As SHE sat removing the flowers in her hair

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As SHE sat removing the flowers in her hair, the make up lady's chattering praise for her acting could not be heard by her, her mind travelled to the intense scene they had played out some time ago. His hesitance during the scene made her wonder. The director's voice- Arrey come on you need to push her harder; I am, he said as he held her hand. No push her onto the bed the director yelled. At that he held her hand tighter, not willing to go, she had wondered even then. At the shout of action, he whispered something, she didn't get it, but he had let go and suddenly she fell back. Someone yelled CUT It! She said Haan Jee?? And only then realised he had yelled cut it and held her hand and made her stand up. The director said I want another shot, to which he replied, let's finish the whole thing once Sir, and then. Ok Ok! The director came closer and asked her you ok? And she nodded Haan Haan! She looked at him, he was biting his thumbnail. She whispered ok? To him and he nodded but she wondered. When the shot was over, he was nowhere to be seen and then she wondered. The mind came to the present. She asked the make up girl to get her some chai, she picked up the phone and dialed, he picked up on the second ring

You okay right? Was the scene too intense?
She smiled and said main tho aapse puchne vali thee
I hate doing these scenes, I mean,
She knows he is smoking
Aap theek tho ho? You ok?
Of course he says and laughs
Nahi AAPko phir dekha nahi
Haan I needed a smoke, where did you disappear?
I ..was here..am here ..make up nikaal rahi hoon and that horrible gajra and hair
He laughs it's easier for you, because you can hide under that make up scene ke baad tum character mai nahi rehtee
She nods wonders at his depth ek Kaam kijiye kal se aap bhi wear some other clothes
Not a bad idea, I am going to come in a black suit tomorrow
She laughs I am glad you are ok
Good night.
She hangs up and there is a knock on the door, Didi Aapki chai thandi ho gayi Maine kab ka rakha thaa. Aap call mei itne masruf thi ki notice hi nahi kiya.


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NOTE::: THIS is purely fiction. FUN fiction. this may be interpreted as an RPF and then again may not. If it has offended anyone please forgive, must be taken in good fun and no offense is meant to any fan base.
Just wanted to scribble something that is Diffy from the track thank you for reading. Press like or write comment if you enjoyed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow yaar..😃 Another fabulous piece of writing from you..👏 There's one line which spoke volumes to me:
it's easier for you, because you can hide under that make up scene ke baad tum character mai nahi rehtee

Can sense a lot from that one line..😊..Ohh and the hesitation part..I could sense so sense it today😳..Seems like they did not want to hurt each other😉 Lovely OS yaar😃 I could imagine the entire sequence..😊..Thanks for this brilliant piece again👏
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I LOVE IT !!! I LOVE IT !!


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Awww.!!! You've done it again..😳

Thank you to infinity for this one..really needed something to cheer me up and this was PERFECT.! ❤️
Man, the reluctance from his side and her worry on seeing him like that..while doing the scene had my heart doing flip flops with joy.. 😆

The best part was of him yelling cut it. It wasn't anything big but it was definitely something. BRILLIANT.! ⭐️

The end was too cute.. the phone convo..both making sure the other is okay after the scene. DAMN.! Magical it was.. I could swear I was grinning like never before as the convo ended..😳
Your write ups are short but they are just intriguing.. ☺️

Loved this one too..Please keep writing as much as you can, this is surely something no one wants to miss..⭐️
Edited by -IshRaDivAn- - 10 years ago
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such a awesom post...wow always he took care of her...
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Originally posted by: aishu_divan

Wow yaar..😃 Another fabulous piece of writing from you..👏 There's one line which spoke volumes to me:

it's easier for you, because you can hide under that make up scene ke baad tum character mai nahi rehtee

Can sense a lot from that one line..😊..Ohh and the hesitation part..I could sense so sense it today😳..Seems like they did not want to hurt each other😉 Lovely OS yaar😃 I could imagine the entire sequence..😊..Thanks for this brilliant piece again👏



Thank you for the lovely comment. Really appreciate. 😊
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Originally posted by: rajji-cutest


I LOVE IT !!! I LOVE IT !!



Thank you!! Thank you!! 😃
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Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Awww.!!! You've done it again..😳

Thank you to infinity for this one..really needed something to cheer me up and this was PERFECT.! ❤️
Man, the reluctance from his side and her worry on seeing him like that..while doing the scene had my heart doing flip flops with joy.. 😆

The best part was of him yelling cut it. It wasn't anything big but it was definitely something. BRILLIANT.! ⭐️

The end was too cute.. the phone convo..both making sure the other is okay after the scene. DAMN.! Magical it was.. I could swear I was grinning like never before as the convo ended..😳
Your write ups are short but they are just intriguing.. ☺️

Loved this one too..Please keep writing as much as you can, this is surely something no one wants to miss..⭐️


I am glad it made you happy. That's all the aim is
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Thanks for the comment 😊
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Loved it.. Really well written👏

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