MaNan OS: SCATTERED EMOTIONS

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SCATTERED EMOTIONS
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"The winner of Musicana 2014 is ... FAB5!" The screams and whistles invaded the room as the announcement was made. All of the fab5 members gathered into a group hug celebrating their victory.
"We did guys we did it! I knew we could it!" Mukti screamed out to them, the happiness so visible in her eyes.
Manik's lips curved into a smile trying to portray the happiest face he could ever make. Oh how tortures it was to press on all those muscles and get them to form that empty smile. His eyes searched through the massive crowd hoping to get a glimpse of her. Hoping to get a glimpse of her moon like face, a glimpse of those lively eyes, but they weren't lively anymore it struck him. They were filled with tears because of HIM, filled with regret, sorrow and disgust. He closed his eyes trying to hold those tears from making their way to his cheek. No he wasn't going to cry here. He wasn't going to spoil it now. He lost his Nandu already and he wasn't planning on losing his friends too.
"Manik!" Mukti pressed her hand on his shoulder breaking the chain of his thoughts.
He quickly put that fake smile back and turned to face her. Following the direction of her eyes he noticed what she was looking at. Their trophy was here waiting to be lifted by his hands. Moving his almost numbed legs, he made his direction towards the trophy as the members of his group followed him with excitement. Circling his hands around the trophy he lifted it up high as the cheers and screams continued to fill the place.
I'm supposed to be a winner right now?? He couldn't help it but laugh at the mockery of his fate. He was supposed to be a WINNER when he is actually the biggest LOSER in this world. He lost his star, his love, his heart, and the mere reason for his existence and here he was lifting a trophy.
"Even if you win Musicana na you won't win."
Her words played in his mind as he looked at the trophy in his hand. She was right, he DIDN'T win.
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Nandini closed the door shut as she collapsed into the cold floor. The tears streamed down her cheeks nonstop. A blank expression captivated her face as the flashbacks of Manik's words echoed in her ears.

"Mission Nandini Murthy accomplished."

"Mission Nandini Murthy accomplished."

"Mission Nandini Murthy accomplished."

She lifted her hands to her ears not wanting to hear his voice or remember his disgusting words. Why was he still haunting her why!? An anguished cry escaped her throat as she clutched on to the tip of her dress. She continued to cry uncontrollably when the door to her bedroom flung open. There stood Chachi, the color draining from her face as she stared wide-eyed at the sight in front of her. Nandini's withered body was glued to the floor as her puffy eyes stared ahead; the eyeliner smeared across her face.

"Nandu!" Chachi managed to move her feet towards her and pull her into her arms.

"Nandu. Kya hua!"

Nandini wrapped her arms tightly around her and continued to sob. "Ch..Ch.. Chachi it...it hurts," she croaked in her heart wrenched tone.

"Nandu sweetie, what hurts? mujhe batao."

Nandini slowly lifted her hand and placed it on the left side of her chest pointing to her heart. "It..It hurts right here."

The pain in her voice caused her chachi to sob along with her as she hugged her tighter and patted her hair. "Who dares to hurt my Nandu like this?!" The anger took over her as she thought to herself. She lifted her hands and wiped the tears that covered Nandu's cheeks.

Rishab's footsteps climbing the stairs caused Nandini to pull herself in surprise.

"Chachi please don't let Rishab come. I don't' want him to see me like this. I will be fine." She wiped her tears as she spoke.

"Arre but I can't leave you like this."

" Chachi I...I will be fine don't worry about me. Please"

Chachi quietly made her way towards the door and stopped.

"You will have to tell me who is that kameena."

Nandini stared at her and gave a small nod. She heard her chachi's footsteps vanishing down the stairs as she mumbled to herself. "I won't spare that bas***d."

She gathered the little strength she still had and moved towards the mirror unable to recognize her own self. She lifted her hand and wiped a tear hanging in the corner of her eye and continued to stare at herself.

"This is the Nandu you want to see Mr. Manik? I won't let you see this Nandu.I won't break down because of you no matter what. You broke my heart yes but you can never break me."

She shifted her eyes to her closet and decided that if she wanted to sleep today, she needed to face him right now. She needed say this in his face.

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Manik stood under the dark sky gazing at the stars. Why didn't they look like they were shining anymore? Maybe there were also angry at him for sacrificing his shining star. He wasn't going to blame them. Taking a deep breath, he turned around placing his hands into his pockets and stopped when he noticed Dhruv standing in front of him.

"Dhruv?" When did you come?"

"Just a minute ago." He replied with his usual quite tone.

Manik walked towards him and both pulled a chair and sat down.

In a couple of minutes, Nandini reached the Malhotra mansion and her eyes spotted Manik sitting outside, his back facing her. She moved her little feet towards his direction and stopped when she noticed him talking with someone. She tilted her head and identified him as Dhruv as she glimpsed his black cap.

"I...I don't know how to confess to Nandini that I love her." He blurted out stabbing Manik's heart once again and shocking Nandini who overheard his words as she stood hiding in the corner.

Dhruv loves me?? How did this happen? Suddenly it struck her. Is this the reason behind Manik's changed behavior? A flashback of last night flashed through her mind when Manik arrived to her house. The way he ran into her arms hugging her like he was never going to hug her again. How did she not notice something was wrong with him?? She shifted her concentration back to Manik and Dhruv's conversation.

Manik took a deep breath and managed to keep the piled pain in his heart from reaching to his face.

"Dhruv. I think you should wait a little bit."

"Wait? But why?" Dhruv's face shot a confused look.

"She...she's probably still sad over her Musicana performance. Give her some time." He dug his nails into his hand trying to stop himself from blurting out the truth.

"I think you're right."

"Ok I will wait for some time before telling her."

His cell phone rang in between cutting their conversation. Looking at the screen he noticed it was Aliya.

He grabbed his guitar and pushed his chair to get up.

"Are you leaving?"

"Yeah I have to go. I will see you tomorrow."

They gave each other a hug and Manik watched as Dhruv made his way out the door.

He paced back and forth trying to stop the battle of pain and anger that was going inside of him. He grabbed the chair in front of him and threw it angrily across the ground causing one of its legs to break. Just as he turned around he noticed Nandini standing there staring at him. Was it really her? He couldn't believe his eyes. A half a smile formed on his lips and just as he was about to walk towards her, he noticed what he was doing and quickly placed his mask again.

"Look who's here. Nandu." He moved his feet towards her direction as she stood there eyeing him with anger filling her eyes. How does he manage to hide himself behind this mask? She thought to herself.

"So Nandu, what brings you here?"

She moved her feet towards him and stopped when she was just a couple of inches away from him.

"Manik Malhotra how dare you!" She screamed into his face as her hands clutched on to his collar.

"How can you be this stupid?!"
Manik stared at her confused yet surprised by her reaction.

"You did this for Dhruv na? You put up this nasty act to distance yourself away from me because Dhruv loves me. How can you do this! How can you forget your promise to me! How can you sacrifice everything we felt for each other! How did you manage to tell me those cruel words! How can you be this selfish in deciding on my behalf! How!!!"

She hit his chest with her little arms as the tears streamed down her cheeks. Manik held on to her arms as he pulled her into a hug while she tried to push him away but failed miserably. They stayed crying in each other's arms when Manik slowly dropped himself to his knees as the tears ran from his eyes and dripped on to his shirt.

"I... I'm sorry Nandu. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you. I was actually dying every single second as I mocked our love like that. I..."

"Shhh." Nandini kneeled down beside him settling her finger onto his lips.

He cradled her face into his palm and placed his hand under her chin, as he kissed away her tears. Her heart fluttered as his wet lips made contact with her skin. She moved her arm and placed it behind his neck as their tearful eyes gazed into each other. It didn't take them long until their gaze shifted to each other's lips; yearning for that same feeling they experienced when their lips had melted together for the first time. She parted her lips slowly waiting for his lips to cover hers. Warmth took over her body as she felt those gentle lips melting into hers once again; only this time it was a more passionate and powerful kiss, taking their breath away with every second. A soft moan left their throats as they continued to kiss under the shining stars.
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Hello moi is back. 😛
this OS has actually turned different then what I had wanted it to turn out.
I started it as an angsty OS (I don't know if you can notice it) and was going to finish it that way but suddenly I had an image of jhoothas, chappals, tamatars and all kinds of things being thrown my way. So for my own safety I decided to end it with a PROPER kiss and save myself. 😆
I'm not that pleased with the outcome though.
Anyways bad, crappy, stupid, whatever you think share it in your comments. 😃
And yeah one more thing mind my grammar/spelling mistakes because as usual moi never proofreads because it's a pain in moi's booty *grins proudly*
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Jin. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome yaar.
Very well written
The angst, the chachi scene and then the ending.
However I dont this to be shown in the show soon..
Leads to thoda tadpaa tadpaakar milaana chahiye *yeah I'm a sadist*
I read many of your works.
And yes, I'm a fan of you.
This time i want to do more than just hitting like. So reserved first. *proud of myself* hehehhe.
Great job.


Love,
Tich.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really wish this would happen...
RK-ki-Kaneez thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful I hope something Iike this actually happens
Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u litrelly saved urself frm all juhas chappals n tamatars...
nice os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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FINALLY!!! u wrote an OS, after such a long time.. *breaks into a dance*🥳
👏👏

You know that I have always been a fan of ur writing so this time I don't think I have any new compliments for u phir bhi will try 😉😉

really really liked ur OS and THANK U for ending it nicely with a kiss☺️ u might not like the end product but let me tell u it came out great esp the MaNan scene.

Would love to see this scene in the show except the Manik Dhruv part as I would really want Nandini to connect the dots by herself instead of overhearing their conversation.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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reallyy a nice one!!
i really hope it happen in show soon abt the revelation!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely one shot, I loved the confrontation between Nandini and Manik lovely scene. Keep writing.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dat was really beautiful..i fnk da kind of scenes almost evry1 ov us wna see happening on da show.. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely! Definitely reflects what i want to see and hear on the show...SOON!😉

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