SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16*

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

res

Unresin

Yeh kya update tha

I had to re read the whole thing

Tis was super hilarious

The whole blouse thing was really

Funny

Poor swayam was lost thr

The way u handled the whole situation

Was brilliant

Its time like tis wen we think

Inki fights hi inka pyaar hai

Tis love hatred combo was so

Subtly put i hav to say i m loving

Tis growing connections b/w them

Darr hai kahi tanni nah piss jaye inn donoke beech

Do update soon 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 10 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

I guess its my 2nd comment here right after prologue..I am inactive so usually i read ur updates..Ur story is going good,I like the characterisation in which the antics n those nok jhoks are lovely to read..The idea of husband n wife is beautifuly executed here with ur concept..Till updates i enjoyed read n i must say as a writer u are growing good..In between u made ur readers to enjoy bit romance like that blouse fiasco..😆 So thanx for ur all PM's..I enjoyed ur work..keep updating as i found ur updates speed is slow..

See u soon

Prateek

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Shailja

@Kshailja

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Update soon yaar..

nd SwaRon k romantic scenes kb aaenge???

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

hey my naughtiinocent sorry sorry sorry I knew I'm epic late BT I was busy in submission now coming to update gosh this was beautiful hook scene hooked m here for so long I'm totally in swaron land yup u make taani a darling hayee I loved her teasing they two duffurs r falling for each other n yup how to forgot that fine fine scene awww to cute sorry for epic late now update soon BT first take care of u r self

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

second chapter is sooo good👏

hayee Swayam gawking at her..

wowww...😃😳

chalo ab I'll read the 3rd one😳

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Chapter 3

Swayam ki mom😡😡😡

aur Dad.. why so rude?😭Hayee I love this Dadi🤗

Swayam back hugged Sharon!

Lovely...👏

moving on to chapter 4

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Chapter 4..

sensations... hayee To confess, I am loving this love hate relationship of our beloved, beloved,beloved Swaron!❤️ Their nok jhoks are worth reading..😆👏 di this concept is great and refreshning.. Update soon naa..😳

And.. the part where Swayam hooked her blouse, omg too good!👏👏☺️ I mean, the effect of his touch... hayeee😳

You're a great writer mansi di.. can't wait to read about their reception party...😳 I am sure it would be great, just like your previous updates didu⭐️

Sholly for late replies di! Lub you!🤗❤️

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

hmmm

long time anyways

coming to the update

it was good lovely

swaron eyelocks love it

update soon n pm me

take care!!!!!!!

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.Shanaya.

@.Shanaya.

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Amazing update

Your big update made up for the fact that you have been updating after a very long time. 😆

It was awesome.

SwaRon eyelocks were out of this world. 😳

Update soon. 😃

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Andria

@Andy_Dynamite

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#210

aaawww!!! This was such an amazing cute update!! Loved the mirror wali scene!! Finally Swayam bhi soch raha feelings ke baare mein!!! lovely update!!!