~Waiting For You~ a kr drabble series Banner on pg 1 and updts on pg 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys...I have a number of pending works but this ff is on demand of my sweet sis lunia aka trisha. The concept is our joint endeavour. Hope u have a good time reading 😊 The banner is by Alisha_arsha 😳






Concept
Reyaansh Singhania, the rockstar and one of the dazzlers of St. Louise clg, is known not only 4 his dance but also for falling in love every month. His current gf is Sara, the daughter of one of the clg trustees. The other girls in the clg envy her very much as also her stepsister Taani. Taani was Rey's gf two months ago. They broke up becoz Taani was very demandin, whereas Sara try to comply with all of Rey's wishes. She always run behind Rey like a pet. Rey's best frnd is Vicky who struggles for getting attention from girls. He likes a simple girl named Neha but Neha hates him. The clg organises a charity dance event where Rey, Vicky and their dance troup is supposed to perform. The name of the troup is The Dazzlers, Rey and Vicky being the leads. Sara is also one of them. At present they r looking for another female dancer. Kriya's mom got transferred in Mumbai where she joins St. Louise. She is very much proud of her daughter's dancing skills. Kriya comes to know of the dazzler's audition and decides to give the audition.

Do u like the concept? If yes do hit the like button and comment 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept madhu darling...
1st update padhne going...
Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud concept didušŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept
kriya, taani n sara all in same ff its gonno be interesting
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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diii šŸ¤—
wow!!!!!
it's awesome 😃
thank u 😳
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsomeee
start
i loved the concept so much
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kriya entering him life
now the changes happend
loved it so much

update fast next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter One
Part 1

Rey and Sara enters the clg in Rey's brand new sports car. Sara clinging on to Rey's neck even in the car. The scene drew attention from the clg crowd especially the girl students who were saying among themselves "chipkali kahiki...pura clg ko yeh dikhana chahti hain yeh k Rey uski property hain". They were jealous of Sara. The pair gets down from the car when Vicky comes running 2 them, "hey guyz have u heard the news..princi ne announce kiya hain ki issbar charity event december ki jagah nov mein hogi". Both Rey and Sara were shocked 2 hear the news. "What november mein..which means this month aur hamare pass ek female lead kam hain..i am not even thinking of the rehearsals" Rey was very worried. "Dont worry baby sab kuch thik ho jayega...humne kal auditions rakkhe hain na, so chill" Sara apni fake sugary voice mein kaha. "Par Sara kal hamara 3rd audtn day hoga, inn logo ka dancing skill to hum dekh hi chuke hain" was Rey's reply. "Kuch v bol yr iss auditn ne boring classes attend karne se hume bacha liya" Vicky says yawning. The trio enters the clg.
Kriya's POV
Aaj bhi late...patanahi mera kya hoga..iss clg mein aye huye mujhe sirf ek hafta hua hain aur mujhe 4 din late hone k waje se detention mili hain...aj fir milegi..kal to auditn hain kal agar time pe nahi ayi to auditn ka band baj jayega aur mom ki expectations par pani fir jayega. Universeji pls meri madat karna.
Rey Vicky and Sara were at the rehearsal hall. After they finalise the steps their troupe wud join them 4 the rehearsal.
R: Vicks tune kuch socha hain hum iss baar kaunsi theme pe kaam karenge?
Vicky was abt to answer when Sara shrieked.
S: OMG Rey meri track suit ka colour to tumse bilkul match nahi kar raha hain! wait main change karke aati hoon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cont...
V: Rey do u seriously like Sara? isse to Taani better thi atleast she was normal
R: Dude ladkiyan seriously lene ki cheez nahi hain aur ha Reyansh Singhania ladkiyon ko like nahi karta ladkiyan mujhe like karti hain (a lazy smile on his lips).
Kriya was hurrying through the corridor when she bumped into someone.
"U dumbo tumhe dekhai nahi deta kya?" Sara yelled at her. "Andhi to tum ho jo bina dekhe bhag rahi ho..mini skirt pehen lene se hi koi Jennifer Lopez nahi ban jata" Kriya ne palat kar jawab diya. "Tum janti nahi ho main kaun hoon..tumhari iss clg mein rehna mushkil kar dungi" Sara again shouted. Kriya was going 2 ans back when a girl from the crowd pulled her back. "Main janti hoon tum iss clg mein new ho...inn logo se panga mat lo they r really dangerous..yeh Sara Dewan hain trustee ki beti aur haan main Neha hoon" Neha extended her hand. "Hi main Kriya hoon" Kriya took her hand "par trustee ka beti hone ka yeh matlab to nahi wo kisika v insult karegi". "Cholo chalte hain warna late ho jayega" Neha changed the topic and they left for their class.
Taani's POV
Yeh Sara ki bacchi bohut cloud 9 pe udd rahi hain. Iska parr to main katungi. Rey use thoda sa bhao kya de diya use laga k wo Rey ko mujhse chhin sakti hain. Patanahi papa use kyun itna sir pe chada ke rakhhe hain. Kal auditns me maine uska kaam tamam na kiya to mera v naam Taani nahi.
Charity dance mein Rey ki partner main banungi aur koi nahi.
Neha and Kriya got detention after clg bcoz both of them were late. Neha told everything 2 Kriya abt the dazzlers Rey Vicky Sara and their dance group. She also told her abt Rey and his changing gfs, abt Sara and Taani being stepsis who cant see eye to eye. "Yeh Sara hi meri auditn legi kal? mar gayi ab kya hoga main to pakka reject hojaungi Neha...universeji bachana mujhe" Kriya prayed.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres

awsome didu,
sara is really a chipkali

thank u for the pm
Edited by devilishpam - 11 years ago

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