.Veera got silent.She looked around the people,they were lo oking at them,then at amrit,who was still holding her.Both were heavily breathing,veera,"amrit!" "haa!"."log dekh rahe hai" amrit opened her eyes,looked at surrounding,then at veera.Veera signalled by her eyes to release her.Amrit looked down,"pehle wo lakdi phenk"veera throwed released the stick from her hand.Assured amrit removed her hands from hers.Veera looked at the bag,she quickly opened it,started searching.Amrit looked here & there,then at veera with questioning look on her face.She sat down on her side.Veera searched,searched & finally something touched her hand.She had a victorious smile now.She caught that thing,slowly,delicately took out her hand from bag.Amrit looked at her hand,"ring!"she exclaimed.Veera kissed the ring.She looked at amrit."iss ring ki vajah se tune us aadmi ko pita!"veera nodded.Amrit has questions & veera told her it was given by baldev as his 'raaji wali anguthi'just like sagaai wali anguthi.Amrit got amazed at her."baapre!"she exclaimed.Veera looked at the ring,"jab wo aadmi bag lekar bhaga tha na,mainu laga jaise meri jaan lekar bhaag raha hai"she paused.Amrit looked at ring,then at veera.Veera,"agar aaj ye mainu nahi milti na amrit,to mar jati main!"amrit eyes welled up,she blinked & asked veera to stood up.They had already been late for office.Veera stood up,amrit watched her left hand which was full of blood.Amrit got concerned,she took veera's hand,she winced in pain.Amrit looked at her.Her hand was having a deep cut,thankfully it was just above the veins,otherwise uptill now she had lost her conscious.It was so heavily bleeding,that her half hand was colored with all red.Veera tried to make amrit calm.But she forcefully pulled veera with her towards hospital.They reached the hospital,for a time being amrit closed her wound with her handkerchief.They were walking in hospital's corridor,there they bumped with a doctor."arere sambhal ke!"doctor said,& got surprised."chanchali didi!"she exclaimed.Chanchali also got surprised seeing them once again,veera's wounded hand catch her eyes.Chanchali immediatly grabbed veera's hand,and take her along.While dressing her wound,they kept talking."baldev se itna he pyaar karti ho,to jakar use keh kyu nahi deti!"chanchali asked her,amrit also agreed.Veera lost in thoughts,but she changed the topic.Chanchali went for washing her hands.Veera-amrit started talking,in that she mentioned rajveer.Suddenly the girl on wheelchair,who was at door only panicked.She was shaking,fearing,shouting,which caught the girls attention.Meanwhile,chanchali came out,saw the panicked girl.Veera-amrit was confused.Chanchali alongwith compounders went towards her.She tried to calm her down,but all in vain,she called sister.She came up with an injection.Veera amrit was looking from far distance.Chanchali gave her the injection,after few minutes passed,the girl fell asleep.All sighed relief.Sister took her to her ward.Chanchali came back to them.Veera asked her about all this.She told her that the girl gets panic attacks whenever she hears one name.Veera got confused,because nobody was their surrounding the girl,accept her,then how come she'l get the attack.Chanchali shocked.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read all 5 parts together,lovely story! waiting to know what rajveer's plan is😃 continue soon!

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