Rewrite today's scene that ruined yhm n ishra equation

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mishkatfanfrevr

@mishkatfanfrevr

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Posted: 11 years ago

If u had the scne situation assigned to u..what scene wud u write...the confrontation scene.. Ishu comes into the room and sees a slightly drunk bitter ready to fight for his ishu raman... So share how u wud rewrite the scene.. So tht it wudnt be as bad as it was today...😊

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Amu_queen

@Amu_queen

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Posted: 11 years ago

For me,

-Raman would not be drunk in the scene...so that Ishita understands that he is fully aware and means every word of what he is saying.

-But he would still say most of the things he did initially-i kinda liked those dialogues - aaj kal meri taraf dekhti nahi ho etc etc .It was very intense and well enacted.

-BUT i would NOT have the haq jatane wala crap.According to me the cvs did harakiri with RKB's character.

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Edited by Amu_queen - 11 years ago

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mishkatfanfrevr

@mishkatfanfrevr

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amu_queen
For me,
-Raman would not be drunk in the scene...so that Ishita understands that he is fully aware and means every word of what he is saying.
-But he would still say most of the things he did initially-i kinda liked those dialogues - aaj kal meri taraf dekhti nahi ho etc etc .It was very intense and well enacted.
-BUT i would NOT have the haq jatane wala crap.According to me the cvs did harakiri with RKB's character.
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u nailed it.. Even i thot it started off pretty well he wanted her but not in a forcible way..he really wanted her..i dont know how n why n where the cvs lost their way..i think the fire distracted them...😕