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Hieee forumwales...đđ
this is my firstever post and firstever scribbling..
i have got inspired to write tis one by many os/ss/ts written by our very own forumwales... im a big fan of sum oses... and a fan of writings by vidya.anand , ekpehli ... etc etc... i dnt remem many of their usernames actually...
Here is my story about Ishra... my one n only fav characters.. im nt a big tele fam though.. buty tis particular show i got to knw frm my fellow hostelrs n now im a die hard fan of these two... especially fr their acting skills... my very first shw ... i was actually luking forward to tis mani track but the way they abruptly fastracked it wid anothr track... im sumwat feeling void so tis is the outcome of tat... but still i do enjy their romance in last three epis... mast hai...
P.S : english scripts but hindi , punjabi n tamil used... so i hope you are able to follow..
Part 1: Mrs.bhalla notices Raman and Ishita fr past two days aftr tat ni8 , they were not evn eyeing each other leave alone talking.. now, she thought of talking to raman about d same.. He is in is room... Mrs.Bhalla finds him sobbing hardly... she goes inside the room... sits beside him.. and start stroking his hairs.. he eventually rests his head in her lap to find some peace.
"Maa , Mere hi saath aise kyun hota hai... hamesha sab mujhe hi chod ke kyun chale jaten hain... jab bhi main kisi se pyaar karta hoon, chahta hoon ki unke saath main apni puri zindagi bitaun... apnaa maann ne lagta hoon.. wph insaan mujhe yun akele chod ke chale kyun jata hai... maaa... mein kya itna bura insaan hoon... yaa mujhe pyaar karna nahi aata..., kya kami hai maa mere pyaar main... jo mere pyaar ko kabhi smjh nahi sktaa... "
he was sobbing/ crying uncontrobally ...
"Puttar , ki hoya tainu... naa mere bachche yun nahi rote... mainu pata hai puttar tere aur ishita ke beech kuch tekh nahi hai... mainu eh nahi pta ki ki hoya... par beta jo bhi ho... ishita bohot smjhdar h puttar, tainu bohot achese janti hai puttar... joo bhi hai puttar tu ishita ko smjhayega woh smjhayegi..itnisi baat aur tu itna aansoo baha rha h... ishita dekhegi .. kaise lagega usse bata... ishita bohot achchi h puttar... usse sab mein achaayi hi nazar aati h... woh naa smjh hai burayon se... woh ladna jaroor janti h.. par kiske liye ladna yeh nahi janti puttar..."
Raman cries evn more now.. listening to his mom saying abt ishita who is so naive by nature and he did such stupidity wid her...
"Naaa... meraaa bachchaaa.. aise nahi rote... puttar sab tekh hojayegaaa... kal tak mainu bhi eh nahi smjh main aayi ki kya baat hain... par ab mainu aise lag rha h... main ek gal smjh gayi... tum dono ek dusre se baat nahi krte ho... baat karo ek dono se... baat karne se har ek problem ki hal nikl aati h.." , " Maaa... " , " Naa betaaa mat roo yun..." , " Maaa... woh mujhse baat nahi karegi...maine uske saath bohot bura bhartav kiya hai,... janvaron jaise pesh aayaa hoon... bat saluki ki maine... woh bhi ishitaa ke saath... mere gujre hue kal ne mujhe aise tes pohocha diya ki main kudh ko sach se door kardiya... sach se muh mod liya... maine galti kardi nahi isse gunah kehte hen maa... main yeh sab nahi krna chhta tha... par maaa.. main... ishita ke bhi nazron mein gir gya... mainnn... maaa..."
starts crying all over again and tis tym he isnt able to control.. seeing tis..evn Mrs.bhalla starts crying...
"Naaa.. betaa.. ayinj kar puttar.. tu baat kariyo usse... yun roo mat... dekhaa nahi jaa rha hain raman.. mere chaar bachche hen... choron ki zindagi mein ek tu hi toh tha jis ki zindagi sawar gayi thi ishita ke aana se ... yeh ki hogaya... hey matarani mere bachon nu smbhal le... puttar sun roo mat main baat karti hoon ishita se... naaa puttar main ishita ko bhejti hoon tu baat kar usse... usse pehle apna rona dhona band kar... kuch nahi hua... main hoon... "
"Maaa... ishita mujhse baat nahi karegi... maaa woh mujhe chodke chale jayegi toh usse kehna ki woh ruhi ko bhi apne saath leke chale jaye... meri beti mujhpar gayi h... woh bhi ishita ke bagair nahi reh skti... aur naa hi ishita uske bagair reh payegi... maaa ishita ko yeh jaroor bolna ki main usse bohot pyaar karta hoon... is duniya main sabse jyada kareeb use manta hoon... main usse khud se bhi jyada pyaar karta hoon maaa..."
Raman faints saying this.. and Mrs.bhalla becomes worried and starts call all of thm... to seek their attention..
"Puttar... tainu ki hoyaa???? ... idhr dekh... maa ko aise ghabra rha hai... bhalllajiii... bhalllajiii sunooo... bhallajiii... itte chetti aao... simmiii... roomiii jaldi aaao... "
"arey toshi ji ki hoya kyun awaz de rhi ho... ki hoya raman nu...??? arey romiii... khota kahan h... jaldi doctor ko phone laga..."
"mummyjiii... bhai ko kya hua?? ... "simmi tu chetti paaniii la... romiii tu ambulance bula..." ,"ji muummyyjiii "
"Toshiji ki hoya... tussi tand rakho... kuch nahi hogaa... romiii kya ambulance kab ayega... jaldi aane bol... " , " ji papaji.." , " bhallajiii... raman roo rha tha toh main aake dekhi... pta nahi ishita aur iske beech kya hogayi woh bhi subhai se muh fula ke baithi h.. aur yeh bhi... woh udhr uske maike main roo rhi h.. aur yeh idhr apne kamre mein... main idhr aayi ise dant ne ke liye... ki woh ishita ko kyun rula rha h... par bhyallaji... raman nu ei haal mein dekh mera dil bait gya... mera kaleja fat rha h..." , " Kya toshiji... raman ko kyaa hua... yeh dono ke beech kya hua... batao...?? " ," mainu nahi pta... ishita se hi puchna payega... " , " papajiii, mummyyyji... ambulance aagayi h..." ," strecher kitte hai... jaldi... " ," romi bhabhi ko bata..." , " nai bhallaji... woh usse mat batao... woh bohot darr jayegi... pehle se inke beech... " ," toshiji... ki gal kar rhe ho tussi... ishita raman ki biwi k.. haq banta h usko... " ," papaji... ab aap mummyji pe naa badko... tekh keh rhi h.. bhai ko aspatal le jana jaroori h... mummyjiii... tussi jaldi chalo... romiii tu papaji ke saaath aa jaa bhai ke car mein..."
Ambulance leaves the building premises... Romi and Bhallaji are there in raman's car..they are on d way...
"papaaajiii.. mainu lagda h..ki hum logon ne bhabhi se yeh baat chupa kar achcha nahi kitta... unka pehla haq banta h yeh janneka ki raman bhai tekh h ya nahi... bhabhi bhai ke liye hamesha sab kuch krti h... papajiii bhabhi ko batane dijiye plsss... bechari bhabhi insab se be kabhr h... plss..."
"kya baat h bhabhi pe bohot pyaar aa rha h... par tu sahi keh rha h... bhabhi ko bta de... toshiji se main baat karlunga... tu call kar aur bta..."
Romi calls bala and says they are on d way to hospital and tat raman is been taken to hospital as he got fainted... not to bother bhabhi but get her thr...
one hour back... @iyer's house...
same as raman ... evn ishita is crying/sobbing hardly ... wer mihika, vandu , bala and ama re present she is crying in her mothrs shoulders.
"Ishu.. enna da achu... enna ayiduthu... yen azhara??(wat happnd and why r yu crying??) " , " haan akka,, aap kyun roo rhe ho... kya hua..."
"mikku... am..mm..maaa .. mujhse.. bohot badi galti hogayi..." , " kyaa akka... kya bol rhe ho... kuch smjh mein nahi aa rha h..." ," mikkuuu... maine ... ram..a..nn... ...unki... main ... kamjori... kam..jo..ri... ban gayi hoon..."
"wat... akkka... kya bol rhe hoo... kuch nahi smjh aa rha... pls aap pehle rona dhona band karo..." , " mikku..mik..k..uuu... main unki taqat thi... par ab main hi unki kamjori ban gayi hoon... main unhe achese jante hue bhi unhe in sab mein akele chod diya... main khudgarz ban gayi... ammaaa apki beti khudgar ban gayi... -pehle jaise nahi rhi... jo sabki care karti thi smjhti thi..." , " akkkaaa... yeh sab kya bole jaa rhe ho..." , " ishu illaa... enoda ponnuku enna achu... kyaaa hogaya hai... kyun roo rhi ho... raman ko kya hua.. tumne kya kiya...??" , " ammmaa... naaa raman .. i mean i left him wen he needed me d most... " , " ayiooo... akka plsss... kch smjh nh aa rha h... aap roo mat naa... appp plsss bataon naaa kya hua akka... apko kuch kaha kya jiju ne... main unki khabar leti hoon... woh mere akka ko aise kaise rula skte hen... akkka batao naa yaar kya hua...?? "
mihika gets upset seeing her akka being d greatest soulful person , can never hurt sumone tat too raman fr sure.. but she is confused and at d same tym gussa wid her jiju... fr nt knowing her akka's greatness and goodness...
"Mikku maine galti kardi... raman ke bare mein pata tha fir bhi maine unke sat khilvad kiya... unhe main bas jelousy feel karana chahti thi... par galat smjh baite...meri galti h... sab meri galti... "
starts crying all over again... this tym mihika and amma coudnt see tat and started stroking her hair and calming her down by saying nothng happnd or nthng will happn ahead...
" Ishu... dekho.. main hoon... hum sab hai naa... sab tekh ho jayegaa... ab rona dhona band karo aur yeh batao ki kya hua... pls... hum log warna kch smjh nahi payenge..."
"Jiju...maine galti kardi hai...maine raman ko apne gujra hue kal se phir vakif kara diya... jo raman bhoolna chahte the ... jo shayad bhool chukethe mere wajah se.. maine hi unhe woh sab yaad dila di... par kaise aur kab yeh main khud nahi janti... jiju... mujhe yeh sab nahi krna chaiyye tha.. par mujhe yeh smjh nahi aa rha h ki mujhe kya nahi krna chayiiye tha... main bas unke saath ek majak kr rhi thi... woh itni badi srs issue ban jayegi mujhe nahi pta tha... main unhe bas jelousy feel karana chati thi... mujhe ab kuch smjh nahi aa rha h... jiju plsss aap Raman se baat kijiye naaa... unhe lagta hai... ki main.. aur ma...ma..man.. mani...maniii... matlab hum dono.. unhe lagta hai main unse pyaar nahi karti aur mani se... "
Starts crying all over again...
" ishu... " , " akkaaa,,,,... jiju apke bare mein.. how dare hi... matalb woh pagal h kya... mujhe ab jiju pe gussa aa rha h... ,woh apke bare mein aise kaise ... i mean... mani apka dost h..." , " chup kar mihika... Raman ki galti nahi h... meri h... smjhi..." ," akka" ," mikku"
Bala signs her not to say anything... she is vulnerable rite nw... mihika understands d same but is angry at d same tym sad...
"JIju maine kya kiya kya hua kab hua.. kaise hua... kuch smjh nahi ho rha h... raman mere aur mani ke bare mein aise soch bhi kyun rhen hai smjh nahi aa rha h... unhe aise laga bhi kaise ki main unki care nahi karti ya unse pyaar nahi karti... is duniya mein sabse jyada pyaar aur care main unki karti hoon jiju... m..a...i..n... ma...in... mainn... kya karoon..."
"Ishooo... baat karo Raman se.. sab tekh ho jayega... " ," Jiju main unhe safayi dena chahti thi... par gusse mein maine unhe dant diya... aur gussa dila diya unko... maine unhe woh sab yaad nahi dilana tha... nahi main chahti thi... sab kch galat hogaya... mujhe ab darr lag rha h... woh mujhse bhi dur chale jayenge... jiju main woh sab nahi dekh skti... mujhe par smjh nahi aa rha h... maine ya mani ne kya kiya... hum ne toh unki maddad ki h... matlab unhe bataya nahi ashok sajish kiya jaa rha tha... toh baat maine aur mani ne smbhali... par insab mein unhe kya laga... mujhe kch smjh nahi aa rha h... karva chaut wale raat se hi mujhse woh achese baat nahi kar rhe h... yaa fir dant ten hain ya kuch ajeeb taunt marte hain smjh bhi nahi aa rha tha...maine woh sab hamesha ki tarah unka moodswing man liya... kuch smjh nayi paa rhi hu..."
"Ishooo... yeh sab mujhse nahi raman se baat karo... aur yeh sab kyun hua janti ho... kyunki tum dono ek dusre se baat ki nahi krte ho... yu ppl r soulmates, life partners.. tumhare beech kisiko bolna nahi chayiyye ishu... yeh koyi ruhi shravu ka jagda nahi h jo hum log interfere karen... bachen nahi ho tum dono... insab baton mein tum dono ki galti nahi h... galti h... to halaton ki... kabhi kabhi halaten jasbaton ko jeet leti h..." , " jiju kyaa bol rhe ho... mujhe smjh nahi aa rha h... matlab" ," ishuuu... jo bhi tum khud smjhne ki koshish kar rhi ho... woh tum ek dusre se baat kr ke smjho..." , " jiju main hamesha unke saath jaise hoon waise hi thi... bas thoda bohot majak kiya par... yeh sab kya hogaya... " ," ishuuu taali ek haat se nahi bajti naa... galti dono ki hai... tum dono ek dusre se baat karo.. sab tekh hojayega... ab rona dhona band karo aur bolo raman ko ki woh tere liye kitne important h..." ," jiju par mujhse woh baat nahi karenge.. aap unse baat karo na..." ," hum sab usse baat kr skten hai ishu, par tum hi usse samjha skti ho.. aur usse smjh bhi sakti ho..."
"Bala... romi ko baat karna h tumse... " ," thanks vandu.. bolo romi... kya hua achanak yaad kiya.. kyaaa?? kab... ab kahan ho... konse... achchaa main pohochta hoon... haa haa main amma ke ghr pr hi hoon... par hume awaz toh nahi ayi.. amb..." ," bala pls bhabhi ko mat batao darr jayengi bas unhe jaldi lekr aa jao... maine hi ambulance awaz band karva diya ... bhabhi ko maa batana nahi chahti thi.. par mujhe aur papaji ko laga ki bhabhi ko pata hona chayiiyee... aap jaldi pohocho city hosp... bhaiyya ICU main h..." , " haa romi bas nikl ta hoon... take care... ishu jaldi chalo mihika tum bhi chalo... jaldi... vandu bachon ka dyan rkhna... amma aap fikar mat karo sab tekh hojayega... ishu ko raman ke hi paas le jaa rha hu.." , " jiju romi ne kya kaha... kahan h raman... kahan jaa rh h hum..." , "bas chalo tumhare raman k hi paas jaa rhen h.."
they head towards city hospital... mihika and bala are sitting in d front in ishu's car, bala has tears in his eyes, it doesnt go unnoticed by mihika.. ishu is in deep thoughts wat to say to raman or talk about wen she meets him.. not knowing wat is gonna come her way...
*end of part one*
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Part2 - Page 4
Part3 - Page 7
part4- page 10
part5- page 13
part6 - page 15
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