Blind-OS (Updated: page16)Part9 Is it THE END??

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Nandini was all shattered because she was betrayed... her heart was broken by the guy whom she trusted... despite of what her best friend used to say about the monster, nandu believed that he was her knight in the shining armor not the dragon from the dungeon.
But now she saw everything...everything that she overlooked till now. The sudden politeness, the abrupt emotions now made sense to her. The guy who used to hate her since day 1, tortured her like a slave was suddenly treating her like a princess...did it make sense???
ofcourse it did not!! Nandini realized, he did all these only for revenge!! revenge was the explanation for all those words...all those fake words.
However why it was not justifiable then?? Why was she so mesmerized by him...why her name sounded so different when it was called by him? why the sound of his laughter always used to ring in her ears...why did he used to leave the whole world behind just to make sure that she was fine and his eyes...his eyes why were they always full of love when she looked at them??
Because it was all lie a lie which was so beautifully decorated that Nandu easily got deceived by it!!
was she Blind??why couldn't she see that it was all
pretentious
Everything was fake...everything was a lie...everything...

''nandu...nandu...nanduuu''

''ha..ha..oh navya...ha bol''

''kaha khoyi hai tu??''

''kuch nahi...baas aise hi''

''aisi hi kya?? yaha akeli kyun bathi hai??''

''nahi vo saar mein dard tha aur voha itna shor hai...isiliye...''

''nandini tujhe lagta hai tui mujhse jooth bol payegi??''

''nahi main jhooth...''

''...tui jhooth hi bol rahi hai...bohut achi tarha se janti hoon main

uske bare mein soch rahi hain na??''

''main kisi k bare mein soch nahi rahi hoon''

''nandu please mujhse jhooth math bol...5 months hochukhe hai aj bhi tui uss manik k bare mein soch rahi..after everything he did...tui usi ki bare mein soch ra hi hai''

nandini was silent she was again caught by navya.

''nandini tujhe a sirf dhruv k bare mein soch na chahiye..boyfriend hai vo tera aur tujhe usi k saath rehna chahiye...dekh tere liye hi intezaar kar raha hai'''

nandini looked up...there he was wearing a white shirt with maroon jacket and black pants, standing in a corner waiting for her. Dhruv her savior her, true friend who is now her lover.
what would have she done if he was not there to support her and fix her broken heart with his love. but little did he know that her heart was broken by none other than his brother-friend, Manik.
Nandini stood up and looked at navya

'''tui sahi keh rahi hai mera vo intezaar kar raha hai aur main apne ghum k vaaje se dhruv ko dard nahi de sakti''

Dhruv turned and he saw her.
His love, his nadini
wearing a beautiful white dress with a gorgeous pearl necklace.
Didnt she just look enchanting...just like a princess from a fairytale.

it was actually a fairytale for dhruv...the only girl he loved in his life was his today. How can he forget that day when he proposed her with that ring in front of his bestfriends and she accepted. how happy he was and how pleased his friends were.

but still dhruv's heart was empty because today his bestfriend Manik is not there with him and he was not there with him since the last 5 months.

where is he? thought dhruv. But he was happy because his lady love was with him

nandini came closer and dhruv gave her his hand.

''dance?'' asked dhruv

nandini nodded. he took her by the waist and she kept her one hand on his shoulder and held the other

Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai
Surmaiye Shaam Aati
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai
Zindagi Kehlati Hai
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

The phone rang. Mukti took it out of her purse and received the call

''tui a raha hai na aaj? tui na nahi bol sakta yaar...mere life ka itna bara din hai aj meri farewell party hai...iski baad hum mile na mile kya pata...ek akhri baar milne aaja..kaal shaam ko main australia ja rahi hoon hamesha kiliye...aj tou ajaaa...please yaar atleast for the sake of fab5''

''mukti??''

''aliya...tujhe hi dhund rahi thi main''

''kyun kya hua??'

''meri abhi abhi ussse phone pe baat hyun hai...aa raha hai vo''

''5 months baad??...

Edited by MrsArnavRajput - 10 years ago

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Ramisaa thumbnail
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guys this is my first os here
what do you think should i continue?? or is it bad??
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It is so beautiful and sweet... Aww poor Nandini... Is that Manik who is coming back in the party... Wow can't wait plz-2 continue it soon ... Don't forget to PM me plz.
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It is beautiful dear! A lovely os! Call me an emotional fool, but i got tears in my eyes while reading it. U hav to continue it & pm me when u update!
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Originally posted by: TasmiaFaye

It is beautiful dear! A lovely os! Call me an emotional fool, but i got tears in my eyes while reading it. U hav to continue it & pm me when u update!



awww thank you so much..it means alot to me 😊


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Originally posted by: MrsArnavRajput

guys this is my first os here
what do you think should i continue?? or is it bad??

plz continue it..plzzz
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Originally posted by: nadiafarjana

Awesome os

please continue



i am glad you people liked it 😊
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Plz continue yaar! I want to read more of this!
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Blind (part-2)

'Will you be my grilfriend, nandini?''
nandini watched the guy whom she considered her friend has actually fallen for her and now there he was kneeling down infront of her while the whole collage watched as audience. The shy, sweet guy who hardly used to talk to anyone today gathered the courage to bring out his heart not only infront of the lady he loved but the entire collage.
Nandini was speechless couldn't say a thing and then she looked up... the monster was standing at the end of the hall, standing on one leg, leaning against wall with hands in pockets, talking with cabir. Manik Malhotra the evil, the monster who broke her heart to such an extreme.. that she lost the ability to sing on one of the most important night of her life...mausicana. The devil looked at them, how his shy innocent bestfriend was proposing her. His face looked faded. Why?? Is he surprised to see that how important nandini is for his bestfriend? She thought. He then looked at her and gave a mocking smirk as if he knew nandini was about to say that its not possible for her.. that has already loved someone else... but could she do it?
"you wont say yes right??how can you say yes ...tum tou ek bechari si ladki ho jo abhi bhi mere pyaar mein ho...hai na nandini morthy?? You wont say yes to dhruv you wont you...

...YES!!! said nandini.

And she looked around...no that was just a delusion where manik malhotra was mocking her saying all those words but her word was not a delusion the damage was done ...she has said YES to dhruv infront of the whole collage and now she cant step back. Dhruv's face lit up iimmidiately it was as if he has won the world. He stood and hugged her. But she didn't hug him because she was busy staring at the guy standing at the end of the hall who turned away and got out of the door which was just behind him.
he went away...

...and now its been 5 months that was the last time she saw him but was that last time she thought about him??e was still there with her she was always thinking about him...always...

'nandini??''

'hmm'

'tum ne kuch suna maine kya kaha??'

'umm nahi dhruv sorry, kya kehre the tum?''

'no its ok, main bass aise hi bol raha tha''

'hmm''

'Its been 5 months she said yes but did that yes actually meant anything to her?
why can't I understand nandini why I still see emptiness in her ?? why don't I see love in her eyes, love that is for me'' Thought dhruv

Dhruv was right. There was no love in her eyes for dhruv because she had already given her all love to someone else. Nandini could never love dhruv , he was the perfect one for her but unfortunately Dhruv is not what she needs. Dhruv was always there to support her,to care for her ..he even respected the fact that nandini wanted time to accept him...he did everything but still she couldn't love him and still today she can't.

'Ageya tu?? Finally''''

Mukti was overjoyed to see her buddy her YAAR after so many days. She hugged him tightly and when she let go of him he looked at her with the naive eyes and smiled. His eyes still showed the pain that he had to go through for his love.

'Chaal main tujhe sabse milati hoon''

Mukti took his hand and dragged him towards Aliya.

'Aliya dekh kaun aya hain''

'Cabirr!!!'''

Aliya was delighted to see her friend Cabir. Cabir the boy who just like her lost his love 5 months back after that cursed night, musicana. And she could still see that he could not overcome that trauma of loosing raghav, forever.

'tui thik hai na?? kaha hai ajhkal??''

'hai aliya main bil kul thik hoon'' lied Cabir "'Ek music company kiliye kaam kar raha hoon''

'Oh that's nice cabir''

Cabir knew Aliya wanted to ask about her ex-boyfriend but he kind of ignored her because he didn't wanted to tell her about him.

'Ummm dhruv I need to go to the washroom'' said nandini

'yeah sure''

Nandini moved out from Dhruv. She felt abit relieved she always felt that when she moved away from dhruv because being with him made her realise that she cane never make him happy and worse love him.

Saari ki saari duniya bhula ke
Main tto tere naal nachna
Baby you're so sexy!

Boy you could be my one and only
Main toh tere naal nachna
Then I see you lookin' on me
Aaja baat kar le dil ki
Hone lagenge afsaane

You know it so sing it
Now do your hands up and say
Disco Deewane
Aahaan ahaan


Nandini kept staring at the mirror. 'For once come and say that you actually loved me,
the kiss those words actually meant something to you.'' She closed her eyes and the tears rolled down she could still see him, feel him. But as soon as she opened her eyes she saw the reality
He was not there.



Khel jaa raaton ka khel ye thodi der
Jhoom jaa baahon mein tu aake ab thodi der
Nazron mein hi (ahaan) tujhko samjha dunga (aahaan)
Raat baaqi hai saari hosh uda de bas thodi der

Dance like a deewaana tonight
Move like a mastana tonight
Party like a parwana tonight
Jo kehna hai keh de
Ddd D I S C O
When everybody knows where we wanna go
Hote-hote hote hain mil jaate hain bahaane

You know it so sing it
Now go your hands up and say
Disco Diwane
Aahaan ahaan



The iced smoke filled the room. Red,blue,green,yellow all the colors danced along the room making the
dark room look colourful. There were people everywhere but amid the crowd nandini was alone, abandoned, she was feeling so suffocated and annoyed.

"I can't be here anymore, I need to leave''

She felt so wounded that she even forgot to find dhruv and inform him once before leaving.

She turned and walked fast to move away from the crowd.
Suddenly she bumped into something.

Ishq wala love...

But she realized it was SOMEONE..that touch, she knew that touch she has felt this touch before.
Nandini Moorthy was shivering

she slowly started to turn...it was all coming back...

Ishq wala love...


The fights...

The locked room...
Ishq wala love...
The shower...
Watching the stars together...
His laughter...
Ishq wala love...
The Kiss...

She looked up...

She kept staring at him and automatically her eyes got filled with tears
Surkh wala
The guy she hated the most but still wished to be with the most was standing infront of her.
After so many days...it was him...
Faiz wala love
She lost her balance and was about to fall...
Ishq wala love...
When he held her...
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love


He Held her hand...held her waist...he was so close she could feel his breath
It was him...he was back
MANIK MALHOTRA WAS BACK!
Ishq wala love...


Edited by MrsArnavRajput - 10 years ago
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Oh great update... Aww Nandini still loves Manik... Yee Manik is there ... Can't wait for next part plz plz update it soon:)

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