short piece of mind...vinnie's word

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vinnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

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its like anythng

its like evrything

it has nthng

it has smthng

being with uh

its pure

its impure

its angelic

its devilish

our friendship

it grows with time

it sets with time

it goes up

it comes down

like heartbeat

be with me in my hardship

coz baby when uh go

i feel so low

nah baby dont leave my hand

just be with me where ever i stand

dont leave my mind dont leave my heart

if u go i wont be able to start

coz baby uh mean a lot

so dont go away breaking my heart

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Posted: 10 years ago

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This is beautiful.

Seriously. One of the best pieces of poems I've read. 😃

Please keep writing more of these. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shan_aya
This is beautiful.
Seriously. One of the best pieces of poems I've read. 😃
Please keep writing more of these. 😊

thankyou so much...i never thought anyone would like this...
anyways thanks again...:)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Its really sweet 😳[/QUOTE

thankyou...but not as sweet as ur works are...:)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: princess_tara
awww it was really sweet

thankyou so much...:)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#6

Originally posted by: khyati2000
its nice dude...

good to knw that u liked it...thankyou...:)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: premlata
Aww cute

thankyou...;)
good to knw u liked it...

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