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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

so much emotional update.. N yes indeed it needs calmnes and focus while writing..
Nxt part and hint is for Khushi ryt...
N yes i m from Kashmir aaa Kashmir Ki Kali.. Hehehehehe.. Yes our area was one of them jo vacate kraaye gaye thei.. Now we r back at home aftr 1 month bt stil problms r more.. Update soon n njoy festivals..

Glad you enjoyed the update! Yes, it is Khushi!
Hope Kashmir is better now!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

A VERY SWEET AND EMOTIONAL UPDATE

BOTH THE SISTERS SHOWED THEIR LOVE FOR THEIR BROTHERS AND LAID BARE SOME FACTS ABOUT THEM TOO

WAITING FOR THE NEXT DHAMAKA

THE COUPLET IS ABOUT GEET

No! It is not Geet! It is Khushi!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 76 A
awesome dear...
excellent...


Thank you!

Arnav and Maan apart from their families and love dont interact much...
the family should see them romancing their lady loves...
they will faint for sure...


🤣 So true!

Aakash (this is the name i call my fiance) is completely lost in Paayal and Paayal too...
nice program...


Haaye! Jeeju ka naam Aakash hai! Akki Jiju!😉

Anjali and Arnav share a lovely bonding...
the way she said that was so lovely and beautiful...


Oye hello! Woh sab lines maine likhi thi! Dont give Anjali the credit!😉😆

loving someone like that and that person not feeling suffocated is really a big thing...
and Shyam knows that too...
NK saying pataakha was damn funny...


😃

Maan claim her soon...
La is not blushing but feeling something else...
sigh Arnav idiot do something soon...


If you readers ever meet Arnav of DFL, you guys are going to kill him, nahi?😕😆

hahaha Geet is really the pataakha like NK calls...
bechara Aakash...
the leg pulling was so funny...


Glad you enjoyed it!

and indeed Geet and her Veere are so close...
Geet and Arnav pair make me to laugh more...
lovely sangeet...
cont soon dear...

Thanks for the review!😃
Enjoy the time dear!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Deelight

Humari khushi aur kaun🤪

lovely update...
n must tell u i was also in tears... d update was damn emotional..

Anjali's really made me sooo emotional... it was fantastic..

superb update!

continue sooon!

In tears? Really? Wow! Feel so touched reading that!
And yes, it is Khushi!
Glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Ahhh okay so it really worked

I didn't even have to read more than one line and I was off

Hey thanx doc

You are a lifesaver and a miracle worker


Anytime bestie!😃


I am cured now just pray to god I don't go too over board

Your cure can have opposite effect too

That would drive you mad for sure


I am already mad dear! Coz why would a sane person work on seven stories simultaneously?😕😉


Well so we get to sangeet

Haiyye haiyye it really is getting close for him

Aru mate hope you are ready for this

I mean wooing your afreen and that too before you ruin la life

Which he already did my getting engaged to her

Where is nk when you need him


A Song for Nk: Tu Kahaan Yeh Bata, Is Sangeet Ke Night Mein!😆😉


Oh wait he is still here

And guess he will be our saviour

Okay let get down to it shall we

Sangeet here I cometh

Ahhh I was wondering about her I mean nani

Its seems ages since we last heard from her

Which technically isn't true and yet it is

Oh lord am at it again confusing poor souls like kappa


Nope! Not at all confused! After all, ek paagal hi toh doosre paagal ko samajh sakta hai, right?😉


Focus man must focus and am back to story

Oyye sitti kaun baja raha hai

Hope geet is one of them too

Goes with her personality don't it

Ahhh chutke ki shaadi toh phir bhi hogi

Parr aapke chote ka humko nahin pata

First he gets engaged to wrong girl and then he finds out and yet he does sod all now when he about to marry the girl he got engaged to now he is running after khushi again

Wow I never thought day would come when ASR would be that slow


😆


I know not much for me to swear but somehow thinking of aru I cant help but bash him


No problem! I love it when you bash Arnav! Go ahead!


Nani I hope you will still be happy with change in dulhans for your chote

I think she would be right she likes khushi naa

Ahh yes this is for just family well extended ones I mean

We already had corporate sangeet wait can I call it that I will


You can call it that!😛


Hmmm so that's where those guest went

I was wondering where they were with this family only event

Now I know good move

Well what else could they do

After all it would be rude otherwise right


Exactly!


Wait are our boys gonna take part in this sangeet they better

After all when their sangeet happens again for all you know with arhi and maneet well they need to make an appearance so might as well practice now

After all don't they say practice makes perfect

And these two are all about perfection though they screw up a lot too

Wait what why when where

Okay so question bank starts here

Why on earth are they faking their smiles man

Unless its after effect of the showdown they had with the girls

What else can it be with them you never know

Ahh so it wasn't the showdown shame

But they don't know who most of these peeps were

That happens and am so with them on this one

I know shocking but I get why they are like this

It can be a right pain man being friendly with virtual strangers

And these two are even worse at mingling


I am with them too! I have to fake smiles too many times!😕


Thank god for geet and khushi I tell you

Poor them no wonder they are like this

Wow am actually feeling for them this is new


😆


Man this is bad right for these two

They must be like who are these peeps

Aww well why does it not surprise me being sociable is so not them

For that they have geet and khushi naa

So payash are too lost in one another to give damn about the masses in this sangeet

Lucky, lucky them naa


Agreed!


Shame cant say same for maan and aru

Waise maan and aru could have been lost in their lady love too but what to do fate sure aint with them

There was a time when they had geet and khushi with them hence making them be more at ease

But that aint possible now so they gotta put up their appearances naa

Seems geet and khushi despite the whole showdown thing are all happy with this part of pre-wedding rituals

Am glad for that it will take their mind off that for a while at least

Hello if aki isn't gonna be lost in payal who else would he be lost in

After all he is marrying the girl he loves naa unlike aru

Don't we know it finally its sangeet too

Wait only two more rituals left after this then the main event


Yup!


But of course sangeet is gonna be big

And why shouldn't it right

Some masti some naach gaana am all for it

Even if the boys aren't let them suffer bit more

Oh nani how can they not come agar aap ne bulaya hot oh

Aap itni shaant aur suljhi huyi mahila hain surprisingly you are arnav nani

Okay I digress there again

Yippee its gonna start and this is one sangeet am gonna enjoy fullest


😃 So glad to read that!


So much will happen am sure in midst of this sangeet

Well interesting those lines

But to be fair she wont be nanad of her la Bhabhi

No she will be right

After all nanhe is like a brother to her

But more of a friend too

Hmmm I wonder who she can be

Who resides in heart of maan and gives aru a right heart attack

Who manages to make both maan and aru obey her

They are called geet and anajli

Excuse me your pataka

Oyye nk maan ne hain naa maar daalna hai tujhe


🤣


Here is maan thinking if she is anyone pataka she is mine

But of course he will never say the same right

Yeh nk bhi naa he is so cute at times

But of course maan isn't too happy

Though why should it matter maan

She isn't your soni is she

She is geet so nk can say that about her

Yeah right as if maan will tolerate that

Even if he doesn't wanna accept his love for her to her she is still his naa

And boy can he be possessive of her or what even now


😆


She is beautiful even if she aint a model

But why would she need to do so

Hello she is happy as she is

Being their beloved di and shyam rani sahiba and mother to little kanha

Wait where is he

He has been missing in action way too much


He is sleeping! Abhi bachcha hai woh! Doodh peeke so gaya!😉


Ahhh aren't we all excited for these double wedding

Well apart from two sorry three souls right

Aru khushi and la man

What a predicament to be in

Princess of maan too though at moment he is not being very accommodating of his princess DD kahin ka

Abb woh choti behen hai toh uska faiyada toh uthangi naa

Hmm am glad she is in her cheerful mood

After the whole showdown with a certain DD well I wasn't sure how she would be coping

But this is geet we are talking about she can deal with her stubborn love then this is piece of cake


And why would she be sad? She gave good answer to Maan's antics! She is happy now!😉


Maan bhi naa

Ek taraf he wants nothing to do with her (or so he says) and on other cant help but cant keep his eyes off her

Can we not make up our mind

But then mind isn't part of love is it

That is solely ruled by his heart

Which even though he refuses to open up for geet only beats for geet


So true!


Hmmm she got him again

And he says she is not his soni

More proofs coming his way and yet he gotta be adamant

Start of sangeet officially dare I say

Yeh toh hai

They don't know them well

And how can they some of them haven't for all you know met the two grooms

But then this is the reason for sangeet right

So they can get to know these two bit more

Oh dear should they be worried

If I were them I would be


😆


With anj and geet both

That is just asking for trouble aint it

Wonder kya kya yeh reveal karne waali hain

Hold on to your seat guys this will be one heck of a ride

Anj if you cant say anything I can help

But better not I don't think she would be pleased if I did help her naa

Aapki jaan hain achi baat hai

Parr yahan mera mann karta hain ki unki jaan le le


🤣 Burst out laughing after reading the above two lines!😆


Well what can I do he sure was mean to khushi too much

But I don't really mean that

Cause phir bechari khushi ka kya hoga

So that plan is cancelled

Waise anj might not reveal anything to horrifying or embarrassing things about her brother

But same cant be said of geet

So beware boys

He is also jaan of another lady too well he was and soon he will be again too we hope right

Aww so cute

She loves her chote so much doesn't she

And why not he is the best brother

Listens to her even if he doesn't like it

He made all this empire mostly for her

So his sister wont ever have to think about being helpless again

Bhai behen ho toh anj aur aru jaise


Agreed!


Not that other set of siblings aren't perfect too

But since we are talking about them its their time now

Wait whats the age difference between anj and her chote


2 years!


Sorry its just that I forgot already

Aww you could say he is her first son right

In a way he is

Hey shyam doesn't have any problem in you loving your chote more than that so its okay

Some relations are like that only

You cant put anyone else above them and so is case with anj naa

Oh teri emotional ho rahi hain yeh

But then he is embarking on a new journey

She is bound to feel like that

Though this journey wont be with the girl you chose for him but the alternative is much better

She will make your chote very, very happy as will the said chote

He better or else he wont be spared right kappa


Exactly!


Mami was right and wrong too

She was a mother figure to aru before she gave birth to her second child dare I say

After all chote is her fav man

Not to say she doesn't love kanha or aki but for aru its more special

He has been with her through all the ups and downs she saw right

Aww a scared aru

Hmmm hard to imagine now

But he too must have been scared back then

Well to be fair he is scared now too

That is fear of losing his afreen naa

Wow she sure defined mothers love so perfectly

Yes that's motherly love anj and am sure mami would agree too

Aww mami is another best mother for sure

Even though she didn't give birth to them but she sure loves them more than she loves aki for sure

Well mothers have plenty of love to give don't they


Yup!


And mami is like that too

Haila why are we going into guilt mode though

Oh anj some things aren't in your hand either

I know it cant be easy for her being the elder sister

but don't worry he has no issues with you

how can he right

You are the best sister for him

Though she may nag him and make him do things he doesn't like but she only does that so he stops hiding himself behind the ASR mask

She loves her chote and wants ASR to be there less and less in her chote

After all she is a sister how can she see him like that

But in kappa's DFL at least she isn't as weak as they made her out to be in the serial well later they just ruined her character man


That they did! She was too weak for my tastes!


Aww how can chote ever see his di sad like that naa

Aww that got bit emotional for anj

Of course past memories cant be dismissed easily

But hey cheer up again guys

This is their sangeet time to be happy for sure

Hmm anj he is your chote so of course they don't know that side of his

Just what aru chose to show them

Which isn't the real him for sure

But time for the real aru to be out huh

What a chapter so far we had

And this is just the intro of the sangeet

We have more to go

The actual sangeet after all intros are down right

Hmmm that's gonna be fun

And kappa am sure is ready to burn the floor with her this sangeet

Yup! Sangeet is going to be mindblowing! Thanks for commenting dear! Enjoyed reading it totally!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Am ready for the next part for sure too

So lets get this sangeet on the road

Well he doesn't want the world to know him as chote

That is embarrassing enough

But that's not what she meant

Aru and even maan they both are fiercely protective of their private life

And I don't blame them for that either

They don't gel well with peeps who aren't part of their family

Which is why they would never show the world their other side

I prefer it that way too


Me too!😃


Not only the business world know aru like that but afreen too faced his this ASR side man till recently

Seems khushi has met all those facets too that anj is on about

Waise to a certain point anj is right

Its just a mask he wears so peeps don't come to know the real him

No wonder he went full on ASR with khushi

But that is still no excuse I tell ya

I don't know if he is the same chote

This chote is also in love finally

And not to the girl he is gonna marry

But the one who is his SIL to be

He is cute like that aint he our aru

But when he goes all ASR grrr is all I wanna say


😆


Even though aru shows that he isn't much into emotions and such things its not really true

He just don't show them do he

Otherwise he cares for his family to bits

Can never see them sad

And will do just about anything for them

A bit like his lady love

Except khushi doesn't hide it of course


Yup! That is one of their similarities and one of their differences too!


Well of course he teases geet but so does geet naa

How can he not worry for her too even if she gives him headache with her never to stop chatting (psttt he better get used to that he is marrying a chatterbox too)


😆


Well I wont go as to call him perfect human we all have different definition of the word perfect after all

And no one can be perfect after all he too is a human

Wow anj that was such emotional and yet true to his character speech

Wrong girl anj you are telling it to wrong girl

The man has never paid any freaking attention to her

How will she know how to take care of him when he hardly lets her close to him

Yeah right he will take care of her that's laughable indeed

He is screwing up her life without even thinking how she would feel when he dumps her for khushi

Hence the reason why khushi doesn't wanna be with him

She cares for her sister after all

Yeh world ke best hubby

Please anj don't make me laugh again

If he marries poor la he is more likely to be world's worst hubby

Ache fianc toh bann nahin paye hubby ka banege

Grrr this LG I tell ya

He is asking to be frowned and make me give gaalis to him in relation to poor la


Loved your anger dear!😃


She will never say that he is the best hubby cause luckily she will never marry him shame khushi can say the same

Aww I so feel for her

And why not she is marrying a guy who doesn't give a damn about her

Never bothered to know if she is happy with this marriage

Or with him even

Damn no one can see she is just faking it

Curses why are these sisters so good at hiding their real emotions

First khushi and now la

Please tell me nk is gonna be there for her and soon


Oh! he will be there! Pakka promise!


I cant see her like this

After all she is suffering too naa

Aru can never notice anything about la can he

Too lost in his di

Okay not that am saying that you shouldn't

But you have some responsibilities towards la too

Dude I know you wont marry la but really gaddhe thoda toh inse baat karr liya karo

If he asks her if she is happy or not just for sake of it well that would be nice

But no he ddint even do that

Or he could have dealt with this whole situation way before than now

Dammit iss chore ko phir se maarne ka mann karr riya hai


😆 Scene 1: Inspector Kittu is beating Arnav. Enter Khushi while singing: Koi Patthar Se Na Maare Mere Deewane Ko...😆


Oyye khotte ek nazar bechari teri hone waali biwi parr bhi daal deta

If he did then he could have found a way outta this situation now only

But no he is focusing only on anj

Really he is hopeless and sometimes too selfish fella

Why is it he makes me mad even when I don't wanna

Wonder if she would respect him if she came to know how he is using la to get to his love

I don't think so

Anj would have been appalled with his this behaviour for sure

Almost stringing two women along

I know I went overboard there


Oh no no! I enjoyed it! Keep going!👍🏼😆


But that's what it seems like don't it

Did you really achieve it all I think not

And that's only because you di doesn't know what you are planning

His happiness what about la's too mate

Or does her happiness not matter of course it doesn't

No wonder he used her to make khushi jealous that too twice curse this dude sometimes

Wow anj you got to the audience

She has the gift to move peeps don't she

Aww her speech got to them all isn't that sweet


Oye hello! Excuse me! Speech maine likha aur credit Anji ko jaa raha hai! Not fair! It is so not fair!😡😆😉


Not her too she is sniffing too

Aru can never do that

As in hurt his sister

Others yes but never her as that gets to him more than anything

For him his di is very important more than anything

Aki if I were you I would be very vary of your sister

So they took one bro with whom they gelled the most


Yup! Exactly!


Geet is gonna tell about her veere

And if she is telling well lord save him

Anj was all about emotional speech geet is gonna be all mischievous for sure

See I know it

Her smile tells it all


😆


Well aki brace yourself mate

No really you gotta

She is gonna spill a lot about you today

Hold your horses dude

Aki you are so right

You are gonna be so embarrassed today

And yet he wouldn't mind right

This is what happens when geet gives your intro to all gathered here for this sangeet of yours and aru

Aru got away as he had anj speaking on his behalf

Seems aki aint so lucky poor him

Pray to babaji aki cause here she goes


😆


Geet my dear good to see you being so cheerful after the whole showdown thing with that other khotta maan


Of course she is cheerful! She won the fight, didn't she? Maan was defeated by the time her monologue ended and he walked away unable to give her any answer! Geet won the battle! And she will win the war too!😃


Lord why are they both khotte these boys

Ahhh forget them

Lets get back to the teasing mood geet is in

Open all his secrets why don't you

Band bajayiyo apne veere ki

So he isn't all silent types huh

Aru ke saamne toh harr koi seedha lagta hai apart fro maan

Who can give him run for their money

Lets see what she will say though

Acha dono bhai bade opposite the huh

And still are as it seems

Ahh am loving this comapariosn between the two


Glad you are enjoying it!😃


Not only is she getting aki with it

But aru too

Which anj didn't do geet managed to do

As in tease her AB indirectly

Way to go dear

You must teach the same to your Bhabhi/nanad after all she will need it when ever she marries your AB dear


😆


And she lets it out

His secrets and there is more

This one we kinda guessed right

Him being a good singer and guitarist

After all he has sung on her say so before hasn't he

This is the least embarrassing fact about aki dear

There must be more

And she is all geared up to tell those too

Chupe rustam toh yeh hain hi

The way he tadaofies his miss cham cham well what to say

He could give even our intense lover boys a run for their money in terms of romance right


🤣 So true!


Aki did you think you could escape

Aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya

Arrey waah geet

Aap ne toh shuru karr di taarifon ke pull apne vbeere ke liye

Hiayyo rabba that she could have done without knowing


😆


But of course geet had to let her Bhabhi know naa

That her fianc and hubby to be was pretty much in demand by girls too

You wouldn't think it

But it seems he has been hiding a lot for sure

Thanx for that info dear

Well now no one can dare do that as he is payal's okay

So back off girls he is taken


Exactly!


Payal aage aage sunn hota hai kya

Am sure she will get to know him more and more as geet goes on

Oho aki aap bade hi chup chup hain aaj


😆


Tension naa la

How is that possible

Girls used to propose her man how can she not worry yaar

Ayye hayye kya baat hai

What she said is so true though

You know like that song in hum aapke hain koun where sallu bhai sings ki ke siva kahin naa phisle hain seems it goes for aki too


Funny that you mention that line as Geet's teasing came up all thanks to that line in the song!😉 That line in the song gave me the idea of Geet teasing Akki by opening this secret!!😉


Way to make her go sharam se pani pani there dear

But what she said is so true

He is just madly in love with his miss cham cham

No one else could lure him towards him but her

Yeah that was bound to get this reaction only

Take a chill pill nani mami


😆


What she said is true and there is nothing in telling the truth

Payal needs to know right how much her hubby to be loves her naa

Maan aur aru toh aur kuch karr bhi nahin sakte the

Hmm luckily these two were spared


😆


Waise agar maan ki taang khichni hai toh unki behen khushi ko yeh maukka zaroor dena chahiye

After all sisters are pulling their brothers legs naa

What could be better but that's not gonna happen oh well one can dream cant one

Aki chill nothing wrong sher said right

You love her and only her naa

Aur ka secretwa bataiye ke rahi

Investigation naa karne ki padi

Bhy botherz whenz hamar geet bitiya iz aalreaadz izzz doingzzz zatt


😆


Hmm interesting good negotiator

Well that will come in handy for sure

Why you may ask well with arhi and maneet being the way they are someone will be needed to negotiate between them naa

But he will be badly stuck for sure


🤣 Even Akki cannot help them once they start their Tom and Jerry fight!😆


Jung hain that's not jung

And aru would never say those words

Even if he is thinking it

Geet is so funny man

Solid phatt rahi hai aki babua ki

Well that's good naa after the heavy dose of emotional attyachaar due to the showdown and with anj speech we so needed this you rock kappa


Thank you!😳😃


Aki abhi toh picture baaki hai mere dost

She is gonna reveal more I hope

This is so much fun

Ohhh just love this mischievous geet

Makes a good change don't it

Man she is telling payal that she better come to them if she wants anything

Because he is too good of a negotiator that she will not be able to convince him oh I don't know geet

For all you know geet she wouldn't even have to say it and he will get it for his miss cham cham


Obviously! Humaari Paayal dear toh Akki babu ko apne ungliyon pe nachaayegi!😉


I think it will be like that only

Hmm he will come in handy for arhi and maneet then for sure

Aki you know you wont be able to do anything to her

Yeh toh pranking mein aap ki guru hain ji

Well seems she might just tone down now seeing him this mad at her

Yeah she only got out of hell she was in due to his words which she kept repeating to herself

Or she would have lost hope long way off

But he was her strength when she was in captivity

After all it was his words that gave her the courage to stand up to her family and go against them

And come this long way having a life that she is living on her own terms

Not being ruled over by her darji or that pathetic useless cuz of hers

Joh bhai ke naam parr dhaba hai

Hmm how could he not share his family and love with you

You needed them for sure

Because your family well cant call them that either

Don't wanna call them that as raizadas are your family and now khurana with guptas of course

Oyye geet bhaiyyo ko thanx nahin kehte

Yeh toh unka farz hota hai

Well those who take their oath seriously

After all rakhi bandhi hai toh bhai ka farz toh poora karenge hi naa geet

Aww that was cuh cute scene too

These two siblings are adorable as well

What an end to the chapter dear

Loved every bit of bit


Thank you!😳😃


The only bit that made me mad well you already knew about it


Yup! Expected it totally!


But am glad that you will be doing something about that too

Cant have la on her own after being dumped right

So look forward to khushi side of intro to her sisters

That will be fun too


Yup! Definitely!


After all our khushi aint less than her to be Bhabhi (one day she will be man)/ nanad

Waah kya chapter tha

Thank you for such an awesome review! Enjoyed it totally!
Love you bestie!
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CHAPTER 76 (B). SANGEET SPECIAL PART II

Day - 6 Wednesday

Sheeshmahal

As the clapping and cheering for Geet and Aakash ended, Naani came back onto the stage. "Ab aapan sabhai logon ko pata chal hi gaya hoga ki humaar Chote aur Chutke kaisan insaan hai! Jahaan Anjali bitiya ne Chote ke sakt bartaav ke peeche chupa hua naram dil dikhaaya toh wahin Geet bitiya ne toh Chutke ke saare pol hi khol diye!" The crowd tittered at her words and Aakash pinched Geet's cheeks making her pout.

Anjali came onto the stage, took the mike out of Naani's hands and continued, "Lekin yeh sab toh dulhon ki baatein hain. Dulhanon ka kya? Humein pata hai Raizada parivar ke kaee rishtedaar jaanna chaahte hai ki humaari dono bhabhiyaan hai kaisi? Toh humne socha kyun na unke hi parivar se kisi ko bulaaye jo aapko humaari ghar ke do naye sadasyon ke baare mein kuch bataaye! Toh ab yahaan aa rahi hai ek aisi ladki jo

Dil Ki Raani Hai

Badi Sayaani Hai

Bak Bak Mein Toh Sabki Naani Hai

Udaas Na Rehti Kabhi

Aur Uske Baaton Se Haste Sabhi

Kare Yeh Badi Chedkhaani Hai

Devi Maiyya Hai Uski Pakki Saheli

Jiske Bina Yeh Na Rehti Akeli

Mann Jiska Behta Paani Hai

Doosron Mein Khushiyaan Baantti

Aur Unmein Apni Khushi Paati

Uski Bas Itni Se Hi Kahaani Hai

Boojho kaun?"

Out of the crowd came a voice, "Humka pata hai! Humka pata hai!" All turned around to see Buaji raising her hand like kid in a school with excitement on her face. Many people chuckled as Anjali nodded at her with a smile on her face. "Humaar ghar ki sankadevi. Humaar Titaliya. Khusi Bitiya!", chirped Buaji and everyone let out a laugh at all the nicknames Buaji seemed to have bestowed on Khushi.

Out came Khushi onto the stage and Arnav took a sharp breath at her visage. Dressed in simple navy blue saree, she looked out of the world. She walked on the stage with hesitance. Most people assumed that the hesitance was due to nervousness but only Khushi and Arnav knew that the hesitance was because she would face Arnav standing by her sister. As the spotlight shown on her, for a second her eyes stilled on Arnav and she forgot breathing. And then suddenly, she looked away with a shiver and smiled at the crowd.

"Sab humse kehte hain ki hum bahut hi batiyaate hain. Humesha sab humein hi chup karwaate hain. Lekin aaj humein aap log nahi rok sakte. Hum aaj jee kholke bolenge!", Khushi chirped and half of the crowd gulped nervously. All thought the same thing; Jee kholke? Hey Devi Maiyya!

Khushi giggled, "Arre! Dariye mat! Hum itna bhi nahi bolenge! Hum bas apni Jiji aur Di ki taarif karenge! Humaari Paayal Jiji se hum tab mile jab hum sirf aath saal ke the. Humaare Amma Bauji chal base aur hum apni maasi ke ghar rehne aaye. Paayal Jiji ne uss waqt se humaara khayaal rakha. Humaari sabse badi taaqat bhi wahi aur humaari kamzori bhi." Khushi smiled at her sister and Paayal smiled back.

Then Khushi looked at everyone impishly, "Aapko pata hai humaari Jiji jitni shaant swabhaav ki lagti haina, utni shaant bhi nahi hai!" Paayal's eyes widened in shock while Aakash looked at his fianc with amusement and curiosity.

Khushi nodded vigorously, "Jee haan! Aapne sahi suna! Aayiye hum aapko humaari Jiji ki badi ek dilchasp kahaani sunaate hain. Jab hum chote the toh humaare gali ke ladke humein bada chedte the. Hum sabse chote na! Toh woh kabhi humaari choti kheechte toh kabhi humaare aage taang adaake humein neeche giraate the. Ek din Jiji ne yeh hote hue dekh liya! Phir pata hai kya hua?"

Everyone looked at her curiously. What happened? What Paayal did? Paayal had already turned red and Aakash kept on looking between Khushi and Paayal simultaneously, wanting to know what Paayal did.

Khushi grinned at everyone's eager expression, "Jiji andar gayi. Ek belan uthaaya. Aur baahar aakar saare ladkon ko peetne lagi!" Everyone looked at Paayal in shock. Docile Paayal beating somebody? Hey Devi Maiyya! Aakash looked at Paayal with pride. Anyone defending their family was a plus in Aakash's books. After all, family comes first.

Paayal narrowed her eyes promising retribution while Khushi very maturely stuck her tongue out making everyone laugh.

Khushi continued, "Aisi hai humaari Paayal Jiji. Dil ki nek, mann se saaf, swabhaav se ek dum shaant lekin koi uski parivar pe ek bhi buri nazar daal de, toh woh Maa Kaali ka roop dhaaran karne se peeche nahi hat ti. Yeh hai humaari Paayal Jiji!"

Khushi cleared her throat as her eyes turned to her other sister. Lavanya gave her a wave and Khushi winked at her. Khushi knew that Lavanya loved the spotlight and Khushi was very happy to give La her chance to shine.

"Ab yeh toh hui humaari Jiji ki baat! Ab hum bataayenge aapko humaari Lavanya Di ke baare mein. Humaari Lavanya Di bahut khoobsurat hain yeh toh aap jaante hain lekin kya aap jaante hain ki woh apne College ki Beauty Queen reh chuki hain?", Khushi announced.

Everyone from Raizada family looked at Lavanya in surprise while Lavanya beamed at them proudly.

Khushi continued, "Jee haan! Yeh apne College sabse popular aur sabse beautiful ladki hua karti thi! Aur inki khoobsurti ki aaj bhi taarifein hoti hai! Lekin bahut kam log jaante hain ki yeh ek achchi cook bhi hai!"

Anjali looked at her future sister-in-law in surprise. Cook bhi hai?

Khushi cleared her throat bringing everyone's attention back to her, "Cook matlab Indian khaane ki nahi! Desi khaana toh inko bilkul banaana nahi aata! Humein aur Jiji ko hi pata hai ki humne inka jala hua daal kitni mushkil se khaaya hai! Aur inke aadhe kachche aur aadhe pakke biryani ki toh baat hi mat keejiye!"

"Khushi!", Lavanya scolded her while looking embarrassed. Everyone chuckled at her reaction and Khushi continued, "Lekin inke continental aur Italian dishes ki toh baat hi mat poocho. Woh kya haina Fashion Designing padhte waqt humaari Di Allahabad mein badi akeli pad gayi. Humse door gayi thi na padhne ke liye. Toh unhonein Cooking Classes join kiya aur uske baad jab ghar aayi toh humein aise aise dishes khilaaye jinka naam bhi hum bol nahi paate. Toh yaad rakhiye Raizada parivar waalon, Indian khaane se bore ho jaaye toh apni badi bahu ko kitchen mein bhej dena! Aapko kuch na kuch toh naya khaane ko mil hi jaayega!"

Everyone chuckled at her words. Khushi giggled along but then she sobered up, "Lekin humaari dono behne khaane pakaane aur humaare liye ladne mein hi achchi nahi hai. Woh dono toh iss poore parivaar ko jode rakhti hain. Jiji jahaan apni sehejta aur soch se hum sabka khayaal rakhti hai wahin Lavanya Di apni nayi soch se hum sabko prerna deti hai."

Khushi stopped speaking and looked below for a moment. And when she looked up, her eyes were misted with tears, "Aaj tak hum khush the ki humaari dono behno ki shaadi itne achche ghar mein ek hi din ho rahi hai. Lekin aaj humein pata chala ki unki shaadi ka matlab humaare liye kya hai? Bas teen din aur... Aur phir humaari dono behnein humein chodke apne ghar chali jaayengi. Hum akele padh jaayenge. Bahut jald humaari palang pe baithke gappa maarne ke liye humaari Lavanya Di humaare saath nahi hongi. Kitchen mein humaare saath khaana pakaane ke liye humaari Paayal Jiji humaare saath nahi hongi. Ab Lucknow ki galiyon mein golgappa khaane hum akele hi jaayenge. Bazaar mein jab humein koi kapda pasand aayega toh hum kisise bhi pooch nahi paayenge ki kya woh kapda humein jhachega. Subah subah humein jhaadu se maarke jagaane humaari Jiji nahi aayegi. Humein aur sone dene ke liye humaari Amma ko manaane Di nahi aayengi. Hum... hum..." Her throat clogged up and she sniffed softly.

For a moment there was silence as people waited for Khushi to compose herself. Every mother in the crowd who had a daughter sniffed as they all understood what Khushi was feeling and all sympathized with her. Maami sniffed as she realised that one day her Geet would also go to her husband's house. Naani hugged Anjali tightly thankful that Shyam agreed to stay with them rather than take Anjali with him to another house. Amma and Buaji grasped each other's hands tightly as it struck them at once that from now on their house will sound very lonely.

Khushi looked up with a smile on her face but it was clear for anyone to see that she was simply trying to smile but all she wanted to do was cry. She took a deep breath, "Hum bhale hi aaj aansuon mein hain, lekin hum khush hain!" She looked at all of them and then pinched her throat while looking around anxiously, "Sachchi! Hum jhoot nahi bol rahe!" Some guests chuckled.

Then Khushi smiled widely, "Hum khush hain kyunki humaari dono behnein itni achche ghar mein jaa rahi hain. Jahaan ek pyaar karne waali Naani hai, palkon pe bithaane waali do nanad hain, Maamiji jitni pyaari sasuma jo bahu ko beti samajhti hai aur Maamaji jitney achche sasur hain. Aise ghar mein humaari behnein toh itni khush hongi ki shaayad woh toh humein bhool hi jaayengi!"

Lavanya and Paayal shook their heads but Khushi pouted, "Arre rehne do Jiji! Chodo Di! Hum jaante hain ki itna achcha aur pyaar karne waala parivar milne ke baad aap dono toh humein bhool hi jaayengi. Lekin isse humein koi problem nahi hai kyun humein pata hai ki aap dono khush hain aur isse jyaada humein aur kuch nahi chaahiye!"

"Aur Aakashji", she looked at Aakash and then towards Arnav, "Arnavji! Humaari dono behnon ka dil saaf hi nahi thoda naram bhi hai toh unka dil kabhi mat todiyega!"

Only Arnav knew the double meaning of her line and he looked away. Khushi continued to speak with tears in her eyes but with a wide smile on her lips, "Bas humaari yahi dua hai ki yeh dono jodiyaan salaamat rahe!"

Saying her piece she got down the stage only to be accosted by her sisters who hugged her tightly. All three had tears running down her cheeks. Anjali walked towards them and patted Paayal on her back, "Arre! Tum teeno bas karo! Kuch aansu bidaai ke liye bhi chod do!" All three girls chuckled as Anjali's words created the effect she was trying for. A loud round of applause started as Khushi faced the crowd with Paayal on one side and Lavanya on the other. All three girls smiled happily as they hugged each other again.

NOTE:

The update is short because I have had fever for last five days.

Next update will be normal length.

PRECAP:

Natkhat hai woh bada aur ek number ka shaitaan hai

Kuch mat kaho use, kyunki woh toh apni Maasi ki jaan hai

Geet ka best friend hai jo, aur Geet jiski shaan hai

Uske mazaak ka kabhi mat bura maanna, kyunki woh toh bahut naadaan hai

Boojho kaun?

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago
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And here we have the next instalment

This one will feature khushi in it

But hers will be bit emotional like anj

Hope though there will be some fun and laughter too

Time for the brides to be known too

Why just the groom getting all the limelight

After all the brides have a sister too

Funny thing is that sister i.e. khushi will be the bride of the man la was gonna marry

But for now la is the bride naa

Don't we know them now nani

So naughty they are it seems

I thought only aru was like that

But it seems aki is no less

Good to know more about aki though

After all he too is getting married

And to the woman he fell in love with too

Unlike his bhai am sorry to say

But that can be remedied later

Anj with her emotional speech as to why her chote is such a rakshas and geet with her mischievousness for aki

Did aki pay for it or what

Saare raaz khol daale

Well kafi raaz khol diye ji geet ne

Ab ke karr rahein hain aki

She has already let everyone and most importantly payal know what you are really like

Aap toh bade chupe rustam nikle

Yipeee time for the brides

And who better to tell about them but their one and only sister who isn't getting married

Dono bhabhis to be are just so cute and sweet

And well I could run outta words if I were to describe them

But they are courageous too

And very loyal too hai naa

And here she cometh

Khushi for her sisters naa

This should be good getting to know payal and la better

Should know about them too

And khushi is gonna do just that

The girl who is little sister to maan

Heart beat of aru though he did break her heart

Chulbuli aur natkat parr hai phir bhi saiyyani

We know she is dil ki rani of her lover boy

Well am sure geet and khushi wouldn't be able to beat one another in bak bak

They would eat aru and maan head though

And for that am grateful

If only anj knew how sad she is these day

Seeing her love marrying her sister and yet unable to do anything

Well yes she sure is naughty man

And doesn't aru know that by now

Remember when she pretended the scene from movie jeet

Though that sure cost her a lot

DM for khushi and babaji for geet

Both just love to talk to THEM don't they

Kya baat hai kappa rani

Aap ne jo shabd diye anj ko khushi ke liye hum toh pankhe ho gaaye aapke

Hmm she does spread happiness around her

Even when she herself might not be happy

Like this situation

And yet no one from her family knows about her being unhappy

Well this can be the one and only KKG

Buaji is so cute

Damn her excitement like a kid was just adorable

Good to have her here too

After all she is only one who scares our aru babu

And why not if not from her who would scare him

Bless her she is funny our buaji

Always thinking of her nieces

Taking care of them like her kids which they are

Wow yahan toh khushi ki bhi pol khul rahi hai

With buaji being so generous as to tell all gathered about her net names

But they so suit her right

Of course they do

She is sanka devi for sure

And like a butterfly she flutters from places to places

What an intro for her too

Aru babu dekhiye bhai aap bhi apni afreen ko dekhiye

That's all you can do mate

As you cant really go up to her or hold her

Even though you might wanna

Seems she has floored him again

Ahh as if she would hesitate to come on stage due to stage fright

Nervous and khushi for that reason no way

Please peeps you don't know her enough

Pity you guys wont know her

But yes she is apprehensive and rightly so

To see her love with her sister

That can never be easy but she cant do anything either

So she looked at him first before she starts

Cant be easy for her

After all at least maan isn't getting married naa to anyone

She didn't have to see that at least

But no such luck for khushi

Though being khushi she knows how to not show her emotions to others

She is very good at it even better than aru sometimes

Sweetie they aint wrong are they

You do talk a lot man

And boy do you go on and on sometimes or what

But today even I don't want you to stop

Why should we right

After all its time to know the girls too

Don't worry aaj koi nahin aap ko rokega

Why are other getting worried

If there is anyone who should be worried its just the brides

Baaki log safe hai bhia

So chillax and take no tension she wont be after you guys

Acha no this isn't about them being worried she is gonna say something about them

But the fact that she is gonna talk

And once she starts it will be hard to make her stop right

Peeps that you will have to bear am afraid

Good she told them that

Or many were panicking on her going on and on

This is so funny right

Go ahead my dear we all wanna know your sisters better too

And to know what they were like

Ahhh her meeting with payal was under such sad circumstances

But her jiji has been her pillar of support

She looked after khushi when she was little

Having lost her parents naa sharing her parents with her

And yet she would never have complained

She is the best thing that could have happened to that little girl who came to live with them after the death of her parents

Oh teri and here it comes

Payal aap ki bhi pol khul gayi

So it seems our payal isn't that timid huh

And she can be pretty fiery herself too

This I wanna know more about

Payal ab kuch nahin ho sakta

She is gonna tell all now

And I see aki is very eager to know what payal did that khushi said she isnt as mild mannered as they think her to be

Of course he wants to know

After all she heard of his doings now its her turn naa

And this way they get to see more sides of one another

Khushi is all geared to tell us about payal secrets

Now this will be good for sure

I wonder aisa kya hua tha ki payal ko gussa aya tha

Why am I not surprised that boys used to tease you dear

If they didn't then it would be ajeeb

Haw nalayak ladke

Mil jaayen toh unke bataye hum khushi ke saath aisa karne ka nateeja

But then don't have to worry about it I guess

What with payal taking care of those boys for us right

Am sure your jiji would have blown a fuse for sure

She may be calm types but they are the ones whose anger you should always be vary of man

Hum bhi bahut uthsukh hain yeh jaane ke liye ki payal ne kya kiya hoga like the audience

Something really that she wouldn't do right

Payal itna kya sharmana

Aise kya karr diya aap ne

Aki khushi batayegi yaar

Sabr karr chorre

Seriously she did what

Wow now that I didnbt see coming

But the best thing to do

Those boys would never have messed with khushi again

Not after they got beaten up by payal with a belan of all things

I had always wondered what would happen if one of the characters from any story used belan as a weapon

And here kappa you just fulfilled my this unknown wish too so cool

Wow man its unbelievable as aru would say

And why not this is payal we are talking about not khushi or la even

Arrey bhai hum bhi hain shock mein

But guess for her too family comes first

And she can be pretty protective of them too

Hard to get your head around it

But I can so picture young payal doing that

Aru be very vary of this fact will ya

Agar aap ne khushi ko zyada tang kiya naa

Toh ho sakta hai ki who aap ke bhi peeche daudegi belan le karr

Though I know that she would never do that to aru

But still one can dream cant one

Awww seems aki is very impressed with payal

And why not she took care of her little sister just perfectly

That's the way to go payal

Payal ab kya faiyada gussa hone ka

not really is she mad at her sister

more like embarrassed

Not when khushi told all about your not so calm temperament

This was so cute though

Ahhh yes she sure summarised payal aptly

She may be all shy and calm and even collected

But lord save the person who dared to mess with her family

As she wouldn't spare them ever

And there is nothing wrong in that

Being protective of your loved ones and being possessive about them is only natural thing to do

And payal did just that

So guess its better not to mess with her if you even think of hurting her family

She is probs rip you apart for even thinking about it

Maa kali huh interesting choice there

Ahh now the second bride

The one who hasn't had the chance to receive any care from her so called fianc who is instead of focusing on her is after khushi

But then I would never want him to marry her either I mean la

He would ruin her life for sure

Always pining for khushi and not seeing how much he is hurting la in the process

Its time for la to be in the limelight

She deserves it after all

Even if she is getting married to khushi's love

That aint her fault now is it

I am also eager to know about la too

After all the girl has gotten engaged to aru and yet we don't know too much about her

Okay that's not true though

We know she had some creep of boyfriend who broke her heart

And now she has a useless fianc sorry to say who doesn't pay any attention to her

And yet he uses her to make khushi jealous pathetic or what

Sorry for being harsh on aru even though he isn't here

But what can I do when he hurt la the way he is hurting her cant help it

Wow really

But then again this shouldn't be so surprising

The girl is a natural dusky beauty

So she was beauty queen of her college

That is impressive

Well for me it is

Seems raizadas are getting to know their eldest bahu more

But such pity that she wont be the elder bahu of raizadas per se

As she will marry nk babua naa

And nk aint a raizada naa

But as long as she gets her soul mate I don't care man

Just don't want her sad for sure

Well about la and payal so far loved to find out about them

And there is still lot more left for sure

So lets see what else we get to know about the gupta sisters

Wait is she a gupta though

Am sure she is right

Hmmm investigate kari ke padi

She will be mami's bahu for sure

Mami will be her masiya saas is that a word hope so not mamiya saas though shame that but oh well

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago
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Am sure she was that

The most beautiful girl

Not only is she that on the outside but inside too

Come on after all she hasn't let others know what she feels about getting married to aru

What with him not paying any attention to her

I don't know how but I manage to get that man into convo don't I

And that's bad cause he is getting too much attention from me now

Okay must try to curb in the urge to swear at him and about him

Arrey waah kya baat hai

Seems they are all blessed to be good cooks

Hmmm interesting tid bit that

She is an excellent cook

Hope we get a demo one day too

Naaah just kidding there

Wow so much you didn't know about la

Glad to know about her too

She needs some space too right after all she is also the bride to be

Anj not only you but even am surprised and its good surprise

Wonder what else we will find out about her from khushi

Okay lets not get ahead of ourselves

Seems she cant cook indian

Well not everyone can right

Not everyone cup of tea I tell ya

But as long as she can cook something helps

What am I going on about

Hai DM man she sure told all about that

Poor thing cant make dal

And her sisters had to eat her dal

Something which seems to be not an easy task for her

This is so funny man

We get the point dear

She cant cook indian am sure they all get it too

But I don't think she wants to stop right

Not that I blame her

I knew it even la would try to stop khushi

As if she can be stopped

Apni jiji ke bare mein toh bol diya parr ab di ki baari hai

Sorry la dear you wont be able to stop her

But that's not all she will say about you

Have patience she will get to the real thing soon

Like I said she wont be stopped not when she got the chance to tell all about her sisters

Oh yeah she is a fashion designer

Damn if khushi wasn't there la and aru would be so good together

She could even help him out in AR naa

Well khushi can do that too but its different

But good khushi is there though

Or else la wouldn't find her other half a certain dimpled dude

I wish you hadn't mentioned continental and Italian dishes making me hungry now

Ahhh she was all alone there

And to get rid of boredom she joined a cooking class

Cooking can be a right stress buster man

Ask khushi she makes jalebis after all when stressed out

Badi bahu hmmm sounds nice

But not for her

She will be bahu of sorts

Just not raizadas

Wait what is nk surname again

Damn I don't know that its random thing to ask but thought to ask

Well your proposal sounds interesting khushi but wont happen

In the end you will be the badi bahu

Well of course not dear

That's not all these girls can do

But good to know they are excellent cooks

And that they will beat up anyone who dares mess with you

Khushi is just so cute here

And she wont let the chance to praise her sister too

Why should she after all the brides should also be known right

Hmm that they do keep the family together

Your sisters are the best dear

And I can see how much you love them

We already knew how much you love them if refusing aru is any indication

But today you told all gathered here the same too

Aww all I can say is that was touching man

There is happiness and there is pain too

Happy that they shall be together

But am sure she is sad to lose her sisters on same day too

Not easy for her to lose them both together

But again the second sister will not be marrying whom she is supposed to marry by end thankfully

Aww I knew it she would be sad too

Well she would be naa

Her sister will go away from her

Anj and geet don't lose their brother do they

They will still be living with them

But not same for khushi

Well not true that and you know why kappa

Hmmm you wont be alone not really

Payal hogi naa aap ke saath

But yes la sure will be alone though

Well thank god for nk then

Awww this is getting emotional

Well it was bound to for her

After all not easy to let go of your sisters who have been with you through a lot and who were her life naa

Akele in lucknow well no dear that wont happen either

But I must stop saying that

She is saying that cause till arhi marry technically she will be alone naa

Woh baat alag hai ki aisa hoga nahin

But she don't know that does she

Ahh yes shopping alone can be real pain

Really I would advise you girls never go shopping on your own

It's a right headache

What the sorry had to say that

Jhaadu she uses jhaadu too

Payal belan toh aap use karr hi chuki hain

Jhaadu bhi use kiya aap ne

But this time on khushi

Wow what a way to wake her up

Aww she is getting all choked up

And so am I now

Damn this made me cry almost too

Seeing her lose her sisters like that in one day

Poor khushi

But on brighter side she wont be alone so that's okay

Aww there, there don't cry khushi

All will be okay and you wont lose your sisters

Aww it cant be easy to control her tears for khushi

After all its major change for her naa

Of course all the mothers with daughters can understand what khushi is going through

They will have gone through same themselves or if their daughters are still here they will go through it later

Damn yaar why cant men move out too

So not fair this is right

Why should only woman have to leave their houses like that

But damn and curses that's how it happens

Mami she will go sooner than you think

What with maan taking her away

But how on earth that will happen we will have to wait and watch

Yeah nani is lucky indeed that shy stayed back with them

And she has her granddaughter with her

Not all are lucky like that

Wow the atmosphere sure has become bit intense there

But then it was bound to after what she just said

Emotions are running high man

Totally lonely for gupta ladies

As all their daughters will go

Not just two naa

Oh dear I didn't think about them

Eeep they will have all their daughters gone

Cause khushi will get married too as will the other two

Hmmm it wont be easy for them

At least they were thinking they have khushi

But that isnt true right

I feel so bad for them now

Ahhh she is trying not to cry or show she wont cry

But how can you stop the tears right

Of course it doesn't mean she aint happy for her sisters

They get best life partners well one of them is questionable but that's beside the point

Best sasural they will take care of them

Cool nanad like sisters and amazing friends

Yeh zyaada toh nahin ho gaya nope less I think

Haila that was cute I found it funny too

The way she pinched her throat like a kid

Well she is one aint she

Someone who had to grow up before time like the others in this story

And she says the same thing I said

So its better sweet for her

Her sisters going but luckily they get such good family for them

Yeah right as if they will forget you

How can they

Even though raizadas are the sweetest family ever but you my dear are their sister so how can they forget you

She sure summed them up nicely (or do I mean kappa rani heheh)

That's so them bang on man

Am with la and payal how can they forget their crazy jhalli sister yaar

No way in hell will that happen

No matter what she says

Will you forget them when you marry aru

Wait she cant can she as she will be with her jiji

And her di will be married to nk so no she cant forget them

Bless that's sweet

She is happy for them

Well for la its bitter sweet for her

After all her jiju to be is her love too

Damn man I cant get over that

Except aki will never break payal heart will be

Shame the same cant be said of aru

And yes we know why she said what she did

Hmmm well you cant blame her

But he is so not gonna listen to her about la now is he

Not only aru knows what she means but surely geet and maan too

After all they know of their love story naa

And that he wont marry la at the end of the day

Not to forget us your readers kappa

And of course you kappa rani the main one

Well since he cant guarantee that he wont break her di's heart that's all he can do look away

Wahi toh dil todna koi inse aur maan babu se seekhe

Well that at least will happen

As in the couples will be happy but not with whom you are hoping your di will be happy with

As she will be hopefully be very and I mean very happy with nk I hope he has to be la's saviour naa

Aww that is so sweet moment

The sisters hugging one another cute for sure

Well that and emotional

Hey DM they are crying buckets or as I would say in hindi ganga jamuna aur saraswati baha rahi hain apni aankhon se

Anj is saying this

Hello rone main toh yeh bhi kuch kam nahin

In fact if they ever had crying competition all the ladies of this story will give very tough competition to one another

Cant believe am saying this

But it was too emotional so had to out this in hope you like it

Haan bhai kuch aansoon chod dijiye bidaai ke liye

But am sure they will have more for that then too

Aww that was sweet

Yes it was emotional in the end but it was bound to be

I certainly enjoyed it for sure

Now its nk turn next

What is he gonna say I wonder

Well hope something lighter could use that right

So we wait onto next part of sangeet man

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