New FF Ashlok - IS IT MY DESTINY !!! - Chap 23 & 24 PG 35

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Hi reader...
I am back with another story..I promise you I will do regular update... Please read it and share your comments

CHAPTER 1 & 2 - PAGE 1
CHAPTER 3 - PAGE 3
CHAPTER 4 - PAGE 4
CHAPTER 5 - PAGE 5
CHAPTER 6 & 7 - PAGE 6
CHAPTER 8 - PAGE 8
CHAPTER 9 & 10 - PAGE 10
CHAPTER 11 - PAGE 11
CHAPTER 12 & 13 - PAGE 14
CHAPTER 14 - PAGE 15
CHAPTER 15 - PAGE 21
CHAPTER 16 & 17 - PAGE 24
CHAPTER 18 -PAGE 27
CHAPTER 19 & 20 - PAGE 28
CHAPTER 21 & 22 - PAGE 32
CHAPTER 23 & 24 - PAGE 35

Is it my destiny
CHAPTER 1

Hey Aastha, Get up. Its 4 already. You have to be ready in 2 hrs !!!" my mom was not screaming this time but a pleasant wake up.

"Mom , its just 4. We have plenty of time for the marriage." I was groaning in the bed.

"stupid!! Its your marriage.. Beauticians are waiting outside to start their work.Get up."

This time her voice was even more louder. I don't want to make this situation even more worse so got up with a fake smile.

The beauticians where really waiting near my bed. How do they manage to be here at early morning 4am with full make up on their faces??? To be frank I hate makeup. The last time I had applied make up was during a school drama of my 7th grade. I was the queen in that drama. King was some small kid who was shorter than me. The king marries me at the end of the play . Now my real marriage is gonna happen with a guy who is a complete stranger to me. Ufff!!

"Aastha!!! You still brushing your teeth??? " Mom again.

I stopped all my haunting memories and tried to finish my pre makeup traditions as fast as possible .The beautician gave me a cream to wash my face.

" It will make your face glow during your BIG DAY" the beautician said .Sorry she blushed!! I felt a strong stinch of irritation in my stomach. To marry a guy whom you have never met in your life ,hardly you know his second name , had spoke only once with him is going to be your life partner in few hours!!! I couldn't understand why all weird things happens with me always??

The bridal make up begun. Rahul my younger brother was standing near by playing video game seriously in my cell phone. Why guys always stick to the electrical items as if whole world is nothing in front of that.I know he was playing the same boring football game in the cell. Whenever he had time he used to play football in the ground or in my mobile.

Suddenly got a ring in my mobile," Aastha , maama is calling " he winked at me and handed my mobile to me.

Who is this mama??? ( mama means sister's husband )my mobile was flashing "Shlok Calling" . Oh this is the new maama which rahul had mentioned. By the way Shlok is the man whom I am going to marry . Shlok B.E M.S from London currenly running his family business , only son for his parents, smart , hot , generous , kind ,and veryyy richhh . I have heard this atleast a hundred times for the past 2 months from my mom ever since we got his proposal for marriage . Well don't imagine he has loved me and proposed. It was his family's proposal and here we are gonna get married sooon.

Am Aastha B.E , working in an esteemed IT company for the past 2 years. Each girl has her own dream of getting married.Some prefer Love marriage , some prefer arranged marriage , some prefer NO marriage at all . well I belong to the last category. Life has showed me the ugliest part for the past 6 years and I hated marriage to the core. And the most important part is I really hate this guy Shlok.

I still remember the first phone call I made to him . It was an ISD call and I did the ISD call first time through my personal mobile. He picked up my call after 5 Looonnnggg rings. You know how you get tensed when you are about to talk to a guy with whom your engagement is gonna happen in 2 days. That too the reason was to stop the marriage.

"Hello Shlok here" he said.

His voice was neither hard nor soft but a normal man's voice with an American accent.

Why people behave like Americans once they do they PG in London. Well no time to think and it was an ISD call.

"hi , Its Aastha here" I was whispering. Shit!!!

"Parden" he said.

"sorry !! Its Aastha here. Aastha from Chennai . working at Infosys." I was swallowing my words. Why am I telling my bio-data???

"Oh k . So wassup???" his voice as normal as before.

I was not expecting much from him. But still a plain wassup made me even more inconvenient.

"I think you have mistaken. Am the girl with whom you are gonna get engaged in 2 days" I was slightly raised my voice.

"I know. Tell me Aastha . I don't have enough time to talk in phone" And some noices of pages being turned was heard.

Ohhh... he is showing he is busy! Even I don't want to talk with him. But fate!!

"Shlok I just wanna talk to you in privacy. No in private. I mean its important. If u r not busy???" damn , I was talking to him as if my appraisal was going on. Why am I so humble in my speech??? Oh common Aastha. He is not your Team Leader. Have guts!!

"come to the point .." he was like ordering . My TL is better than him . I thought.

"Shlok I don't want to get married. I mean I hate marriage life . I don't want this marriage to happen" I spoke with the maximum possible guts .

"even I don't want this marriage to happen. Say something new" he was talking in a hushed tone as if he is ready to cut my call. But whatever he is on my line . even he doesn't wants to marry.

"then why cant you stop this marriage ?" I asked him.

"How about I ask the same question to you ?? " damn, he was very adamant. Male Chauvinist. I was burning inside. Moreever my ISD bill!!!

"See Shlok ,I have tried all possible ways . but nothing worked. That's why I had been cornered to call you. I need your help to stop this marriage . so can you..."

"cant find any new story.. ? any damn new story to impress me??? Why you girls act as though you are very innocent in every aspect. you can never impress me like this Aastha. Better luck next time" and the call was cut.

I was frozen . Did I heard correctly ?? when did I tried to impress him. What's wrong with this guy ??? My mobile flashed call cost 397.89 . Waste of time and money.

"Akka, ( sister or didi)attend the call..Maama is calling " Ragul brought me to reality.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heys guys ..
Reply something.. U dont like this story ah...😕😕😕
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Awesome start. .y he things she is trying to impress wired😕...pls continue soon...
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Unres...

Part 1:
Nice start dear...
Shlok and astha's wedding day...
Astha hate marriage...why what happened in her past...
what wrong with shlok...why cant he talk to her properly...
both dont want to marry...
i bet they r going to have a wonderful life...
Thanks for the wonderful treat..
will read and comment on the rest part soon...
sorry for the late response...
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its really interesting hope to see the next update ASAP
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Ashlok FF Is it my destiny

Chapter 2


"Akka, ( sister or didi)attend the call..Maama is calling " Ragul brought me to reality.

Now should I pick the call???? I could feel the adrenaline rush in my muscles with the idea of picking up his call. I still remember the words "You can never impress me Aastha !!".

But why is he calling ??? He hardly made a call after our engagement got over in these 2 months. Never did he attend my call. With what guts is calling me on the day of marriage?? Should I cut the call?? Or should let it ring and get disconnected by itself??? well It would be a good revenge on him.

But taking revenge on the day of marriage with your husband to be soon is a not a good idea.

Or now let me attend and ask "now who is calling to impress??? "And give a big nose cut to him.

Or attend and never utter a word so that he keeps pleading for his mistake.

Or better remove my battery so that he gets a recorded voice "the number you are trying to reach is currently not reachable".

Why Life gives us so many ways to handle a problem which makes us hard to choose which is right. Normally wrong ways are damn attractive.

Stop it Aastha!!! Its Ringing attend or throw off your mobile!!! It was my conscience. When our conscience gets irritated to its extreme it always gives us two choices to conclude "DO OR DIE".

The beauticians were making comments on me and I don't want to show my inner irritation to them.

"Could you please be outside for a while? I have gotta personal call" me on my sweetest voice. Normally when we do pretend to be happy the invisible sweetness of your voice magically takes its control.

They left the place with a giggle. I cant understand what's damn funny happening here for them to giggle.

So finally am gonna pick up the call and show him am not interested on him and am very angry with his behavior.
Now my right thumb went to make a connection between me and him , I mean a phone connection.

"Missed call from Shlok 4:20 am. "

W*F!!! Finally when am about to attend the call it becomes a missed call. I have no time left. Beauticians are waiting outside and before my mom comes back to my room and resumes her scream I have to find out why he had called. I waited for a minute for him to call me back. But waste!!!

If that Mr. Adamant , I mean Shlok has some reason to call me early morning on the day of marriage cant he call back if not attended once?? Adamant!!! I was cursing him. I don't want to call him back and lose my self-respect to him anymore.

Another half a minute !! Waste of waiting and I dialed his number. Again after 5 Looonnng rings he picked my call. God is 5 his lucky number or wat???

"Hello ,Shlok here " same plain voice which I have heard last time. As if I don't know that it was Shlok whom I have called.

"I know. Its Aastha here. Why did u called me???" I tried American accent . But I know it finally sounded a typical Indian way.

"So finally your dream has come true??? Marrying rich ,educated fellow in the world!!! Huh???"
Was he teasing me or praising himself. Well he wants to hurt me. Let me hurt him back.

"Am sorry I guess you are not talking about yourself"

"Oh shut up Aastha. You think you have good sense of humor?? See I want this marriage to be stopped. I cant even imagine to marry a girl like you."

GIRL LIKE U !!! what is he trying to say???

Before I could utter a word he continued his talk.

"Look I give you two choices. Run away from the marriage or I will disclose your truth in front of all. It would be a great shame to you and your family. And your filmy Mother !! Don't say am the reason for her heart attack which she would dramatize in the public if I let the truth out. "

I was totally taken over. What the hell is he trying to tell . I had been calling him for 2 months to stop this f**king marriage. Now in the day of marriage after all the arrangements have been made should be stopped . Is he nuts or what?? I was totally occupied by my thoughts that I forgot to give a reply to him.

"Hello...are you deaf or dumb enough to melt my heart??? Nothing is gonna work Aastha. You run away from the marriage or regret for rest of your life" Shlok in his firm voice.

"See Shlok I am not getting like what... what you are trying to say. What truth are you talking about??? " It is really difficult to find words when you are in deep shock.

" Truth??? You want me say the truth about you and your college life?? I guess you remember Abhay"
Abhay!!! Did he said Abhay ???

"Abhay ??..." I want to make myself clear what was happening.

"Ya Abhay... The guy whom you dumped to marry me. How you girls go on dumping boys as though that is your birth right?? I want this f*****g marriage to stopped. You got it ??? I give you 2 hours. Better leave the marriage hall or I ll disclose all the photographs which you took with him." and the call was cut.

I was stunned for a while. I could sense nothing around me. He wants me to run away. How does he know about Abhay???

Meanwhile I could sense someone opening the door. Guess it was Mom. But what I saw was unbelievable!!

There it was Abhay standing with blue jeans and white shirt.

Abhay is alive ?????

I still remember this was the dress he was wearing when he was shot to death. Please god tell me what am seeing is dream. Is this place haunted??

Abhay is alive!!!! But how??? If the rigor mortis, the decomposition of the human body after death has worked properly only his bones and teeth would be left now . 3 long years. How could be he alive?? I was who informed his parents about his death. How could this happen???

I could feel the world before me is shattered into pieces and I had no sense of gravitational pull acting on me. I was getting unconscious.
Only 2 things were echoing in my mind.
"Run in 2 hours or regret !!!"
"Abhay is alive!!!!"
What should I do now???
And who is Abhay in my life????

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Cheers
Priya
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Originally posted by: poojya

its really interesting hope to see the next update ASAP

Chp 2 updated...
Thanks dear..
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Originally posted by: miac

Awesome start. .y he things she is trying to impress wired😕...pls continue soon...

Thanks dear...
Flashback coming soon ..
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Hey, do continue! I liked the updates... interesting👍🏼
But Shlok is too horrible! Update soon.
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Ok now I am dizzy. .astha thinks who is abhay to her and he is dead...totally confused. .please update soon dear..
Wounderful update. .well written..

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