DANGEROUS ISHQ...updated last pt 70 on pg 99 nov 23 - Page 40

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Part - 60

Geet knows very well that Maan will come after her...

She turns back to find out whether Maan is coming or not...

Maan suddenly hides himself...

Geet gets worried not finding Maan...

Geet: ye Maan kahan chale gaye? Mujhe chodke toh nahi gaye?

Maan waits and watches her closely...

Geet also pretends not to care about Maan and she heads to her favourite ice- cream parlour...

She gets the menu card and looks into it...

As she sees the price tag she is reminded that she has not got any money as she thought it's going to be a day out with Maan...

Waitress: m'am, aap ko kya chahiye?

Geet: ek minute, I'm waiting for a friend

Geet waits hoping that Maan would come to her rescue...

After a while the waitress comes back...

Waitress: your order m'am

Now she has to leave...she pretends to have got a call from Maan...

Geet: Maan, aap kahan ho? woh, aap wahi rukho mein aathi hoon

Maan just comes: Geet, tum kisse baat kar rahi ho? mujhse?

Geet: nahi, mere pathi dev se baat kar rahi thi

Maan: toh mein kaun hoon? Tummra BF?

Geet: aap mere BF nahi ho

Geet is relieved seeing Maan back...

Maan: BF nahi?

Geet: BF hothe toh GF ko aaise akhele chodke nahi jaathe

Waitress smiles seeing their bikering and leaves them alone...

Geet: dekha, woh bhi chali gayi, ab mera ice-cream kaun layega?

Maan: tum wait karo, mein lekhe aatha hoon

Maan gets her favourite Pista kulfi...

Maan expects her to share it with him but Geet is too hugry to share, Maan had to get his own chocolate mousse...

He is ready to share it with Geet...

After shopping they go back to the apartment in the evening...

Maan parks the car and comes only to find that Geet has gone to see her friends...

Maan wanted to take her home with himself...

But Geet wanted to show the things she bought to everyone...

Maan doesn't want to disturb her...

He reaches his apartment and goes to take some rest...

Someone knocks...

Maan attends the door and it's Geet...

Maan is very happy...he just pulls her in immediately and locks the door...

Maan: mujhe patha tha ki tum aaogi

Geet: kya? Maan, aap galat sochthe ho, mein toh isse yahan rakhne aayi thi

That's Sam's gift...geet wants to gve it as a surprise to her...

She doesn't know about anything...

Maan: what? tum issiliye yahan aayi thi?

Geet: haan, aapne kya socha?

Maan: ab tum aa hi gayi toh mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki tum kasie jaathi?

Maan pulls her into a hug and holgs her tight...

Geet: Maan, ye kya hai?

Maan: tum toh seedhe seedhe nahi manthi, toh mein kya karoon?

Geet: Maan, sab mera intrezaar kar rahe hai

Maan: aur mera intrezaar ka kya hai Geet?

Geet: aap ka intrezaar?

Maan: haan, mein kab se intrezaar kar raha hoon?

Geet: Maan, ye teek nahi hai

Maan: kyat eek nahi hai?

Geet: Maan, mujhe jaane do please

Maan: nahi jaane detha toh

Geet: sab yahan aajayenge mujhe doondhke

Maan: aaise nahi hoga

Geet: aaisa hi hoga

Sam calls...

Sam: Geet, jaldhi aao

She is trying her new dress and wants to show it to Geet...

Geet: abhi aathi hoon

Geet looks at Maan and pleads with her innocent eyes...

Maan had to let her go...

Maan: tum jaa sakthi ho

Geet tries to move but couldn't...

She looks at Maan again...

Maan: mere gift mujhe dedo aur tum jaa sakthi ho

Geet: achcha, aab bhi na, bahut badmash ho gaye ho

Maan just closes his eyes and waits...

Geet places a kiss on his lips and Maan gets lost in it...

Geet is released off his hold and she runs away...

Maan: geeet

Geet: dinner pe aajao

Geet makes maan's favourite pasta for dinner...

Geet has learned the art from Maan...

Sam is surprised by the changes...

Sam: so Geet, pasta?

Sam winks...

Geet blushes...

Sam: Maan's favourite, tumme yaad hai Geet? pehle bar jab Maan yahan aaya tha, tumne ussko Chicken Teeeka banakke diya tha, agar Maan ko woh chicken yaad hai toh aaj yahan nahi khatha

Geet: woh toh bhool gaye honge

Geet laughs...

Maan just enters...

Maan: meinne kuch nahi bhoola, aaj toh pehle tum kahogi phir mein

Maan takes her to the table first...

Geet: toh aapko mujhpe barosa nahi

Maan: aaise nahi hai Geet, tujhpe to barosa hai par tera cooking pen ahi

Geet: what?

Sam: you are right Maan, meinne bhi Geet ko pehle bar pasta banathe hue dekha hai, I don't want to take the risk

Geet: Sam tum bhi?

Pinky: Geet, tumne pasta banaya hai, kissi ne mujhe bathaya kyun nahi

Tasha: bathathe toh kissiko bhi pasta khane ko nahi miltha

As usual Pinky tastes it first...

Pinky: Geet, you are great, ye toh bahut achcha hai

Sam: is it? Let me try

Tasha: really Geet, tum toh expert ban gayi ho

Geet is proud of herself...but still she wants Maan to taste it...

She looks at Maan...

Sam: Maan, come on, join us

Maan too tastes it...

Geet keeps looking at him all the while...

Maan enjoys it very much...

Geet: Maan, kaisa hai?

Maan: hmmm not bad

Geet: kya?

Maan smiles...: bahut achcha hai Geet, I love it

Geet is statisfied with her cooking skills now...

After dinner...

Maan is about to leave...but not without his Mishti...

Geet is embarrassed to leave her friends and go with Maan...

Maan: gud night guys

Geet responds immediately hinting that Maan leave without her...

Geet: gud might Maan

Maan is surprised...

Maan: gud night?

Geet: haan, aap jao

Maan: Geet, tum nahi aaogi?

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geeet

Maan leaves disappointed...

Sam looks at Geet...

Sam: Geet, tumme ab yahan koi jagah nahi hai, ab toh tumme tummara ghar jaan padega, gud night

Geet: Sam

Even Pinky feels Geet should go with Maan...

Pinky: gud night Geet, kal milthe hai

Geet: mujhe jaana hoga?

Sam: haan, jaldhi jao, warna Maan naraz ho jayega

Geet leaves...

Geet goes home...

Maan had kept the door unlocked...

Geet gets in and it's dark...

Geet: Maan Maan

Geet slowly makes her way inside the house...

Lights turn on and flowers shower over Geet...

Geet is surprised by the welcome...

Suddenly Maan comes and hugs her from behind...

Maan: welcome home Geet

He lifts her and takes her in...mahiii...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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wow...kya welcome hai...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Part - 61

Next day...

Geet wakes uo and finds Maan still asleep...

She decides not to disturb him and tries to leave quietly ...

Maan is holding her hand tight and Geet slowly pulls her hand...

As she keeps pulling Maan pulls her harder and she lands on him...

Maan holds her tight not letting her go...

Geet: Maan, subha ho gayi, dekho 7 baj gaye

Maan: hmmm, Geet mujhe disturb mat karo

Geet: Maan, mein kahan aap ko disturb kar rahi hoon, aap chodo mujhe, mein jaathi hoon

Maan: nahi, tum bhi nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: ye kya hai? mujhe college jaan haina?

Maan: mat jao Geet

Geet: Maan, kal bhi nahi gayi

Maan: tum chali gayi toh mujhe bore lagega haina?

Geet: mein aapke saath rukhthi toh mein bhi bore ho jaoongi

Maan: Geet, tum mere saath rukhthi toh kaise bore hogi? Mein hoona tumme entertain karne ke liye

Maan gets naughty again...

He starts caressing her...

Geet couldn't resist...

Maan: ab bathao Geet, mere saath hothe hue tum kaise bore ho sakthi?

Maan winks...

Geet: Maan, mujhe jaane do, pls

Maan: toh jao Geet, meinne kahan tumme rokha

Maan had already released his hold...

Geet blushes as she is the one who is not ready to part...

She quickly gets ready while Maan gets her breakfast ready...

Maan had offered to drop and pick her up from college as long as he is here...

He snatches every opurtunity he gets to spend time with his Mishti...

Geet is also enjoying his company...

Sometimes Maan takes her out for lunch too...

One evening someone comes to meet Sam at the college campus...

Sam has no idea who that is...

Geet becomes suspicious and she accompanies Sam...

That Maan looked like a messenger from someone else...

Sam: what do you want?

He gives her some key...

Sam immediately recognizes them...

She returns it back to him but he refuses to take it back...

Sam: ye mujhe kyun dethe ho?

Man: sab ne kaha gadhi aap ke paas chodkke aao

Sam: mujhe nahi chahiye, tum sab ko hi dedo

Man: sab naraz ho jayenge m'am

Sam: unsse kaho ab mujhe ye gadhi nahi chahiye, mere papa ke paas aaise bahut gadiyan hai

Man: par m'am

Sam: aapke sab se kaho m'am ne lene se inkaar kar diya

That man leaves...

Geet: Sam, what's this? And who's that sab?

Sam: woh Vciky ka aadmi hai

Geet: kya? woh tumme phir se pareshaan kar raha hai? mein abhi Maan se kehthi hoon

Sam stops Geet...

Sam: Geet, aaisa kuch nahi hai, woh meinne kaha ye gadhi mujhe bahut pasand hai, issiliye woh mujhe dena chahtha hai

Geet: what? phir woh kudh kyun nahi aaya?

Sam: woh uss din thoda problem ho gayi thi

Geet: iss gadhi ko lekhe jagdah hua na?

Sam: haan Geet, tum jaanthi haina ki mujhe aaise imported sports cars bahut pasand hai, and when I first saw this cute baby I just fell in love with it

Geet: so you are in love with this car?

Geet is disappointed...

Sam: jab Vicky asked me to take a drive I was so happy and after the ride I just wanted it for myself

Geet: tumne usse kya kaha?

Sam: meinne kaha ki mujhe ye gadhi bhejdo

Geet: ussne mana kiya hoga aur tum naraz ho gayi hogi

Geet knows Sam never likes to hear a no from anyone, she is used to get whatever she wants as and when she desires...

Sam: you know Geet, I even offered him double the price, but he refused, I could he say no for me?

Geet: haan, usko toh patha hai na ki tum kaun ho?

Sam: I told him that Dad would get me anything I want and this is just not a big deal for him

Geet: phir bhi ussne nahi mana?

Sam: nahi Geet, aur meinne usse blank cheque sign karke bhi diya tha

Geet: tab toh ussko gussa aana hi tha

Geet whispers to herself...

Sam: patha hai usne kya kiya Geet?

Geet: kya kiya?

Sam: he just tore it to pieces...ussko toh janwar ki tarah gussa aagaya tha, he just turned into an animal, that's why I hate him Geet, and I left that place immediately

Geet: tum ne toh bahut achcha kiya Sam

Geet self talk...achcha hua Sam wahan se aagayi, warna patha nahi kya kya ho jaatha? Babaji, lagtha hai aapne sahi Jodi banayi, ek se badkar ek

Sam: ab dekho, kaise driver ko bheja hai, aur ussne toh mujhse maafi bhi nahi manga

Geet: haan usko itni bhi tameez nahi hai

Sam: baktameez

Geet: haan Sam, kam se kam tumme call toh kartha

Sam goes silent...

Geet: Sam, kya hua? Ussko tummari itni bhi fikar nahi hai

Sam: woh ussne call kiya tha Geet, lekhin mein usse baat karna nahi chahathi

Geet: phir woh tumse baat kaise karega aur tumse milne kaise aayega, haina?

Sam starts to think...

Geet: tumne ek bar bhi usska phone nahi utaya?

Sam nods her head...

Geet: ye toh galat hai Sam, tumme usski baat ko sunna chahiye

Sam: par ab woh mujhe call hi nahi kartha

Sam sounds disappointed...

Geet: toh tum usski call ki intrezaar kar rahi thi?

Sam: aaisa kuch nahi hai, mujhe usse kya lena dena hai ab?

Geet: haan, ab usski baat kyun karein hum?

Geet ends the topic but Sam just starts to think about it...

That weekend...

Mr.Khanna comes...

Sam is surprised to see her dad...

Mr.Khanna says that he has some urgent work in Delhi...

He calls Maan and talks with him...

Scindia's are coming tomorrow...

Geet gets everything ready...

She tells Sam that Maan's relatives are coming home for lunch...

They want to meet Khanna uncle...

Scindia's come and Maan introduces them as his uncle and aunt...

Mr.Khanna welcomes them and he hugs Scindia tight...

Khanna: oye Madav, kaise ho

Scindai: hare Khanna, tum kaise ho?

Khanna: ye toh mera yaar hai

They are schoolmates at the Doon school...

They start chatting with each other...

Khanna told Maan that he knows Scindia very well after he called him that day getting his number from Maan...both are very happy that their children like each other...

Mr.Khanna had been worried about his daughter getting married into an unknown family, she being a motherless child Khanna gave her all the liberties and pampered her so much that Sam never knew anything about life's ups and downs...

She is being treated like a princess and doesn't know much about the outside world, she is used to be living at her will commanding and ruling her father's own little kingdom...

Now that Vicky is also the only heir to Mr.Scindia's inherited properties and he is also born with a silver spoon...Scindia's are known for their royalty and moreover Khanna and Scindia know each other from their school life and are very good pals...

They have been out of touch after marriage and it's a pleasant surprise for the good old buddies to have come together b'coz of their children...

Without even knowing anuthing about their children;s choices they have made up their mind to join hands as a family when they knew that it's not a new found affair and it's only a renewal of the old friendship and they readily agreed to extend this friendship into a life long relationship...

Mrs.Khanna has never taken her eyes off Sameera, she has already begun to dream about her son's pairing with Sam and is also convinced that Sam would be the perfect match for Vicky...

Sam feels awkward in this situation and she anticipates that it's going to be something about her and her life else Khanna wouldn't entertain someone related to MSK like this...

Something's about to happen and Sam is scared that it could only be about her marriage...

She thinks about Vicky and is so much worried...

She doesn't know why she is always remembering him for she has juat met him once and that too it was not such a sweet encounter, yet there is something about him that keeps haunting her and she feels terrible thinking about her relationship with someone else...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
sam ready hojao bali ki bakhda baan ne k liye...

nice update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
maaneet romance in air
sam thinking about viky all the time but refuse to admit it n will get surprise when come to know her father is marrying her with him


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part 57
awesome dear...
lovely...
haye Maan is so sweet...
and Geet shes too kiddish...
he arranged ticket for her too...
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part 58
nice dear...
lovely...
their romance is so cute and funny...
and Maan is too too naughty...
the way they talk is so interesting...
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part 59
awesome dear...
lovely...
so Geet has told Maan about Vicky and Sam...
and Maan is here...
hahaha she was showing her attitude...
bechara Maan...

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