Please save the show writers/ Show going round in repetitive circle

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please save the show writers/ show going round in repetitive circle its is boring and dragging. The show seems like it is 6 to 8 years old, in every show writers are pushing the boundaries of the plot. Thinking very much inside the box, in this show the same scenes are being repeated daily, problem is writers have jumped, or sidelined too many tracks. Now supporting cast is Mr and Mrs Choksi.
Too many Mr and Mrs Choksi scene being shown, their romance Mrs Choski and astha scene not necessary. Same Mala / Kalindi scences being repeated. It is beyond pathetic that, nobody has discovered that Anjailee is staying at the Ashram., other than Kavya. At least Jyothi mum in law should find out , that jyothi parents are separated she is typical indian lady who loves to gossip , and cause drama. Even if Na, discover Anjailee is at Ashram, then he cannot kick her out, he put Ashram under Astha name, after Ashram residents camped outside his home.
Kalindi should be forced to face, implications of hiding her son Ankur from her friends and family, Jyothi mum in law Rekhu / or Jaya should find this out as say stereotypical things like Kalindi left her son to marry Advoot. .
Challenge for writers to show different angles for Ankur/ Varad as they both, after business and inheritance.
Astha starting her food van business, again ridiculous. This is the best job they could give Astha. Astha is lying then praying .Writers have absolutely no imagination or creativity, l don't think they know what they are doing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Then u go and tell them if u have creative idea
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If you had read my comments , l did say how the writers/ producers could make story more creative. Actually l would love to be given an opportunity to write for a show so thank you, for your kind comments.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lav57

If you had read my comments , l did say how the writers/ producers could make story more creative. Actually l would love to be given an opportunity to write for a show so thank you, for your kind comments.

exactellty in evening I read one of the post where people asking to tweet to CV and director and gave or view...
So u can give u r suggestion. Through tweet

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