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Nice part .. for how long you are planning to carry on with the two wives ?


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Hi all thanks for liking previous part
This is Pooja's concept n i write this if she get time she also write on this story
Waiting for your response please comment and like
Well everyone knows my English so don't mind n avoid grammar mistake
Advance sorry


Part 4





Mariyam raza singh khurana is in her room sating on chair waiting for someone knock at door

Mariyam: came in and close door behind

She order person came in n close the door

Mariyam: i am waiting only for you horam, want to talked with you very important

Horam: node her head n came close to her

Horam: ji ami boliye

Mariyam stand up went toward window stand there

Mariyam: maan ki dosri shadi q hoi hai horam?
She asked not seeing horam

Horam shock with question

Horam: ami wohhh... mein

She's stamering

Mariyam: you know very well that which circumstances maan married again you also agree with this right...

Horam nodded did not say anything keeping her head down to
suppress her tear because she know that her mother in law get to know about last night

Mariyam turn and face her

Mariyam: don't bow your head horam your act is not hidden from me
she said with anger

Horam : ami i... *sob sob*
she want to said but cut by Mariyam

Mariyam: your explanation is not enough
She came close to her

Mariyam: dushman nahi hai hum aap k horam... sab ki khushi k liya hum yeh faisla liya aur apki marzi shamil thi ismein hai na...??!!

Horam stiff to hear her but composed herself

Horam: hum *sob* jantey hai *sob* galti hum say hui hai *sob* aap ki *sob* harr saza manzoor hai

She said while sobbing n crying

Mariyam look her crying she put her hand on her head n said

Mariyam: hum ap k dard ko samaj sakety hai horam hum bhi ek women hai asaan nahi hai yeh, jantey hai apne pati ko share karna, lakin ab peeche hatt nahi saktey aap, faisla ho chuka hai aap nai kabhi socha woh ladki jo kal is ghar mein aaye... usse kaise laga hoga..?? woh is ghar mein new hai unke bare mein sochiye zara... kitna bura laga hoga unn k dil mein kitna sawal hongye, anjane mein hi sahi ap nai unko pain diya hai aur ap kisi ko pain de yeh umeed hum aap sa nahi rakhtey

Horam nodded her head again

Mariyam: aur ek aur baath... aap bf par sab k samne nahi ayengi... hum nahi chatey k geet ko bura lage aap waha hongi, toh unki mann mein phir sawal ayengye aur hum unka pehle din koi tamasha nahi chtey samj rahi hai...?

She paused... then continued
Mariyam: ap unsey bad mein mil lijey ga abhi apka milna theek nahi aur ha humri batho par samjne ki koshish kijeye ab apki aur maan ki zindagi k sth geet ki zindagi judi hai aur unka koi kasoor nahi in sab mein hum unhai takleef nahi dena chahtey

Horam look her n nod her head went from there

Mariyam sighed in relief she also went to saw geet


@ breakfast table maan came sat his seat he waiting for horam he did not see her there think that she was in kitchen

Geet came along with Mariam and was made to sit beside maan

Maan look her get shock coz she was sat on horam chair which he didn't like

He look her n his mother

Anie also not present there coz she want to avoid bf with geet

Maan clear his throat n said: geet

Geet who is shy shy look him

Maan: sat on other chair he said strenly

Geet: ji
she get shock his order n get up at once

Mariyam look him anger

Mariyam: maan yeh ap kya kar rahe hai???
she said with compose voice don't want to show her anger before geet

Maan: yeh chair ho...
but he cut by Mariyam

Mariyam: humai pata hai woh yeha nahi hai, aur unhai kuch kam hai toh woh bf par nahi ayengi

Maan look his mother face n find something

Mariyam: humai bad mein dekhlijeye ga maan bf kijeye
she said camly

Mariyam: aur geet bete ap ko bura na lagey to h aap maan ki dosri tarf ja kar beth jai beta

Geet: nahi koi bath nahi
she said n sat beside maan other side

Maan want to get up but did not go against mother n give geet any wrong signal he silently ate his bf n get up

Maan: mera hogya mein office ja raha ho
he said n want to go but stop with his mother voice

Mariyam: office jane say pehley hum say mil kar jaiye hum aap say bath karna chatey hai
she order him

Maan: ji mein study mein hoon abhi
he said went to study

Mariyam shook her head but poor soul geet was mute specter between mother n son

Mariyam: geet aap bf nahi karahi ??

Geet: bass mera hogya

Mariyam: par bete aap nai kuch nahi khaya

Nahi bass hogaya... said geet

Mariyam said something but they hear voice behind

Came on mom she is not use too with soo many dishes infront, iska toh dekh kar hi stomach full hogya hoga right...??

aniee who came to dining area said this

Geet bite her lips and look down she was embarrass in front of all

Mariyam look anie with soo much anger

Mariyam: behave your self anie
she shout in slow voice

Anie : main nai kiya galta kha
she said with moving her shoulder like i don't care

Sultana: anie beta bf kijiye aap bhi... geet yeh pasta lijey, bhut tasty hai
her chachi distract all coz now anie in trouble

Anie: yeh take it tum nai toh iska name bhi nahi suna hoga geet

Bahbhi, geet bahabhi dont forget what relation you have
mariyam shout this time her voice shaking with anger
Anie and geet both look at her

Mariyam: geet ko apne kamre me lekar jaieye abhi
she order

Sulatana took geet along with her

Here in dining area...
anie stood infront of her mother, she is sacred little but did not show

Mariyam: have your bf go to your college... i will talk you later, now i have other work but don't forget what i said understood..?!!
she said n move toward study for talking with maan

Anie's eyes get moist after listening scolding from her mother
Anie: coz of you today mom scold me geet i hate you
she said n went to college without taking bf


In study maan sat on his chair his eyes was close he was thinking about what happen on bf
why horam did not come... he want to talk with her but his mother said she want to talk with him so here he was waiting for his mother

Mariyam came to study look him she voice him

Mariyam: maan

Maan open his eyes sat straight his mother sat in front of him on couch

Mariyam look him like she was finding something on his face

Maan: kya bath hai ami... aap asey q dekh rahi hai?
he said turn his face toward lappy

Mariyam: dekh rahe hai MSK... jinn ki people example detey hai woh apini zaban say kabhi peecha nahi hatey aaj kaise hat gaye... woh bhi apni ami ko di gaye zaban
Maan look her shock did not get what she was saying

Maan: aap khena kiya chahti hai mein apki bath samj nahi pa raha

Mariyam sighed: MSK aap shayd bhool gaye k 3 month pehley ap nai ek wada kiya tha k ap humai humrai khandan ka waris... ek heir dengye aur is k liya ap nai humre khena par dosri shadi ki right...
she said with deep yet dangerous voice which can shake any one

Maan did not meet his eyes with his Mariyam try to avoid topic

Maan: ami jaise ap chahti thi waise main na karliya...!!! karli dosri shadi ab aap keh rahi hai k mein

He said packing his bag to leaving

Mariyam stop him: ek minut kaha jarehe hai aap... baath abhi khatm nahi hoi shadi kar li ap nai humre khena par nibhayega kaun...???? huh!!!!
she said with anger

Maan: ap kiya khe reahi hai meri samjh nahi aa raha
he said seeing other side

Mariyam: chaliye hum direct aap se poch rahe hai k kal rath aap kaha they???

Maan close his eyes: oh toh us ladki nai ami ko bata diya k kal rath mein
he said with anger

Mariyam: seriuosly maan kabhi kabhi hamai shakk (doubt) hota hai k aap itna bara empire akeley kaise manage karte hai... jab ap itni chhoti bth hi samj nahi paety
She said sarcastically

Maariyam: kiya lagta hai aap ko humai koi bhi aakar aap k barey mein kaheyga woh bhi galat hum maan lengey aap ko subha horam k room say bhar jatey dekha tha (she did not took sultana name) boliya kiya jawab hai ap k pass iss act ka?

Maan st: ami nai mujko horam k room say bahr jatey dekh liya aur mujhe laga us ladki nai... maan kal rath ki harkat k bad bhi toh usey blame kar raha hai achha howa ami nai meri MU dor kardi warna...

He back to listen Mariyam voice

Mariyam: maan kuch boliya kiya jawab hai aap k pass?
she shout on him

Maan; ami woh mein muje kuch waqt chahiye
he said his heart beating fast, not meeting his gaze with her it made Mariyam annoyed more

Mariyam: dimag kharb hai shadi karli uske bad aap keh rahe hai waqt chahiye ap nai kabhi socha k jis ladki say ap nai shadi ki hai us k bare mein boliya
she hout again
Maan: ami please mein kuch galat nahi kar raha kuch waqt hi manga hai bus aur wase bhi woh ladki abhi hi aye hai usey adjust hone mein bhi waqt lagey ga
he said don't want to feel guilty

Mariyam: kiya horam ko bhi yehi bola tha

Maan: ami aap

Mariyam: boliya unko bhi adjust karnai ka muka diya tha unsay dor jakar

Maan: horam ki bath alag thi
he shout this time

Mariyam: maan voice

Maan: sorry ami mein ap say is tarah bat nahi karna chahta tha par ap toh muje samjne ki koshish kije
he said with guilt n helpless

Mariyam: hum kuch samj na nahi chatye bus ab ap peecha nahi hatt saktey yeh hum ap ko karne nahi dengye... geet ki koi galti nahi in sab mein toh woh q sufer karey

Maan: ap ko us ladki ki fikar hai meri nahi

Mariyam: woh ladki apki biwi hai aur is ghar ki bahu

Maan: toh hor bhi meri biwi hai aur is ghar ki bahu aur kal rath mein uska sath tha kuch galat tha is main he argue with her

Mariyam: par kal apko geet k sath hona chiye tha

Maan: meri biwi mein decide karo ga muje kis k sath rehna hai bus
he is adamant now

Mariyam: maan ap nai wada...
but she cut by maan

Maan: mera wadha ap ko yaad hai ap nai bhi wada kiya tha k is ghar mein meri zindagi mein hor ki place koi nahi lega toh aaj bf par hor q nahi aai aur q ap nai us ladki (he did not take geet name) ko hor ki place par baithaya boliye ami

Mariyam: hum nai unhai bf par aane say mana kiya
she accept it

Maan : lakin q

Mariyam : q k hum nahi chatey they hor geet k samne aai abhi unki night kahrab hogye ab bf par hum koi tamsha nahi chahtey they, hor k wajha say

Maan: aap kehna kiya chatey hai
ek minute
his mind click some thing

Maan: kiya geet ko hor k bare mein pata hai kiya us k family ko pata hai k yeh meri dosri shadi hai
he question her

Mariyam startled with this sudden question: maan ap kena kiya cherahey hai k hum nai geet aur unki family ko horam k bare mein nahi batya
she questing him again

Maan: mein bus jaan na chahta hoon q ap ko yeh laga k hor k bf par hona thek nahi
he said try to explain his point

Mariyam: hum samj gye ap kiya khena chety hai ap ko bata de k hum nai geet k mother ko ap ki sahdi k barey mein khud batya tha aur rahi bath hor k geet k samna na ane ki hum nahi chety humre ghar mein geet aur horam k beach galat femi aye agar geet ko pata chalta k kal rath ap horam k sath they toh woh horam ko galt samjti hum nahi chety asa ho samje ap
She said with hurt tone

Maan felt guilt to question his mother like this he want to said something but stop by mariyam

Mariyam: ek aur baath maan hum nai kabhi nahi socha tha k aap hum say asey sawal pochey gey mariyam raza khurana nai aaj tak kabhi kisi ko dhoka nahi diya na kabhi dengey humai aapke papa aur allah ko face dekhna hai dar hai humain is baath ka

Maan feeling guilty more he sat on floor beside her chair put his head on her lap

Maan : ami i am sorry
he chocked

Mariyam get up once : nahi maan aaj nahi hum jaantey hai ap ko horam ki fikar hai aur honi bhi chahiye humai bhi hai unki parwa unki pain ka andaza hai humai, hum bhi ek aurat hai samajh sakty hai kitna muskil hai unn ka liye, lekin horam ki wajha say hum geet k sath na-insafi nahi kar saktey aap mane ya na maney ap apki zindagi mein geet bhi shamil hai unka apki zindagi aur pyar dono par haq hai aur agr aap nai unhai yeh haq nahi diya toh hum say bura koi nahi hoga humai majbor mat karye k hum horam ko unke maaykey bhej de kuch waqt k liye

She said n threatened him, then left him to bear his guilt n pain
Maan in study sating on floor cried his one act pushed him in remorse n guilt bass yehi bach a hai uski life mein
He took his phone to call

Maan on phone : please wapis ajao aap k maan ko apki zarurat hai yeha koi nahi koi nahi jo mujko samje he cried like child

Other side person listen his voice but did not said any thing but listen his painful voice n also feeling pain





Other side horam after listen her mil she straight went to her room servant brought her bf which she did not see she was crying


Horam pov

Q ho raha hai humary sath yeh sabb...?? kya galti hai humrai? hum nai kabhi kisi k sath kuch galt nahi kiya phir q...???!!!!!
she crying, sobing hard went to cupboard took some box n open it in box there is small cloth of baby she took it on her hand n caressing it, then lovingly kissed it

Horam pov continue ...

Q chhin li hum say humari sab say bari khushi allah q cheen li aap nai humri khushiya (when person so much pain he or she start questioning god for their misery) kitna khush they hum sabb lakin ek hi pal mein sab khatam hogya sab khartam

She crying hugging the piece of cloth close to her heart (she n maan lost their bay in accident detail later, she cannot be mother again)

Pov continue

Aap nai humai adhora bana diya ek adhuri aurat (incomplete women)
q maan q aap ne humey chuna baby ko nahi q kartey hai humsay itna pyar q nahi share kar pa rahe hum aap ko kisi aur k sath... kya karey hum...?
she cried hard, shouting hid her face in pillow

You are very happy she listen a voice

You are happy horam she listen again removing her face she saw same girl like her

Horam image: toh bhut kush hai aap...!
imaginary horam said with smile

Horam: kon kon ho tum...?
she said with shock as well as fear

Imaginery Horam: arey dor q ja rahi ho...? mein toh tum hi hu...
tumahery andar ki awaz tumra dil ya phir yeh samjho tumhara zameer

Horam: mere andar ki aawaz... zameer...!!!
she repeated getting confused
Imaginary Horam : arey abhi bhi nahi samji mein tumri andar chupi woh wish hoon jo pori hogayi

She said sarcastically

Horam: awaz, zameer, ya wish tum jo bi ho please jao yeha say

Imaginary Horam: jao...?!! mein kaise ja sakti hu...?
mein toh tum hu... tumhari duniya waley muje nahi dekh saktye par tum muje dekh sakti ho sun sakti ho

Horam: kiya kehna chahti ho..??

Imaginery Horam: arey tum toh gussa ho rahi hoo... mein toh tumhari khushi hu

Horam : khushi ???

Imaginery Horam: haan khushi... arey dekho tum abhi bhi nahi samjhi... tumhari sab say badi khushi aur wish jo tumhai mil gayi, saap bhi marr jaye aur laathi bhi na tootey

Horam: jo kehna hai saaf saaf khao, gol gol bath mat karo aur jao yaha say
she shout

Imageiney Horam: arey tum phir gussa hogaye...
mein toh tumsay yeh kehna chati thi ki maan ki nazr mein tum beachri bhi bann gayi aur tumhara kam bhi hogya sab log sochengey k dekho bechari kitni mahaan hai apni suhag ko uski aur uski ghar ki khushi k liay dosri shadi karwai par sab yeh nahi jantey k tum maan ko us ladki k pass janey nahi diya jaan boojh kar haina...

Horam shock she denied to accept this

Imagienry Horam: q jooth bol rahi horam woh bhi muje say apne ap say

Horam: hum koi jhoot nahi bol rahe hum ne aise socha bhi nahi aise kabhi hum nai dil say maan aur iss ghar ki khushi chahi hamseha aur yeh shadi bhi sab ki khushi ki khatir hui... mantey hai kal hum apni dard parr kaabu nahi rakh paye lekin hum aise soch bhi nahi sakty e

Imaginery Horam : jhoot bol rahi ho horam tum kudgarz ho tum sirf apne barey mein soch rahi ho tumhara dard tumahri takleef us ladki ka kya jis say tum ne maan ki shadi karwai uska kya...???

Horam put hand on her ear: chup hum khudgarz nahi hai

Imaginarey HORAM : tum yeh kena chahti ho k ab tumhe koi farq nahi parega agar maan us ladki k pass jaaye...?
Horam become numb

Imagernary Horam: dekho apne aap ko tum... kaisi pale hogye sirf sunn kar socho agar sach main aisa howa...
maan q nahi letey tum ne ek ladki ki zindagi kharab ki hai horam
tumahri wajha say maan zindagi bhar sir utha kar nahi chaleyga...
tum nai use uske pyar ka yeh sila diya
tum khudgarz ho horam tum nai ek massom ladki ki zindagi kharb ki
khurana khandan ki izzat k sath khela
sab yehi sochenge maan galat hai par koi yeh nahi dekheyga k woh tumari wajah say us ladki k pass nahi gaya
tum selfish ho sirf apney barey main sochti hoo tumahi maan ka dard nahi nazar aata
uss k pyar par tumhe doubt hai woh badal jaega tum aise sochti hoo...
tum kudgarz ho horam

She said n laughing out loud

Nahi mein khudgarz nahi she said n get up

She was in bed sweating

Horam st: ye sapna thha...
she put her hand on her mouth try to compose herself

Nahi hum aisa nahi kar saktey... hum selfish nahi hai
hum maan k sath asey nahi kar saktey hum peechey nahi hatt saktey yeh rasta hum nai khud chuna hai ab aise nahi karsatey yeh galat hoga us ladki k sath aur maan k sath bhi

She determine to her decision not bother maan again



...to be continued


Here is part i know not maaneet scene but want to share this

Hope you all like this too

Last time garbar hogye thi this time made sure k previous part zayada mix nahi hoo

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NOTE
part 4 by Fariya...
Posted and Proof-read by Pooja

Edited by mirror1521 - 10 years ago
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~NOTE~


Hii all..
Thanks alot for liking this story...

Yes the concept is mine...
but today I proudly say that this story is Fariya's...
as she is the one writing it so maturely... i never thought that my one thought (which i find silly) will turn out to be such a story... and i give all credit to fariya...

and the wonderful readers here... thank you soo sooo much... never expected such a response here... really over-whelmed...

and lastly... thanks Fariya,
i couldn't have written it as good as u..
Love u dear🤗

Edited by mirror1521 - 10 years ago
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dont give me credit ok i am become writer just because of u n mahi support
thank you All who comment n liking our story
this story is our me n POOja
will be our ok not only my

NOTE : next part tab miley ga jab two word say zyada coment karo gye yar this is not fear kuch toh bolo aj nahi bolo gye na toh update nahi miley gi
i know demand rak rahi hoon mein confuse hoo pata nahi my stle of work is good or not my english is very bad 😭
i know isko hi badlaney ka bolo par kuch bolo
love it nice nahi chley ga bus

BIg coment aur proper coment waley isko not see this 😉😃
Edited by maankijann - 10 years ago

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