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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi All

Me again 😊

Thanks again for the kind comments on the earlier posts... Here goes something I wrote after witnessing the 'hug'

Unhein zaroorat hai ek ham-dard ki
Hum toh apne hi humsafar nahin ban paaye


Aankhon pe unke ashkon ki chaadar hai
nazaron mein humaare toofan ke saaye hain

Pehne hain woh gham ka chehra be-pardah
Aur hum chilman mein zakhm chupaye baithe hain

Dhoondti hain unki aankhein ek sahaare ko
Hum apni zanjeeron ko taak rahe hain

Woh humaari aagosh mein pa rahein hain raahat
Kya hum bhi apne gham kho rahe hain...

Na unhein zaroorat hai lafzon ki, Na hum kucch bol paa rahe hain
Kya hum hum-zabaan ban rahe hain


***


PS: I chose NOT to write about him pushing her away. In my mind, that obviously didn't happen 😆
On a serious note, I wanted to capture the magical moment, not the realisation of the harsh reality 😳

All feedback welcome!


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--Sia-- thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome lucky ...Good to see you posting regularly
This is honest feedback 😳
Junoonian thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome :). You have captured their ability to share their pain without really speaking to each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Sia--

Awesome lucky ...Good to see you posting regularly

This is honest feedback😳



Thanks Sia :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoonian

Awesome :). You have captured their ability to share their pain without really speaking to each other.



Thanks for commenting :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for reading and commenting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another fabulous one. 👏 Loved it. Particularly

Unhein zaroorat hai ek ham-dard ki
Hum toh apne hi humsafar nahin ban paaye


Aankhon pe unke ashkon ki chaadar hai
nazaron mein humaare toofan ke saaye hain
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .bohemian.

Another fabulous one. 👏 Loved it. Particularly

Unhein zaroorat hai ek ham-dard ki
Hum toh apne hi humsafar nahin ban paaye


Aankhon pe unke ashkon ki chaadar hai
nazaron mein humaare toofan ke saaye hain


Thank You 😃

I had almost removed the first 2 lines 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omgg u on this forum tooo😳.
Loved the lines...just started watching humsafars...its osmm and yeah in my mind too the pushing away didnt happen😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

Omgg u on this forum tooo😳.

Loved the lines...just started watching humsafars...its osmm and yeah in my mind too the pushing away didnt happen😳


Hey 😳

yes, i watched it from the beginning, but just started writing 😊 Thanks for commenting

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