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crazygul

@crazygul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

lovely os ! jane kaise kab khaa ikraar ho guya. hum sochtey hi reh guye aur pyaar ho guya !

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guesss what ???????...i am basically so cool......

@ashlok

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Meerab superbbb yaaar
Tittle and the content match a lot
Simply superb yaaar
U r blessed dear
Simplyyy awesome

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

last scene was very beautiful.lovely

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Neelum.drashti

@Neelum.drashti

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Love the confession & colours :)

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

Love the confession & colours :)

Thanks buddy😳

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Samia

@Sam_15

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Aww a very sweet OS Meeroo! 🤗 So beautifully written 😳

I just love these stories where once best friends fall in love with each other. It just makes their love story a fairytale-like and this OS was no different

Tbh the beginning reminded me of the movie 'jaane tu ya jaane na'. Have you watched it? It had a similar theme.

Anyways I loved the way you described Shlok's realisation, his dilemma abt whether to confess or not, his anguish, heartbreak, distress & torture he went through after finding out Astha was in love. Of course the idiot didn't bother to find out who Khamkha main apni jaan jalayi. But never mind, all's well that end's well 😃

The way you wrote their confession was mind blowing. That was the best part! ❤️

I liked that Astha was straightforward about her feelings even when she was oblivious to the nature of his feelings for her. Felt bad for her when she described how much she longed for his company and presence in her life while she was away and how distressful life was for her Of course felt bad for Shlok too & no doubt it was much more worse for him but Astha ke liye thoda zyada hi 😳😆 This is what I absolutely love abt ur writing. You have the talent to induce emotions in ur readers by bringing ur characters to life through ur words 😊

Overall it was a touching story...simply awesome! 👏

P.s. Ooh look, another essay by me after a long time 😛😉 Memories!! 😭 Now don't u start feeling nostalgic like me 😆😆

Edited by Sam_15 - 10 years ago

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hiba

@mriara13

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

A beautiful confession and a sweet story meerab, bless your mind where do you get so many ideas?!!
And thank you darling for the pm 😛

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_
Awesome OS.
loved it.

thanks dear 😳

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mriara13
A beautiful confession and a sweet story meerab, bless your mind where do you get so many ideas?!!
And thank you darling for the pm 😛

thanks dear 😳

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