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Pavani

@procks15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey everyone!! I hv new story!!! Idea aaya toh likh diya!!!Hope u all don't mind this!!

This story will Story of birth of Akdha...

Character Sketch

HUMAYUN

A Mughal hier!!! King without a kingdom...He is kind and sweet but lacks the ability of ruling...He has a brother who hates him...He was second favourite of Zahir ud din Babur. He is not a able soilder but was learned ... he was intelligent but politics was beyond his minds...He wanted to be Emperor of Hindustan...but fate does not allow...He longs for a son...he has two wives...but first gave birth to girls... Second was newly wedded.

Humayun was not a able leader...but was always suggested by his wives on political desicions.

Hamida Bano

A kind hearted...courages women...She is a beautiful women and is a good, obedient wife...She helps Humayun over come obstacles... She is good in politics...but dosen't want to be dragged into bitter world of brutalism.

Bega Begum

Humayun's first wife...She is kind to Hamida and understands her. She helps Humayun with politics...She is a nice women.

Raja Bharmal

King of Amer...he was a good leader but not a able soilder. He is a good man with ideals of truth...He is courages but lacks ability of a good swordsmenship.

Rani Mainavati

Second wife of Bharmal...She is a kind and superstitious women...she is not beautiful but witty. She loves her family and pride...She is a true rajput.

Rani Sunita

A cunning women... She has a hatred for Mainavati ... She is witty and crafty.

Jalal

Humayun's long wanted son...able leader...He is strong, Intelligent and smart...he is the most able swordsman in Hindustan...He is loved by all ... but still lacks a heart. He is most strongest man...He is Humayun's favourite son... He is second son of Humayun. Everyone wants Jalal to be the next emperor of hindustan...he cannot be bullied by his brothers.

Haider

Humayun's elder son and first son ... he is jealous of Jalal... he wants to be the Mughal hier...He think there isin't need of killing Jalal as he himself doesn't want to be a king...Jalal wants to be happy person... Haider unlike Jalal has hunger of power.

Hamid

Jalal's younger brother..He was just 3-4 months younger than him... Jalal hates him...as he is just a brat...good for nothing.

Mirza

Jalal's younger brother...Mirza has a deep love for his brother Jalal and supports him in everything. He is a good swordsman but still wants to be his brother Jalal's side...He is Jalal's favourite...No one dares to bully him even though he is youngest. Jalal always stands for him...He knows Jalal more than anyone.(Their brothership is like that of Bikram and Bala in gunday at start of the movie) He secretly also loves Shivani.

Maham

Jalal's milk mother...although she is his milk mother he dosen't have so much affection towards Maham. She is cunning and crafty.

Adham

Jalal's milk brother...He is just a womeniser...he believes in physical strength. He is just a month older than Jalal.

No one is better than Jalal in his whole family...he is perfect man.

Jodha

Bharmal's eldest daughter...Smart, witty, Beautiful, kind, sweet and is good soldier...but her father doesn't want her to be in politics. She is good in politics...She is a nice and beautiful women. She is the most fiery Rajput...She can give up anything but her pride. She loves helping people.

Sukanya

Jodha's sister and daughter of Rani Sunita. But both of them share a good sisters bond.

Shivani

Jodha's youngest sister. She secretly loves Mirza and is fond of him. She is smart and witty.

Rest characters will be introduced in the story.

It will not be a boring story... Its a long SS...Character Sketch of Akdha time are after their marriage... we will have Akdha meeting.

INDEX

Chapter 1 pg 1

Chapter 2 will be uploaded

Chapter 1

Humayun is in deserts of Sindh...Sher Shah suri had snatched away his territory. He is longing to get it back. He has one son but is too small to fight.

Hamida inside is nevous on how to tell to the emperor this news.

Humayun comes in her room ans sees her near the window.

Humayun " Kya hua hai begum? Kuch pareshaan nazar aati hai?"

Hamida " Samajh nahi aata ki yeh sahi waqt hai ya nahi?"

Humayun" Kya hua ? bataiye"

Hamida " Shenshah , hum... hum hum..."

Humayun " Aap kya begum?"

Hamida (putting all her courage)" Hum maa bane wale hai shenshah"

Humayun " Hume samajh nahi aa raha ki khush ho ya dhuki"

Bega " Yeh khushi ki hi toh baat hai"

Humayun " Jin halato mein hum hai unmein yeh kehena mushkil hai"

Hamida " Aap pareshaan mat hoiye huzoor...hum inkal khalar rakh lenge...humara baccha hai...bohot hi samajhdaar hai...mushkil nahi aayegi"

Humayun " Hume shayad kisi fakir ke paas jana chahiye"

Hamida " Jaisi aapki marzi"

At same night in Humayun's dream.A Fakir comes.

Fakir "Ya Allah...Ek kabil bande ko bheja hai aapna...mera yeh ghar apni parchaai bhej kar tune paak kar diya mere maula...shukriya"

Humayun "Kya matlab hai aapka"

Fakir " Khuda ne apni parchaai bheji hai tumhare paas... duniya meinn rajneeti ki misal kaayam karega... Koi aisa insaan paida nahi hua jo ise mita sake...khuda ne khud fursat se banaya hai ise"

Humayun " Humara baccha?"

Fakir " Tumhari buniyaadi takat banega ... toofan se bhi teez dimag aur bijli si teez sipahi...aaega tumhara beta ... khuda gava hoga is baat ka ki jab aayega ek nayi subah laaega...usse Jalaluddin Mohommad naam dena"

Suddenly humayun wakes up... He goes to the window and prays for his child.

There in Amer.

Mainavati is expecting a child. She is very happy ... her happiness knew no bounds... Bharmal and whole agra was happy...his favourite queen was going to be a mother.

A fear crept into her mind that anyone might harm her

Shaguni Bai appears..." Rani Mainavati ... dare toh dushman...Durga Maa ka aashirvaad hai aapke kok mein... maa ne khud bheja hai khushiyaan laane... Koi nahi rok sakta hai ise"

Her fear had reduced after listening to Shaguni Bai... She can never go wrong.

Bharmal and Mainavati go to Durga Maa's mandir and pray for their child.

In Sindh deserts,

Hamida's legs have been paining since morning but she continued walking in the deserts...they didn't know how much time it will take to reach a place where people lived. Humayun knew her pains and ordered to have a rest. She sat down. Bega begum put some medicine on her legs.

She said " Hamida Begum...aap aaram farmaiye iski zaroorat hai aapko... Garam paani se pair dabwaa de?"

Hamida "Hum thik hai"

Bega " Hum jaante hai aap mein bohot himmat hai par is waqt humare Shehzaade ko iski zaroorat hai"

Hamida smiled at her.

She was happy that she thought that her son was also their son.

They took a rest of an hour and resumed the journey.

It has been 6 months since their journey

Then finally they reached a village in Rajputana. A king gave them shelter...and made a cosy place for Hamida Begum. The king's name was Vikram.

Raja Vikram " Aap aaram kariye hum khane ka bandobas karte hai"

Even that village was going through crises.

It was 7 th month of Rani Mainavati...She had already heavy legs and was taken very good care of. She was given kesar doodh and dry fruits with a balanced diet everyday. Mainavati was feeling dizzy...and was made to rest.

Everyone except Rani Sunita were happy...she also wanted to get attention.

She does her pooja and was very happy all these days.

There was absolutely no problems in this time.

She was sure that her delivery will be done safely.

Now she was thinking wheather it would be baby boy or girl.

She in her 9th month.

Even through all the crises King Vikram served them.

1 month has passed since then. She was worried for everyone... especially for her child.

Humayun is tensed. The situation is going much worse.

He remembers his dream and fakir's words that his son's birth will bring good luck to them.

He is seeing time going slowly than ever...He was waiting for his good luck to come and remove bad luck.

Slowly he starts taking part in the politics of the village.

Mainavati and Bharmal are sleeping together...he was sleeping when he woke up with the screams of pain made by Mainavati...bharmal immediately called the vaidh.

Outside the room Bharmal was very tensed...suddenly he heard cries of a baby...vaidh comes out and says " Badhai ho maharaj ladki hui hai!!"

He was happier than ever. First girl in the family.

He took the girl in his hands and rocked the baby to and fro.

Next Day...he had announced a jashn.

In the jashn

Bharmal " Humne soch liya hai...humari beti ko duniya Jodha ke naam se jaanegi!"

All the people started cheering.

It is her 8th month...time was moving slow for the Mughal Dynasty. It was a hard time...they were facing lot of hardship.

Humayun there was waiting eagerly for her ninth month to come. He was waiting.

Humayun " Kab aaega? Kab humari mushkilen khatam hongi? Kab aaega humara beta aur kiske paas hai humare asha ki kiran?"

His first wife was also now 5 months pregnant. So Hamida did her work herself as there was less labours.

Humayun was puzzled that who was the lucky one?

Humayun was timely caring for both his wives.

hope you guys like this

Edited by procks15 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 2

Bega Begum was worried for her child who was there in Kabul with a maid. Haider who was just an yr old. Humayun still was confused as though who would be his hier? He loved Haider.

Hamida helped herself and Bega Begum.In her 7th month Bega Begum was a little afraid about the health of her child...even though Hamida had a chil in her womb she helped Bega Begum in everything...there was no place for hatred.

Hamida was in her ninth month.

In Amer...Baby Jodha was high with fever...she was just 2 months old. Everyone was afraid except Rani Sunita.

Then she hears Raja coming into her room.

Bharmal " Mainavati, Humare yahan atithi aaye hai...unke liye rehene aur khaane pine ka intezaam karwaiye."

After saying he left. She touched baby Jodha's forehead and her fever had vanished! It was strange...two days before she was high with fever all the time and suddenly it had vanished in second! No one came into the room! Still Rani Mainavati went to see the guest...SHe was surprised to see that both the queens were going to be Mothers...She was happy...

Mainavati " Areey, aap khadi kyu hai baithiye...bohot thak gayi hongi yahan aate aate...bohot hi lambi yaatra thi aur aap maa bane wali hai aap aaram kariye hum aapke liye kuch thanda laate hai"

The Queens were amazed with their hospitality...even though she didn't know them except for they were Mughals...still she helped them so much.

Since the village was going through crises,Superstious King Vikram was forced to make them go to another village. Humayun was so angry but could do nothing...there was a calm before the storm came...They still left the village...They moved far and far...after a long journey they spotted a huge palace on top of a mountain and there with soliders...Humayun reached the city...seeing them, a man said " Kya chahiye hai bhaya? Yahan naye aaye ho kya?"

Humayun " Hum yahan ke nahi hai...Sindh se safar kar ke aa rahe hai"

Man " Haye ram! Hum aapko raja sa ke paas le chalte hai...vo hi aapki madad karenge"

They went after the man...He saw ameri soliders and the man said" O Bhaya, yeh aaye hai Sindh se...aur do hone wali maa hai...maare ko unhe raj mehel pahuchana hai... aap jaane de toh aage bade"

Suddenly the gate rose...they were astonished... Mughal never saw anyone open the shaahi gate without knowing the person. They were taken in...Hamida and Bega were made to sit in a palki and maids were around them.

Humayun was stunned by their hospitality... Bharmal came and warmly recieved the guests...Humayun never saw anyone like this so calm, so nice.

Hamida and Bega were led into rooms which were well cleaned not a spek of dirt or dust...room was spik and span.

Then Rani herself came and made them comfortable with their visit. She said "Areey, aap khadi kyu hai baithiye...bohot thak gayi hongi yahan aate aate...bohot hi lambi yaatra thi aur aap maa bane wali hai aap aaram kariye hum aapke liye kuch thanda laate hai "

They were amazed with their hospitality.

Some time later...she returned with maids carring sherbat for them...that too full with enegry and goodness. After drinking them they were now full of energy.

She said" Yahan paas mein hi ek darga hai...agar aap thik hai toh hum aapko wahan le chalte hai"

They were happy. They left to the durga ...they went in and prayed for both the child... They returned and suddenly troop of sher shah suri attacked ... Rani Mainavati took a sword and led them safely but the sudden outburst of rain made a big storm...It was do or die situation...and suddenly Hamida was having pain and due to the storm Bega begum's child had also to be taken out... Rani Mainavati kept her calm and very cautiousness she did both the deliveries... The storm was on their way where they were and suddenly it stopped...She heard the cries of both the babies. She was very happy...Hamida and Bega were very happy and Thanked Khuda and Rani prayed to her maa. Then there came Bharmal and Humayun ... Humayun saw his both sons and was very happy to see them alive and good.

Humayun heartily thanked them.

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Niceee plot...do continue...

Update next chapter soon and PM me plz when u update next

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Pavani

@procks15

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 2 cont.

Humayun was so delightful to see his both sons alive and ok.

Bharmal was once more proud of her queen.

They left for the palace.

Hamida " Hume samajh nahi aa raha ki kaise aapka shukriyada kare Rani sa...Aapka bohot bohot shukriya"

Mainavati " Kaisi baat kar rahi hai aap...humare yahan atithi ko bhagwaan ke samaan mana jata hai toh aapki madad karte kaise nahi? aur ek maa hi maa ka dard samajh sakti hai...humari ek mahine ki beti hai"

Hamida " Yeh bohot acchi baat hai...aapki izaazat ho toh hum unhe dekh sakte hai?"

Mainavati " Haan kyu nahi? Aaiye"

They both go to see Baby Jodha...so cute and beautiful...(Our hero was still in her hands)...She was just so wonderful.

Suddenly, Bharmal calls them both of them are kept on the bed and baandhis be insight...

In the court.

Humayun" Is madad ke badle mein hum dosti ka haath badhana chahate hai"

Bharmal " Kyu nahi...hum yeh prastav manzoor hai"

Humayun's happiness was doubled.

Then a festive was organised in the happiness of the birth of the two mughal prince.

Humayun " Yeh humari khushkiaamati hai ki humare dono shezaadon ka janam itne acche parivaar ke bich hua hai... Hum apne pehele Shezaade ko Jalaluddin Mohommad naam denge aur dusre Shezaade ko Hamid naam denge"

Bharmal " Aur is dono rajputron ko hum prem se swagat karte hain"

Then to Hamida and Bega Mainavati gifts a chain which has a pendent...She says " Yeh humari taraf se ek choti si bhet... Yeh taaviz in dono ki raksha karegi"

She was so pleased to see their love and affection.

But there was a silence... Humayun " Raja sa hume shayad yahan se rawana hona chahiye...dushman ko agar humare Shezaadon ki khabar lagi toh zinda nahi bach paaenge"

Bharmal " Shenshah...agar hifazat ki baat hai toh aap ek kaam kariye apne Shezaadon aur apni Begumon ko yahan rehene dijiye...kuch bade ho jaaye toh yahan se le jaaeiyega...kyuki yeh bacchon ke liye bhi accha hai...Zyaada lamba safar inke sehat ke liye accha nahi hai"

Humayun thinks for a second and then says " Aap wajah farmate hai...hume aap par pura bharosa hai ki aap humare Shezaadon ki hifazat karenge"

Then Bega begum , Humayun and Hamida leave Amer with Jalal and Hamid in their security.

Mainavati took care of them as their own child...but that cruel maham never let anyone touch Jalal.

After 2 yrs...Humayun returns ...Now he had a small kingdom.

Humayun sees his children in good state ... healthy and fine.

He leaves with them.

Years flow away

In Amer

A girl was crying badly... She said " Bapusa...kyu? Hume vo chahiye...Sukanya ko dilaya par hume nahi"

Yes The little girl is our superstar Jodha.

Jodha " Bapusa... aapne Sukanya ko chudiya dilayi par hume nahi di...yeh galat hai"

Bharmal " Jodha tu toh badi hai na ... samajh"

They was a silence.

Jodha was now 10 yrs old.

Jodha " Theek hai" In a sad tone... She leaves to play.

In Kabul

A boy was practicing sword fighting with his brothers...in battle 2 vs 1...The boy was over powering them all alone...no difficulty in handling them.

The boy was none other than our hero Jalal.

He has strong arms and legs. Over powering both his brother since younger brother Mirza is just 5 yrs old. Jalal was also 10.

Humayun was stunned to Jalal fighting so nicely. Bairam Khan had taught him well.

Years flew and now Jalal is 14 yrs old.

In Diwan E Khaas..

Humayun was still alive...the court said " Huzoor...hume lagta hai hume taqt par Shezaadon ki humat deni chahiye."

Haider's eyes suddenly became active...Jalal in his own thought ' Yeh kaisi baat hui... abhi abu hai na...hume kya lena dena taqt par toh Haider Bhaijaan hi baithenge'...Haider' Kahi sabhne Jalal ko taqt dene ki toh nahi sochi?'

Haider wanted to be the Mughal Hier.

Suddenly a news comes that General Hemu had attacked Kabul.

Jalal " Huzoor...aap yahan rahiye...hum sipahiyon ke saath fateh ki khabar leke aate hai"

Humayun nodded in yes...He has full trust on Jalal.

Jalal goes to war at age of just 14.

Humayun was proud of him.

After a week Jalal returns just as he returned...

Jalal " Shenshah... humne kaha tha na Fateh ki khabar saath mein hi laayenge"

Now even hindustan was under Mughal Empire.

All wanted Jalal to be the hier.

A minister said " Huzoor...hume lagta hai ki Shezaade Jalal ko taqt dedena chahiye...kabil hai shenshah banne ke"

But another said " Shehzaade Haider ko taqt par baithna chahiye"

Now everyone was in the debate of who should be the hier.

Jalal stood there not getting why this debate is going on.

Finally Haider said " Hume ek pratiyogita rakhni chahiye Shenshah...jisse hum yeh faisla kar sake ki kon shenshah banega"

Humayun nodded in yes.

In Jalal's rrom there was a huge debate...Bega Begum was trying to make Jalal take part in the competetion. But Jalal was reluctant. But she was constantly making him try to understand.

Then He says yes.

He goes to Haider and says " Bhaijaan... hum chahte hai ki aap hi shenshah bane...toh yeh batane aaye the ki hum puri mehenat nahi lagayenge aap hi jeetiyega"

Haider nodded... Hamid enters and says " Haider Bhaijaan...agar aap shenshah bane toh wazir hume banaiye"

Haider nodded. Jalal" Hume sirf jang mein shamil hona hai"

Hamid " Matlab aap humare jhooti mein honge" Jalal " Aapke nokar nahi hai samajhe...apni aukad mein rahiye Shezaade Hamid...yahi behetar hoga...Aur yeh mat bhuliye ki hum sabhse behetar hai...aapki humare saamne khade hone ki bhi aukad nahi hai...kuch kaam nahi karte bas ladkiyon ke saath besharmi karte phirte hai...aata kuch hai nahi...bas aa jate hai log wazir banne...Humse panga bohot bhaari padega Hamid...Yaad rakhiye Jalal hai hum...aapke kahi baat sunne ke liye hum aapke naukar nahi hai ... baat samajh aai toh theek warna hum apne tarike se samajheye?" Jalal smirked and left. Hamid was angry... he said " Iske tevar dekhe hai Bhaijaan...Jalal apni had se bhad rahe hai" Haider knew that hamid and Jalal were too different. He also knew that now his chances of being Shenshah are less. Jalal is in habit of showing if someone doubts his abilities so...now he would think to be Shenshah and if he agrees haider can never be emperor of hindustan.

Jodha is now 14 yrs too ... Most beautiful girl in Hindustan. She is strong and smart. She is intelligent. She is very kind.

Then she also helps her father in politics.

Precap: Akdha's first meeting.

Keep reading!!! Hope you enjoyed it!!!

Urs

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