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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update...
Geet subdued mood as she lost the baby...no doubt a painful phase fr both...
Hope they get over it n embrace the challenges life throws...
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Posted: 10 years ago
already read and commented
thanku for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
he realized hurt her he went geet appolizes her she asked him
both are went to shopping geet blemes herself lost their baby both are feeling bad

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice but emotinal part
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg that was a very heart wrenching update.felt very sorry and sad for maneet.geet questioning herself if she did any mistake was heart breaking.hope she comes out of this pain soon.
looking forward to read more.
thx for the update and the pm dear,appreciate it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update.. both maan geet r in pain.. as they lost their baby 4 mnths back

maan is trying hard to get out this situation.. hope Geet will come out soon.. & will get some romantic.. passionate maneet moments

thnax for pm.. waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 4


Next morning, Geet found herself in the room, she was currently residing. Maan's whistling from the other side of the wall was hear able to her.

She sat up and went out ruffling her hairs. Maan too came out after a moment holding his coat on his arm. Looking fresh in a clean pressed white shirt with a red tie bind around his next, he was looking so handsome.

He smirked on finding her staring at himself and bend to kiss her forehead.

"Good morning wifey" He said with a chirpy voice.

"Good morning"

"So whats today's agenda for you?" He asked taking a seat on the high stool placed beside the counter and motioned the maid to bring the breakfast.

"Nothing decided yet...May be I will just stay home and sleep in" Geet leaned on the counter, pushing forth her one hand, that clearly showed how drowsy she still was. The maid put forward Maan's tray and left. Maan sighed at her statement and looked at her.

"Geet...I think you should go out...Do you know that your weirdo's have called me million times, Each one of them has been complaining that they missed you...that how many times they called you and you ignored them ...That how many times you left them standing after making a plan..." Geet turned her face on the other side, feeling bad in herself.

Maan's face hung seeing her self-pity but he knew, the maid was watching.

"Kathy...Please leave us for a moment"

Kathy nodded and left immediately to do the laundry.

Maan held Geet's hand in her's before he pulled her up and made her sit in his lap.

"Baby...I didn't mean you to feel responsible for anything...I just want you to understand that their are people who are living for you. Who misses you, love you for who you are. " Geet clutched his hand while she rested her head on his shoulder.

Maan's free hand ran in her hair in order to provide some soothness. He closed his eyes for a moment before speaking up.

"If our baby was a part of your body...he was a part of my heart...If you had dreams of his arrival, I had hopes...I...I don't want to share my feelings with you earlier, perfectly knowing how traumatic that incident was for you. My pain...My loss is nothing as compared to you but I doesn't mean its any less. Your parents loss their grandchild. Your friends loss a nephew or niece, they were hoping and excited to play with. You can't disappoint us now baby...We love you and want you to be happy. Can't you try to live for us once again..."

In reply, Geet just rubbed her nose in his chest and took a deep breath of his musky cologne, she so adored.

"I will try".

And that was enough for Maan.

Pulling her away, he took a good look of her fac before bending down to place a kiss pn her lips. Geet turned her face away.

"I haven't even brushed..." She explained, making him chuckle.

But before he could comment, his phone beeped, reminding him about an early morning meeting. After quickly having his breakfast, he took hold of his bag and wishing her good bye, left.

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Till next four days, Maan provided all the emotional support to her that he could. He avoided their physical interaction and focused his attention more on the verbal one.

Handing over the newly got project to his managers for the time being, he was adamant to spend more of his time with his wife, knowing that earlier, grieving alone had added nothing but more doubts in her mind. He would help her in all the ways possible this time.

On the other hand, Geet stayed home all through. One day she took out the Crib that they had bought earlier as Maan knew that near the delivery time, he would be jam packed with meetings to have a breather to enjoy this phase of parenthood. The next day while arranging their wardrobe, she found out the unfinished woolen cap, she tried to prepare by watching Youtube videos. But fate didn't allow her to finish. Each remembrance of their unborn child was making her feel more wounded.

But then, whenever she fall, she found herself in the strong arms of her husband who would wipe her tears, hold her close and let her spill out all the pain against his chest.

He would crack poor jokes to make her smile. He would cook for her, hold her up in his arms, kiss her cheek casually, just to assure her that he wasn't going anywhere. That it's her, as a whole, he loves. That it was she who is the only source of happiness in his life. That no child of them would ever make him feel that complete as she does.

She noticed that whenever she look gloomy or take out the baby thing that was wrapped up and put away by him after the abortion, his eyes will flicker with un-shed tears. She realized that how much this must have been hard on him. She never asked him before too, being involved too much in her own self. All she only noticed was his actions ignoring the emotional conflict, he must be going through.

The 5th day, Maan was called in the office for a very important meeting.

"Can't it be hold till two days?" He asked in a desperate voice. He had planned to take her out on the outskirts of the city for a small picnic. Everything was packed. All he need to do was surprise Geet with the information and take her out. He let that be a secret till the last minute cause he was sure that she would straight away reject this idea and will prefer to stay back home.

"Sorry Sir...but the labor union is making some problems and they only want to talk to you" One of his managers informed, and he knew that sorting this will definitely take time.

"Ok...tell them that I will be there in next one hour" He said, rubbing his forehead in frustration and cut the call.

As he turned he found Geet also busy on a call.

"Yes, I am coming...No...I am not going to back out" Geet was saying in the phone as wishing byes she ended the call.

"Geet...I need to go to office for atleast 2 hours" Maan explained.

"Cool...I am also going to meet my friends" She surprised her with the words.

"Oh really? That's great..." He said, moving forward to hug her. "Now that's my girl...Come on...I will drop you on my way and will pick you up later on" Geet smiled broadly for the first time after so many days and Maan adored her.

"That's so sweet..." She pecked his cheek quickly. "Let me just dress up".

While Geet was in the washroom, changing her clothes, Maan went down to his car to secure away few things he had prepared.

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She was scraping the table cloth while hearing out the chatter of her friends. They all were talking at the same time on two completely different topics. While two were discussing about a pimple and the remedies...The other two were discussing about a stalker and how one beat him with the heel of her shoe.

Geet felt amused. They all were definitely a group of weirdo's. Maan had named them right.

"Shipra...How is your Gym going on? You lose weight?" Asked Ananya cum Anu...The tomboy of the group.

"Don't ask yaar...Nothing seems to work...I have tried everything from normal diet to crash diet...From sit ups till hardcore exercises...But this love handle is so not going anywhere" Shipra replied with a sadden face. She was the first one from their group of Five to get married to her long time boyfriend, Rajesh. But after her daughter's birth, she had gained weight which was resulting in her lack of confidence.

"But Rajesh doesn't mind it...Does he?" Another friend Purvi asked in a concerned tone.

"No he doesn't...But I don't want him to feel any kind of...embarrassment because of me" Shipra's head was bent down as she said this.

All girl's mouth hanged open.

"Did he say it?" Neha, the youngest in the group asked in an accusing tone.

"No..." Shipra was at one on defense of her beloved husband. "He hasn't said this...But few things are better understood then said...I noticed that when last we went to one of his friend's house, they both were giving us weird look along with their family...Later I heard his friend's wife gossiping with her mother-in-law that how much older I look from Rajesh" A tear trickled down her eyes as she said it.

All girls were up once to provide support to their lovely friend who was once the most happiest girl.

"Shipra...Dear..don't cry...See you are beautiful...you are the most beautiful girl in our group...And Rajesh loves your inner beauty...Don't ruin what you have for someone unknown" Ananya said, soothing her arms.

"Yes...And you know...you should be proud of your body weight...Its a testimony of a beautiful creation that was made inside you and then was given life..." Geet said making all girls head turn towards her.

Shipra saw the pain that was reflecting in her eye. How just a few months back, she was ever so lively, waiting to feel the miracle in her hands that was created by her and Maan. A living breathing proof of their love. And now...

Ananya reached her first and brought her in a hug. Feeling the comfort of her friends, she broke down once again. Few things are better understand by friends than anyone.

The sensible head of the group Ananya had earlier gotten a call from Maan who strictly asked her not to touch the topic of their baby...But then, she knew...This pain has to be resolved first in order to help her friend move forward rather than suppressing it.

"Shhh...Geet..." Purvi rubbed her back. All their eyes were teary.

"It's so difficult...It's..." Geet mumbled in between her sobs..

"Calm down Geet... I know it's hard...But you have to try yaar" Neha said as all friends surrounded her in a warm hug.

"And we are their to help you..." Ananya spoke up.

"We are here to listen you"

"support you"

"Because we love you" And that famous line of their group was said in parts by all the girls, that made Geet have a chuckle.

"Oye...That's my line" Geet elbowed Neha as she said her usual part of line, that made other's smile too.

The moment was broke by the arrival of Waiter who has brought their order.

"It is so hard usually to handle a sappy Shipra...Now Geet joining her group" Purvi commented that earned her four light slaps.

"Go and freshen up..." Ananya ordered.

"Yes Mother" Both girls said with a cheeky smile, making Ananya groan at their childish antics.

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"So...How is Maan?" Purvi asked taking a bite of her salad.

"He...He is fine..." Geet replied but her toying with the food indicated something completely different.

All girls passed a look of concern before Shipra spoke up.

"How is he behaving? Did he say you something?...Umm...Blamed you"

Geet's head quickly turned up as she shook it vigorously.

"No...No...Absolutely Not...he is being very careful and supportive...Why he would do it?" Geet explained that made her friends take a sigh of relief.

"We know it...We know how much he loves you" Ananya put her hand on her's for comfort and gave a killing look to Shipra.

"Oh...I am sorry for asking this Geet" Shipra bit her lower lip as she tried to explain. "Actually, you know my cousin Suhani...Don't you?" As Geet nod, she continued.

"Last year, we got to know that she was expecting...and that too twins...We all were very happy and excited...but right in the 7th month, she started to had contractions...Braxton Kicks are common and she thought of them like that...But as the night proceeded, the pain started to get worse. She was rushed to the hospital but as it was premature, doctors couldn't save the children..." A moment of silence was filled in the air before the heard Geet "Oh my"

"Yes...We all were so shocked...Suhani went into a trauma...Her husband supported her for the first few days but then, it started to get on his nerves and he was getting agitated day by day...But after two months, he said he had enough of her cry..He blamed her for their loss and warned her that if she doesn't start to behave normally, he will kick her out..."

"What an ***" Neha spoke up her mind.

"Yeah...What the ****...First she had to bear the lose and then that stupid of a husband was blaming her" Purvi threw away the napkin on the table in anger.

"Girls...Calm down...and Shipra...all men are not like him...We know Maan...He surly can't be categorize in those fools list...He is a sensible and supportive person...If he had not, than he would have never called me before to say that I have to take care of his Baby..." Ananya's sift eyes rested on Geet who was teary eyed.

"Geet...You need to live...No all hopes are lost...You can again find happiness...you can again be a mother...You certainly can hope and pray to bring a happy and healthy child in this world...Every time is not the same time...Don't loose someone precious for something you couldn't have.." Ananya advised to which Geet nodded and hugged her friend.

"Ok...enough of this serious talk...Now hear me out..." Neha voiced up that made all of them look at her. She was so excited as she voiced out. "I am in love"
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The rest of the time was spent in light chitter chatter. The girls keep on telling about the events from the last four months. But Geet was fidgety She tried to involve herself in discussions but her mind keep on drifting towards Ananya's words and her Maan.

She realized that Maan is surly not like others. He is special. He is caring. He is her life's support. He was her's to cherish. She was desperate to run back home and hug him. Tell him a million time that she loves him and only him.

As if someone above heard her, Maan's car came into the parking lot of the open restaurant, they were dining in. Geet saw him walking in with such charms that made girls drool, but his eyes moved no where else, once they spotted her.

Smiling, she looked his way and he smiled back.

The four friends look from their friend to her husband and give a awed sigh.

"You both are so cute" Neha whispered.

"Hey weirdos" He greeted them in his usual wa only to earn slaps in reply.

"Stop calling us that...We aren't weird" Purvi whined that made Maan chuckle.

"Ok leave that...Seems like you guys took care of my wife"He put forward his hand infront of Geet who accepted it with a soft smile and got up. "Mind if I take my wife away now" He asked pulling Geet in a side hug.

"And what if we say NO" Neha argued with a cheeky smile.

"Too bad...Even then I can take her away...Do you want to see my Marriage License?" Neha scrunched her nose before smiling out wide.

"Take care" Ananya wished with a smile. Maan bend and kissed her cheek in silent thank you.

"We will brainy...Let's go" Bidding bye to everyone, the left towards the car.

As soon as the doors closed, Geet grabbed Maan's collar and pulled him close for a heated kiss.

Breaking away, she turned her face away to the other side to hide her erupting smile.

Maan was still in that trance before his hazy eyes open up and his mouth closed.

"What was that?" He questioned still wondering.

"A thank you Kiss..." Geet replied with tongue in cheek.

"Thank you? For what?" Now he was puzzled.

Geet turned and look straight into his eyes. "Thank you for loving me, for handling me with care...For all the support you gave and for not giving up on Us"

Maan moved up his hand to cup her cheek..

"I am always their for you Geet,,,,We are together in everything...And giving up on US...that is not possible in this life time" Maan pecked her cheek before he started the car and took it out on the road.

After 30 minutes, Geet noticed their way was different than their usual route to the apartment.

"Maan...Where are we going?"

Maan in reply just look at her with sparkling mischievous eyes.

"We are going on a two days picnic on the outskirts of the city"

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So guys...Here is another chap...

Unfortunately this story will have another part...as i couldn't conclude it in this...

Keep reading and give your honest opinion :)

Edited by ..oneOone.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
sooo sweet...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
love the update
finally maneet talking up and decided to move on ..
i like the way geet friends putting senses into her ..
thank u for awesome update
waiting next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful as well emotional.. Keep it up

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