MaNan OS: SCATTERED EMOTIONS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

awesome dear...loved it...u r superb !!!

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: InvisibleSmile
Wonderful! It's great to read something so uplifting after the catastrophic week we've had. I can definitely imagine this happening in the show. However before this happens...I want to see a pining Manik and of course a cold shoulder from Nandini. 😆

You write beautifully.

A catastrophic week indeed😆

moi agrees 100%

especially Nandini giving him a cold shoulder. He will surely go crazy lol

Thank you so much! 😃

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: amzikhan
You are an awesome writer. For once I just imagined the whole situation...and tears streamed down my cheeks on the part where nandu questions manik about all what he did for dhruv. I so so wish that something like this happens. But not soon. I want to see their romantic encounters again. I mean I want to see the extreme pain, sudden romance, a little drama, comedy and masala. As long as we get a Manan scene I am just hooked to the current track. In fact I am loving it...If everything would have been all good good. The chemistry, charm might vanish. ...I love the monster turned peaceful manik and peaceful turned angry nandu.

Anyways please write more I would love to read more if the OS.

Toodles

Oh my thank you so much! You just made my day with your comment *hugs*

The best thing a writer wants to hear is how the reader can picture the scene and feel the character's emotion. I'm so glad you could feel it not that I made you cry 😆

And yes to all what you said! I second you on that😳

thanks again buddy :D

inshallah I will continue to write

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
Lovely OS.. I loved how u wrote about Chachi just shows how much she loves Nandini.. I am glad that at least here Nandini came to know everything quite quickly which I am not expecting in the show maybe I still have some patience for a little more angst there😆
Loved reading ur OS 😳

Thank You!

I actually would have loved to see Chachi's reaction in the show when she finds out someone had hurt her Nandu like that. Chachi turning into monster Manik mode😆

I'm sure it would have been a lovely scene to watch.

All of us are suckers for angst right here😆

Thanks dear!

glad u did😳