MANAN POEM (in my style) i am changed

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello ppl..
my name is samridhi agarwal...
am an old member of Forums but m new to this forums..
i have just started watching this show and found it interesting...
i write on other forums specially sadda haq forums.. and this is my first attempt on this forums..
i thought of starting a fiction here.. then i thought for a start a poem cum p.o.v(s) wud be better... agar ap log bore hogaye to...mera to popat ho jayegaa...🤣

now bhot hui meri bakwas.. shut up samridhi now...
samridhi: ok.. ok.. m quiet.. plz read the poem given below.. happy reading,,,

ā¤ļø MANANā¤ļø


Manik's pov...

what has happening to me??
what is going on with me??

why do i wanna be with you..??
why do i wanna see you??
why do i wanna touch you..??

when you are not around i miss you..
when you are around i wanna hug you..

your voice..
your embrace..
your touch..
your fragrance..
give me solace..

I can feel you around me even if you are not in front of me..
i can feel you inside me..

there is something new about me..
there is something new about life..

my life is changing...
my feelings are changing..

you have changed me..
i want to be like before..
no i love this way more..

i close my eyes i see you..
i open my eyes to see you..

what has happening to me??
what is going on with me??


ā¤ļøMANANā¤ļø


Nandini's pov

what has happening to me??
what is going on with me??

i am new..
i am changed..
i feel beautiful..
i feel loved..

why this monster has became a saint for me..??
why this monster is affecting me so much..??
why do i want to trust him so much..??

i wanna agree with you..
but still i cant show you..

why do i wanna look good in front of you??
why do i want you to always be with me..??
why do i want you to always look at me??

i close my eyes i see you..
i open my eyes to see you..

my heart aches when you are not around..
my heart aches when i see you with other..
my heart aches when you find me wrong..

but i feel possessed when you show your rights on me..
but i feel claimed when you order me..
but i feel protected when you are around..

i know you are there...
i know you will never leave me..

but still i am scared..
but still i am worried..
i dont know why..

what has happening to me??
what is going on with me??



so guys this is it,, hope u all liked it..
tell me if u want to read me more... then only i will continue here...
love
samridhi..



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vani86 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 wow yaar...its awsome...šŸ‘ā­ļøšŸ‘

.pls try to write an os or ff for manik and nandini...becoz... i really like ur works alot... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sammy
moi sanu here
I also watch kyy and love manan
aweome
aaj hi tune shq par ek poem post kiya
aur phir ye

it's awesome dear
lovely

plzz write more here too
love
sanu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Di it was so nyc

So beautifully written
U portrayed it so flawlessly

Moi luved it to the core 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! Awesome one Sammy!! Loved to see u here.. And plzz write an ss or os or ff on MaNan.. Plzzz..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely poem on their feelings. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Their feelings very beautifully summarized...in its simplicity, clarity and tracing the path from the beginning until now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks guys..
M glad u all liked it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeah yeah yeah it's awesome
^_^
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's really nice.. I m very fond of it writing...
U nailed in dis forums too

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