SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16* - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Chubby Cheeks!
So sorry for the late comment.
Tumhe toh pata hai na I was super busy.
So back to the update.
It was awesome.
Loved it, as usual.<33
Ooo, they are thinking about each other:D
Cant wait to read the next episode.
Update soon.
Lots of love,
Mary

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice updates
Love will blossom soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So guys here I present the next chapter
hope u all guys liked
n this update is fast
i knw i knw its late
bt still its fast a bit hi sahi
ok ok now read the chapter
Recap-swayam tieng the hook of her blouse both talking about their feelings
(Banner credits goes to shini aka shinningshanu)
CHAPTER 5
Keeping all this thoughts aside she went down to the car where swayam was waiting for her she came and opened the door of the car hearing that sound swayam came out from his thoughts and they drive to the party
As soon they entered the party all the attention was diverted to them as they were the reason behind the party all gahered themselves among swayam and sharon"arey aa gaye tum dono idhar aao"said dadi dragging swayam and sharon with her to the stage
"Good evening ladies and gentlemen today we have gathered to wish the newly married couple swayam and sharon,you all can wish them one by one"said swayam's dadi and went down the stage
There on the stage swayam and sharon were standing and one by one all were coming on the stage with wishes and gifts for the newly married couple
some wished them good future together
some wish them happy married
some with the question when will the new member come in family
etc,etc
after all this was over it was time for dance every couple were dancing on the floor but the newly married for whom this party is thrown were not dancing seeing Dadi came and drag both of them to the floor swayam put his hands on her waistimmediately sharon made a face "chance mat maro"said sharon putting her hands on his shoulders and making him away a bit
"excuse me...mai tum par chance maruga,kabhi apni shakal dekhi hai aine(mirror)mai"said swayam seeing at her with a fake smile and swaying to the tune of the song
"roz dekhti hu tumse to lakh guna achi lagti hu"said sharon throwing daggers at him
"kabhi dhyanse bhi dekh liya karo bhotni lagti ho"said swayam witha genuial smile in his voice and face both
"listen u..."said sharon but stopped and her eyes opened in full shock she immediately hugged him tightly her hands were around his neck and his hands went from her waist to her back
"kya huva abhi to bol rahi thi mujhe tat chance mat maro ab kya huva khud chance marne lagi I knw I m uncontrolable"said swayam with an attitude in his voice
"stupid mai chance nai mar rahi hu vo...vo... mera blouse khul gaya hai isiliye"said sharon with uncomfortness
"wat???kese kapde pehnti hotum ladkiya nahi ese kapde pehnti nahi ye sab hota"said swayam holding her back at the same time holding the blouse
"ye sab tumhari galti hai tumhine thik se nai lock kiya hoga"said sharon arguinging
"oh hello to khud bhi to kar sakti thi na"said swayam
"maine to tumse help nai mangi thi tum hi aye the samne se meri help karni"said sharon which was a matter of fact
"vo isiliye kyuki tum nai kar sakti thi usse lock"said swayam which was also a matter of fact
"mai kar leti tune hi zabardasti help ki thi"said sharon arguing more
"oh really then ye bhi apne aap kar lo m leaving my hand"said swayam with attitude and started removing his hand
"ok ok stop meri galati fine"said sharon resting her case
"yahi moka hai swayam isse jo bulvana hai bula sakta hai"thought swayam
"not so easy pehle say please help me"said swayam with a smirk
"please help me"said sharon with a normal voice.
"sunai nai de raha hai"said swayam smirking more
"please help me"said sharon a little loudly.
"ok ok ab tum itna please bol rahi ho to kar deta hu chalo"said swayam finally helping her
"meri majburi ka faida utha rahe ho mai tumhe chodugi nai"thought sharon to herself
Slowly slowly swayam get down from the dancefloor and taking sharon along with dadi look at them and found both of them like this and she smiled and prayed to god that they both remain like that happy and together
swayam took her to a corner where nobody can see them and make sharon turned around carefully not removing his hands from her back but as soon as he saw her back he was shocked as the hook was broken
"kya huva???jaldi karo sab wait kar rahe hoge"said sharon with worry
"vo...actually...the hook is broken"said swayam closing his eyes
Hearing this she turn around keeping her hands on her back and facing swayam
"wat???ab mai kya karugi???kisse help mangu n kaun help karega ha taani but vo to mom ke saath upar vale hall mai hai sare food arrangements dekhne aur dadi unhe kuch kahugi to vo hyper ho jayegi ab mai kya karugi kiske paas jaugi aur tum mujhe ese kyu dekh rahe ho kuch to bolo mai kya karu,are bolo"said sharon nonstop and then asking swayam to speak although not giving him single chance to speak
"mai kya bolu tum mujhe bolne ka chance dogi tabhi boluga na"Said swayam laughing
"meri esi situation mai bhi u r laughing???"said sharon with sad face but at the same time cuet face
"nahi u stop being worried mai kuch sochta hu,hm??"said swayam cupping her face inresponse sharon just node her face she 1st time saw the care in his eyes,1st time he was talking with her with care and not with anger or irritation,1st time she felt somebody is there to care for her after dadi,1st time she felt somebody is there for her to help her,to be with her all the time she was feeling haapy..wat happy in this situation but why in this situation she should be worried and hyper but why she was not because she knew somebody is there to think for her to get worry for her she had trust in that person,trust itself is a big word she really trust swayam???but why???doesnt he was the same person whom she cant tolerate even a second and now she trust him something new was there surely
after a minute he removed his hands from her cheeks and started moving here and there thinking and sharon was just looking at him after thinking 4-5 minutes came to her and said"chalo,we dont have any other option but to leave lets go home"
"but dadi n baki sab ko kya bolege???"
"tum vo sab chodo I will call them and tell her"
"ok,but mai ese kese jaungi???"said sharon pointing at her back
"nope,tum ese jaogi"said swayam took the paalu of her sari and wrap it around her back,sharon smiled seeing at him.
"lets go"said swayam taking his 1 hand out and asking sharon for her hand she took her 1 hand from her back and put it in swayam's hand while other hand holding the blouse at the place
swayam and sharon both silently went out of the hall
"sharon tum yaha peche vale door se chali jao mai age vale door se car lekar ata hu kyuki parking mai jate vakt bohat loog hoge isiliye,sambhal kar jana vaha khadi raho mai jaldi aa jauga"said swayam with a smile in response sharon just nodded
Both went to their sharon went at the backside door there not a single human not a spark of light she was hell scared yet with a brave heart she went opened the door and went out closing it suddenly she heard some whistling noise hearing it she turn around and and looked at the men who made those noise they more look like goons they were 4 she was hell scared seeing them she started walked a bit ahead and thought to call swayam but she realised in hurry she forgot her cell at home there swayam was struted by people who were coming now in the function and were congratulating him
there the goons started moving ahead where sharon was standing feeling them close besides her she was fearing more and she started moving ahead she heard 1 of them speak"are kaha ja rahi ho janeman zara ruk to sahi"hearing this she started running with her both hands on her back but they ran fast then her 1 came ahead of her other 2 at both of her sides and the 1 at her back there was noway she could run tears started flowing from her she was praying to God that swayam came fast and save her but he was stucked there
Now wat will happen??will swayam save her???even i dont knw about it I havent think...lets see
so guys hw was it
do give ur reviews
will be waiting
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Love
Mansi😊
Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me fst yeppi 🥳
nice part 👏
sharon n swayam dancing 😳
love their nok jok 😆
aww.swayam care for sharon 😳
swayam idea is good 😉
goons 😡
sharon is alone
hope swayam comes fast
update soon
i kw ur to buzy to update soon
bt try k 😛
Edited by Iman_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Res

unres wow

amazing chapter full

on swaron everywhere

swaron dance

😳😳😳

update soon n pm me

take care!!!!!!!!!

Edited by meenu_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
swaron convo on dance floor was wow... I loved sharon's pov too much... trust... now what is gonna happen.. think quickly... thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Luvd the way it started... Poor Swaron party was thrown foor them ,, bt they only cudn't dance.. nd Here came Dadi.. I luv her character, Thank god she dragged them to dance floor,, Yo Dadi Rocks..! 😃

Swaron cute Nok jhok Convo on dance floor... luvd it... 😃 Lol the way she said Chance mat maaro.. 😛 The way he cupped her face,, trying to ease her up.. aww.. so sweet..! 😊

Luvd Sharon's POV .. the trust on swayam,, the confusion she had in her mind,, her feeling for swayam.!! Luvd it..!! 😊

I hate those goons..! 🤢 But the precap... waiting wat's gonna happen next..! 😊

Update soon..!! 😊

Thanks for the PM..!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I m 5th [B)]
Ohh my bff were r ur hand i want to kiss them 😳 wah!!wah!!kya update thi
U made my day gal i was so tired n bored bt after reading ur update my gosh!! I got new energy to work n i was feeling so better than

Swaron nok jhok loved it
When swayam commented about her looks n she back fire
Poor sharan she was helpless n swayam was making her tell please hehe
Aww swyam ka idea he is so cute
😃 ...now don't kill me swaym tera hii hei
But sharan usse chod ne wali nahi lagti
Wat d hell goons 😡 abb kya hoga 😲 aage jo bhi ho
But agar sharan kuchi bhi hua toh mei ter ko kaccha chabba dalugi samji...
My bff ur magical update stole my heart ❤️

Love u
My bff 🤗
Edited by -Snowflakes- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update.
SwaRon convo on the dance floor was awesome.
I hope woh dono ek dusre ke aur paas aaye.
Update soon. 😊

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