Dil Chahta Hai # 2 updated part 14 on pg: 40 ON HOLD note pg 46 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

Updating tomorrow after a long time
Any one waiting?????

Of cos waiting...Fab news! cannot wait...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for this delay.But we all three were /are very busy in studies n exams and with jobs..from now onwards we will try to update more frequently.Tell us how u like this update.Sorry for any mistakes we are new in this writing world😳.And we will be really greatfull to you friends who will like to have pm from me can u plz mention it so we can add u for pms ...
Story So Far
Geet and Maan's sister Sia are best friends.Geet also wins heart of Maan's dadu and dadima with her nature.Geet's and her childhood friend Veer's parents fixed their marriage.And now Geet run away from her home on her own marriage day and met with Maan on the way.Now lets see what will happen next...
Edited by goldenmoon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


part 11

At Police station

Geet murmurs :Babaji!Aaj aap khush to bohut honge hainn!!
Inspector :Naam kya hai tum logo ka?
Geet murmurs
if I tell my sir name main to pakka phasungi.Ab main kya karu?
Geet :Geet
And at the same time Maan also says his name in his ususal attitude,
Maan :Maan Singh Khuranna.
Geet murmurs
He is standing in police station and there is no decrement in his attitude!Dust Danav!!
Maan: Did u just said something ?
Geet :What?Can't you just mind your own business?
Maan :Are you crazy!Actually no you are not crazy you are a brainless person!!
Geet shocked with his words.
Geet:Am brainless!!You mental psychco, nonsense ,idiot , dust danav she screamed.
Maan baffled with these words: YOU!!!
Inspector : Stop it !I know husband and wife fights like tom and jerry sometimes that doesn't mean that you will start fighting in police station.
Geet :Who said I m his wife?
Then Geet thinks oh may be I can fool inspector with this misunderstanding and will be able to go from here and grin to herself.
Maan growled angrily :What the hell!! she and my wife?Have you seen her face?
Geet :Oh Mr. what is wrong with my face?I know I am more beautiful than katrine kaif.
Maan :Ha ha what a joke n smirked evily at her.
Geet:You idiot.
Maan angrily:Stay in your limits.
Geet being a nautanki started to cry.
Geet : Bhaiya!!See how he is speaking with me and always does this wiping her fake tears..dekho aaj hi hamari shaadi hui aaj hi mujhe data.
Maan too shocked to form a proper sentence.
shaadi!!!
Maan:Kaisi shaadi?? kiski shaadi?!
Geet : Hamari ( faking cry). See bhaiya now he is not ready to accept our marriage also!
Maan alligated :Inspector!!She is lying.
Geet :See bhaiya again he is saying that we are not married.And started to weep.
Maan baffled:What are you saying!!Why are you doing this drama?Why you become star plus from star one!!
Geet continue with her drama as Maan didn't said anything just now.
Geet :We have arrange marriage.But how can you say that we are not married!
maan growled at her :Stop your nonsense at once.
Geet :See bhaiya!!He is so angry, he is not interested in me at all and starts her weeping again.
maan snapped :Chup bilkul chup!!!
Inspector :Stop it Mr. You made your wife cry!!I'll have my eyes on you sister you don't worry. I'll come to check every month whether he is taking proper care of you or not.
Inspector to Maan :Watch it jiju.
Maan attempt to argue for last time :But she is lying..
Inspector cut his words :Now you both can go and you take care of my sister.
Maan and geet leave police station with two different emotions.Geet is in very good mood and maan is in very angry and annoyed mood.

Singhania haveli

Anupam and kiran are very happy and doing the preparations of barat.Kiran went to veer's room to see how his preparations going on and find him shedding tears and he is writing something in his diary.
Kiran panicked seeing her son crying.
She asked in concerned :Veer!! what happened ?Why are you crying?Whats wrong?
Veer tried to hide his tears and faked a smile :Nothing mom.Who said am sad?
Kiran in her motherly tone :Don't lie veer am your mom..Tell me what happened?Are you not happy with this marriage?
Veer :Mom now whats the use to talk about this marriage?
Kiran :You don't love geet.
And its not a question.
Veer sadly :No mom I like someone else.
Kiran :Then why don't you told this earlier?
Veer :You all were so happy and I didn't have courage to snach the smile by telling this.
Kiran :Veer your happiness means worlds to us beta.Don't ever think we will be happy if our son is sad.
Veer emotionally : MOM and hugs her.
Kiran :I don't want my son to compromise because of us.And Geet will be unhappy to with this relation and we never wanted our children's compromised live.But how will we break this news to Handa's?
Veer hasitatingly :Umm Mom even geet doesn't love me.
Kiran : Then why this silence?You both should have told us earlier.Now let me talk to your dad because there is nothing more valuable to us than your happiness.
Veer : I love you mom.
Kiran : Love you too beta.
kiran went down to talk to anupam and to call off this marriage.
Handa haveli

Meera went in geet's room to see her and started to panic not finding her there.She calls rishab in geet's room and give the letter which Geet left for them.In letter Geet wrote
"Mom,dad I don't want to marry Veer so i'm going."
After reading this both feared for Geet and also become worried that what will they say to Singhaniya's.Another side they are happy that they didn't made this marriage a big affair only family as they wanted to do it officially after Geet completed her study.
Outside Police station

Maan is seething in anger with all this drama.
Maan :What was that?
Geet give a nervus laugh and fainged innocence :I am not able to understand what are you saying?
Maan snarled at her :What was that marriage and all?
Geet stammered seeing Maan's anger n said :Wo..Wo..actually I was afraid. And started crying.
Maan pushed back his hair and tries to control his anger and said :I don't want to see you again in my life.
Both went to different direction.Maan leaves from there in his car and Geet is also leaves from there trying to catch a auto and starts walking but suddenly a car stops infront of her.

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Edited by Donnaa - 9 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

last update kya 😲


nahi praff abhi to puri kahani baki hai 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
so Geet's line clear...
and she already became GMSK!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
ayele sorry mein story line hi bhool gyeee
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Posted: 10 years ago
yad agaya
awesome wow
geet tottal nutanki
i love her
maan na maan tu mere jija heheheheh
mein tera sala lol
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

ayele sorry mein story line hi bhool gyeee





me too... don't...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally u updated after Sooo long... pm me next tym pplz n yeah PlzzZ continue sooOn eagerly w8ing...!!!!

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