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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

tamanna means a wish from heart...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

nice part

sach mein diff meeting with husband not knowing who he is..

maans mom came to know maan was with his first wife

n now too he is back to horam

how will geeet take this all..

did she knew he is married already..

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Very nice name
i really liked it :))

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Awesome update dear...
just so cute maaneet..
maans thinking and geets thinking..
ho god geet even didnt see the pic of dulha..
Horam and her insecurities..she is
behaving just like a kid...
she doesnt do anything and maan tho usse itna pyaar kartha hai..
ho patha nahi abb age kya hoga..
sultha ji told maans mom abt maan cuming for horams room..
now wht she will say ho gosh fingers crrosed...
eagerly waiting for next..
continue soon..
good tittle name yaar..
just apptly go with the story line..

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BikewithGirl

@MG_Love

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Am not liking this horam 😡
Continue soon

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-Adwika-

@-Adwika-

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

addha part toh last part ka hi tha, toh main aage ke ispe comment karti hoon

Well I just hate Horam, maybe for other she is suffering too but for me she is a selfish woman, she wanted Maan's child so she made him marry again without his will and now she doesn't want to share her amazing, agar itna hi pyaar tha toh phir Maan ka saath deti ki woh dusri shaadi na kare but nahi usne Maan ko force kiya for second marriage , but in all this Geet is only suffering, 1 she is married to already married man, who loves his first wife, 2 she got married bcoz her mother wanted money, 3 agar future me Maaneet ka relation acche se progress nahi hua toh family toh Geet aur Horam ko hi blame karenge, but Geet will be suffered without her fault, na woh kuch jaanti hai na hi kisine usse kuch batana zaruri samjha, I m sure of one thing I want like Horam till the time she really suffers

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Maan introduces himself! Geet realises she sed too much! Maan goes 2 Horam! update soon! Well written! nice title!

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

WOW!! brilliant update...I am worried...kahi maan geet ko galat na samjhe...use ye na lage ki geet ne maan ki shikayat ki hai...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

title ka meaning bhi daaldo eng mei

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Rucha

@frnd.of.frndz

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#220

I read your note regarding the suggestions that you need for ur FFs name.. I had given it a thought that you can call it KASHMAKASH as in Delimma.. after all in just 3 parts you have portrayed the delimma of Maan, how under family pressure he re-married although he didnt want to hurt either geet or horam.. Delimma of Maan;s First wife, how she wanted to see Maan as a father but is helpless by her fate and is ready to share her husband.. and finally Geet's delimma, as she doesnt even know why Maan is not behaving Normally with her and I guess she is still unaware of Horam as well..

If you like my suggestion then you are free to change the name otherwise TAMANAA is also a very good name.. you will obviously know better which name will suit better as you know the story that is gonna unfold in next updates..

You have an amazing FF here.. please do keep updating for us.. its a pleasure to read this FF..

Luv

Rucha