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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1: Rasam #1

"Zain beta chalo ab Aaliya ko apni god mei uthao aur upar tak lekar jao. Hum baaki ki rasme waha krenge. Chalo jaldi kro!" Osman told Zain. Zain looked at Aaliya and picked her up in his arms. They were lost in each other's eyes.

"Ahem ahem." Aayat interuppted. "Jiju, aage bhi badna hai!" Everyone laughed. Zain slowly proceeded further. Aaliya looked at him intently. Zain took her to the room.

~In Room~

"Waise abhi baaki rasmo mei wakt hai. Tab tak kuch esa kr le jisse ki Dad ko good news thodi jaldi mil jaaye?" Zain said locking the door from inside.

"Besharam kitne ho tum Zain? Bahar Aayat aur Maa hai. Agar kisi ne sun lia toh?" Aaliya said.

"Arre Malika-E-Zain? Yeh tu kaisi baatein kr rhi ho? Ab hum shaadi shuda hai. Esi baatein chalti hai. Samjha kro!" Zain said moving closer to her. He slowly removed all the hair from one side and was abt to kiss when Aayat interrupted.

"APPPIII JIJJUUU. Rasmo ke liye neeche aa jaye. Jaldi! Maami aur maamu wait kr rhe hai. Jaldi aaye na!" Aayat shouted. Zain hit his head with his hand. Aaliya giggled at his cuteness.

"Haan tu chal Aayat. Hum aa rhe hai." Aaliya shouted back. Zain looked at her. "Chaliye Shauhar Sahb, bulava aaya hai."

"Chaliye Begum Sahiba." Both smiled and held hands as they walked down the stairs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's very cute...plz continue soon.
thanx 4 updating without letting me waiting.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
Beautiful start tanu.
Zain is so despo 😆
waiting for the nxt .
Thnx for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First chapter awesome...
Beautiful...
Lovely...
Donno despo...
continue soon...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dude...
It's like a refreshing start...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome tanu di
Fab
Totally loved it
Please jaldi continue kijiye I can't wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting...
cont soon😛
n thnks for pm ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute update 😳
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterfly20

It's very cute...plz continue soon.

thanx 4 updating without letting me waiting.😆


Thank u so much!

P.S.- Love Ur Signature.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

First chapter awesome...
Beautiful...
Lovely...
Donno despo...
continue soon...
Thanks for the pm..


Thank u so much Priya!
And ur welcome wid the pm.
Will surely if I get enough comments.

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