MG (OS): The finished hour

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

It was good in its own way...

I would like to ignore commenting on the tragedy it had🤓

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maancrazy

@maancrazy

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Don't have words to express what this story made me feel ! Although I don't like stories based on communal hatred , you have done a great job portraying Geet's emotions and how in the midst of danger she keeps thinking of the happier times in her life . I can just imagine this story as a short film with Drashti and Gurmeet !
Can I get the link to Ever Ours ?

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

This was amazing. I loved how you incorporated Past and present. It was beautifully done. But somehow it felt incomplete. In my mind it felt that this story could not have ended here at this point with this night. I hope you would consider giving another update or something 😉

Edited by aditi_2010 - 10 years ago

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Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Truly an hour that finished everything

Neither dead nor alive

armaano ka kafan

Vaado ki chitta

An eye for an eye making the whole world blind

Tragedy queen strikes again

Excellent as usual

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

you always write sad stories based on religion hatred and separation

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mhappy

@mhappy

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

cant believe

😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

one who wrote Ever ours is the writer of this story as well

such contrasting tales

😲😲😲😲😲

one where geet holds on to her love and hope even under such difficult circumstances and this one where maan succumbs to the pressure of his society or religion and withdraws his love😡😡😡😡

But yes both the cases are possible

it depends on the choice we make and the strength of our character , our will power