A POEM - To Naitik From Akshara

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

mere naitik
meri zindagi ki pehli muskaan ho tum..
meri saansoon ki aakhir saas ho tum..
tere rehne se meri zindagi hai..
bin tumhare be jaan hai hum..
pal pal pyaar ka ehsaas ho tum..
rishto me sabse pyaari methaas ho tum..
tere liye hi karti hu ye sringaar..
meri har ek choodiyon ki khankaar ho tum..
tere naam ka sindoor maang me bharkar..
mere dil ka abhimaan ho tum..
hamare pyaar ki nishaani ke..
chehre ki muskaan ho tum..
bin tumare hum mar jayenge..
dil bhi cheer kar dekh lo tum..
har ek saas naitik pukaregi..
chahe jitna bhi hame aazma lo tum..
tumhari akshara..
this poem is for akshara to naitik..
hope u all like my poem..
i have written poem like pragati..she is my inspiration..as she is very good in this..i know its not a very good..but this is my small attempt...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice attempt
i like it

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avisha

@avinaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

awww its sooo cute... loved it. ... I wish akshara saying this to naitik and soon their misunderstandings are clear

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avinaksh
awww its sooo cute... loved it. ... I wish akshara saying this to naitik and soon their misunderstandings are clear

thanks avi dear..me too want that mu gets cleared soon..i can't see them like this

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: naksh_manju
nice 👏 👏 👏

thanks dear

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varsha

@CuRlyTalEs

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful poem dear plz write more

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran
Beautiful poem dear plz write more

thanks varsha..i will try to write more..

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

very good poem raina and keep wrote more poems.. thanks for the compliment
mujhe bhi poem likhne ka idea tab aaya jab ek din main baithe baithe naksh ke bare me soch rahi thi aur maine socha ki kyun na main naksh ke liye kuch gaun kyonki mujhe singing ka bahut shauk hai.. aur aise hi karte karte main poem writer ban gayi.. maine to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki main naksh ke liye poem likhungi but ab mujhe ye poems likhke bahut khushi hoti hai.. aisa lagta hai jaise mera sapna poora ho gaya

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
very good poem raina and keep wrote more poems.. thanks for the compliment
mujhe bhi poem likhne ka idea tab aaya jab ek din main baithe baithe naksh ke bare me soch rahi thi aur maine socha ki kyun na main naksh ke liye kuch gaun kyonki mujhe singing ka bahut shauk hai.. aur aise hi karte karte main poem writer ban gayi.. maine to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki main naksh ke liye poem likhungi but ab mujhe ye poems likhke bahut khushi hoti hai.. aisa lagta hai jaise mera sapna poora ho gaya

oh so sweet dear and your os is very sweet too..do write more