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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

seems like something happened very recently...something bothering both of them...and maan is not without any emotions...he is trying in his own way...but, getting opposite results...!! waiting how this picnic ...movie and discussions will be about...



yes kavya...
Something terrible has happened that pulled them apart...
discussions and movie is just coming up😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RedCoats

wow awesme part

i think they lost their baby n thats why Dr khanna suggested maan like that (just my guess 😉)
they need to talk and sort things out between them
its good that maan is going to do what geet has asked . waiting
thanku for updating
update next part soon 😊



Thank you dear
yup...you have great observations dear..hehe
you are gonna know it all😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _lehar_

it seems something happened with geet ..as per angand she was in depression...i think they lost their baby...
maan was angry on geet for talking like that...on the other side geet is crying out her eyes...she prepared BF for him but he didn't have that had bread with tea and left for office...angad called maan and maan shared his pain to him he told maan to do what she want...
maan decided he will take her to movie shopping ..
eagerly waiting for the next part



Yes dear..
they lost their baby...
angad is his well wisher...N maan is just trying to do everything to make her happy😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you everyone for all your support and love...Big hugs to all <3
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Part 3

Maan was greeted by the maid as soon as he entered.

"Good evening Sir" She wished.

"Good evening" His replied with a distracted tone as his eyes roam into the other parts of his apartment searching for that one face. "Where is Geet?" He questioned as his gaze returned with a failure.

"She is sleeping in bedroom...but I think she is not feeling well"

Concerned took over his mind as gave a glance to worried maid and with quick steps, moved towards the room.

"Is she having fever? Why haven't you called me?" He inquired with a frown.

"No Sir...It's not fever...but she hasn't eaten anything since morning...I have inquired her numerous times but she just refused it" The maid was following him with quick steps in order to match his pace. Maan stopped in his tracks and ran a hand over his forehead.

"Did I over react in the morning..." He questioned himself and with regret, this time moved towards the room after giving the maid an order. "Warm up the food...I will too have it now"

On entering his room, he found her sleeping peacefully while holding his pillow close to herself. Her face was almost hidden into it that made him have a small smile.

"She is missing me..." He thought with a sad smile and sat beside her on the bed, making sure not to disturb her.

She was surly missing him. Their wedding album which was still open, was placed beside her on the other side of the bed. He caught a glimpse at it, looking intently at the beautiful bride, smiling from her heart and was holding beautiful dreams in her eyes. Her face was radiant with his love.

And then he glanced at her.

Pale face, eyes having dark circles around and under those eyelids, he knew he would find redness. Her jubilant self was now a painting of pain and helplessness.

"Why you are doing this to yourself? You want me, I know...Then why are you hell bent of pushing me away from yourself" He thought with helplessness.

He was busy staring when the maid came and knocked on the door,.

"Sir... food" She whispered.

"Put it on the table and leave for the day..." Maid nodded and after being done as she was told, the maid left the apartment as silently as she could.

He put forward his hand and rubbed the back of his fingers against her smoothness of her cheek.

"Geet...Geet..."He whispered in the gentlest of his tone.

"Hmmm..."

"Get up baby...Lets have some food...I know you haven't eaten anything..."

"Maan" She replied in a babyish tone and turned in her sleep to hug his waist, hiding her face in the side of it.

He smiled at her cuteness and ruffled her long hairs gently.

"Geet...Come on...Get up...Otherwise we would be late for all the fun I have planned for us" And that's when Geet realized that indeed he was sitting beside him.

With a shock look, she get up and looked away. She was dishearten after seeing the album and lay down in the bed, holding his pillow, promising herself to move out of the room before he would come back but didn't realize when she went to sleep. She looked at the clock and realized that he was home earlier than usual.

He tucked her hairs behind her ear, that startled her and with hollow eyes, she looked at him.

"I am sorry for last night and this morning... I think I over reacted but I missed you so much in the last week that when you questioned me, I took out all my frustration on you..." He apologized with sincerity in his eyes.

"I am sorry too...But Maan..." She wanted to explain him a few things but was cut off by him.

"No more discussions before you have the meal...I myself am so hungry...I couldn't eat myself" He said and brought the food near her.

Making the morsels, he fed her first before taking the next bite himself.

Geet noticed the change in his emotions and found the real man with whom she fell in love. He was caring, supportive and loving.

As she was done, she moved forward and kissed his stubbled cheek.

"Thank you" He grinned on feeling her lips against his cheek and looked at her with hopeful eyes.

"If this is the way, you would say thank you than I guess, there are many more kisses coming my way" She blushed at his comment but tried to keep her smile hidden.

But she should have known, he knew every aspect of her personality.

She saw his loop sided smile and

"Don't get any wrong ideas...I am still going to sleep in the next bedroom tonight" And that dimmed the light in his eyes but nonetheless, he didn't question her.

"Do whatever you want...But right now, get up and get ready...We are going for shopping" And he was gone to put away the dishes before she could questioned him anymore.

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He admired her while standing at the edge of the clothing rail while she was looking at the beautiful dresses hanged in row.

Wearing a simple orange front buttoned shirt, the cuffs were rolled up messily till the elbows while below she was just wearing a blue jeans. Her hairs were open, just the way he liked. Her ears were adored with small pearls while her neck only had her small one line beaded mangalsutra that marked her as his and His only.

"Maan...How is this one?" Geet inquired making him look at a white anarkali frock having netted sleeves and multi colored work on it.

"It's beautiful...Try it on" He encouraged her, making her smile but as soon as she was about to move towards trail room, he ushered another light yellow churidar having a combination along with purple.

While she was away, he wander into other rails before he came to a halt seeing "Baby Garments"

His eyes teared up but right then he heard her voice from behind. She was searching for him.

"'Maan..."He quickly schooled his expression and took out the handkerchief from the side of his pant pocket before whipping the moisture in his eyes.

"Maan...Where are you?" Her eyes wandered into the rails before finding him coming back to her with hurried steps.

"Wow...That's looking great...You should buy it without any delay" His voice held admiration that was hard to ignore. His gaze was strong and fierce.

"You think so..." She rose up her lashes softly and noticed a sleek line of water in her eyes that made her worried.

"Were you crying?"

"No...Something went in my eyes" He made an excuse and without hearing anything further, she moved up on her toes and hold his face, blew into his eyes.

"You should be careful" She scolded cutely, making him smile.

People who were passing them, looked at them all lovey dovey and adored. Geet was ignorant to it but Maan realized and moved away.

"Ok enough now...I am ok...Go and change..." She looked around embarrassed on seeing people looking at them before rushing back to change, leaving him chuckled at the back.

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Done with his shirts, she was about to move towards the next section but he stopped her.

"Not their Geet...Lets go to that warm clothing section and buy something for Mom and Dad" Distracting her for the time, he tried to push her.

"But why not their..." She just voiced and saw something breaking in his eyes that made her stop right at the point.

Averting her eyes, she let his lead wherever he wanted.

The rest of the time, they wander from one shop to another but the interest in the shopping was lost. Maan had a look at her dull face and felt that all his efforts till now were useless.

May be shopping wasn't a good idea.

He scratched his forehead and looked away when his eyes fell on a furniture shop.

"Geet...You sit here...I will just be back in 15 minutes" Geet nodded distractedly and Maan left her.

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They entered their apartment and just put the bags away when the bell rang. Maan grinned and went back to open it while Geet went to take a shower to put her tired limbs to rest and her running weird thoughtful mind in peace.

After keeping her body soaked in a filled Peach bubbled fragrance tub, she cleaned herself and wore her nighty before she got out and decided to move towards the other room but was stopped by Maan's excited voice.

"Mind watching a movie with me tonight" Wearing his black slacks and t-shirt, holding a popcorn bowl in one hand and other holding two sodas, he asked with hopeful eyes. The light was dimmed to soft yellowish color, making it look more romantic.

She was in no mood to sit down and watch a movie, but didn't had the heart to reject his offer. Today, she got to see a side of him, he never showed.

His broken side. His weakness.

He didn't deserve it all. She understood. She was being unfair to him.

"For sure" Forcing a smile on her lips, she turned to move when she noticed the new addition in their living room.

A two seater reclining sofa.



"This...When we bought it?" Her tone changed a little in surprise.

"Well..." He gave a look to the sofa and then at her. "I think someone demanded it long back...I thought it was high time to fulfil those wishes". He replied in a slow romantic tone and raised up his brows to ask her opinion.

She ran her fingers of the white hand rest and noticed the middle drink setting space.

"Its superb...I loved it" he said and flanged her arms around his neck in a way to say thank.

Maan smiled from his heart. Something he could do to distract it even if for a minute.

As his hands were occupied by the drinks and bowl, he was unable to hug her back but nonetheless loved the feel of her body against his.

"Which movie?" She asked pulling herself away from him and took her place on the sofa.

"Your favourite...SRK's Kuch Kuch Hota Hai" Geet smiled as after putting the drinks on the drink holder, he pulled out foot rest for Geet to get comfortable on and then holding the remote, started the movie on his 46" LED TV.

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The movie just started, showing the glimpse on the life of Rahul and Tina...Maan tried his best to fast forward the first 4 minutes, fearing that the starting somewhere will hit a string on her heart but still, even in that fast forward mode, the scene of a very elated to be father Rahul keeping his ear next to the baby bump of a pregnant Tina displayed, making her turn the face of the other side.

He closed his eyes for a moment before looking at her. Biting her lower lip, she was looking away.

As the movie started on the normal pace and the dialogues sound spread in the atmosphere, Maan hoped that it will avert her mind. And it did.

Apparently.

Just to show him off, she kept her gaze on the LED screen but her mind was running a flashback of their life on its own.

Flashback~

"Baby...when you will come then we will go for morning jogs as your Mumma is too lazy to get up in the morning...We will try out new dishes...Do lots of traveling and not to miss, mess up with your Mumma" Maan was laying in her lap, keeping his face pressed to her belly just trying to feel himself close to the three month old baby, nourishing inside his lovely wife.

"Wow...Baby is not born yet and you are already ganging up against me" She said with a pout while her fingers kept on caressing his plush hairs.

He rose up his brow in a teasing way.

"Of course...I heard that the first child mostly take after their Dads...And I will be one cool dad to have" He said with a happy pride look only to get a smack by her.

"Don't be so assumptive...My baby will follow my steps" Her tone held a finality that put his argument to a break.

"What do you meant by MY BABY" He got up and get seated beside her.

"Not my baby...Our Baby...who will a little be a part of you...and a part of me" His dreamy tone made her go Awe. She leaned into his arm, giving a side hug and felt his lips in her hairs, kissing.

"Our Baby"

She whispered and they both clasped their hands on her little swelled belly.

Flashback Ends~

"Geet..." She found herself face to face with Maan, who was leaning down on his with a concerned look.

"What happened?" And those words just seemed like a breaking point for her as a tear rolled down her cheek, then the next and then some more.

He was keeping a gaze on her from time to time, hoping that she is fine but when her face seemed stilled, he couldn't help but get on his feet to check. But her tears made him realize that indeed she was not well at all.

"Don't cry baby...Please...hushhh..." He bend some more and wiped her tears but turning her face in his palms, she started to cry even harder.

He panicked.

But she just grabbed his hand and cried into it.

"Geet...Geet...Come here" He made her crying self get up and made her sat in his lap while he took seat on the sofa. Putting the TV on mute, he just hugged her close while she cried for the first time so bitterly after the loss they beard almost four months before.

They were a happily married couple. Their life was as smooth as ever. Having the love of both parents and a easy going life. Even they got married with without a hitch. No arguments or objections were raised by anyone. It was all too easy. Good career, blessed life and their happiness grew twice when Geet found out about her pregnancy. The parents were elated so were they. Maan took full care of her needs and smiling bear her demands until one day, when she went for ultrasound, the doctor gave them the saddest news of their life.

The baby was suspected with IUGR(Intrauterine Growth Restriction). It has completely stopped its growth right in the 18th week of the pregnancy. They were warned that if they don't abort the baby now, he/she might die inside and that will be too dangerous for Geet. They were shocked, angry and broken. They consulted 3 more Gynaecologist who suggested the same and at last, due to circumstances, they had to go for abortion as the last resort.

"Why does it happen to us Maan...Why? Was I not going to be a good mother...Was there something wrong I did that I was punished this way" She asked sobbing, keeping her face close to his heart. Her fist was clenching on her shirt in a tight grip.

Maan pulled her closer in the warm cocoon of his arms.

"Shhh baby...Don't say why us? It means that we wished all this on someone else...Are we that selfish?" He questioned, moving his fingers slowly up and down on her back.

In response, she just hid her face more into his neck and let the silent tears spill.

"And it wasn't a punishment...it was just a test by God for us, just to see how thankful we are of Him and how strong we are to move forward from this phase" he was desperately trying to reason out with her...but she ignored his silent pleas in his words.

She just wanted to pull everything out today. God knows how much she just wanted to express that grief and share it with him.

"Do you think I made a mistake somewhere? May be I had missed up on some vitamins or medicines prescribed by the doctor...Was it cause mom forbid me to share this news with anyone till the 5th month but I still went ahead being a chatter box and told it to every second person around me" With each word, she was getting hyper and that somewhere started to scare him.

"Geet...Calm down...Calm down...You did nothing wrong...Maybe" Sighing heavily, he closed his eyes.

"May be we weren't ready for parenthood yet Geet...May be it was God's way to make us realize how worth babies are and how big of a blessing it is...May be if we have gotten it all so easily, we would have taken it for granted" Geet rubbed her nose in his chest, still sniffing.

"But we would never have did it" She counter argued.

And Maan just held her chin, making her teary eyes looked up in his hopeful one.

"I know...But now, whenever we will have it, we will take care of it much better...We will make sure to make our baby our top most priority as the next time, it will be a gift worthless" And Geet just hugged him tightly around his neck, wishing silently in her heart that whatever he said, will come true.

Maan let her take her time to cry into it. The last time tonight. As from tomorrow, he hoped she will also look forward to a beautiful sunshine in their life.

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Edited by ..oneOone.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh!
wow they lost their baby!
that was painfull part hiding his grief from geet well written!

but! it didnt make me cry!
being a cry baby i thought i would cry buckets
n i tried to get in to the part too but😕

waiting for the next!


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Oh!

wow they lost their baby!
that was painfull part hiding his grief from geet well written!

but! it didnt make me cry!
being a cry baby i thought i would cry buckets
n i tried to get in to the part too but😕

waiting for the next!




Hey dear...
I am so glad to see your honest feedback..
I wasn't intending to make someone cry as that crying phase of their life was far gone but still Geet is somewhere struck to it...it was just to put an end to her crying self😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..



Hey dear...
I am so glad to see your honest feedback..
I wasn't intending to make someone cry as that crying phase of their life was far gone but still Geet is somewhere struck to it...it was just to put an end to her crying self😊


😊
thoda emotion tho banta h na!
as it was their painful past!😉

Calo koi nai waiting for the next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb Update.. [=D] Loved the way Maan tried to make things right in their relationship... Geet Maan lost their baby awww I got lil emotional after reading Geet's break down scene 😔
Cont. Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional update
maan n geet went 4 shopping dat ws a cute scene
n movie too
bt dey lost der baby saddd
hope dey overcome soon
n vl see lovey dovey maaneet
update soon

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