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PART 14-Veera looked at veerji.She stared at him.Ranvi sat on sofa,opposite to her.Nihal stood adjacent to ratan.Veera looked at him also.Ranvi,"arey veerakhri,kuch puchna tha tujhse"veera looked at him,"sach me veerji!"all shocked the way veera spoke."puchna chahte hai ya apna faisla sunana chahte hai."ranvi startled,"veera,aye ki bol rahi hai tu?"veera smiled,"jaisi ki mujhe pata nahi veerji"she stared him.Ranvi has serious look now."rajveer ke sath meri shadi karana chahte hai na aap?"ranvi got surprised,"sabke mana karne ke bawajood!"ranvi went in anger,"aye ki bol rahi hai tu veera?" "sach!"ranvi looked at her.She stood up,"jo aap dekhna nahi chahte." "veera!"ranvi yelled.Ratan stop him,"veera,ki bole jaa rahi hai tu!" veera turned to look at her,"wah!"ratan shocked."wah beeji!wah!jab veerji mere baldev nu galat thehra rahe the jabki wo sahi tha,toh kisi ne kuch kaha!"all stood up."maine sahi ki pairvi karni chahi toh sabne mainu roka!" ratan surprised."aur aaj bhi jab sach ke sath khadi hu,toh beeji mainu daatne ke liye aagey aayi!"having sarcastic smile.Ranvi,"kya hogaya veera teinu aaj,tu mujhe apne veerji nu..." "ha ha main apne veerji nu,ranvi nu galat keh rahi hu!"she shouted."kyuki aap galat hai veerji,jabse mumbai se laute hai tabse galat hai."she came near him,"apne apni beeji tak ka samman nahi kiya,aap galat hai!" "veera!chup ho ja!"ratan yelled."aapko kuch nahi kahungi beeji.apka dard samajh sakti hu,apne puttar pe pyaar jatana,aur parayi aurat ki kudi pe pyaar jatana,dono alag baat hai!"veera looked at ratan.Tears roll down on her cheeks.Nihal tried to calm down,"nahi chachu,please!veerji main rajveer se,shadi,nahi karungi!"ranvi looked shattered."aur aye mera akhri faisla hai!" "veera!"he raised his hand to slap her.He was shaking,nihal interrupted.Ranvi was out of control.He went towards,dining table,pick up the knife,put on his hand near the palm.He threatened,but veera didn't move,all panicked.Veera came near him,looked at him,"rishwat dene wala aadmi bhi suicide karta hai veerji!"ranvi shocked."aap to aise nahi the?"knife dropped from his hand."mainu sab pata chal chuka hai veerji,aapki galtiyon par parda dalte dalte thak chuki hu main...!maaf kardo mainu veerji!"she walked towards room,but stopped,"aur haa beeji,jab apko lage ki nihal chachu apke layak hai,to mainu bata dijiyega!Mujhse nihal chachu ki apke pariwar ke liye rona dekha nahi jata!"she looked at nihal,whose eyes also got teary.Walked in her room.Ranvi gunjan got shocked,surprised.All went numb,chaiji went to veera.Ratan asked ranvi,he was hesitant but after stammering he let out the truth.Ratan was shocked.Chaiji went inside veera's room.She was standing in balcony,crying silently.Chaiji put her hand,but veera didn't tell her anything.Next day veera called amrit,to get all things done.Veera came down to go out,ranvi called her but she went away.Chaiji,"chote chand!bahut hogaya,ab tu apni zindagi par dhyaan de,baki sab apna khayal rakh sakte hai."ranvi looked at her.At last night,ratan entered into veera's room.She had not taken blanket,ratan put it on her.She caressed her head,"mainu maaf karde baldev!"veera murmured.It pricked ratan,she went out.While veera went,ratan saw her from corridor,just to see her.Veera went to baldev's house,where bansuri irritated her.Balwant appeared & told her that he has gone to gram panchayat.She thanked him.She went their,baldev was their outside office."baldev ruk."he stopped.They looked at each other.Veera adored him.(zindagi tere gham ne hamein,rishtey naye samjhaye)she walked towards him(zindagi tere gham ne hamein,rishtey naye samjhaye)she reached near him.She wanted to touch him(mile jo hamein dhoop mein mile chaano ke thande saaye)but can't."ki hai"baldev said."ik zaruri gal karni hai tujhse!"veera said in soft tone.Baldev laughed sarcastically,"pehle mujhe marne ki koshish ki,fir apne veerji ko sunane ka natak kiya.Ab ki kehne aayi hai.uss din ke bad bhi tujhe samajh nahi ayi."he turned,"pata nahi,maine rishta tod diya lekin tu ab tak meri zindagi se gai nahi,varna aaj itni takleef nahi hoti mainu."and he started to walk away,but veera said,baldev stopped.Veera,"mujhse itna naraz hai tu,toh us din mainu thappad mar deta,jis din maine tujhpar vishwas nahi kiya tha!"veera continued,"ya fir us din chaupal mein jo tamasha hua,uske baad,yahi bat mainu ek bar keh deta baldev,apni jaan de deti main"silence covered them."khair,chadd!main bas yahi kehne ayi thi,khud ka khayal rakhna!yehi dua karungi ki teri ye ichha jald puri ho...!maafi to mangne layak nahi hoon main,lekin agar ho sake to aakhri baar mainu maaf kar dena baldev!"she left the place.Baldev was shattered,by her words.He want to say something,but his words choked.[yehi dua karungi ki teri ye ichha jald puri ho...!]he was shaken,[lekin agar ho sake to aakhri baar mainu maaf kar dena]words echoed in his ears.Baldev fainted,jaggi billa ran towards him,they took him home.Veera went to rajveer,she flatly denied him.
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Superb updates, amazingly written!!
Awesome SS, can't wait 4 the nxt update!!
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PART 15-Veera asked rajveer for some time,she left.Rajveer sensed some fishy.Veera was walking towards polyhouse site,in thoughts.She called amrit,"ha sun!plan ka akhri part pura karne ka waqt aa chuka hai.Tu sab ready rakh,uske baad uncle ko bata dena,thik hai.Aur haa chanchali didi ko bhi.Yaha maine soch liya hai,kab pahuchna hai,usi din tujhe bataungi,thik hai,chal all the best."she hurried towards polyhouse.Jaggi,billa came up with unconscious baldev,balwant bansuri panicked.They called up doctor,he checked baldev.He handed bansuri prescription."dekhiye chinta ki koi baat nahi hai.Bas inhe aram karne ki zarurat hai.Inhone apne sharir se ziada kam sambhal rakha hai.Isliye thakaan ki vajah se behosh hogaye.Maine ye dawaye likh di hai,bas inhe ziada kam mat karne dijiye."jaggi,billa took doctor alongwith.Bansuri was tensed.Baldev was still unconscious,balwant consoled her,"sher puttar hai ye humara,kuch nahi hona isse!"she looked at him surprised,balwant signalled with his eyes.Simran was with her mother.Amrit was trying to put some sense in her,but she didn't listen her.Amrit was not feeling good.Simran,"mummy,bas abhi akhri chaal chalni hai,baldev ke jane ke baad veera apne aap barbad hojani hai."amrit shook her head.Rajveer was at his home now,servant came up with water.Rajveer took the glass,he was drinking,servant said,"sahabji,veera aur ladkiyon ki tarah nahi hai,mujhe darr lag raha hai sahab,kahi iss bar aap he..."rajveer in anger throwed the glass.He looked at servant angrily,he pulled his dupatta."sa...ha.bji!"he startled."veera aur ladkiyon ki tarah nahi hai,isliye to uske sath khelne me maja aa raha hai.Aap kyu darr rahe hai?"he leaved him."Kisiko dikhai mat padna,samjhe!"rajveer warned him.Veera reached polyhouse,she started searching nihal,he was not their.She called him,but he was not picking it.Veera sat on her chair,thinking."bas nihal chachu aa jaye,rajveer aur simran ka patta to kata he kata."she stood up walked to & fro.Nihal came their,"veerakhri!"she turned to see him,delighted.Rajveer got a call,"boliye sir ji!"another voice,"kya hai ye rajveer!hum tumhe support kar rahe hai,aur tum ho ki apne kaam ko kheechte he jaa rahi ho..."rajveer,"sir ji,ladki thodi tedhi hai...isliye thoda waqt lag raha hai.Aur waise bhi...hum 6 saal se sath hai,aapko bharosa nahi mujhpar!"another voice,"tujhpar bharosa hai isliye to uss pind me tujhe bheja hai,par us veera par nahi!"rajveer smiled.Another voice,"ab main jo keh raha hu,waisa kar...iss bar apne mann ki mat karna,varna yeh hath tere sar se hatne me der nahi lagayega!"rajveer,"kaisi baatein kar rahe hai aap...rab ka banda kabhi..." "shhh!"rajveer stopped.Baldev gained consciousness,balwant was sitting their,but his eyes searched somebody else.Balwant asked him,"uth gaya puttar"caressing his head.Baldev wanted to go,but balwant stopped him."prachar ka kaam tere dost sambhal lenge kuch din,tu aram kar.Sehat he nahi rahegi toh,kaha se chunav ke liye khada ho payega tu...!"he stopped in bed.He was having flashbacks of veera leaving him,he closed his eyes.At polyhouse,nihal was shocked,"yeh kya keh rahi hai tu veera..."veera,"chachu,mere aur amrit ke pass un dono ke khilaf pakke saboot hai.Aur maine ab soch rakha hai ki kya karna hai...aur iss vastey mainu apki madad chahiye chachu!"nihal put his hand on her head,"har madad karne ko taiyyar hu main.Par ye bat baldev ko batai?"veera nodded in negative."baldev ko pata chalega to syappa hojana hai chachu,aur wo rajveer akela nahi hai..."nihal thought for sometime & said,"ek kam karte hai veera...kal tu rajveer ke ghar ja,jab wo kahi bahar hoga,thik hai,aur jaisa ki tune bataya rajveer hamesha simran se akele mila hai,jabki tune uske naukar ko dekha hai,hai na!"veera nodded in agreement."aur main delhi jakar dekhta hu,teri dost se bhi baat ho jayegi!"Nihal assured her,they were about to leave & they spotted jaggi,billa standing,staring at them.Veera & nihal were having questioned look.Ranvi was feeling lonely,now he was slowly realizing what he has done to his veera,for himself.Veera just told that night straightaway that he should now leave her life on her own,she fulfilled her duties towards him,family.Now she wanted to live her own life.He was thinking of nihal also.[Veera,"main ab shayad he apko maaf kar pau veerji!rabji ka ashirwad sirf ek bande ke liye nahi hota veerji,wo sab ke liye hota hai...]"Tear dropped from his eyes.Gunjan placed her hand on his,ranvi looked at her.Ratan had also realized that even after she accepted veera as her daughter,her subconscious mind still thinks of her ranvi first,even he didn't gain his name on his own.Chaiji consoled her.Veera reached baldev's house to meet him,but bansuri didn't let her to.Veera bent on her knees & pleaded to her,but she didn't.Jaggi,billa was also their,they also requested bansuri.After a lot of requesting,bansuri,"thik hai!"veera's face lighten up."par sirf use dekhna,pass mat jana!"her face fell flat,but she agreed.
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PART 16-Veera followed jaggi,billa reached at baldev's room.Veera stood up at door,admired him.He was sleeping peacefully like a child.Jaggi,billa looked at each other.She thought,"meri vajah se baldev iss halat me hai,main toh maafi ke bhi kabil nahi hu.Logon ko apna pyaar jatane ke liye zindagi bhi kam pad jati hai,par isse toh 1 mahina bhi nahi laga mujhe apna banane mein."tears formed in her eyes."kash tu ik wari meri gal sun leta!"she spoke.Suddenly her phone beeped,she wiped her tears,checked the phone.She looked here & there,turned to billa,jaggi.She signalled them to come alongwith her.She took some steps,stopped turned to look at baldev;paced her footsteps.Veera just get down from last steps,baldev suddenly opened his,"veera!"woke up.He hurriedly came down from bed.Veera reached towards door,she looked at bansuri who was sitting on sofa."shukriya taiji!"veera thanked.Bansuri made a face.Billa,jaggi were following her,she looked at his room once for a while.Baldev started walking hurriedly reached doorstep.Veera walked out of door,baldev came out of his room.Nobody was their,except bansuri.He came down,bansuri saw him,asked in concern."veera ayi thi kya yaha beeji?"he asked hopefully.Bansuri made a face,"baldev!tu shayad bhul gaya hai,ki tum log ka rishta khatam ho chuka hai,fir kyu ayegi wo yaha..."his face fell.Bansuri continued,"aur waise bhi jo kudi mere bete ki jaan ke peechey pad jaye,main to aane na du apne ghar mein...!"baldev glared at her,went to his room back."pata nahi yeh veera ka bhoot kab utarega iss munde ke sir se..."she thought rolling her eyes.Next morning,veera rushed from house without taking breakfast.Veera was not talking with ranvi from that incident,nobody has guts to spoke with her about this,after witnessing her new avatar.She called nihal,he was in delhi,then to jaggi.She asked them to reach at rajveer's house.Veera reached rajveer's home,jaggi billa were already their,they had a rope.All 3 entered rajveer's house from backside window.Servant was in kitchen,both friends hide behind the wall of hall.They signalled veera,to start her search.She started searching everything,servant heard some noise coming from hall.He went out to look,he entered the hall,saw veera,jaggi put a cloth on his mouth.After sometime,servant become unconscious.They had a sigh of relief now.Both friends tied him.Veera started to search,in drawers,in cupboard,all.The hall was complete mess now,they didn't find anything.Suddenly,jaggi spoke up,"wo dekho!"veera looked at.It was a room,she thought & reached their.She tried to open it,but it was locked.Jaggi,billa came their,after a lot of efforts they succeeded in breaking the door.What they looked,shocked them.At police station,rajveer got a call.He left from their hurriedly.Nihal reached delhi,first he completed the work related with polyhouse.Then he called chanchali,having the detailed talk,they decided to meet.In pp-baldev was at his home only,balwant had strictly warned him,to take a rest for few days.He reluctantly listened to them,as if he used to be alone like this,again her memories will haunt him.But this time it was uncontrolled from the day he fainted,after he had a small convo with her face to face.He was restless.He opened his drawer,took out her photo,stared at it lovingly,"ik vari i love u nahi bol sakti tu seedha seedha!"he spoke innocently.Veera was shocked whatever she saw.It was dark room,the three boards having her pics were kept their.Jaggi billa were having anger on their faces,so veera.She asked them to keep an eye on servant,otherwise all plan will be flopped.She entered the room,looking at her pics,"agar baldev ki parwaah na hoti...toh abhi tujhe ek thappad mar deti!"she spoke.She then went on searching that room.While searching she got a file,diary.She looked at that,then took out her phone,caught the pics,she kept them at their original spot,walked out from the room.At delhi,nihal went to mla office,where amrit,chanchali was waiting their.Rajveer reached delhi in hurry.Their he called simran,she was at bus stop.He asked her to reach at one spot.At mla's office,all three gathered their.As amrit's dad was mla,nobody looked at them in suspicious.Nihal got a call inbetween,it was veera,after having conversation,he was having a big smile on his face.He told them.Veera told jaggi,billa to keep this servant with them,as nobody'l doubt on them,due to the breakup of her with baldev,they nodded.Veera first went outside,to check if nobody is their.[rajveer was living at that place,where seldom any person will roam]She signalled them,they came out with servant.The jeep was standing(not baldev's)they put him in the jeep.Veera asked them to leave & went to the bushes,where she hid her bike.She took it out.Baldev was restless,walking to & fro.He sat on his bed,picked his phone,dialled one no.Veera wore the helmet,was about to leave,her phone rang.She took out her helmet,looked at phone,her face delighted.She picked up,"baldev!"
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PART 17-Yes it was baldev.Veera was unable to believe that baldev called her,she was feeling so happy,satisfied that showed on her face."mainu tujhse kuch baat karni thi baldev!"she spoke softly.Baldev was about to say something,bansusi called him.He has to cut his phone.Veera startled at this,she put her down.After a while,she wore helmet & drove away.At delhi,rajveer,simran meet at the place,it was a big house,like balwant's.Rajveer's phone buzzed.He signalled simran to follow him.They reached the hall,a servant came,asked them to wait.Both sat on couch,waiting.A man appeared infront of them,they stood up,but he asked them to sit.At mla's office-"veera ko saboot mill gaya hai."nihal told them.Amrit's dad interfered,"par nihal singh ji,waha par baldev naam ka ladka hai,use kyu nahi yeh sab bataya.Yaha aya tha mere pass election ke liye."chanchali also asked him.Nihal explained,"dekhiye,aap log sahi hai,par kya hai na,abhi halat thode badle hue hai.Aur baldev ko gussa bahut jaldi ata hai,to use rokna mushkil hojata hai.Agar use ye bat pata chal gai,toh gusse mein uska he nuksan hojana hai..."amrit also supported him.mla nodded.In pp-baldev called jaggi,he was in store room like place,where the servant was tied.Baldev asked him to show up,as he want to go out,he agreed.Jaggi later on called veera,told her about the work has done.At delhi-the man came.He shouted on rajveer,"tumhara dhyaan kaha hai...rajveer.Police kehte ho khud ko,toh waise kam bhi karo."rajveer was shocked at his anger."sirji,main toh apni duty nibha raha hu...""kya khaaq duty nibha rahe ho...!"the man shouted.He stood up,"aur ye kudi...simran.Beta ji aap toh sirf dekhne ka kam kar rahi hai,badla ki baat karti hai..."simran lost it now,"dekhiye aap mujhe jante nahi..." "achha!"the man interrupted.Rajveer & simran exchanged their looks.The man continued,"nihal singh delhi pahuch chuka hai...rajveer ke khilaf saboot lane!"this shocked both of them.Simran,"rajveer...yeh..."rajveer startled,"ai...aise kaise ho sakta hai,nihal singh,kahi..."he thought."damn!" "ab kya fayda rajveer,jab chidiya chug kai khet!"simran got surprised,"lekin aap itne yaqeen ke sath kaise keh sakte hai."the man turned to look at her."udti hui chidiya ke par gin leta hu main bachhi!". In pp-jaggi billa reached balwant's house,convinced him to let baldev go out.After a lot of convincing he agreed.The three boys left,here veera reached at polyhouse.She took a sigh of relief,she remembered the phone call,her name from baldev's mouth was a music to her.She smiled.Jaggi billa reached the polyhouse with baldev.They entered the office,baldev stood still,so veera.They had a eyelock for some seconds,but baldev break that & starts leaving."baldev ik wari meri gal sun.Mere liye na sahi,apne liye he aur ladkiyon ki izzat ki khatir..."baldev stopped.He turned to look at her.Veera got assured.At delhi-"tum log jo kam kar rahe ho,wo bahut khatrewala hai...amrit sambhalkar.Main tum log ke sath hu..."amrit's dad said.They thanked him & leaved.They came outside,"ab tak dono ko pata chal gaya hoga,ki main yaha aa chuka hu.Chanchali tu pind chal mere naal.Amrit tu veera se baat kar lena thik hai..."both girls nodded.On other side,the man continued catching his right ear,"rab da banda hu,rab se darta hu!"having a cunning smile."surjeet singh ki barso purani jaan pehchaan hai,veera de naal..."both were surprised."aur itne intezar ke baad ye mauka main chodna nahi chahta!" he looked at him,"uda de beta rajveer!"he instructed him,rajveer nodded.He told simran what to do.At polyhouse veeba had again eyelock.She spoke,"baldev,wo...wo rajveer,wo..."her phone rang.Both got disturbed.She looked at him,baldev was frustrated,he asked her attend it,leaved.Veera got upset,"isse bhi abhi bajana tha...!"she murmurred.She took out,it was amrit,she quickly attended."ha bol kya hua!"amrit told her about their meet.Veera also told her what she found today."yaar,bas nihal chachu aur chanchali didi,safely ek bar pind me pahuch jaye.Baki toh yaha hum log sambhal lenge."she said.Amrit in fear,"yaar,wo sab toh thik hai,par mera kya hoga."veera in assuring tone,"amrit,tere dad ko sab bata diya hai na" "haa!" "toh tujhe kyu tension ho rahi hai pagal!tu toh sabse ziada safe hai.Infact tere dad ne kabhi tujhe media ke samne apni beti karke introduce nahi kiya,toh uska bhi toh koi fayda hona hai na!"veera tried to convince her.Amrit hesitantly tried to agree.Veera said,"amrit!hum bahut kareeb aa chuke hai,ab apne darr ke karan,apne hath se ye mauka mat jane de please!"amrit,"haa veera!chinta mat kar.Main kuch gadbad nahi karungi!"both smiled.The day got over & night came with sensational truths,chilling accidents.After whole pind slept,veera sneak out from her house on her bike.She reached the place where servant was kept.Amrit was staying at her friend's house,the goons reached & started attacking her.They got the proof.They was about to kill her,but somebody caught them.It was police.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 18-The police caught them,amrit's dad was their.He warned police,that this news should not come out.Amrit,her friends were alright.In pp-nihal,chanchali came entered pp.Rajveer,simran were still at delhi.They didn't get any news about what happened to amrit.They were restless.In pp-jaggi billa was also their.Veera went their,servant has gained consciousness.He started pleading.Jaggi billa tortured him,but he didn't spit out.While,veera's phone rang,it was amrit.Veera had a smile on her face.She went near the servant,"delhi mein sabko pata chal chuka hai,police bhi ayi thi.Ab agar fir bhi aap kuch batana nahi chahte to aapki marzi."she paused."agar rajveer ko bachane wala boss hai,toh mujhe bhi kam mat samajhna!"she signalled both.Suddenly the servant spoke up,"ek min beta!"veera stopped.As rajveer stayed back at surjeet singh's house only,he has no idea of happenings in pp.Nihal,chanchali entered safely.Nihal called baldev,he told him about chanchali.He went out quickly to pick them.He came back home with nihal & chanchali.He made some adjustment for chanchali,nihal stayed at his home.Baldev asked nihal what's happening.Here the servant spit out all things.The servant said,"sahab jab police ki training le rahe the,tab unhe ek ladki manpreet.Woh aur sahab ek he college mein padhte the.Wo hamesha unhe madad mangti thi,aur sahabji madad karte the,aur unhe pyar karne lage.Sahab training puri karke police officer ban gaye.Fir ek din sahab ne manpreet ko apne dil ki baat bata di,wo unke ghar gaye the iss barein mein baat karne ke liye.Manpreet ke bhai ne unhe saaf inkar diya,beizzati bhi kar di!"veera,jaggi,billa got shocked.The servant continued,"manpreet ne bhi apne bhai ka he sath diya aur sahab ki beizzati bhi ki.Unhe thappad bhi mar diya."veera folding her hands,"fir!" servant,"fir kya?rajveer ji ko yeh baat bahut chubhi.Jiski unhone itni madad ki thi,bina mange sabkuch de diya tha,usine unhe itna beizzat kiya,wo bhi na sirf apne bhai ke liye,balki kisi aur ladke ke liye."jaggi billa,"aur ladka!"servant,"ha aur ladka.Aur ye bat manpreet ne rajveerji se chupa kar rakhi thi.Ek toh sahab ne apne maa baap bachpan me he kho diye,fir unhe kisika sahara nahi tha.Jab unhe laga ki unhe pyaar karne wala koi hai,toh ye sab hadsa hua.Aur fir isliye police officer banane ke bad sahab ne apne power ka fayda uthate hue,manpreet,uske boyfriend ko dhanda karne ke jhoothey ilzaam me fasa diya."the three got shocked.Nihal told baldev everything.He was extremely shocked."veera!"nihal consoled him."wo mujhse mafi mangne ayi thi,aur main pagal uski baat he nahi suna.Wo bhi toh galat thi na,usne bhi kaha mujhpe vishwas kiya tha,jo main karu."nihal smiled at his innocence."kisiki bhi koi galti nahi hai baldev.Na teri na veera ki.Bas halat aise ban gaye ki veera in sab me khari nahi utar payi,unme ranvi bhi zimmedar hai."baldev looked at him,"matlab us din..." "ha baldev,us din veera ne sach me ranvi ko bhala bura keh diya,ab tak maaf nahi kiya usne ranvi ko,teri khatir!"baldev was satisfied.Nihal put his hand on shoulders,"rishton ko sambhalna,har ek ki ahmiyat wo samajhne lagi hai baldev.Apni galti ka ehsaas hai use!"nihal stood up,"so jaa,kal baat karlena usse.Par pehle bat use shuru karne dena tu nahi.Galti ki hai,thodi si saza to milni chahiye use!"he smiled,so baldev.Here veera was so shocked,"ye sab!"servant continued,"aur fir un dono ko police station lekar gaye,unke bhai ko bhi bulaya.Unke samne pehle manpreet ko mara,fir uske boyfriend ko.Uske bhai se zabardasti un dono ke khilaf gawahi dilwai.Us din ke bad uske bhai ki bhi maut hogai,aur unki maa aur unki dadi ko samaj ne jeeney nahi diya."veera was shaking in anger.Jaggi billa slapped him hard.Veera,"manpreet se badla le liya fir baki ladkiyo ko kyu mara,aur ek ladki jo pagal ho chuki hai woh,haa!"she shouted in frustration."sahab ke dimag par gehra asar hua.Aur wo apna shikar dhundhne lage.Ladki uska boyfriend aur unki encounter mein jaan le lena.Aur isi vajah se unka ek shehar se dusre shehar transfer hota raha hai." "aur unhe support kaun karta hai."veera asked."main unke barein me ziada nahi janta,lekin wo sahab se 6 saal pehle mile,aur apne kaam ke liye rakh liya.Unhone he yaha bheja hai rajveerji ko." "hai kaun wo!"the servant tried hard to recall his name.Veera interrupted,took out her phone,showed to him,"yehi hai wo ladki?"servant nodded in agreement.Jaggi murmured,"sala,k*****a"veera looked at him."ha yaad aya!"veera looked at him in excitement."kaun jaldi bata!""s...surj...surjeet ha surjeet singh,isi pind ka hai!"three shocked.Veera became still.She walked at back of servant,put a stick their."ab to mujhe chod dijiye."after sometime,she hit him on his head.He became unconscious.Jaggi,billa was shocked looking at her.First time they saw veera's this side,"parjaiji aye ki kitta tussi?"veera looking at them,"kuch nahi hoga isse.Isne ek ghinaune jurm ko badhava diya hai.Shukar manao,maine sirf halka war kiya hai.Mera bas chalta to iska yahi khoon kar deti"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 19-Amrit's dad took his daughter alongwith & spread the fake news of her disappearance.Rajveer got the news that the proof against him is lost,amrit also disappeared.Simran was worrying about her mother,but rajveer assured her.Surjeet singh was having some doubt,but remained silent.He then asked simran to do what he orders.She was very curious after knowing that this man knows veera,so she asked him finally,"aap veera ko kyu barbad karna chahte hai?"surjeet looked at her,smiled."kyu,iraada badal gaya kya tumhara!"he asked playfully.Simran nodded in disagreement."fir bhi aisa kya hua,jo aap pp chod ke yaha aa gaye..."surjeet glared at her for sometime.Suddenly he bursted out in laughter.Simran got serious,surjeet pressing his moustache,"hmm,rab da banda hu,rab se darta hu..."he stood up."veera aur uski beeji,dono ne mujhe pind chadne par majboor kar diya."then he narrated his whole story to her.How veera insulted him all time,due to which baldev also left him,one of the ladder to rule on pp."main in dono par nazar rakhe hue tha.Ranvi rockstar ban gaya,sampooran ka sapna pura hone ko aa raha hai.Aur ratanji,unhe to ab naya pyaar mil gaya hai,nihal singh!"simran was surprised."ab beta...aap ye puchonge ke maine fir itne din chup kyu baitha raha...umm!"simran nodded."beta...dushman ka ghar banane ke bad todne me jitna maza ata hai na...utne pehle nahi ata!"simran got confused."baldev aur veera ko dekhkar main pehle he samajh gaya tha,ki in dono ke beech kuch na kuch to hoga zarur.Aur hua bhi!"he turned to see simran,"pyaar!" "pp mein khushiya aa chuki hai,aur uspar grahan lagane ka kaam main kaise chod sakta tha!"surjeet sat on sofa,"ain mauke pe rajveer ko bhej diya!aur iska nateeja tumhare samne hai!" "isliye keh raha hu,jo main keh raha hu wo karo...!haiiin!"he smiled."rajveer ke sath chali jaa,wo bata dega tujhe.Main bhi bahut jald aunga ratanji aur veera ke liye...!"simran just looked at him.Veera asked jaggi billa to keep the servant their only,keep him alive.She was on the way to her home,her phone rang."ha amrit!" "kaam hogaya veera!"excited amrit jumped.Veera's face was delighted,"kya baat kar rahi hai yaar,mera bhi kam hogaya yaha!"they talked about the incidents."main chachu se kal milkar batati hu,tujhe aagey ka plan thik hai."they cut the call.At morning baldev woke up early.Today he was looking so different,so fresh,like a new life born inside him today.Nihal was also their,even before breakfast was also not ready.Bansuri looked at baldev in different,she asked him for breakfast,but he denied.Nihal also excused,both the boys leaved.(:-P)Chanchali reached at hospital for duty.Veera called her to meet,she agreed after half day.Nihal reached polyhouse site.,their veera was waiting in office.He went towards her,they had all talks about the yesterday,they were quite satisfied.Rajveer,simran left for pp.Veera told nihal about the whole truth,the proof she collected."arey wah!par ek chiz ki kami hai!"veera got confused,"kya nihal chachu!"she asked."batau ki dikhau!"he said putting his finger on his mouth.Veera became restless,"urghh!chachu bataiye na kaunsi chiz..."she insisted on him,nihal finally gave up.He went outside & after sometime,he returned.Veera didn't see anyone,her eyes questioned him.He smiled,went to side,veera's eyes widened,she got still.Surjeet singh ordered rajveer to kill nihal,simran to go to baldev.Simran called her mother,told her that she's coming to pp.Rajveer promised to follow orders,but he didn't know the surprise was waiting their for him.According to the proof,amrit had shown to police,they decided to wait till veera signals her.Veera was shock,she was struggling to find words,"b...b...baldev!"yes baldev was standing their.They had an intense eyelock,(like they showed during soul talk).Veera was unable to believe her eyes.She went towards him,she tried to touch him,to assure that she's not dreaming.She touched his shoulders,then his cheeks."veera!"he spoke.Tears formed in her eyes."ehem!"nihal made voice.Both looked at him."kya veerakhri!tu isse dekhte he mujhe bhul gai haa!"he teased.Veera startled,"mainu sab pata chal gaya hai veera!"baldev spoke.She stopped,looked at him again in surprise."nihal chachu ne sab bata diya hai mujhe!"tears started to flow from her eyes.She looked at nihal,he smiled.He asked them to talk with each other comfortably,he'l meet them later.Baldev walked away from her towards the chair,he used to sit.Veera was still standing,'mainu laga tha ki maine tujhe hamesha ke liye kho diya!'veera thought.'veera tune sach me mere liye apne veerji ko galat thahraya!mere liye...us din bata nahi sakti thi tu!'he thought.'mainu maaf kardega na baldev!' 'tainu maaf karne he aya hu,par tu bol to sahi!ha thoda bhav to khaunga main,par mainu pata hai,iss bar tu mujhse gusse nahi hogi...'baldev was sitting on chair,veera turned to see him.He looked at her,stood up,they had a eyelock.Ni hak went to SS house.He met with ratan.Ranvi saw.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 20-Ranvi saw nihal ratan together.After spotting ranvi,nihal went away from her.They felt awkward.Ranvi walked towards nihal,joined his hands.He apologized to him,for his mistake.Nihal forgave him.Ranvi asked them for their marriage."shayad iske bad veera mainu maaf karde!"both assured him not to worry.Veera will melt one day.Rajveer dropped simran,went to his home.He didn't find the servant their,also his home was all mess.He searched but didn't found anything.This time veera didn't leave her things,but rajveer sensed that it'l be veera only.Rajveer asked to pind people,police station,but didn't find the servant.He was furious now,"veera,yeh tune achha nahi kiya...pehle nihal ka delhi aana,aur ab kaka ka gayab hona.Ab tu dekh main kya karta hu." veeba had a eyelock.Baldev looking at veera[Aaj agar bhar aayi hai,boondein baras jayegi<M>] Veera had tears in her eyes,she walked towards him.[kal kya pata inke liye aankhein taras jayegi<F>]They were so close now,looking directly in each other's eyes.Tear fall from her eyes,[jane kab gum kahaan khoya,ek aansu chupake rakha tha]he wanted to wipe her tears,but tried to be strong."aye mat samajhna ki maine teinu abhi maaf kar diya"veera wiped her tears.She pulled her both ears,"mainu maaf kar de na please!ek chance!"not getting response.Veera started to sit down,but baldev caught her with shoulders,signalled her not to do."nahi,hogaya veera bahut hogaya.Bahut seh liya,us din chaupal mein sirf mere liye apni beizzati karwayi,veerji se bhi ladai kar li,hogaya,bas hogaya veera!" "baldev!!" "maine maaf kar ditta tujhe veera,maaf kar ditta!"and he embraced her.They had a passionate hug after such a long time.They just wanted this moment to stop their only.Veera came out from his embrace,"ab us rajveer ko maza chakhate hai,sath mein."both smiled."par wo akela nahi hai baldev!"baldev questioned,"surjeet singh!"baldev got furious,but veera calmed him down,told about their plan.Rajveer called simran,told her everything.That day went without any tension,but night got wild.Nihal went to hospital to meet chanchali.Veera & baldev decided not to tell anybody about their patch up,otherwise rajveer will get alert.At ss house,ranvi told veera that he will not stop nihal ratan's marriage.She became happy,but didn't show to ranvi.Baldev was also happy,that veera loves him,but was having tension of surjeet singh.Baldev decided to meet chanchali,he went in his jeep.At hospital,nihal chanchali met.When they both came out rajveer came their & started beating nihal badly.Chanchali tried to interfere but in vain.She dialled veera's no.but she didn't pick up.Veera was with chaiji,spending some time,very happy.Baldev was driving jeep,so he kept his mobile aside.Nihal also tried to beat him,then rajveer got one rod in his hand.He picked up,moved towards chanchali,he was about to hit her,but nihal came inbetween.The rod hit at the back of his head,near the neck on right side.Rajveer tried to run away,but he pushed her so hard,that her head hit on a stone,fainted.Nihal was bleeding badly,fainted on the ground.Rajveer clean the rod,his fingerprints,throwed on nihal's body.Suddenly he heard baldev's jeep sound."fas gaya baldev!"he ran away from their.Veera went to her room,she saw her phone on bed.She checked that,it was 5 miscalls of chanchali.Veera got surprised,she called back her,but she didn't get answer.After 4 to 5 attempts,veera got tensed.She called baldev,he reached the hospital.And he found nihal,chanchali lying on ground.His phone rang,he picked up.They both startled.Veera was on hold on phone.Baldev went to them,he saw both lying in blood,a rod,he picked that up.Baldev startled very badly,veera's heart beat was getting faster,nervous.She shouted,"baldev bol na!""arey nihal chachu aur chanchali di par hamla kar diya kisine,wo khun se lathpath pade hai..."veera's widened in shock."tu jaldi haspatal pahuch!"they cut the call.Veera rushed towards hospital.Baldev picked chanchali in his arms,then nihal to jeep.He hurriedly started the jeep & drove faster.Veera just told chaiji,nihal & hospital.She rushed her bike,reached near the hospital & her bike slipped.She landed in mud,her hand got scratched.But she didn't care,ran towards hospital.She saw baldev's jeep,she paced her steps.Baldev admitted nihal,chanchali to hospital,they were hesitant as it was police case,but baldev used his power.Veera entered hospital,she meet with baldev.He told her all he saw.At ss house,chaiji told ranvi everything.They rushed to hospital.Here veera was blank,suddenly baldev spoke up,"kahi..."veera looked at him.Baldev went furious,but veera stopped him.She spoke,"main dr.se baat karke ati hu,tu yahi ruk.Gharwale ayenge toh unhe sambhalna!sabko humein he sambhalna hai!"baldev nodded,veera went to meet dr.All ss family,balwant reached hospital,they were panicked.Baldev consoled them.Rajveer told surjeet singh about the work.He was happy,now it was simran's turn to play the game.Veera came after sometime
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Posted: 11 years ago
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When is the next update gonna come yaar!? Can't wait!!! Read all parts at once 😛 really great 👏
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