Arshi FF : An Unforgettable Night LINK #2 pg 152 dt.4.2.15

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radhvi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

New Reader!!!

Read all the chapters in a go! simply superb...

Both Arnav & Khushi are not able to get over their respective past. For Arnav I feel he did not love Sheetal, he might have just felt a pull towards her. That's all. He probably noticed that Sheetal was more materialistic when he chose that simple mangalsutra rather than a expensive one!

And Khushi must have come as quite a shocker to him, quite contrast to Sheetal's nature, opinion and perspectives.

And as for Khushi's love, I feel that, her love is and was Arnav, whom she still loves. Given the fact that even she was also there with Sheetal.

I presume that Arnav was attracted to the superficial niceties of Sheetal, like her melodious voice and skin depth beauty! Not that Khushi isn't any of these, but he had first laid eyes on Sheetal and had probably not noticed Khushi. Even the reason why Khushi hates rain must be due the fact that it was on one such rainy day, Arnav had first met Shetal!! ( This is my POV,that's all.)

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mamidis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Just came across this story .. loved it .. really nice one .. There feelings are well expressed ... Thanks for writing such lovely story

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peachygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

awesome story.. loved it!

both arnav's and khushi's feelings are expressed beautifully!

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rosalineak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Very beautiful n unique ff.

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Maham Iqbal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

love the story concept dear

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Rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Teaser of chapter 6

I lowered my head further as a result some tendrils of my hair went loose and fell on my face covering it partially and saving me from his sharp gaze. I began breathing normally once again but it wasn't long as I felt his fingers move through my hair pushing them back making my face now slowly change colors and making them visible to his eyes. He stroked the edge of my hairline, from my temple, around the delicate shell of my ear to the nape of my neck. I took a sharp intake of breath that sounded loud in the silent room and closed my eyes as his finger tips stayed on my face longer than required. I could feel color rise to my cheeks and bit my lower lip hard as he tucked the hair behind my ear. His fingers brushed my jaw line and my slightly parted lips while coming down. The sensation of his fingers moving was exotic, sensual, not just physically arousing but also emotionally moving. My heart pounded loudly inside my chest.

After what seemed eons I opened my eyes slowly and looked back at him, eyes that used to be full of anger and contempt had now softened toward me. They no longer reflected hatred but a different emotion, an emotion that scared me.

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Edited by stranger2rose - 10 years ago