~Ye Sazish Hain Boondon Ki(Rantara OS,Last Chapter @ Pg18)~ - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..
No words..no words..😳
I m blasing..
mari chamkili..so hot update..really sanju Read kar le fever ho jayega..
Riu tu petrol he hai..
Love u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ufff ri
U just killed me with this update
It was solo romantic
I still can't stop blushing yaar
Raaghus actions !Ade me go red like a tomatoe
And guess what my bed went top hot in this cold weather
Both were carving for each other awww hawtt
U stopped at a cliffhanger nahiii ri ye tune kya KIA
Raghus words were so touchy yaar
Even antu got emotionsl and cried
Loved this update
Sowie my comment wasn't long
I don't have anything else to say for this hawwt and amazing update
Pls cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES
i need time to review this awesome piece ..i hv read all the chapters all in one go ... am in a beautiful world now ...am coming
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Posted: 10 years ago
Riu..
I cmnt agen..
So hot update..
Really Nice..
Raghu s line apun dar ta tha ke tuje chu liya to apne aap ko rok nahi paega..
Omg..
I need cold water on me..
I have no words..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updated after a long time...And guess what.. i was storing for this special day.. a very dearer special membar of the forum came to earth this day... This is my SANJU BABA aka Ur's fav Sanjimala ji's b'day... and guess what... this part is dedicated to her. Happy b'day sanju baba... May you have a beautiful love ahead... lots and lots of love to you...
🤗

yeh sazis hain boondon ki

(The conspiracy of raindrops)

Chapter 6

The thunder hit the ground loudly and it could be heard even from the inside of closed room. My heartbeat became loud and blood rushed through my veins due to the sheer excitement. Just like the mad devastating nature outside, my inner mind was swinging in the pleasure pool and getting more and thirstier for my love's touch, his warm embrace, playing of his hot scorching breath on my skin and his rough tempting lips drinking honey from my soft skin. I clung more and more to raghu as his desire and intensity was increasing with every passing time. His hands played possessively over my every body parts like I was his very own dearer toy. His quick lips movements continue to give sensuous rhythm to my nerve system. I panted loudly feeling suffocated, pleased, excited and as well as content. My hands moved in sync with him and adored his perfectly build up powerful corpse, caressing through his hairs. With wet kisses he madly nibbled my revealed skin all over. My throat went dry and almost burned when his tempting hot lips moved down my pharynx tasting my skin hungrily. Under my closed eyelids I felt his every move upon me. Moving down my throat, he came near my neck. He kissed along my neck bone and nudged with his nose on the tender spots. I breathed heavily sliding my hand under his arms and clinging to his well build shoulder. Every fiber of him seemed like heated like a burning fire which was melting me all the way. He continued to rub his nose on the crook of my neck taking my smell. His rough stubbles continued to give me pinching sensation. Soft moans came out of my mouth by his moves, while my fingers trembled and feasted over his shoulder in response. His lips parted and with wet tempting kisses he nibbled my skin. Soon his nibbles turned harsher increasing my pants. His tongue and lips played harshly, madly over my skin getting me intoxicated, addicted to his fiery breath. his sharp teeth pressed upon the crook of my neck. And I hissed in sensation. The pressure increased and soon his teeth grooved on my skin giving me a sensational, harsh love byte. The sensation jerked inside my nerve and moved to my top to bottom. I moaned loudly in response and my fingers squeezed his shoulder tightly in response. He didn't stop, and increased the pressure calling another loud moan from my mouth which I couldn't control. Some kind of invisible current had started to rush down my body for that sensational jerk and it shot more adrenalin to my system. Bruising my neck with his victory sign on me, raghu moved down biting my skin listening to my moans calling out for his name. my fingers continued to rub and clutch tightly upon his shoulder in response to his maddening love bytes. Reaching out for more, he came near my cleavage area. He breathed in hiding and snuggling his face in between the valley of curves blowing me of. I smiled at joyous pleasure as he listened to my madly rushing heart and kissed on it. The heart which only belongs to him! His movements got more possessive and wild. His tongue twisted and rolled on my valley and I shuddered badly. His nibbles turned into harsh love bytes while moving all over my uncovered chest. I gasped and whizzed several times in some kind of forbidden pleasure which started to rise inside me. I just heard that a girl lost herself in his man's love. It felt like bookish words to me before. After I met raghu and fell in love with him, my every thought got changed. At that moment I could clearly understood that what kind of intensity it could be while u got to be loved by your man. It blows you off, burns you in its wild passionate fire and gives you new life, the life which only belonged to him.

I was aroused more and more by that sheer pleasure. The maddening excitement was a bit saturating when I felt him gently taking my aroused bosom. I gasped and became numb for a while. He nibbled on the spherical tender skin gently while his hot tongue pushed against the aroused bud. I hissed at his possessive maddening act. He continued to nibble giving current waves in my spine and I rushed my fingers through his hairs. His powerful arms placed around my feature and pulled me up a slight from the ground giving him more access to my skin. I almost ended up clinging badly to his neck. There was not just a slight distance between our features. His covered manly hardness against panged harder on my lower abdomen and I gasped sensing it. Holding me onto his fiery scorching heated body he sucked harder and harder mercilessly as if he was drunk. I couldn't take the heat and current through my body and wiggled badly imprisoning onto his iron hold. I was lost, gone and helpless under his wild maddening desires. My fingers clutched and caressed through his hairs, his back as he sucked again and again tasting his own nectar doze, grooving his loves sign onto me forever which made me moan loudly every time with his hardened pressure. I didn't when his mad wild thirst would be quenched. He waited so long for me. I didn't know that he was holding such kind of intense maddening desire and love for me inside him. I was literally not prepared to face that kind of wild, possessive, intense desires.

Slowly and eventually as he was proceeding owing over my every inch, my soul got overwhelmed in pure feeling of love as I slowly lose my everything solely to him. Everything, felt right and so truthful at that moment. The most pure, tranquil feeling which I ever felt before, being in the arms of my love and getting loved by him intensely. Sucking my both sides harder, swelling up my mammals when he finally left me giving a last gentle byte, I panted heavily for air as I was empty of them. We embraced each other tightly on our hold as raghu's head rested on my chest breathing heavily. Our mad heartbeats pounded against our cage and we both heard that clearly. After a while when our heartbeat get stabled, I heard him calling my name with his deep husky voice.

"Antara!!" He called out for me.

"Raghu!!" only the single word I could probe. I couldn't remember anything else. As if I forgot everything in the world rather than that name which was engraved in my soul forever.

Raghu brushed his hot scorching lips against my skin and I whizzed. He placed me back on the floor and moved down kissing along my middle section. With his every move his hardness continued to pound on me repetitively and I whizzed every time in deep sensation. She reached up to my navel and rolled his tongue inside. I hissed gain by the touch of his moistly tongue. He kissed along my navel and nibbled. I slowly trembled and gasped under him. There was a tight knot creating in my belly due to his lips movement. He didn't stop and moved down further. Finally he caught the portion of saree which was still covering my lower half. With his swift hand movement, he released the saree from my pajama and started to unwrap that. With trembling heart, I waited in anticipation. My breath was becoming heavy as he finally unwrapped the saree and without wasting a moment he pulled down the pajama from my legs revealing my uncovered legs to his eyes. Someone froze me to the spot as he removed the last bariier from my feature leaving me totally uncovered. Even not a single thread was remained in my body. I squeezed myself as my heart trembled badly in anticipation. The heat of slight embarrassment and anticipation washed over me leaving me all red. My eyes were always shut tight. But even under the closed eyes I could feel his gaze over me. the gaze was alone enough to burn me and melt me like the wax. I heard the sound of his jeans chain pulling down and I gulped with dried throat anticipating what was coming. The feeling was indescribable. There was a bit fear, but mostly a rare kind of excitement which made my heart pound and rushed blood through my veins. my chicks felt hot as hell. I heard the sound of his jeans and belt falling on the wodden floor and my heart responded loudly listening to those sound. Just after some few mins, I felt his hands on the toes of my both feet. His fingers gently joined the toe and as the anklet sounded. His lips kissed on my both toes and my chest rose uos and down as the wave rushed up from my toe to my heart. he caught my legs and started to kiss them and moved up. I hugged around my body in sensation and gasped as he kissed and caressed all the curves and loops over my legs and moved up. He kissed along my inner thigh and snuggled deep. A pleasant whizz came out of my mouth as he did so. He caressed himself all over my body worshiping each and every part. His revealed hardness panged even harder making me chock. I got numb, addicted and pleased by his sweet torture of love. We both breathed louder and called for each other's name several times as our body moved in perfect sink with each other. We got addicted to each other's presence and sense.

Raghu positioned himself along my feature and we both felt each other completely. A deep wave of pure feeling rushed over us as we got to feel each other without any barrier, any hesitation. Letting out a deep breath he lifted himself a bit up from me. I felt his hand caressing over my thighs and gently parting me. At that moment I understood that it was coming. My feature stiffened automatically as a loud deep breath escaped my chest. I felt him placing his powerful corpse placing on me. My whole feature was trembling badly due to adrenalin rush and I was breathing frequently. His hand touched my chicks gently brushing his thumb along my lips. I breathed hugging myself to control my loud uneven beat of heart.

"Antara!!" He called out for me again, "Akhein khol..." hi firm yet tender voice ordered. Squeezing my eyes tight I denied nodding my head. "Baat kyun nhin maanti tu meri?!" Raghu asked with a small chuckle and I felt blood rushing to my chicks making them warmer. Gathering my courage slowly I opened my eyes. I found raghu's face just inches above mine and our nose were almost touching. His deep coal black orbs were full of love, compassion and desire for me. They were dark with emotions, flickering in some mischief glint and intense with deep pure love and killer with passion. I gazed dumbly to those black pools for a while and again drowned in them. The excitement saturated and spread a calm tranquil overwhelming feeling all over me. I smiled silently feeling the moment, feeling my heartbeats against him. Raghu's eyes went deeper with emotion as he observed my smile. Bending down himself more upon me, he removed our remaining distance. His lips touched my forehead placing a gentle, warm soul soothing kiss. My eyes closed again at that instant feeling the deep pure joy through my soul. He kissed my closed eyelids and started to rain my face with his quick wet kisses. My breath quickened again and mingled with his hot scorching air. While continuing his kissing bliss, he slowly removed my stiffened hands cover from my chest and pinned them to the floor. His broad bear torso pressed tightly over my bosoms choking my breath more. I started to pant loudly in vibrating nervous excitement when our uncovered form collided with each other. He moved down kissing along my jaw line, my throat and buried his face on my neck snuggling through my hairs. Kissing over my tender spot on neck, he breathed deep. The heated breath almost felt like fire and burned me. We stood silent n that position feeling the vibrating excitement through our veins, our heart. His toe caressed over my feet giving me tingling sensation a bit. Slowly he joined and mingled our feet together. I was just about to suck a deep breath when he thrust into me with his single powerful stroke. I stiffened just at the moment feeling numb with the first feeling of intensive intercourses. The violent strange wave of a rushed inside me just at the moment!! It was such a strange in describable feeling mixed which I never felt before. Something like a little burning painful pleasure it was. My heart fluttered louder and blood danced throughout my body in such a sudden violent speed. Just at some few moments later I felt his another stroke making way inside me. A loud moan escaped my mouth as I couldn't bear the pressure and pain. The burning sensation started to spread all over my body and to my surprise my nerves welcomed that paining sensation. It gave some kind of strange pleasure in me. Raghu again moved in a little more and I moaned again louder than before in the mixed feeling of pain and pleasure. Tears rolled down my chicks escaping from my closed eyelids. I felt his lips touching my chicks and kissing away my tears. I smiled in between the tears.

Raghu was utterly patient and cautious all the time not to hurt me much. With his slow pace he moved inside me deeper and deeper. With his every stroke I continued to moan and wiggle in the burning pleasing sensation. The crazy nervous excitement made me wiggle badly under his powerful corpse. His hands were pressed over my wrist tightly and squeezing them harder. His soothing kisses were like sprinkle of water over the wild mad fire spreading all over us due to our intense closeness. Although he was slow and cautious with me, that feeling was hard to take or bear easily. As he moved deeper and deeper with his every hardened stroke my throat went dry cause of his scorching heavy breath. my lungs went out of air and I panted continuously and the burning sensation was slowly spreading on my whole feature like a fire. He was so huge and powerful compared to my weak feeble strength. I could feel his iron strength as he invoking deeper. I moaned and breathed and tried to get accustomed to his hugeness, his strength and power taking over my sense.

But it was not only the pain I felt at that moment. There was something overwhelming feeling which was slowly subsiding the pain. An unknown deep pleasant feeling which was embracing my soul, taking over my senses! Slowly the overwhelming feeling dominated over my pain and my senses went numb in pleasure. He kissed along my neck bone while I moaned feebly with smile in my face, losing my everything to him, bearing his sweet torture to remark myself as his own. At last he reached to my hardened innermost core connecting each other deeply. I was already swimming in the ocean of deep pleasure forgetting everything, losing my all senses. I could feel only him everywhere and nothing else and nothing mattered to me rather than him. He left my hand and slid his arms around my waist and pulling me closer automatically invoking himself more inside me giving deep sensation.

"Ahhh!!" a pleasant deep moan escaped from my mouth as I smiled and encircled my hand around his neck scratching my fingers through his hairs, he groaned and rubbed his lips and rough stubbles against my chicks. Our joined core throbbed against each other as reached climax. The vibration sheer pleasure spread all over in our feature wildly erupting the emotional volcanic passion in us. My senses went numb as I went into most ecstatic pleasure ride I have ever been. I caressed his back with my trembling finger allover as he placed his light feather kisses all over my throat and neck. As the wave of pleasure continued to shoot from our top to bottom from vibrating joined core, my soft moans and his wild groans filled all over the room subsiding the sound of loud thunders. But the sound was stopped after some moment when raghu sealed my lips with him. Stroking gently, nibbling passionately, he depened his kiss and I responded back to him knitting my fingers on his hairs while his hands pressed tighter around my chest. His hard torso sinks totally on my softness. Sucking up my upper and bottom lips he made his way inside my mouth and drank me sweetly, thirstily, passionately. Our heartbeat throbbed together like a single heartbeat. Our body moved into perfect sink with each other and reached to the perfect ecstatic feeling. our love reached to each other soul and embraced them. My eyes welded up in happy tears again as I finally became him for eternity. It was unbelievable that he was the same man with whom I couldn't even imagine myself. I thought of him as the most irritating person of my life. but a single rainy night changed everything and that person became the ruler of my heart.

It just what people say when two people were meant to be together they will be no matter what. Even if they are far apart, destiny will do its conspiracy to get them close.

And the quite, beautiful, rhythmic raindrops were the cute cupids of our life without which we could never be together.

EK choti si barish kii boond mein pata nahin kitni sari batein, kitni sare anjaan jaddo chupa huya hota hain. Ek ajib saa nasha joo do anjan dilon koo pass bhi laa sakta hain. Yeh too sazish hain unn bondon ki!!

Kissing each other as our hands caressed upon our body, I felt him spilling inside me. I breathed heavily holding onto him and became still. Giving the deep ecstatic sensation he released his semen filling my core. I accepted and granted his love to fulfill me. Everything became calm at that moment and the excitement saturated. Only our hearts were beating as usual. I smiled widely as his love filled me, completed me as a woman.

We were unable to leave each other even for a second. Getting lost into the world of pure love we got each other for eternity. Hugging each other we rested on the floor breathing heavily to get back to our normal senses. His head was rested on my chest as his breath brushed on me.

Slowly after a long time, I opened my eyes and found him staring at me with his mesmerized eyes along with that irresistible signature smirk. I flushed remembering the precious moment as the sense of embarrassment came back to me. Covering my chest with my hand I closed my hand and squeezed my soured thigh together in a vague try to hide myself from him. I closed my eyes tight. I heard his chuckle as his fingers caressed away hairs from my face. "Abb kyun tomato ban rahi hain?!" his words heated my chick even more. I felt a light weight on me and opened my eyes to find him placing my saree covering me up. I smiled gently and covered up to my chest pulling the saree. He again leaned on me keeping intact that smirk on his face. I lowered my shy gaze from him. "Abhi too bas suruwat thi antara... Abhi too akha life tere sath jeena hain... tere see pyar karna hain.. iss sey bhi kahin aur zyada!" his intense words fluttered my heart. "Par kya tu har roz aise hii laal pila hoti rahegi? Tab too mere koo tomato kaa dukan dena parega!!" he teased and I literally wanted to hide myself out of embarrassment. He chuckled again and rolled over the floor leaving me. he lay at my side. I opened my eyes and met his gaze which was fixed to me. we smiled towards each other as we heard the drizzling sound hitting the rooftop. Our hands reached for each other and entwined their fingers.

"Antara... Mere koo kuch chahiye!!" he asked all of a sudden.

"Kya?!!" I asked with a bit confused voice.

Raghu's eyes went dark with emotion. Slowly he spoke with husky voice. "Tune kabhi mere koo woo nahin kahan joo apun humesha see sun naa chahta tha tere se. Jab see tujh se mila hoon tab see tarap raha hoon sun nee kee liye. Kya aaj tu mere see woo kahegi?!" he asked urgently and I instantly understood what he wanted to say. I get close to him and hid my face on his broad chest. he wrapped his hand around me. I placed my hand upon his heart feeling its frantic beat. With my trembling lips I placed a small kiss on his chest and he sighed, his heart panged against my hand.

"I love you... Raghu!!" I said slowly as my heart melted with the words.

Raghu sighed again and embraced me tighter, closer to his chest hiding me from the world as if I was like him precious possession, his and only his... Raghu's antara. I wrapped the saree around us as the weather was chilling out due to drizzling rain. As the rain poured harder, closing my eyes I thanked those drops who gifted me the most precious thing in my life... My love...My everything... My raghu!

We got lost in our own world, listening to the drizzling sound... and let the rain of pure love shower upon us for eternity.

~The End~

so here comes the end of this OS... LOL sanju baba... ab bhugto... 😆...Hum nanni munni bachi oo koo bigar kee aap nee humari raton ki nind chin lii hain...... too yee tha mera pyara saa sweet sa revenge!! Just kidding😆 i know i am nothing compared to u in case of romantic updates... u are the ultimate queen of romance all around... aur mera kya yaar.. i am the biggest unromantic person all around aur likhne chali romantic update🤢... pata nahin kya bharta banaya hain... par joo bhi hain, aap kee liye hain aur DIL SE diya huya tofa kabhi zaya nahin jata... LOL.. pata nahin kya kahe rahi hoon...😆... chalo me going... warna abb sachmein sab mujhe chappal se marne lagengay...

and lastly...

Have a great great b'day ahead!!🤗


Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayy guess what?
I READ THE UPDATE!!!!!
FINALLY
i am redd right now!!
seriously this was like the most romantic update ever
i have read nothing like this before
the pure love, desires omg u just blew me away ri
i had literally stopped breathing with each and ever word
the intensity of this update was seriously too much to bear
rantara all alone.. away from everyone.. in each others arms hayee best thing ever
i am running out of words
the heat is still in the room
raghu intense touches, kisses and love bytes omggg..
i am shaking right now
i think you were planning to kill us with this update😆 and seriously i am sitting in burning hell right noe🤢 i cant get out of this update
urghh i cant say or type anything😳
when you wrote that bit of raindrops conspiracy..
i was crying..
it was so magical and touching
i will remember this update forever..
touched my hear
at last antara said i love you
and now rantara are complete and forever each others
you know u described antu not liking raghu at first
i always say this to everyone
a reason to cry becomes a reason to smile..
raghus intensity was over the top of me
i couldnt imagine raghu having such intensity uff toba
i am blushing soo much right
i loved this sequel soo much
these three squels are the most magically touching beautiful things in the whole forum till now
ri hats off to you got writing this
u are romantic yaar don't say ur not😡 daanda parega 😡 or rider ko bhi mei le jaoge😎
i wish this could go on forever and ever.. but everything ends
i will always read this
BEST ONE EVER!!!
Edited by honeybees22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ria, you were saving this for my birthday?
Omg! Another surprise for me! May kiya bolu yaar..today you guys left me stunned and speechless.
Ye Sazish Hain Boondon Ki..last part dedicated to me..okay i'm gonna cry now 😭
You have no idea what happiness you just gave me through this dedication.Wow i'm really blessed!
I had no idea you were saving this for me...how sweet ria. You touched me deeply this day. Thank you darling. I will never forget this. Coming to the update..it was fabulous as usual! 👏
You know i'm addicted to your stories and i'm never satisfied when it comes to your stories.
Dil always maangay more! Ria,to tell you the truth i always get so lost in your updates that i tend to forget my surroundings and the people around me. 😆 Rantara lovemaking was..abh may kiya bolu? I was blushing all the while. Thank God Rajeev wasnt around 😳
You described eveything so well...i loved every bit of it. Finally Rantara are together forever. 😃
I believe in happy endings and happy ever after which you just gave us. Beautiful! I enjoyed it.
As i was reading butterflies payed me a visit and i was covered in gooseflesh 😳
issey tu bharta bol rahi hai..ye bharta mujhey bahut pasand ayaa 😉
I love romancing and i love to read and write them. 😳
iss forum me sirf may romance queen nahi hun yaar..YOU ARE A QUEEN OF ROMANCE!
You have been writting for ages now..i just started. Teacher ji toh aap hai..bacchi toh may hun 😉
I was inspired by you and pampz. One day i just started writting. I was surprised myself.
thank you once again..this is the best birthday gift ever! I will cherish this as long as i live.
hugs darling. Love you sweeti.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..
Really nice..
Camkili..so cute update..
Can we have next sequel..
Barris jo bhiga de puri tarha..
Ye name rakh na..
Love u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
oye hoye riu... u updated this...
love you...🤗
Edited by Komali14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 😳

Hayeee riu ye kya kar diya...😳

Hum toh kisi aur duniya may chale gaye ye parke bahar aana muskil ho raha hai...

Tum toh romance ki rani bangaye...

Bahar cold cold barish hai aur andar hot hot romance kya combination hai...☺️

You describe antu's feeling so well ... Yesa lag tha hai khud ki feeling likha hai aur hume bhi feel kara rahi ho...

Aur kya kahu tu unromantic hoke itna intense romance deti hai...agar romantic hoti toh humara haal kya hota yaar... hamara haal behaal hota...🤢

khatam ho gaya...😭

Tumne kaha than a rider ke liye ek gaana gaye I have one song for him...😳

Kabhi jo badal barse main dekhu tujhe ankhein baar ke ...tu lage mujhe pehli barish ki duwa...😳

I just love your OS all 3 and names are real beautiful...

maine teeno os save karke rakha hai...😳

Thank u dear for such a lovely and awesome OS...😳

love you...🤗


Edited by Komali14 - 10 years ago

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