ASYA FF - Battle of Memories *Complete* Notes on Pg 90

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Awesome update
Zoya didn't remember anything. She saw a ring in her hand with A & Z. She asked him a question.
Continue soon plz
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ZoyaAsadKhan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

wow interesting :)
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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

This is an intriguing concept.

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Gisel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

*****Part 2 - Page 4
Episode 3
In the heart of the city, down a subway, the crowd was less at this late hour. A man stood there leaning against a wall occasionally looking at his watch and his phone. Where are they? They should be here by now. Why is she not picking up? Should I call her? But...it would make problems for her and they would be caught in no time. He turned to look at the marriage poster on the wall. It was the marriage of the son of the state's high esteemed minister. They still had one more day. But it was getting riskier as time passed.
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In the hall, the clock chimed 11 times.
Asad was pacing in quick steps, "Don't you remember your name?"
The girl was sitting in the sofa looking lost, "No."
"Nothing? You must remember something!"
"No! Nothing! What happened? Why am I here? Who are you? Who am I?"
Looking up at the ceiling, he said, "Allah! What a screenplay? I give up!"
She looked at him with tears, "Huh?"
He turned to look at her, who was looking more lost than him. Not knowing one's own name would be difficult to cope up with. Forgetting everything from your past. He closed his eyes. Images of Tanveer and him, laughing and enjoying came to him. One thing he wished that happened to him. Forgetting everything from his past. He opened his eyes to see her still looking at him. He bent down and, "See listen. I think you have amnesia. Memory loss. We have to find out whom you are and that too soon." and he got up.
"But...why am I here with you when you say you don't know me? Why am I wearing a bridal dress? What's my name?"
"It was an accident. You were driving your car at high-speed and you skid when you had to avoid hitting me on the road."
"So, it was you. It was because of you that I'm in this state!" getting up and pointing her finger towards him, "Call the police now!" making her way towards the door.
"Wait!" going in between her and the door, "Wait! Listen! You told me not to call the police or anyone before you passed out! You said that someone is going to kill you. You told me to save you. Interestingly you even said my name when I'm pretty sure that we haven't meet before!" He looked straight into her wide opened eyes as if he was trying to read her past, "Try..remembering..something."
The girl was at loss for words. She tried to digest the things this man had told her. Someone was going to kill her? The police were her enemy? Weirdest of all, she can't remember anything? Without herself knowing, tears started to flow down her cheeks. She felt like dying. She brought her hands to her head and closed her eyes to remember something. Something. Who were her parents? Who was she? Did she run away from her forced marriage? She opened her eyes and looked at her ring and the 'AZ' or 'ZA', whatever it was. She had thought it stood for 'Azad' but now it was obvious that it meant something else. She turned to look at the man who had supposedly saved her. She slowly went back to the sofa and sat down looking more lost.
"I think you should go sleep. Let's talk in the morning. Maybe after you wake up, you will remember something."
He lead her to the bedroom, "I'll be sleeping in the hall. If you need anything. Just call out for me." She silently nodded.
Before going out of the room, he turned to her, "It's weird that you don't remember your name but you remember your language, in these kind of situations, right?" smiling.
She gave a small smile, but this small joke wasn't enough to keep away her fear and confusion.
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It's early morning. Asad and Tanveer are jogging by the sea shore. When they came to a stop,
Tanveer enthusiastically, "Finally! My dream is coming true. I'm going to New York. Visa got cleared. Tickets ready. My dad's friend has looked into the accommodation. I'm so happy, Asad. Finally!"
Asad, "So...you are leaving the country? That's great! That's really great!" looking away with an annoyed expression.
Tanveer, "Isn't it?" sipping into her energy drink, "We should be in contact through skype and chats. Promise me."
"Yay. Why not! We'll be in contact."
"You could also come, if not your whole, you know, I love my country and I'll serve it attitude."
"Whatever it may be, Tanveer but homeland is the best."
"You shouldn't say this when you haven't been to another country. Do you know the crime rate here? And should I say about the politics and democracy? To hell with this country", annoyed.
"If that is what everyone is going to say, then who will change it?"
"You stay here and change it. Well, I can't. My flight is day after tomorrow. Be there to say goodbye."
"What? Day after tomorrow? But.."
"Ya. Any problem?" looking at him.
"No. nothing." he said, but it was evident that there was something.The clock chimed 12 times waking Asad bringing him back to the present, "Drat! Is thing going to go on for every hour?" waking up and going to the dining room for a drink.
*Squeak*
What is that sound from the bedroom? Was that girl still awake? Maybe he should check. He went to the door and was about to open it, but decided not to and turned back. Maybe it is just a mouse? But in a sudden urge, he turned again and opened the door. To his horror, he found the girl standing on the bed tying a blanket to the fan. The girl looked down at him with fear; fear of having being caught in her attempt to suicide.
(To be continued...)
Part 4 - Page 7
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Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

nice

interesting

but very confusing

hope our doubts clear with the progress of stry

plz update soon

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Amulya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

awesome update..
Zoya lost her memory...
this is really very interesting story..
so she ran away from her wedding
tanver is gng... im happy .
update asap...
pls pm me . now v r buddies..

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PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Plz continue soon.. .

Its sooo damn intresting n confusing a litl.. .

N making me hell curious.. ..

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

hay Gisel
I am new here coz I just found Ur story but I've read all 3parts on one go&I must say its Amazing.

Well I am looking forward to follow this story.
Have send U a buddy add request
will be greatfull if U add me on Ur friend list&PM me whenever U Update

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago