Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Amazing update sumi
Fabulous
Aaliya in a very sadoo mood but Zain know how to manofy her
OMG Zain just proposed to Aaliya
They are going to get married!!!
But zarur koi twist hoga I just know it
Thanks for d pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
It was awesome sumaiya...
Loved it...
Continue soon Tanya...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
wow..it was superbb!!👏👏👏👏👏
loved it so much❤️
eagerly waiting for d next part😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Amazing part...plz update soon i m waiting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Aww Zain proposed 😳
loved the update dear
beautifully written
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Loved and enjoyed reading this update
The update is perfect
The proposal style was awesome
Continue soon plzzz
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
NOTE: Hi all! Sumi, I saw ur pm aftr so many days. Just heard about the dreadful heart-wrenching news, BI is gonna be- Our BI. But guys, I take a pledge that I will keep writing on ZaYa even after show ends. I love you ZaYa! Will definitely miss you. Lots of love from all die hard fans.

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Aaliya's Room

"Bhooo!" Aaliya screamed and sat up. She tightly closed her eyes until she felt a familliar hand on her waist. Zain! She slowly opened her eyes. "Dara diya mujhe Zain! Apki baar kiya na esa aage se toh dekh lena." Aaliya said pulling back her waist from his clutches. "Kyu? Kya kr logi?" Zain said leaning closer to him. To his surprise Aaliya hugged him suddenly. "I love you too much Zain. Mei tumhare bina apni zindagi nhi soch skti. Pls mjhpe hamesha vishwas rkhna." Aaliya said, crying. Zain felt his t-shirt go wet. He hugged her back tighter. "Kya hua hai MEZ? Kya kisine kuch kaha tumhe? Aisha se ladai hui? Bolo na kuch." Zain replied. "Zain- I-" "Bolo MEZ" "Zain mei- Mei- Zain Mom Dad ne meri shaadi teh kr di hai. London se ek investment banker hai. Zeeshan Ahmed." Zain broke down. The thought that tomorrow someone else will be holding Aaliya, it frightens. But he has to stay strong. For Aaliya. "Toh? Ladka pasand aa gya? Mera vishwas thod diya tumne MEZ! Mei pyaar krta hu tumse!" Zain joked. "Mazak ka vakt nhi hai Zain! Mei nikaah teh ho gya hai. Woh bhi usa ghonchu Zeeshan Ahmed. Bachpan mei na humare ghar aaya krta tha. Chep mere peeche padha rehta tha. Gadha!" "Ab kya kiya jaay Ms? Chalo ek aur hug dedo phir sochte hai kua krna hai..."

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-Tanu & Sumi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Nice update 👏
Yay me first 🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Really nyc update sumaiya plzzz update the next part asap ... thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Wow u surprised me with this one
Confession,confrontation and proposal in one chapter..and she said yes
This gets better and better
Loved it
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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