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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys...Many of u might not noe me...I m Pihu,N this is my 1st OS.Its on Vidhir ;) I wrote this after d horrible Sunday Epi bt didnt have tym to post it...Well!!!! CV's jst butchered my 2 most fav characters n this OS is jst my way of venting out all my bottled up emotions.Hope its worth ur tym...N yeah warning: It might turn out b crap.

I was walking mindlessly at night in d deserted corridors of my hostel.It was silent n peaceful n exactly polar opposite to wat I was feeling at d moment.My mind was in a constant turmoil of emotions n rage...I tried everything a heavy session wid my punching back,push-ups,sit-ups BT nothing seemed to work at d moment.Feeling suffocated in my room I walked out of my room in frustration hoping sm fresh air might help me clear my mind.I sneaked past d watchmen easily who was no doubt sleeping peacefully like my roommates.God! I envy them now.As I stepped out of my hostel premises n cool winter wind welcomed me,breeze touching my cheeks n ruffling my air...I felt a sense of calmness bt hey my stupid thoughts would haunt me all over again...I jogged on our campus lawn..hoping against hope to find peace with my inner self...I was busy jogging when I noticed a faint figure at sm distance.Curiosity got better of me n my legs started to move in d direction of dat figure who was sitting on d lawn looking at d stars...I thought its only me who was awake at this tym of night BT hell I was proved wrong again...The distance between me n d figure closed n Wat I saw left me awestruck.I saw Vidushi smiling at d stars...How cn a girl who cared abt nothing BT money n herself would actually admire smthing sooo priceless like nature????...Saying I was shocked would b an understatement.

"Vidushi?,U? Here?At this tym?" I asked with my voice dripping with curiosity.She turned her head in my direction n snapped back"I could ask u d samething...Its nt like I m nt allowed here,is it?"
"Nope,Enjoy"saying this I started walking in diff direction BT her voice stopped me"Bdw any special reason to b awake at this hour n jog? Or R u jst a biggg Fitness freak?"she asked me narrowing her eyes n giving me an answer me look"No,special reason jst wanted to enjoy d chilly wintery night at 2.30am,fun isnt it?" I answered her back with q v rude tone."Easy there Romeo...Main toh bs puch rahi thi...Nahi batana toh mat batao...Bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi" saying so she again engrossed herself in d beauty of stars BT her statement or more priisely d word ROMEO caught me offgaurd."Wat d hell Vidushi?How dare u call me Romeo?"saying this I pulled her up by her hand making her face me"Leave me Randhir...I m nt Sanyukta jisse tum jab chaho manhandle karo...n kya galat kaha maine...Purre din toh bs Sanyukta- Sanyukta ka jaap karte ho."Now her this comment was enough to set me on fire...I yanked her by her shoulders n warned her"Dnt mess with me Vidushi or else..." "Orelse kya Randhir??? she spat back with equal ferocity struggling to free herself from my grip n l left her with a jerk"Dnt interfere in my life Vidushi n Tum jaisi ladki kya janegi k Love kya hota hai??...U r d defintion of Selfish Vidushi n Tum abh mujhe bataogi life n love k baare mein"
"U r right i m slefish,sly n manipulative bt u dnt get to judge my love Randhir" I expected her to shout those words at me bt they were soft n merely came out as a whisper n den I saw her eyes well up...She just sat on d grass lawn...with her head buried down n her hands hugging her knees...It was d first tym I saw her like that n suddenly I felt guilty 4 saying those words to her...I sat down beside her"I m sorry,I didnt mean that" She looked up...Her face completely tear stricken with red eyes n pink nose...I saw a new array of emotions in her eyes pain,dejection, suffering,hurt all clearly visible in those pitch black eyes...It was d first tym I was witnessing those emotions in her eyes"Y does everyone think i m heartless colossal bitch?? bt hell e1 I have a heart n Ik u all hate me n believe me Ik I have been a terrible person to u n all of u have really good n valid reasons to hate me bt it still hurts."saying so..She begin sobbing again...I didn't noe wat to do,all this was v alien to me...In my entire life I had never been in such situation n I honestly didn't noe how to react"Listen Vidushi stop crying...Its alright"
"No,its nt ...Its alright if u guys behave coldly towards me n quite frankly I deserve it BT when Parth treats me like complete shit...That's wat breaks me d most. I love him unconditionally n all I get is plain unadulterated hatred...May b He cant love me bt dnt I deserve atleast a lil bit of appreciation??"She asked me BT it looked she asked this question more to herself n I still didn't noe how to make her stop crying"Vidushi...Pehle rona bandh karo n secondly tumhe us gadhe sugar factory mein dikhta kya hai...Voh toh mujhe relativity se bhi jyada complex equation lagta hai???? 1 min angry young man wala look leke ghumta rehta hai n next min sabko life pe gyaan deta phirta hai...I m telling u... d guy is going to b d next guatam buddha...N I bet u dnt want to spend d rest of ur life with such a saint n bore...Wouldnt suit you"I spoke it all in 1 go hoping it was reason enough 4 her to stop sobbing n hell I was right She chuckled through her tears n faced me"Hey Parth k baare mein kuch bhura mat bolo...He is a v nice guy...I cnt tolerate a word against him" giving me a really scary glare ...I wondered do this girl actually love Parth this much? N Is she really wat she shows or is it all just a facade to show d world?These questions surrounded my mind.



Ok so...Its nt actually completed ...It was getting really long so I stopped it here... If u guys like it den Ill post d other part too...Ik its crap bt it was jst like I said my bottled up emotions...So guys give me ur views...Pehla OS hai...Both appreciation n criticism r welcomed...So I m waiting... Tell me how it was Bad? Worse? Worst?

Ik its crap bt would like to dedicate my v first piece of writing to Payal(ishikashekhawat2),Chandini(Moony87),Riddhi(Khwahish15),Vani(Ms-Rocker),Anu(sudipto69)...I love u all from d core of my heart.I never thought ill make such amazing n awesome frnds here#Lucky Me n yeah its also dedicated to my 2 best frnds they r nt forum members bt Iove them both a lot n ill make sure they read this ;) Its Yashika n Shruti...Love u both.Muaaahhh : *

Love
-Pihu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wwwooohooo...i am first
nd tune ye part mjhe dedicate kiya...rula diya pagli... 😭 😆
so..first congras bcoz this is your first os...
Its was sooo amazing best...
i really really loved it
the way u describe vidhu condition...i really appericate u
mjhe friendship concept hi bhut pasand h...nd m hamesha paran yaa sarth friendship story padna pasand karti hu
nd tune to rd nd vidhu ki best understandind dekhai which i loved it...plz plz update more parts

mjhe rd nd vidhusi ki friendship aage bi dekhani h...
this is for your first best concept 👏
thanks for pm

love u muhaaah...
nd update soon...request nahi h...order h... 😉
Edited by isikashekhawat2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey Pihu,,,Vidhir pe OS...awesome yaar..kya unique friendship hogi unki ...it was ekdum mast girl! Keep it up..ya pls continue..i don't know if CVs will potray it so beautifully jaise you have described...loved the line when RD says wat is the girl who is in love with money doing sitting under stars!! N their convo,,ekdum perfect...both would make great friends...keep writing dear!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pihu.. Yaar kya masst OS likhi be.. Thanks for the dedication yaara.. 😊
You laid out the most vulnerable sides of these 2 characters.. Damn my Vidhir.. 😭😭😭

I am so glad that its Randhir who saw that side of hers.. They both share the same pain.. 😭
And same attitude as well.. Kitna bhi khud gaali dein Sarth ko lekin dooosre ke muh se ek word nahi sunna unhe.. 😃👏👏

Beautiful yaar the way vidushi was staring at the stars.. Randhir's consolation to her about Parth was superb.. LOL .. I laughed out loud.. 😆😆

Romeooo.. LOL.. Only Vidushi can say this to Randhir.. 😆😆😆

And then last but not the least.. the questions which surround Randhir.. Superb yaaar.. Write more man.. 👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: isikashekhawat2

wwwooohooo...i am first
nd tune ye part mjhe dedicate kiya...rula diya pagli... 😭 😆
so..first congras bcoz this is your first os...
Its was sooo amazing best...
i really really loved it
the way u describe vidhu condition...i really appericate u
mjhe friendship concept hi bhut pasand h...nd m hamesha paran yaa sarth friendship story padna pasand karti hu

nd tune to rd nd vidhu ki best understandind dekhai which i loved it...plz plz update more parts

mjhe rd nd vidhusi ki friendship aage bi dekhani h...
this is for your first best concept 👏
thanks for pm

love u muhaaah...
nd update soon...request nahi h...order h... 😉



Tysm yaar : *
I m.really glad u liked it :)
Made my day oops night ;)
I thought y not write on my two most fav characters...Abhi CV's se umid k badle sirf dhoka n disappointment hi milta hai ;)
Bt Ty again 4 liking it.
Love you : *
N konsa PM be?????? Watsapp kiya tha tujhe toh Maine 😉
N Abhi apne.order de hi diya toh maan na hi padega :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pihu1596



Tysm yaar : *
I m.really glad u liked it :)
Made my day oops night ;)
I thought y not write on my two most fav characters...Abhi CV's se umid k badle sirf dhoka n disappointment hi milta hai ;)
Bt Ty again 4 liking it.
Love you : *
N konsa PM be?????? Watsapp kiya tha tujhe toh Maine 😉
N Abhi apne.order de hi diya toh maan na hi padega :)


But tha to pm hi na... 😉
Yr cvs se to umeed h nahi tooo...hum log khud story likh ke khush ho lete h...nd yaaa yaha rd waha pihu..
But such me bhut acha likhati h tu...
I love last seen..yaha rd apne idea se vidhu ko hasa deta h...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Happy_hippy


hey Pihu,,,Vidhir pe OS...awesome yaar..kya unique friendship hogi unki ...it was ekdum mast girl! Keep it up..ya pls continue..i don't know if CVs will potray it so beautifully jaise you have described...loved the line when RD says wat is the girl who is in love with money doing sitting under stars!! N their convo,,ekdum perfect...both would make great friends...keep writing dear!!



Hippy yaar!!!!
Mera dil baag baag hogaya...tera comment padhke.
Tysm 4 liking it.
It really means a lottt.
I was v scared n didn't wanna post this...I was afraid whether people would actually like n accept Vidhir BT thankyou v much 4 liking it :)
I appreciate it a lottt.
Love you : *
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oye cheater cock...
Chandni nd tripti..tum dono aj episod ka 1 st pat dene wale the na..
But post hi nahi banaya..
Wah... 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: isikashekhawat2

Oye cheater cock...
Chandni nd tripti..tum dono aj episod ka 1 st pat dene wale the na..
But post hi nahi banaya..
Wah... 🤣



Arre banaya na..Check kar.. My post is "DAnde ka funda" aur Chandni ne bhi mast post banaya hai"CVs ki maa ki" ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Moony87

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000cc">Pihu.. Yaar kya masst OS likhi be.. Thanks for the dedication yaara..😊</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000cc">You laid out the most vulnerable sides of these 2 characters.. Damn my Vidhir..😭😭😭</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000cc">I am so glad that its Randhir who saw that side of hers.. They both share the same pain..😭</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000cc">And same attitude as well.. Kitna bhi khud gaali dein Sarth ko lekin dooosre ke muh se ek word nahi sunna unhe..😃👏👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000cc">Beautiful yaar the way vidushi was staring at the stars.. Randhir's consolation to her about Parth was superb.. LOL .. I laughed out loud..😆😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000cc">Romeooo.. LOL.. Only Vidushi can say this to Randhir..😆😆😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000cc">And then last but not the least.. the questions which surround Randhir.. Superb yaaar.. Write more man..👏👏👏</font>




I m on cloud9 coz u liked it :)
Bcoz u r like my most fav writer on Vids n Rd.
N also d one who likes them.like I do...So such faddu comment coming from u makes me wanna jump on my bed.
Ty Ty Tysm 4 liking it.
N U LOL'D matlab funny hi hoga...Coz its nt everyday u get compliments from d master herself...Teri comic timing ki toh main fan hu...Dil khush kar diya yaar tune...Abhi khushi k assu main to rahi hu.
N Romeo...obvio apni Vids hi hai Jo Yeh kar sakti hai ;)
N yup Vidhir r sooo similar yet diff...isliye toh I wanted their frndship in serial...BT dats not gonna happen.
Love you loads 4 such a dhassu n faddu comment bidu ;)

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