OS- itna karo na mujhe pyaar...UPDATED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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kehte hai..ki hum duniya me jisse sabse zyada pyaar karte hai use khone ka darr bhi sabse zyada hota hai..
naksh is upset with naitik as he did'nt allow him for his school trip..duggu is not talking to him since morning..he dos'nt want to came near naitik..
after karvahauth celebration..
ak-thank u nk meri zindagi me aane ke liye..aur mere har pal ko itna khoobsorat banane ke liye..
nk-thanks to u ak ki aapne mujhe pyarr ka matlab batane ke liye..mai aapse aur naksh se bahut pyaar karta hu..ki har pal ek kushi aap dono ko dena chahta hu
ak-agar itna hi pyaar aap duggu se karte hai to use pls trip par jane dijiye nk..
nk-?
he just got up from there and went to his room..and ak came behind him..he is sitting on a window side..
ak-nk kya hua ?aap aise kyu behave kar rahe hain
nk-ak mai..and he started crying..
ak-nk..kya hua..
nk-mai apne naksh ko khona nahi chahta..use apne se door nahi rakhna chahta..
ak-par nk duggu ko kaun aapse door kar raha hai ha
nk-pata nahi ak par ab mujhe ab kisi par bhi vishwaas nahi hai..
ak-kyu nk..hum apne bete ko aage badhne se ahi rok sakte
nk-mai janta hu ak par mai majboor hu..maine apne chaar saal apne bete ke bina guzare hai..
and he tightly hugs her..
ak-chup ho jaiye nk..
nk-mera beta aaj mujhse baat nahi kar raha hai..mujhse door bhag raha hai..par mai use kaise batau ki uske papa use bahut pyaar karte hai..
ak-nk aap chup ho jaiye mai duggu ko samjhaongi ha..
and they broke their hug..
ak-chaliye ab hum so jaye ha..
nk-hmm..
AFTER SOME TIME..
on the bed naksh hugging each other..
ak is kissing nk..
nk-ak thank u and he too kissed her on her forhead..
ak-par phir bhi mai aapse naaraz hu
nk-kyu?
ak-aapne mujhpe har baat par gussa kia isliye..
nk-maine..aap par..bilkul nahi..
ak-accha..jhoot kyu bol rahe hai
nk-kyunki mai aapse nahi..balki naksh ki mumma se gussa tha..
ak-accha naksh ki mumma se..ha..ha
and again kissed him on his neck..
nk-ha..kyunki mai apni akshara se bahut pyaar karta hu..
ak-mai bhi par duggu ke khadoos papa se nahi..balki apne pyaare naitik se..
and nk came over her..
nk-accha itna pyaar karti hai mujhse..
ak-pehle aap bataiye..aap hai kaun..duggu ke papa ya phir naitik..
nk-waise abhi kuch der pehle to mai duggu ka papa tha..lekin ab aapka dewaana nk hu..
akshara feels very shy...
nk-to bataiye ki kitna pyaar karti hai mujhse
ak-mujhe sharam aati hai
nk-hey bhagwaan..kya karu mai inka..apne pati ke saath romance karne me bhi sharam..
ak-nahi wo..
nk-nahi wo kya..ha..and he tickle on her neck through his nose..
ak-nk..pls..agar mai chahu na..to
nk-to kya kar lengi aap ha..bataiye..
ak-batau..
nk-hmm..
she quickly frees herself from his grip and went over nk..
ak-ha to ab aap kya keh rahe the..
nk-kehna nahi hai..jo bhi hai ab aap ko karna hai..
ak qucickly put her lips on his lips..they felt pleasure in it..they sucked licked and bit eachother's lips..
ak came again her place on bed..and rest for a while..their breathing was audiable..
nk-ak pls mujhe itna pyaar na kijiye..ki ek din mai pagal ho jau..
ak-pagal to aap hai hi..aap mujhe itna pyaar na kijiye ki ek din mai aapke jaisi ho jau..both smile on this and hug eachother..
and sleeping peacefully in eachother arms..
NEXT DAY MORNING..
ak is very much tensod as duggu is not talking to naitik..
but..when duggu came..
du-mumma..thank u so much..
ak-kyu kya hua baby..
du-papa ne trip par jane ke liye ha kar di
ak-aaree wah..ye to bahut acchi baat hai..ab apne papa se kabhi gussa mat hona..ok baby
du-okeey..and he went happily from there..
nk-thanks ak mujhe kal raat support dene ke liye..aur naksh ko samjhane ke liye..par maine bhi use ha kar di trip ke liye..
ak-par maine use kuch nahi kaha..
nk-to phir..
mumma papa..mai khud hi maan gaya tha..trip me na jane ke liye..kyunki mai apne mummy papa ko yu fight karte nahi dekh sakta..kyunki mai aap dono se bahut bahut bahut pyaar karta hu..and trio hug each other..
sorry friends this is not so good like u all expected but...definately i will try new one again..
Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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avinaksh thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz pkz plz jaldi... can't wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u friends for waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update raina
loved naitik's love for akshara and duggu
naksh part was romantic
i liked ur os
and pls do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hirannaksh

nice update raina
loved naitik's love for akshara and duggu
naksh part was romantic
i liked ur os
and pls do write more.

thank u sonal..for praising my os..otherwise i thought i have written it very badly..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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muaahhh tooo good... like always... specially naksh romance [:D]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: avinaksh

muaahhh tooo good... like always... specially naksh romance 😃

thank u avi so sweet of u that u like my boring os.. :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry raina for let comment
os are very beautiful, cute, romantic and nice dear
tumhe nahi lagta ki tumhe yrkkh ke cvs team join karni chahiye isi bahane hume good scene dekhne ko milege thanQ for cute os😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshanakshiran

sorry raina for let comment

os are very beautiful, cute, romantic and nice dear
tumhe nahi lagta ki tumhe yrkkh ke cvs team join karni chahiye isi bahane hume good scene dekhne ko milege thanQ for cute os😊

thanks for liking this os varsha but i think cvs are more creative than me..

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