Abhigya ss -Woh Lamhe story line up

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Abhigya Ss-Woh Lamhe

He got down the car and his eyes roamed, taking the view of the Mansion in front of him. It looked only like yesterday that he left the place at the stroke of midnight. The paint looked fresh as he remembered .His legs carried him slowly and steadily not giving out his furious heartbeats.

He watched Aliya from behind the screen as she continued cursing someone called Bulbul...

A familiar air blew carrying the unique scent of roses and sandalwood .His Dida never changed the brand of Inscent sticks. Climbing to the room he saw the photo frames and smiled, nothing had changed. As he did move he saw her, an angel in white sleeping in an awkward position .He set to help her. As he touched her she stirred and he got caught in her hypnotic eyes

Hours passed and Pragya was beginning to wonder what was wrong with her husband, he was being just very nice to her. Something was not right and she couldn't pin point it.He was at present sleeping on her lap.

Dadi watched happily as herb grandson came down with her Bahu, his eyes not leaving her. A dream come true. Sudden commotion at the door drew all their attention as Rockstar Abhi walked in angrily, Tanu trying to talk to him.

Tanu froze as she saw the second Abhi who was with Chashmish. Aliya felt her eyes welling up with tears on seeing him after years. Abhi finally found the missing piece of his heart as he stared at himself, the features and everything were same..

Dadi felt relief as he stood before her alive.. the trance was broken by Pragya...They watched her go pale and shivered ...

"Abhay "she muttered and everything went black...Everyone snapped out of their thoughts as Abhay caught her before she touched the ground...

Do I continue? A penny to your thoughts please...

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Diahh thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So Abhi has a twin brother!?😲 He is the one who came first and saw Pragya sleeping right? Plz tell me whether I got this right... 😛
Loved the beginning!waiting for more!👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diahh

So Abhi has a twin brother!?😲 He is the one who came first and saw Pragya sleeping right? Plz tell me whether I got this right... 😛

Loved the beginning!waiting for more!👍🏼


You got it right...Abhay is the one who came in...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start...it's different from the stories I've read b4!!
Love it n plz continue soon...can't wait 4 the nxt update
Thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!
Wow!
Wow!

How can you wonder whether to continue or not!

Of course you have to!

Seems like a beginning to a fab story!

Loving this new concept!

Very different to everything I have seen so far!!

Do continue soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic beginning
Thank you so much for the PM

Please update regularly and PM me

I am very curious where you are going to take this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! Great start Smriti. OF COURSE continue!! Really want to know more about this mystery Abhay. Hope the title doesn't mean a sad ending? Anyway, looking forward to more soon please!! Thanks for this story :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start. Pls continue the story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very good and fabulous start ... wow abhi has a twin brother;poor pragya she was really shocked to see two abhi,... I am very excited to read more ... pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful start, Smritiz 😛... sure got my attention!!!! Please continue!!!!


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